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1. 2. !. &. (. ). -. /. Read the sentence and try to hear the problem. If you find an error eliminate A. "efore you loo# at the ans$er choices figure out ho$ to fi% the error. 'ind the correction that most closely matches yours. If no correction matches eliminate ans$ers that repeat the error or contain ne$ errors. If you*re still stumped reach into your bag of tric#s +more on those soon,. .lug your ans$er bac# into the sentence to chec# it. If you*re still stumped0cut guess and run.
Alright no$ it*s time to put that e%citing eight-step process into action. "elo$ you*ll see a sample problem that $e solve $ith the eight-step method e%plaining each of the steps along the $ay:
Jenna was awarded the medal not for her academic success or her skill on the soccer field, but for her being a participant in gym class . (A) but for her being a participant in gym class (B) the reason being for her participation in gym class (C) the reason was her participating in gym class (D) but for her being participation willing in gym class (!) but for her participation in gym class
discourage totally random guessing but to re$ard educated guessing. If you can eliminate even one ans$er choice the ans$er you choose becomes an educated guess0tipping the odds in your favor.
Step 3: Before you look at the ans er choices, fi!ure out ho the error.
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<nce you*ve figured out the problem in the underlined part of the sentence say to yourself +silently0 you don*t $ant to reveal your genius to other test-ta#ers in the room,: :1his $ould be a better sentence if it read something li#e Jenna was awarded the medal not for her academic success or her skill on the soccer field, but for participating in gym class.; 1hat version conveys the right information but doesn*t ta#e up unnecessary space. 8ave you ever noticed that if you repeat a normal everyday $ord li#e house over and over it starts to seem odd= 1hat*s e%actly $hat the ans$er choices of Improving Sentences 7uestions $ill do to you. If you go right to the ans$er choices and read through them one by one by the time you get to # the ans$ers $ill all sound e7ually confusing and $rong. Al$ays approach the ans$er choices $ith a plan $hich is $hat you thin# sounds correct. If you start loo#ing at the ans$er choices $ith no idea of $hat you*re loo#ing for it*s possible all the ans$ers $ill sound funny and incorrect.
& loo#s most li#e the ans$er you came up $ith before loo#ing. It*s not e%actly li#e your prepared ans$er0it uses her participation instead of for participating0but it*s very close. Rarely $ill an ans$er choice exactly match the one you generated on your o$n $hich is fine. 1he purpose of preparing your o$n ans$er first is not to find an exact match in the ans$er choices but to have an idea of $hat is correct before you start reading the choices. If you find an ans$er that matches yours a$esome. <n$ard to the ne%t 7uestion. Sometimes though you may not be totally sure $hether any of the ans$er choices matches yours closely enough. In that case move to step (.
Step ': If no correction matches, eliminate ans ers that repeat the error or contain ne errors.
@ou*ll usually see a fe$ ans$er choices that actually repeat the mista#e. <thers might fi% the original mista#e but in the process add a ne$ error to the mi%. Suppose you $eren*t certain that & matched your prepared ans$er closely enough. In that case you $ould read through the ans$er choices and try to determine if they repeated the first mista#e or contained a ne$ one. Ans$er choice B has a problem similar to that of the original sentence. It says the reason being $hich is a $ordy phrase. 6ean$hile # creates a ne$ problem: the $ord participating is a gerund but should be a noun. ( repeats the original mista#e repeating the phrase but for her beingA it also introduces a ne$ problem by using the strange phrase participation-willing. <nly & neither repeats the original problem nor contains a ne$ one.
Step *: +lu! your ans er back into the sentence to check it.
.lug the ans$er bac# into the sentence to chec# ho$ $ell it $or#s.
Jenna was awarded the medal not for her academic success or her skill on the soccer field, but for her participation in gym class.