Irin P.

Foorungsriroj

NEW INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL OF THAILAND

YEAR 10 MYP HUMANITIES

COMPARING REVOLUTIONS IN INNOVATION ESSAY PLANNING TEMPLATE

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Thesis Statement: Revolutions have significantly changed society over time. Two of the most impactful revolutions are the Industrial and the Digital. A. Supporting Idea #1: Definition of revolution B. Supporting Idea #2: These two revolutions have significantly changed the way we communicate and look at the world C. Supporting Idea #3:They have had both impacted the world in a significant waygood and bad D. Conclusion/ Restatement/ Transition of Thesis: This paper intends to explore, compare and contrast both the revolutions. Topic Sentence for Supporting Idea #1: Explaining The Industrial Revolution A. Talk about inventions created during the Industrial Revolution such as the Spinning Jenny, Newcomen Steam Engine B. Communication during the Industrial revolution: the telegraph C. Education during the Industrial Revolution D. Working conditions of factory workers E. Conclusion: Industrial Revolution was very influential Topic Sentence for Supporting Idea #2: The Digital Revolution A. Invention of the World Wide Web B. Online retailing being a major way to run a business C. Social media being a crucial part of everyday life D. Working conditions of factory workers today E. Education during the Digital Revolution F. Conclusion: Everything is developing at such a fast rate Topic Sentence for Supporting Idea #3: Similarities between the two revolutions A. They have made lives much easier for people B. The invention of machines during the Industrial revolution made life easier for people C. The invention of online shopping during the Digital revolution makes lives much easier for people D. Conclusion: Both revolutions have changed the way of life for many people

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Irin P. Foorungsriroj V. Topic Sentence for Supporting Idea #4: Difference between the two revolutions A. How businesses are run B. Industrial revolution were buying factory produced products C. Still like that with digital revolution, except now there is online shopping D. Conclusion: Both revolutions have their differences which make them different from one another Conclusion/ Restatement of Thesis A. Both revolutions have been incredibly impactful B. However the Industrial revolution has been more impactful C. The ideas we think about today are based on the ideas developed during that revolutionary time period D. Powerful Concluding Sentence: Only time will tell which revolution ends up being more impactful than the other.

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