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Circle of Influence Paper Rubric

Introduction Uses attention-grabbing intro that draws the reader in and clearly introduces the topic Excellent (2) Good (1.5) Needs Improvement (1) Not at All (0) Message Uses specific and rich detail that tells the story, making sure very piece of the narration adds something to the whole. All necessary information is there. Paper focuses on writercircle of influence person is not applying to college! Excellent Good Needs Improvement Not at All Reflection Author clearly shows how the person/event made a lasting imprint on the formation of the writers character, outlook, and/or behavior Excellent Good Needs Improvement Not at All Narrative Detail When recalling the incident/moment with the person of influence, the writer shows us the moment using sensory details and dialogue when effective. Excellent Good Needs Improvement Not at All Organization Has a logical sequence of paragraphs, ideas follow and connect to one another. A sense of cohesion between the incident and reflection is very clear. Excellent Good Needs Improvement Not at All Conclusion Leaves the reader with a sense of completion and clear connection to their main points Excellent Good Needs Improvement Not at All

II. Style/Mechanics

Verbs Uses strong active verbs to show the scene Excellent Good

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Voice Language is natural and phrasing is individual; captures the writers voice Excellent Good Needs Improvement Sentence Variety Varied sentence structure for fluency and interest Excellent Good Needs Improvement

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Grammar and Proof-reading Few to no significant errors in formal English spelling, grammar, and punctuation where appropriate. Excellent Good Needs Improvement Not at All Attention to MLA Formatting: Heading, Date, Last Name & # Top Right, Times New Roman, Double Spaced, Title: ___ / 2 pts

Your Circle of Influence w/ Stamp or Signature: ___ / 1 pt List of Events w/ 1 Person + Details of 1 Event w/ Stamp or Signature: ___ / 1 pt Rough Draft w/ Stamp or Signature included: ___ /1 pt

TOTAL: _________ / 25 points