Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
AGUNDAMWINGFICBYSANDRADERMARK
BASEDUPONSHAKESPEAREANWORKS
ActZero:ThePlayandCast.
DIEUPONAKISS
ARETELLINGOFSHAKESPEARESOTHELLO
REWRITTENBYSANDRADERMARK
Dramatispersonae
(thatis,cast):
Othello:ZechsMerquise,nMilliardoPeacecraft
Desdemona.LucreziaNoin
Iago:TreizeKhushrenada
Emilia:LadyUne
Cassio:QuatreRaberbaWinner
Bianca:DorothyCatalonia
RandomCatholicPriest:DuoMaxwell
RandomWaitress:CatherineBloom
RandomWaiter/Roderigo:TrowaBarton
Setting
:Randomoutpostcutofffromtheoutsideworld.
ActOne:AWedding,APromotion,AndAComplicatedScheme
Thedoorsofthechapelwerefirmlyshut,andTreize,whohadchosennottoattendthe
ceremony,waslisteningtothebaroquehymnsthatweresungwithin.Hepersonallyrelished
allthatGermanchanting.But,nomatterwhat,hecouldntforgetlastweekstrauma.
ItwasattetteinZechssoffice,consideringthegeneralschoiceofarighthandman.
Thecurtainsweredrawnandarayoflightwascastontheveteransinexpressiveface.He
wassurehewasthemanforthepost.Butthen,Zechsstoodup,lookedatTreizewiththose
steelyeyesofhisandtoldhimcoldly:
Pardonme,Khushrenada,butIhavealreadychosenmyofficer.
Andprithee,whoisthatofficer?
TheresponsemadeTreizenearlyfaintwithshock.QuatreWinner.Theothercandidate.
Theonewiththecutelooks,whoneverhadprovedhisworthonthebattlefield.Thatposition
wasmadeforTreize.Andifthatusurperthoughthimselfworthy,hewouldhavetopay.
Ido,TreizeheardZechsthroughtheshutdoor,sincehewasthebridegroom.
Ido,thebridereplied.
Inowpronounceyouhusbandandwife,ReverendMaxwellconcludedbeforethekiss
seguedintothehymnsagain.
Onehourlater,thedoorsopenedandthenewlywedsleftthechapel.Zechs,wearinghismess
uniformwiththeswordandepauletsandthebrideinawhiteempirewaistgownthat
contrastedwiththecolorofherhairandeyes.
LucreziaNoin,thoughtTreize.
TheywerefollowedbyQuatre,whohadbeenthebestman,andthenbytherestofthe
congregation,theirbestwishesbeingmadetothenewlyweds.Treizefeltawarmhandonhis
rightshoulderandpretendedtobelistening.ItwasLadyUne,hisownwife,forwhomhe
cherishednofeelings:theirswasamarriageofconvenience,andhewasntpleasedwith
women.SomethingunknowntoUne,who,likeeveryoneelseinthatsecludedoutpost,saw
Treizeasthereliablekind.
Aschemewithoutpossiblefailurehadbeenhatcheduponlisteningtothosebaroquehymns,
andTreizewouldmakehismovethatevening,duringtheweddingcelebrations,becauseit
hadbeendisposedthatQuatrewouldbeonguardduty...
ActTwo:AnOffer,AnOfficer,AndIroniesOfLife
Yes,sir!repliedQuatretohiscommandingofficerswarnings,beforethelatterdeparted
upstairs,towardshisbedchamber,takingNoinbythehand.Thenewlyappointedlieutenant
andbestmanwatchedthembothwalkaway,staringateachotheranddisappearingfromhis
view.
Astheyleft,Treizeenteredthehallwithhisusualconfidentgait.
Iseeyoureratherconcerned,Lieutenant.Whydontyoutakepartinthecelebrations?,the
veteranofficeraskedQuatreinawarm,sinceretone.
Excuseme,butIhaveorderstogiveandtake.AndImalsoquitealightweight,wasthe
responsehereceived.Indeed,thelieutenanthadbetrayedhimselfbyexplaininghisown
flaws.Withsuchalightframe,itwouldtakeasingleglassofliquortotakehisreasonaway!
Aw,itsjustoneshot!Thatwouldntkillyou!Treizeguidedtheyoungblondtoatable,anda
sexy,nutbrownwaitressshoweduptoservethemandtooktheorder.
Thoughitwaslateintheevening,Quatrecouldntbuthelpbeingwornoutandthirsty,partly
becauseoftheuniformhewasforcedtowear,partlybecausehehadtostandupthroughout
theweddingthatafternoon.Besides,Treizehadbeenforcountlessyearsintheregimentand
couldteachhimtheropeswiththatplainspeechofhis.So,whenthewaitressreturnedwith
theofficersglassesofsparklingchartreuse,shereceivedthanksfrombothofthem.
Thereyouhaveit,Lieutenant.Drinkfirst,askquestionslater,Treizeadvisedtheyounger
officer,asthelatterputtheglasstohislips.Thelevelsankabouthalfaninchasthesewords
werespoken.Soon,Quatre,aftertheliquorhadsearedhisthroat,feltawarmsurge
spreadingfromhisstomachallthewaytohisfaircheeks,asifhehadswallowedaliving
flame.Asecondsipfollowedthefirstone,andsoontheglasswasdrainedtothedregs.
Youcanhavemine,Lieutenant,ifyouplease.ImnotinthemoodTreizehandedoverhis
ownglass,andtheliquorinithadsoondisappeared.Theotherofficersblueeyeswere
bloodshot,andhischeekswerelitwithcolour,flushingbrightlikeflames.However,hedidnt
staggerorshowanysignsofmoresevereintoxication.
Then,awaiterwhoresembledamaleversionofthewaitressshoweduptoservethemand
withdrawthoseemptyglasses.Helookedratherconcerned.
QuatreWinner?Shouldntyoubeonguardduty?
Letsgo,then!thelieutenantaddressedthewaiterwithunusualvehemence.
AnofficerondutymustkeephimselfsoberDontyoulooksomewhatintoxicated?
Imnotdrunk!QuatreseizedTrowabythecollarwithhislefthandandpulledouthissword
withtherightone.Thewaitresswhohadpreviouslyattendedtothemrushedforth.
Aworthyofficer,ifhedidntsufferfromthatdespicableaddiction,Treizeinformedher.
Catherinewasalarmedandrushedinbetweentheopponentstoseparatethem.Upon
defendingheradoptivebrotherfromthedrunkenofficer,shesustainedaslashwoundtothe
leftshoulder.
Soonthealarmwasrunginthebanquethall,andahalfundressedZechsmadehis
appearanceasQuatrewascomingtoandchancedtothrowup,lightheadedand
halfconscious,onthefloor.Thewoundedwaitresswasclutchingherbleedinginjury,her
brotherandTreizeapplyingfirstaid.
WhatonEarthisgoingon?,thecommandingofficerinquired.Hefirstaskedhisrighthand
man,wholayonthefloor,comingtohissenses.ButQuatresmemoriesofthateveningwere
toovagueforhimtoexplainwhathadhappened.
Khushrenada?Zechsinquired.Andtheresponseheobtained,inTreizesusualreliable
tone,wasthefollowing:
Itriedtowarnthelieutenantnottodrinkstrongliquorinexcess,butIobtainedtheopposite
result.Then,bereftofinhibition,hedrewtooclosetoMissBloomhere,andafightwithher
adoptivebrotherhereensued.Shetriedtomakepeace,butafleshwoundwaswhatshe
receivedinexchange.
Quatrewasuponhisfeetagain,standingfacetofacewithhiscommandingofficerssteel
eyesandfirmresolution,toreceivethosecold,sternwordsinexchange:
QuatreWinner...Ilovethee,butyoucanneverbemyrighthandagain.
Treizestoodback,listeningtothatexchangeandwatchingQuatreturnpaleandturnaway
fromZechs.Solong,theschemehadsucceeded,andhewouldsoonbeappointedhis
commandersrighthand.Butthateveningseventswouldbeputtomoredisastroususe.
QuatrethrusthisheadonthetableashefeltapatonthebackandTreizesreassuringwords:
Areyouhurt,Lieutenant?
ShouldntIbe?,wasthereplytheyoungblondcoldlygave.
Thecommanderswifehaspoweroverhim.Ifshehelpedyoutomakepeace...
Thankyou!QuatreapproachedTreizeandsoonsetoffforthecourtyard,whereNoinand
herhandmaidsUneandDorothy,thelatterhisfiance,wereatthemoment.
AsTreizewatchedhisvictimconfidentlyturnaway,hethoughtofthenextphaseoftheplan.
Then,hesetoffforthebedchambertoencounterZechs.
ActThree:Temptation,TheHandkerchief,AndIllPlacedTrust
ThehandmaidswalkedawayasQuatreenteredthecourtyardintheclearsunrise.Locking
eyesclosetohim,Noinreassuredhimgently:
Trustme.Youcancountonme.
Asthesewordswerespoken,ZechsandTreizeenteredthecourtyard.Uponseeinghis
commandingofficer,Quatrewentinagainfullspeed,lookingnowandthenoverhisshoulder,
notbeforehavingthankedNoinforsuchagenerousoffer.
Thedarkhairedyoungwomansatonabenchwithherhusband.Calmlyandgently,she
pleadedforQuatressakewhilestrokingZechssflaxenhair.Forawhileheremained
doubtful,untilhefinallygaveinandapprovedthereinstatement.
Noinwentbackin,insearchofQuatre,toinformtheyoungblondofhersuccess.Inher
excitement,sheforgotahandkerchieflinedwithlaceonthecobblestonepavement.Asher
mistress,ZechsandTreizereenteredtheguardhouse,Unepickedupthepieceofwhitecloth
andhiditquicklyinherpocket.
Now,whatdidyoudo?Dorothyinquired,toobtaintheresponse:
Myhusband.Hewantstostudythatveryhandkerchiefformetomakesimilarlace.
IdidntknowstonecoldTreizewassuchagentleman!
Then,Uneenteredtheguardhouse,followedbyDorothy.
Meanwhileinacorridorwithintheguardhouse,Zechsandhissecondincommandhad
establishedarelevantconversationwhenthelattersoftlymused:
WasntthatQuatrewhoranaway?Ididntlikethelooksofit.
Excuseme?theofficerwithlengthy,fairhairaskedcuriously.
Nothingatall,justafewintrusivethoughts,Treizemadehiswordsseemlessimportantto
attracthiscommandingofficersattention.
Khushrenada...areyoutryingtoinsinuatesomething?
Didsheknowhimfromthestart?YouknowIknowNoin,andQuatre...
Why,weareallacquaintedwitheachother...
Dotheykeeparelativedistance?Youknow,inconversation?
Iwouldntcallthatarelativedistance,Zechsreplied.Theglitteringtwinklesinhiseyes
betrayedaslightinternalagitation.
Andfindingouttheirsignsalsokeepsmeincheck,theveteranofficeradded.
UpongivingTreizesaidinformation,Zechsremainedsilentbeforeaskingonequiveringand
doubtingquestion:
AreyoutryingtoinsinuatethatmywifeisbetrayingmewithQuatreWinner?Isthat
perchancewhatyouretryingtotellme?
Andpritheewhy?Shesingswell,dances,paints,bakes,makeslace,speaksfluentFrench
andGerman,canalsodefendherselfwithaloadedgunandhisdismissalwasduetoan
unfortunatemistake,theolderofficerreplied.WhyonEarthwouldtheybetrayyou?
Thoseseeminglyhonestwordssanktothecommandingofficersheart,andhecouldhardly
restraintheinternalagitationtheyhadbroughtuponhim.Withrestrainedtearsandtroubled
expression,hetookTreizebythecollarandspatuntohisface:
Idoubtso.Ineedproofoftheirbetrayal,orelse...hedidthecutthroatgesturewithhisleft
handrightbeforeTreize.
Andsomemoreadvice:bewareofthegreeneyedmonster,thatpoisonsfromwithin.
Lettinggooftheveteranscollar,Zechswanderedwithoutaimintheoppositedirection.He
didtrustNoin,forhelovedherandhadthuswedherbuthealsodidtrustTreize,whohad
savedhislifeandwasesteemedanhonestperson.Tornasunderbydoubtandrestlessness,
hecouldntsleepthatnightatall.
Thatveryevening,inTreizesbedchamber,thekerchiefwasbroughttolight.However,his
wifecouldnolongerrestrainherthoughts:
YouscoundrelhaveforcedmetostealfromMistress!Nowyouwanttokeepthatcloth!
Isthathowyoutreatyourbetterhalf?Youweremeanttoobeymyorders!
Imyourspouse,notoneofyoursoldiers!,shebeggedformercy,buthedidntlistentoher
pleasandbeatherinthebackwithhisrapiersscabbard.
NowthatsmyUne.
Pritheetellmewhatyoureallyintendtodo!
Itsnoneofyourbusiness,youmeddlesomemagpie!,heresortedtothescabbardagain,as
sheundressedherselfandwenttobed,dreamingthathewerentsosecretive.
AsUneshuthertearygreeneyes,herbetterhalfventuredagain,handkerchiefinhand,into
thecorridor.Quietly,heenteredanotherroom,whereaflaxenhairedladsleptquietly,his
steadybreathingmarkingthetempoforTreizessteps.Theveteran,quietasacatinpace,
approachedthetableandplacedthekerchiefonit.Thenhewentbacktohisown
bedchamber,beforethechangingoftheguardcalleduponhispresence.
LadyUnewassobbinginherdreamsasTreizereturnedandgottobedbesideher,herface
restinguponhisthrobbingheartandhertearsdrieduponhisnightgown.Hejusthopedthat
shewouldntbecomeawarethathehadleftthatpieceofclothinQuatreWinnersquarters.
ActFour:Doubt,Despair,andDorothysSuspicions
Theywerestandinguponabastionsidebyside,thecloudynextday.Zechslookedwornout,
instarkcontrasttoTreize,whocoldlymadethenextmovewiththesewords:
Justashotinthedark,buthaveyouseenherlatelywithalacelinedhandkerchief?
Thecommandingofficerhadntseenhershowingthatfirstgiftofhisforaday,andhe
sincerelydeclaredthatsoithadbeen.However,hewasshocked,asifstruckbylightning,by
hissecondincommandsfurtherstatement:
IsawQuatreWinnerwipehislipswiththatkerchief.
Really?ZechsburstoutandgrabbedTreizebythecollarforasecondtime,butthe
appearanceofQuatrehimself(speakofthedevil!)interruptedtheirargument.
NowletsaskthatQuatreLoserabouthisfiance,Treizethoughttohimself.Zechslistened
eagerlytotheirconversation,buthemisinterpretedwhathecouldhear.
Soyouregoingtomarryher?
Theyoungerofficerlaughedheartily.WhyshouldI?,askedhetakingoutthekerchieffrom
hisbreastpocketandwavingitintheair.
Sothatshowthingsare,thoughtZechs,consternated,asheturnedpalewithQuatres
statementsofhisfeelingstowardsDorothy.Then,afewtearstrickleddownhischeeksand
everythingfadedtoblackbeforehissparklingeyes:hecollapsedonthefloor,lettingforth
whitefrothontothecobblestonepavement.
Then,surprised,Quatreapproachedhiscommandingofficer,onlytobereproachedbyTreize:
ItseemsthatHisLordshipissufferingfromaseizure.Nowdontmoveuntilhecomesto.
AndZechscametohalfanhourlater,onlytobeholdhiswifespresumedloverandlaugh
coldlyintohisface,whichmadeQuatreturnhisback,worriedaboutthecommandingofficers
healthandthatcrazystarethathehadgivenhimassoonashehadcomeround.
QuatreencounteredDorothyinthecourtyard,buthisfairhairedfiancewasnotinthemood
forconversation:shehadalsoseenQuatrewiththatlacetrimmedhandkerchiefofNoins.
Therefore,restraininghertruefeelings,sheturnedherbackontheyoungblondandreplying
tohisWhyareyousocoldtoday?withapiercingstare.Thismadehimthinkthatitwasa
dayoutoftheordinary,whennotmanyusualandexpectedthingshappenatonce.
Thatevening,Zechscouldntsleepeither.Neithercouldhiswifefindherlosthandkerchief.
Shealsowonderedathisstateofhealth,evidentinthewayheacted:nolongercooland
calm,butstirredandrestless,betrayingintenseinternalagitation.Soshegentlyandsincerely
askedhimabouthisfeelings.Thiswas,forZechs,thesparkthatburstthepowderkeg:
Shouldntyouknowitbetteryourself,youpoisonouswildflower?,hescoldedheratthetop
ofhislungs,holdingbackhistearsandpunchingherinthemiddleofthechest.Thenonhe
wentwithhisfalseaccusation,thatsurprisedNoinandmadeherwonderaboutwhyitshould
beso.
Soon,aconsternatedZechsspentallnightlongwideawake,disturbedbyhersteadypulse
andequallysteadybreathingasshehadequallythrustherheaduponhisthrobbingheart,
thatlulledherintoinnocentlyspendingthenightinherowndreams.
Nextday,thecloudshadflockedevenmore,asiftoeclipsethesun.Thewornout
commanderhadcalledforhisrighthand,andhewasimpatientlywaitingforTreizetoarrive.
Finally,soithappened.
Andprithee,whydidyousendforme?
Itisconcerningtheexecutionofthosewhokeepmythoughtsincheck.IthoughtmyselfthatI
wouldratherbeinchargeofthatlovablesuccubus.Zechsseemedcoolerthantheprevious
day,butitwasmerelybecausehehadntsleptfortwonights.
AsforQuatre,letmebehisundertaker,repliedTreize,inanequallycooltonethatdidnt
betrayanysinisterintentions.
Thehourspassedon,andthateveningQuatrewaschargedagainwithguardduty.Looking
upthebrownhairedwaiterandremindinghimofCatherinesinjurywasntthatcomplicated,
andsoonTrowawaspersuadedthatsuchanaffrontshouldbepaidwiththebloodofthe
officerwhosesteelhadpiercedherflesh.Thus,hefollowedTreize,guninhand,tothecorner
ofabastion,whereQuatrewasgoingtopassatanymoment.
Thebrownhairedladaimedfortheblondofficersleftbreast,squeezedthetriggerandsaw
hisvictimcollapse,unconscious,beforehisveryeyes,onlytofeeltheolderofficerplacehis
gunsmuzzleinhisveryquiff.
Anyway,yourefullyexpendable,TreizecoldlysaidashepulledthetriggerandTrowa
pleadedformercyinadesperate,sinceretone:
Ididntknowyouwantedhimkilled!IdiditforCath...then,agunshotinterruptedhislast
words.
Fromhisoffice,Zechsheardthegunshots.Treizehaskepthisword,andnowIshallkeep
mine,hethoughtuponleavingforhisownbedchamber.Buttherewassomethingwithinthat
madehisresolutionfalter,andhisstepsturnlesssteady.
Noinalsoheardafirearmbeingdischargedinthedistance,andLadyUnereassuredhershe
shouldntworry.Thedarkhairedyoungwomanhadsteppedintohernightgownandwassoon
givenagoodnightkissbyherhandmaid,whoobservedherhugherpillowandshuthereyes
asshequietlyshutthedoor.
Then,sheencounteredthecommandingofficer,whoviolentlyshovedheraside.
ActFive:Deaths,Resurrections,AndOneLastKiss
Zechsenteredabedchamberlitbyaflickeringcandleclock,togazedoubtfullyandin
consternationuponhisbetterhalf.Noinssteady,calmbreathingandherbeautiful
appearancemadehimfalter.ShouldIkillherornot?Finally,hegaveintodespair.Ashe
putthecandleout,hemused:Putoutthislight,thenputoutthelightofherlife.Butwhich
kindoffirecouldrevivethelatter?
Inutterdarkness,hegaveintothetemptationofakissfromherlipsbeforeEternity,andhis
ownhands,madethemtoocoldtobepleasant.Andshewaswokenbythatkiss,afraidof
him,butstillhopefulthathesoonwouldbepleasedwithheragain.
Isthatyou?sheinquired,tohearherspouseburstintotearsandinsultsagain.
Iswearwerejustfriends!,shedeniedherpresumedaffair,defendingherinnocence.Ask
Quatrehimself!
Imsorry,butthatisimpossible.Hewillnotanswer.
Quatre...shot...?sobbedNoin,astearsstartedtotrickledownhercheeks.
Meanwhile,UneandDorothyweredrawntothebastionbythesoundofgunshots,to
encounter,lyingonthecoldcobblestones,TrowaBartonwithaseriousheadshotthathad
deprivedhimoflifeandQuatreWinnerstandinguptotakeapocketwatchwithabulletonits
lidfromhispiercedbreastpocket.Thelatterwasshockedbythesightthatappearedbefore
himuponcomingto,andadropfellfromtheskiesuntohisflaxenhair.So,hewasledback
intotheguardhousebythehandmaids,forithadstartedtodrizzle.
Inthemeantime,Noinsdisappointmenthadseguedintodespair,asshepleaded,shedding
tears,formercy.ButZechsremainedfirmandsteadfast,andhetightenedhisgriponher
throatevenmoreforeachsecond.
Istillloveyou!Ineverhadthataffair!,aloudclickandsearingpainsignalledthathehad
brokenherairway,andhertruevoicewasstifledforever.Turningblueanddesperateupon
notbeingabletobreathe,shesufferedthelethalandacuteconditionofsuffocation,after
whichdeathcameasareliefwhenshelostconsciousness.
Then,Zechslethergo,asheheardaknockonthedoorandopeneditquietly.ItwasUne,
followedbyQuatre.Wasnthesupposedtobedead?Treizewillhavetopayforsuchfailure,
hequicklythought.Thehandmaidturnedpaleuponseeinghermistressbereftoflifeandhalf
outofbed,wearingthepurplecollarofstrangulation.ThensheaddressedZechsinafitof
rageanddespair:
Youhavebeendeceived,YourLordship.Andallforaseriesofliestoldbyyourconfidant,my
spouse,TreizeKhushrenada.AsforMistress,sheisinnocentofthedeedyouhave
presumed.ItwasTreizewhoenticedQuatreheretodrinkliquor,andalsoTreizewhoforced
metostealthathandker...agunshotwasheard,andUnefeltablazingobjectenterherback
attheheightoftherightshoulderblade,beforecollapsing,lifeless,onthepavementbeside
hermistress.Thebulletholeinherbackcametoview.
OnthethresholdstoodTreize,sheathinghisgun.Zechslungedattheolderofficerand
punchedhimonthehead,causinghimtoloseconsciousness.The,heburstintotears,tears
ofsorrowanddespair.Shewasinnocent,andIhavekilledher!Nowshecantcomeback!
KneelingbeforeQuatre,heforgavetheyoungblondandorderedhimtohaveTreizearrested
forlifetime,apunishmentheesteemedworsethandeath.Then,heunsheathedhisrapierand
thrustitallthewaytohisownheart,ashecaressedthelifelessfeaturesofhisbelovedand
gaveheronelastcoldkiss.
Ashelaydying,anewdaybrokeandtheominouscloudswerescattered.
Thedoorsofthechapelwerefirmlyshut,andRelena,whohadchosennottoattendthe
ceremony,waslisteningtothebaroquehymnsthatweresungwithin.Allshewantedwasto
havebeenabridesmaidlikeSallyandCatherine.
Ido,sheheardQuatrethroughtheshutdoor,sincehewasthebridegroom.
Ido,thebridereplied.
Inowpronounceyouhusbandandwife,ReverendMaxwellconcludedbeforethekiss
seguedintothehymnsagain.
Onehourlater,thedoorsopenedandthenewlywedsleftthechapel.Quatre,wearinghis
messuniformwiththeswordandepauletsandthebrideinawhiteempirewaistgownthatfit
thecolorofherfairhairandblueeyes.
TheywerefollowedbyHeero,whohadbeenthebestman,andthenbytherestofthe
congregation,theirbestwishesbeingmadetothenewlyweds.Relenafeltawarmhandon
herrightshoulderandpretendedtobelistening.Itwasthebestman,herownfianc,for
whomshecherishedthewarmestoffeelings.
Nooneinthatsecludedoutpostseemedtorememberthatafivefoldfuneralhadtakenplace
inthatverychapelafewhoursbefore.
TheEnd.
CurtainCall.