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Julia Foley Paul Anderson English 1010 Rhetorical Analysis Essay 25 November 2013 End the War on Drugs Introduction On April 9th, 2013 a coalition of more than 175 concerned activists, humanitarians and celebrities sent President Barack Obama a letter to support and encourage continuing work on revising the national policies on the criminal justice system and continue moving from a suppression-based model to one that focuses on intervention and rehabilitation. President Obama has expressed his views clearly on his desire to represent the underrepresented classes of people. This includes citizens who
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are fresh out of prison and re-entering society. This coalition of influential members portrays their desire effectively by using examples of past work and advocacy towards revamping the policies of the court systems. Analysis #1 The authors are addressing the president of the United States with the intent to encourage continued change regarding the efforts to revamp the policies that were put into place towards

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the war on drugs. They start the letter out with saying Your hard work and leadership on issues affecting the unrepresented classes of people in our nation have served as an inspiration to many of us who hope for brighter futures for all Americans. This strategy appeals to the presidents ego because it is addressing what he has done up to this point regarding these issues in a complimentary way. Analysis #2 One of the strategies that the authors use is an emotional appeal when they bring up the issue of children. The greatest victims of the prison industrial complex are our nations children. One of the main issues that the author is addressing in this letter is about the overcrowding of prisons with inmates that have minor drug charges or are habitual violators of probation. This causes many children to not only lose their parents to addiction but to lose them into the system as well. As a result these children often end up in the criminal justice system themselves. The authors refer to studies that have shown the link between incarceration and broken families. They are making it clear to President Obama here that this is not a solution that is working out for anyone involved including the government and the taxpayers. This mention of children and what they suffer through without their parents works on the sympathy of President Obama. Analysis #3 The authors set up more action from the president by mentioning many of the successes the president has had thus far into his presidency. This is a strategy used to set up for the request that even more work towards ending the war on drugs is achieved. They are looking for changes. One example is when they write saying, Some of the initial policies we recommend is, under

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the Fair Sentencing Act, extend to all inmates who were subject to 0-to-1 crack-to-powder disparity a chance to have their sentences reduced to those that are more the Justice Safety Valve Act of 2013, which allows judges to set aside mandatory minimum sentences when they deem appropriate. The authors succeed in this strategy by giving reasonable suggestions on further action. Analysis #4 Another strategy used is giving other suggestions for re-entry programs are made by the coalition. These suggestions are made on the basis of keeping families together and hopefully keeping the inmates out of prison and back with their families healthier than before. At one point they even compare these children of the inmates to President Obama himself when he young living with a single mother working on an emotional appeal referring to the Presidents childhood. Conclusion The flaws in this letter could be that President Obama may feel they have focused a little too much on discussing things hes already achieved rather than focusing on the items that still need to be addressed. With so many members of the coalition being famous and in the spotlight he could question the credibility of some of them is questionable. He may take it that some may be signing as a member of this coalition for the publicity rather than being truly invested in the cause. However this letter is effective in the way that it strokes the ego of our President regarding the work hes done on ending the war on drugs. The issue is becoming critical right now due to the overcrowding of prisons, the money we as taxpayers spend on keeping up those

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institutions and the fact that these people are not receiving treatment and ending up right back in prison. It is ineffective however on taking a more bold stand on the changes that still need to be made and on demanding that more funding is made available for these programs rather than going straight to the prisons. The deterioration of the family is happening more and more each day which in turn in causing more and more crime and addiction. The support from the president and the government along with activists like this coalition and others could see that these changes take place.

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April 9, 2013 President Barack H. Obama The White House 1600 Pennsylvania Ave., N.W. Washington, DC 20500 Dear Mr. President, Your hard work and leadership on issues affecting the unrepresented classes of people in our nation have served as an inspiration to many of us who hope for brighter futures for all Americans. In that spirit, we believe the time is right to further the work you have done around revising our national policies on the criminal justice system and continue moving from a suppression-based model to one that focuses on intervention and rehabilitation. We are proud of your accomplishments around these issues, specifically your leadership on gun control, your investments in "problem solving courts," your creation of the Federal Interagency Reentry Council, your launching the National Forum on Youth Violence Prevention and your prosecution of a record number of hate crimes in 2011 and 2012. We certainly hope that this type of leadership is appreciated by all members of Congress, regardless of political affiliation, and you are joined by members of all parties in your pursuit of a more perfected union. Mr. President, it is evident that you have demonstrated a commitment to pursue alternatives to the enforcement-only "War on Drugs" approach and address the increased incarceration rates for non-violent crimes. Your administration has moved in the right direction by committing increased funds to drug prevention and treatment programs and supporting state and local re-entry grants. We encourage you to continue your efforts to revamp the policies of the last 30 years that have seen the prison population skyrocket. The greatest victims of the prison industrial complex are our nations children. Hundreds of thousands of children have lost a parent to long prison sentences for non-violent drug offenses, leaving these children to fend for themselves. Many of these children end up in the criminal justice system, which comes as no surprise as studies have shown the link between incarceration and broken families, juvenile delinquency, violence and poverty. Mr. President, we are a coalition of concerned advocates that is ready to support you in more innovative criminal justice reform and implementing more alternatives to

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incarceration. As you set in motion research and policy to combat this societal crisis, this coalition is poised to help you make the transition successful. In 2010, the passage of the Fair Sentencing Act was a tremendous step in the right direction, and we appreciate how hard you worked on getting that done. Some of the initial policies we recommend is, under the Fair Sentencing Act, extend to all inmates who were subject to 100-to-1 crack-to-powder disparity a chance to have their sentences reduced to those that are more consistent with the magnitude of the offense. We ask your support for the principles of the Justice Safety Valve Act of 2013, which allows judges to set aside mandatory minimum sentences when they deem appropriate. We ask that you form a panel to review requests for clemency that come to the Office of the Pardon Attorney. Well-publicized errors and omissions by this office have caused untold misery to thousands of people. Additionally, we want to applaud your staunch commitment to re-entry programs that are necessary to ensure that those who leave the system are able to become productive members of society as well as reliable husbands, fathers, mothers and wives. We certainly would like to help you achieve an increase in the number of these transition programs. Finally, we strongly urge you to support the Youth Prison Reduction through Opportunities, Mentoring, Intervention, Support, and Education (Youth PROMISE) Act, a bill that brings much needed focus on violence and gang intervention and prevention work. During your presidency you have made important steps and you now have the opportunity to leave a legacy by transforming our criminal justice system to an intervention and rehabilitation based model. Many of those impacted by the prison industrial complex are among your most loyal constituents. Your struggles as the child of a single mother allow you to identify with millions of children who long to be with their parents. We request the opportunity to meet with you to discuss these ideas further and empower our coalition to help you achieve your goals of reducing crime, lowering drug use, preventing juvenile incarceration and lowering recidivism rates. We stand with you, ready to do what is just for America. Sincerely, CIVIL RIGHTS LEADERS & ADVOCATES Harry Belafonte Julian Bond Dr. Benjamin Chavis Major Neill Franklin, LEAP Rev. Jesse Jackson Benjamin Todd Jealous, NAACP Avis Jones-Deweever, National Council of Negro Women Maria Theresa Kumar, VotoLatino Donna Lieberman, NYCLU Margaret Moran, LULAC Marc Morial, National Urban League Ethan Nadelmann, Drug Policy Alliance

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Rev. Al Sharpton, NAN Rashad Robinson, Colors of Change Anthony Romero, ACLU Michael Skolnik Julie Stewart, Families Against Mandatory Minimums Susan Taylor Dr. Boyce Watkins Brent Wilkes, LULAC Vanessa Williams, National Conference of Black Mayors Rev. Lennox Yearwood, Hip-Hop Caucus ENTERTAINMENT COMMUNITY La La Anthony Roseanne Barr Russell Brand Jim Carrey Cedric The Entertainer Margaret Cho Affion Crockett Rosario Dawson Cameron Diaz Mike Epps Omar Epps Jamie Foxx Tyrese Gibson Adrian Grenier Jon Hamm Hill Harper Woody Harrelson Amber Heard Dule Hill Ron Howard J Ivey Terrence J Eugene Jarecki Kris Jenner Scarlett Johannson Kim Kardashian Khloe Kardashian-Odom Kourtney Kardashian Sanaa Lathan LL Cool J Nia Long Eva Longoria AnnaLynne McCord Demi Moore

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Michael Moore Keya Morgan Jay Pharaoh Dominic Purcell Tim Robbins Chris Rock Susan Sarandon Sarah Silverman Russell Simmons Vanessa Simmons Jada Pinkett Smith Will Smith Tika Sumpter Gabrielle Union Denise Vasi Mark Walhberg Estella Warren Kerry Washington Pauletta Washington Marlon Wayans Jesse Williams Jeffrey Wright FAITH COMMUNITY Bishop James Clark Bishop Noel Jones Bishop Clarence Laney Bishop Edgar Vann Dr. Iva Carruthers Deepak Chopra Father Michael Pfleger Rabbi Robyn Fryer Bodzin Rabbi Menachem Creditor Rabbi Nina Mandel Rev. Jamal Bryant Rev. Delman Coates Rev. Leah D. Daughtry Rev. Dr. Fredrick Haynes Rev. Michael McBride Rev. Dr. W Franklyn Richardson Rev. Barbara Skinner Williams MUSIC INDUSTRY David Banner Eric Benet Andre 3000 Benjamin

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Big Boi of Outkast Warryn Campbell Case Charlamagne tha God Sean "Diddy" Combs Chuck D DJ Envy DJ Pauly D Ani Difranco Jermaine Dupri Missy Elliot Estelle Jason Flom John Forte Ghostface Killah Ginuwine Keri Hilson Jennifer Hudson Ice-T Luke James Trinidad James Lyfe Jennings Jim Jones Talib Kweli John Legend Ryan Leslie Joanna "JoJo" Levesque Kevin Liles Ludacris Lil Wayne Natalie Maines Angie Martinez Mary Mary Nicki Minaj Mya Q-Tip Busta Rhymes Steve Rifkind Samantha Ronson Rick Ross RZA Timeflies Katrina Trina Taylor Teyana Taylor Angela Yee

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BUSINESS LEADERS Sir Richard Branson Ron Busby, US Black Chamber of Commerce Daymond John Minyon Moore Chip Rosenbloom, Owner St. Louis Rams Bobby Shriver ELECTED OFFICIALS Congressman Tony Cardenas Congressman Keith Ellison Congresswoman Marcia Fudge Congresswoman Barbara Lee Congressman Bobby Rush Congressman Bobby Scott ATHLETES Brendon Ayanbadejo Allan Houston Israel Idonije Lamar Odom Etan Thomas Isiah Thomas Mike Tyson FASHION INDUSTRY Tyson Beckford Selita Ebanks Kenza Fourati Kimora Lee Simmons Veronika Verekova MEDIA Chris Broussard Chuck Creekmur, AllHipHop.com Ed Gordon TJ Holmes Cathy Hughes, Radio One Alfred Liggins, Radio One Dylan Ratigan Jim Wallis, Sojourners Dave Zirin ACADEMIC & THOUGHT LEADERS Michelle Alexander Dr. Carlton Brown, Clark Atlanta Univ.

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Prof. Michael Eric Dyson Dr. Christopher Emdin Dr. Michael Fauntroy Dr. Eddie Glaude Airickca Gordon-Taylor Dream Hampton Dr. Marc Lamont Hill Naomi Klein Dr. Jawanza Kunjufu Dr . Wilmer Leon Dr. Julianne Malveaux Dr. John E. Maupin, Jr., Morehouse School of Medicine Kevin Powell Dr. Stanley Pritchett, Morris Brown College Ricky "Freeway" Ross Dr. Tyra Seldon, Co-Chair, Education Over Incarceration (EOI) Dr. Beverly Daniel Tatum, Spelman College Terrie Williams