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Balcony Scene Rewrite

due Wed. / worth 200 points CRITERIA


The Script

Fair Poor
The script had little changes from the original; no creativity shown. The script had some changes; some creativity was used in rewriting the scene.

681775 The script had litt

Good
The script had many changes to fit a modern or new setting.

Excellent
Fantastic script. The original was changed to fit the modern or new context.

681776 The script had ap

681777 Fantastic script. T

Creativity & Originality

Fair Poor
Too closely resembles Shakespeare's scene. Very little originality/creativity Some changes made to scene-a few original/creative choices made

Good
Clever interpretation to the scene; many original/creative choices made.

1670722 Too closely resem

Excellent
Terrific interpretation of scene; original and highly creative.

1670723 Some changes m

1670724 Clever interpretat

Neatness/Format

Poor
Many errors in spelling and grammar. The script was not understandable nor legible.

2827266 Many errors in sp

Fair
Occasional errors in spelling and grammar. The script was understandable & legible.

Good
Few errors in spelling and grammar. The script was understandable and legible.

Excellent
Almost no errors in spelling and grammar The script was understandable and legible..

2827267 Occasional errors


Tone/Emotion Matches Original Scene

2827268 Few errors in spe

2827269 Almost no errors

Poor
Script leaves out many elements and/or changes the basic tone of the original scene.

Fair
Script matches basic tone of original scene, but important elements are missing.

Good
Script matches basic tone of original scene and all important elements are present.

Excellent
Script perfectly captures tone and emotion of original scene, with a few creative elements added.

2827262 Story leaves out

2827263 Story follow s bas


Assignment Requirements 1-2 sentences identifying new setting covers entire scene (27/27) key for slang, abbrev., and unknown words

2827264 Story follow s ord

2827265 Story follow s ord

Poor
Criteria were disorganized or missing.

Fair
Some criteria were missing.

Good
Most criteria were present.

Excellent
All criteria were present

Presentation (required if working as partners)

Balcony Scene Rewrite due Wed. / worth 200 points CRITERIA

script format (typed or handwritten ) o 20 18 15 12 8 0 1-2 sentences identifying setting (where/when) o 10 8 6 4 2 0 covers entire scene (lines 2-189) o 50 45 40 35 30

25

Romeo has 27 parts & Juliet has 26 parts (Nurses interruptions optional) o 10 8 6 4 2 0 same tone/emotion as original o 20 18 15 12 8

translation of conversation into modern/informal/slang/txt/dialect/etc. o 50 45 40 35 30 25 key for slang/abbreviations/words that I wont know o 10 8 6 4 2 0 appropriate language/subject matter o 10 8 6 4 2 0 neatness/format

o 10

creativity/originality o 10 8 6

+ presentation (if working as partners) time TBA