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Task Achievement
Each task is scored separately by two examiners. For each task you receive 25 marks.
Task Achievement (10 marks) - how good is the content of your writing? Would your writing achieve its
purpose in real life? (e.g. would the hotel be booked, would the complaint be understood?) Have you followed all the instructions and included all the relevant information?
10
Coherence and Cohesion (5 marks) - Coherence: Does your writing make sense? You lose marks for
Task achieved at a very high level Intention: Entirely clear Instructions: Completely followed Effect: A very positive effect on the target reader Outcome: Sure to achieve a successful outcome Content: All relevant details included Some original ideas or presentation
writing nonsense! Cohesion: Have you written logically? Are there paragraphs, linking words: e.g. however, first, second, in addition. Your writing should be logical and structured.
Range and Accuracy (5 marks) - are you using grammar, vocabulary and other language appropriate for
Appropriacy (5 marks) - is the text suitable for a particular situation; e.g. formality: Im therefore returning
Task well achieved Intention: Generally clear Instructions: All important ones followed Effect: A positive effect on the target reader Outcome: Sure to achieve a successful outcome Content: Most relevant details included Some original ideas or presentation
Appropriacy
5
Errors: Very few Register: Range of registers
5
5
Clear Clear Well organised Cohesive Used to link naturally Skilled use
5 4
Task achieved, some gaps Intention: Clear in most areas Instructions: All important ones followed Effect: A generally positive effect on the reader Outcome: Likely to achieve a successful outcome Content: Many relevant details included
4
Range: Adequate Errors: Some but do not significantly impede meaning Style: to genre
4 3 2
Range: Narrow Errors: Many
Usually appropriate
Structure: Adequate Purpose: Mostly clear. Information: Some confusion Cohesive Devices: Adequate Reference: Limited use
Task not achieved, many gaps Intention: Unclear in some areas Instructions: Some key instructions not followed Effect: The reader may be confused Outcome: Unlikely to achieve a successful outcome Content: Some important details left out Some irrelevant information
2 1
Style: genre
9
Inappropriate to
Structure: Purpose: Information: Devices: Reference: Not enough language to make an assessment
2
Register: Minimal
Task entirely unachieved Intention: Very unclear Instructions: Most / all not followed Effect: Very negative Outcome: Will not achieve a successful outcome Content: Omission, irrelevance
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Task Two:
The Golden Eagle pub on the Meckham Road has finally closed its doors to business after more than eighty years. The last night, Saturday, saw a full house. Over two hundred people turned up for a last drink with the party mood spilling out onto the pavement. The closure was confirmed by the licensing committee of Grenberg City Council last month even though a thousand-strong petition against closure had been handed in by local residents. The committee sought the closure after repeated warnings about noise had gone unheeded. Reactions in the neighbourhood were understandably mixed. Long term local resident, eighty-year-old Jack Hemmingway said, A very sad day indeed, I had my first drink in there when I was fourteen in 1946. But others welcomed the closure. Rebecca Gold, an office manager, said, I sometimes could not get to sleep till after midnight because of the noise. I was falling asleep at work. Planning permission has been given to turn the building into three residential flats.
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