Reflection: This is an example of a conclusion from one of my special education students.

As you can see, the grammar was not up to where it should be for, but for him I focused more on if he understood the concepts. This is why I give myself leeway in the points for effort, grammar and development, that way I can freely adjust based on what ability the student has to start. The purple is the comments I added to the rubric in Google Docs.

from this class experiment we have learned that our control was distilled water and benedicts solution along as lugols solution.for starch and sugar was lugols solution and benedicts solution.our indepndent variable and dependent variables are dependent is the thing we measure and independent is the thing we change the type of food.I expected that starch solution for sugar solution would be (-) and distilled water would be a and for positive for sugar test is sugar solution and marshmellow potato buds powderd egg.starch tested (-) and positive for marshmellow, potato buds and powderd egg and for benedicts solution is for positive is sugar solution marshmellow potato buds powderd egg and for (-) is starch and distilled.potato buds and powderd egg starch distilled water tested positive and some negative those people must have done it wrong or wasnt paying attention and for starch solution starch and distilled water tested negative or positive they must have boiled it or didnt listen. Lab 3 Conclusion Rubric
__2___listed both reagents used (2) __2___ Expected positive (2) ___2__ Expected negative (2) _2____ What was the control? (2) _____ Why is it a control (2) Why does Distilled water make a good control? _2____ Independent variable (2) ___1__ Dependent variable (2)

_____ (+) starch test color (2) If something does have starch in it what color does it turn? __7__ all results for sugar and starch (8) _2___ 2 unusual results and why (4) ___8__ Effort, grammar and development (12) Need to get this paragraph cleaned up a bit, capitalizing the beginning of sentences and double spacing after a period. It would make it a lot easier to read. Also focus on making sure everything is in complete sentences. 28/40 nice start use my comments to help you get this fixed up and I will regrade it. In google docs you can add comments to highlighted portions of the paragraph here are clips from what I highlighted and some of the comments for this students work
6:46 AM Nov 14 Selected text:

starch tested (-) and positive for marshmellow potato buds and powderd egg and for benedicts solution is for positive is sugar solution marshmellow potato buds powderd egg and for (-) is starch and distilled.potato buds and powderd egg starch distilled water tested positive and some negative Show all make sure you specify which test these results were for. ReplyResolve
6:44 AM Nov 14 Selected text:

benedicts solution The sugar test ReplyResolve

6:44 AM Nov 14 Selected text:

I expected that starch solution for sugar solution and distilled water would be a (-) Show all you mean for the stach test that you thought these would be (-)? ReplyResolve
9:11 PM Nov 13 Selected text:

for starch and sugar was starch solution and sugar solution Show all Is this what you expected to be positive? You need to focus on how to write a paragraph with complete sentences and correct spacing.