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This great collection of ideas for encouraging students to write poetry was
developed by Frances Vucica at Mount Stuart Primary School. An extract was
published in the first edition of the Hartz Literacy Newsletter. For more
information about teaching poetry, look at Hugo McCann’s poetry
(http://www.discover.tased.edu.au/english/hugo.htm)which includes a section on playing
with poetic forms. (http://www.discover.tased.edu.au/english/poetry.htm#play)
In this document I have tried to offer approaches to the teaching of writing poetry
that can be used by all classroom teachers.
1. Based on alliteration
(noun, verb, adverb)
Clowns Nannas
captivate nag
charmingly. needlessly.
Seagulls Dads
soar drive
serenely. dangerously.
BANG! BURP!
The hunted beast falters Out it comes.
in its stride.... Everybody stares.
Killed by man. Made to say pardon.
Bang! Burp!
4. Contrasts
Great car. Father washes the car.
V8 engine. Mother sweeps the floor.
Hill-gripping tyres. Brother cleans the cylinder
No brakes! head.
Me.........
Well, I sit and watch.
Try...........
Water with a fish
e.g. There’s a lot of pollution on the planet Earth so Mother Goose is flying home to
rewrite her nursery rhymes so that they will include a message about
out ecology. However she needs help.
7. Using similes
(A simile asks us to picture one thing as being similar to another_often using the
word ‘like’ or the words ‘as.....as’ to link our ‘pictures’ in our mind.)
Choose a topic.
e.g. Marshmallow.
Give children one and let them do what they want with it....taste it,
smell it, shake it, squish it.
Ask, “What does a marshmallow remind you of?”
e.g. Marshmallow
As white as..........
As fluffy as..........
As soft as...............
Sometimes you may have to do a lot of chalk and talk with this work
in an endeavour to get the children to think more creatively. I
personally do a lot of this work in both the oral and written forms.
Another example.........
A solitary leaf
sits weeping
on a mangled twig.
9. Acrostic Poems
Choose any noun
e.g. Licorice.
Write the letters of the word down the page and use them to write
appropriate adjectives.
L.....................
I......................
C......................
O......................
R......................
Invigorating
C......................
E.......................
A more advanced style is the use of catch phrases beginning with the
appropriate letters.
11. Cinquains
Five line poems. This form was created by a French Canadian teacher who
found children to be very frustrated by trying to write poetry set to rules. He
wanted children to relax and have fun and at the same time be more creative
with their thoughts.
Rules of the poems........
Line 1. Title
Line 2. Two descriptive words.
Line 3. Three descriptive words.
Line 4. A catch phrase.
Line 5. Repeat the title or give a synonym for it.
e.g. Girls
Beautiful, curvaceous,
36, 26, 36,
I love them.
Girls!
12. Alliteration
More advanced. Alliteration is the placement of two or more words close
together with the same beginning sound.
Tanka (This form has a basic pattern of five, seven, five, seven, seven. It is five unrhymed
lines with thirty one syllables.)
e.g. Stormy wind blowing
Out from dim eerie blackness
Full moon glows brightly.
From cloud to cloud shining moon
Pursues darkness swift in flight.
Renga (Has the same form as the Tanka, but is a linked verse. It is poem created by two
people and can extend to any length. The first person gives the first three lines in question form
and the second person gives the last two in answer to the question. This usually exists as part of
a series of linked verse.)
Cinquain (this is an unrhymed variant of the Tanka form with the scheme of five lines with a
total of twenty-two syllables, arranged with the pattern two, four, six, eight, two. Adapted from the
work done by a French Canadian but set to stricter guidelines.)
e.g. Coral
The stone flower
Of the sea, is the most
Fascinating feature of the
Sea world.
Quinzaine (Fifteen syllables in three lines, arranged seven, five, three. It is a statement
followed by a question.)
Septolet (This form has seven lines containing fourteen words with a break between the two
parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.)
e.g. Kitten
Padding stealthily
Among green grasses
Most intent.
Bird
Ascends rapidly
Bringing great disappointment.
Lanterne (This is a five line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of
one, two, three, four, one.)
e.g. Dark
Heavens
Threatening
Tropical storm
Fear!
Oriental poetry looks excellent when it is printed on scrolls made of rice paper, or
coloured tissue paper, with bamboo ends. Illustrations can be made at the sides
of the printed poems. Recordings of traditional oriental music help to create a
proper atmosphere for the readings of the poems written by the children.
14.Limericks
This is a fun activity but before you use it in a class it is best to expose children to examples of
the nonsense verse. By sharing examples the children can observe that they always consist of
five lines, how they rhyme and the importance of the last line in suitably ending each poem.)
Some examples:
Before the children write their own I often get them to complete some
given ones.
e.g.
A lion liked parties with zing
In which he could play he was king.
But it made him irate
When a mouse crashed the gate
And.......................
15 Descriptions
These can be at any level you want them to be. It is a very effective form and children soon
realise they can express themselves quite easily and their confidence grows. They do, at first,
rely on whole class or group brainstorming sessions.
Examples.
Bull...
Snorting,
Stamping,
Bellowing,
Roaring,
Charging.
(In this example we have shown that most animals can be identified with the sounds they make.)
They can also be written using catch phrases to write lines of free verse. The degree of difficulty
in this work is only limited to the imagination and effort of the writer.
Fire.....
Panic in the streets.
Firemen,
Working tirelessly
Saving lives.
B. Lines:
Where is it?
What is it doing?
What are its eyes like?
What are its feet/talons like?
Describe another part of its body.
A sound!
What causes it?
How is it caused?
What happens?
Below is an example of this poetry created by a child who was considered to have great
difficulties with written literacy.
The Eagle
by Jessica.
Loneliness
by Katy
My Mother.
by Selina.
She parted.......No farewell.
She left one sorrowful day.
Three children she left behind.
She wished that she could stay
But there was no other way.
Feelings
by John
I know what its like to feel unwanted.
I know what it is like to be without love.
I know what it is like to be left alone.
I know what it is like to be abandoned.
A Lonely Place
by Tracey
There’s a stillness in the mountains today,
there’s an empty feel to this place.
Grandad has gone away, no more to visit here.
I’ll always remember his special smile,
the one he kept just for me.
17. Metaphors
An explanation of what a metaphor is will be necessary. I’ve found the easiest way to explain it is
to say it is a short cut to a comparison. It skips the words ‘like’ and ‘as’ and simply says one thing
is something else. In poetry metaphors create a special kind of vision. Once children understand
the term they will write some very powerful thoughts.
I like music.
The throb of guitars.
The.......... of ..............
The ......... of ...............
The ......... of.................
The .........of..................
I like music.
e.g.
I saw....
When......
I saw the blazing sun in the sky
I saw a fish pond all on fire.
I like music.
The throb of guitars.
The.......... of ..............
The ......... of ...............
The ......... of.................
The .........of..................
I like music.
23. Is poems
(The degree of difficulty is up to the child.)
e.g.
Summer is air-conditioning units whirring.
Winter is........... etc.
e.g.
School is..........
A teacher is.........
Homework is...........
Sport is............
English is.............
My friend is........
Friday is..............
Red is...............
Green is...........
White is............ Children can be very descriptive in this form.
Purple is .......... e.g. Red is the sunset sinking behind the
Pink is............... mountains.
Grey is ............. And red is the cherry, luscious and
sweet .
A Dentist
28.Report Poems
I find this form very powerful when doing research on a topic.