Champion Bryan Yap JF (Harmony) An Alien Planet

Last night, I heard a noise while I was sleeping. I woke up and ran outside to have a look. It was a spaceship landing on earth. The spaceship was huge and shiny. When I walked into the spaceship, the door closed automatically. I was frightened, I ran to the driver seat to ride the spaceship. Before I took off, I found a suit and I put it on. After that, I flew away. Suddenly my spaceship ran out of fuel. I was panic-stricken. The spaceship crashed to a random planet. I fell out of the ship and I shouted for help. But, I didnt fall off. I was floating in mid-air. I was looking for help. Suddenly, an alien came out from nowhere. I asked him for some fuel but the alien replied, #@!?^$#!@. I couldnt understand what the alien was saying. Few minutes later, a group of alien captured me and brought me to the king of the alien. The alien king shot me with a laser gun. Then, I woke up. I saw my mom. She was trying to wake me up.

First Runner Up Daryl Eng J1 (Trust) Describe an Interesting Place that You Visited Last Year
Last year, during the long school holiday my parents brought me to Langkawi. We reached there in an hour. We checked in to a five star hotel and then we had a nap. The first place we visited was the fishermen village. We went there by a boat. I saw a lot of fish were being sold along the beach. I saw some sea shells too. After that we took a speed boat to go around the sea. There was an eagle feeding spot. I saw people holding meat on their hand to feed eagle. There were some eagles catching fish in the water. It was so exciting. The last place we visited was the sky bridge which is the highest bridge there. From the bridge we could see the whole island of Langkawi. I really had a good time visiting Langkawi, but it was time to go home. We packed up our things and paid the hotel. Then, we left for Kuala Lumpur. I had an enjoyable time visiting Langkawi.

Alien planet
10,000 years ago, I was sent by the Ministry of Outer Space to explore a new living planet to replace my current living planet. While I was on the way to explore a new living environment, my spaceship was hit by an unknown flying object and fell on a small planet. I landed on the Alien Planet which has got oxygen, plants and living organisms. The aliens were friendly and welcomed me to join their big family. I was glad to find a new living environment which was suitable for my people and me. I was allowed to send information back to my planet. We were pleased to share a living place with each other.