Blog Progress-Peer Assessment Blog Author: Tom Hyden Blog Assessor: Kirsten Boden Date: 17/10/13 Question 1 Formatting

of the Blog The font colour is easy to read as you have used a black background with white text. The font size is good as it can also be easily read. It is very easy to identify the individual blog posts as they all have relevant titles and are positioned in an appropriate place. However, the main background is not relevant to media and doesnt serve a purpose. Also the background takes the attention away from the blogs and important information on the blog. 7/10 Question 2-Your Welcome Post You have included a welcome post mentioning what school you attend and the course and subject you are studying. You could have included more information about media and how you are interested in the course. Also you should have included what the blog will be about and why you have created one. 5/10 Question 3- Shot Types You have included a video, which you have embedded in your blog properly. This video explains in depth about shot types. You could have added a paragraph or at least a sentence to explain your understanding of shot types. Although you have used a video that explains shot types you need to explain your understanding also. 6/10 Question 4- Camera Movements You have published a post to show the camera movements. To explain this you have embedded a video correctly. The video also explains in depth the different types of camera movements. You could of again explained your understanding of camera movements by writing a paragraph to show your individual understanding rather than using a video. You could have renamed the post Camera Movements to easily find the post. 4/10 Question 5- Cut Types You havent included a Cut Types post in your blog. Question 6- Rule of Thirds You havent included a Rule of Thirds post in your blog. 0/10 0/10

Question 7- Match-on-Action You havent included a Match-on-Action post in your blog. 0/10 Question 8- 180 Degree Rule You havent included an individual post about this on your blog. Question 9- Continuity You have made a post about continuity errors on your blog. You have also embedded a video to show different continuity errors in some films. To improve you could have included a paragraph describing what continuity is and your understanding of what you have learnt. 6/10 Question 10- Script Writing You have created a post explaining script writing you have also included the important information that you needed. Also you have added examples of a script the explained the different sections in detail. To improve this post you could of added a title for your blog to clearly show the individual post. 8/10 0/10