Schedule of Client / Operator Comments:

Date of Issue:

14 November 2013

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Kick Off Meeting 2013.08.29 Item Architecture 1 General Client / Operator Comment Resort to have Bab Al Shams feel to it but must also offer a unique experience. The resort must respect privacy, and maintain a quiet desert retreat capability. Most visitors will stay for 2 nights. Resort will mostly attract visitors from Abu Dhabi. The spa and business centre will help to generate occupancy 7 days per week. It was noted that Endurance Village is currently undergoing an upgrade. It is envisaged that visitors to the Endurance Festivals will stay at the resort, and possibly require mobile F&B services during the day. Note route of endurance race to be established to ensure no crossover of access roads to resort. Wifi is to be provided throughout the resort. Room sizes are to be larger than Bab Al Shams with improved lighting. Privacy is of utmost importance. Sunrise and sunset views are preferential. Standard size 45 50sqm tbc. To be substantial and able to attract day visitors from Abu Dhabi. To offer a unique desert spa experience. Should contain small caf / juice bar area. Business centre is to be able to accommodate for up to 150 people, with a large room which is dividable into smaller rooms as required. It is envisioned that companies will visit the resort for workshops followed by lunch and or diner. Separate meeting rooms are also required. The operator would like to offer a desert experience to children, incorporating the desert traditions and themes, with desert activities on offer. Possibly a desert playground. 3 Restaurants are required All day dining Specialist 1 Specialist 2 In addition to this there will be the Desert camp restaurant Poolside Bar & Snacks The location of the bar in the hotel lobby is is to be re-examined. Operator views this as an important element which is an investment in the future of the hotel, which ultimately will enable a better service to be delivered by staff. A 5 minute shuttle bus ride from the resort to the accommodation is acceptable. Laundry facility and other utility areas could be housed in same location. Operator confirmed they believed there was a market for 1 bed villas. Villas can be accessed through the hotel but should ideally have a direct access from the resort access driveway through security gates. In this case the check in procedure would be done in the villa. The idea was tabled that the villas would be used in lieu of any Royal or Presidential suites. Can be provided above ground on grade. Shade should be provided. Underground parking could be provided for % of spaces. GAJ Response Comment has been incorporated into the current design, to provide a unique experience at the resort. Access road to resort has been indicated on Master plan. Restaurants can accommodate for additional guests during Endurance races with substantial external over spill seating. Wi-fi will be provided throughout resort. Status

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Rooms Spa Facility

Room sizes are as per operator minimum requirements Talise Spa has been increased in size as requested by Graham Steven to 2,700sqm GFA. Spa contains Talise Lounge as per operators requirements. Conference facility has been designed in accordance with operators requirements. Separate meeting rooms are provided as part of the business centre. Large conference hall can be sub-divided into 3 smaller meeting rooms. Kids club is locate between the kids pool and desert landscape allowing easy access to both if required. This comment has been superseded by the schedule of accommodation issued by operator which requires All day dining restaurant Specialty restaurant Roof top bar In addition to this there will be the Desert camp restaurant Poolside Bar & Snacks Hotel lobby lounge is located off the main hotel circulation route. GAJ have included in the concept report sample staff accommodation blocks which can be built off site (5minutes away) . Awaiting confirmation of preferred location from client and comments re design from operator. Current design includes 6 one bedroom villas, 3 two bedroom villas and a Royal Villa. A 7 module presidential suite is excluded in lieu of an additional two bedroom suit. It is envisaged that guests requiring larger accommodation will opt for a villa. The current proposal includes 48 covered parking spaces, and 80 above ground spaces adjacent to the hotel entrance and an additional 40 spaces adjacent to the desert camp.

Conference Facility

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Childrens Facility Food and Beverage

Staff Accommodation

Villas

Parking

Meeting 2013.09.05 & Pre Meeting Comments received 2013.09.04 Item Architecture 1 General Client / Operator Comment GAJ Response Status

We need to have a point of difference, it must feel different from bab al shams. The overall BUA needs to be reduced. a. Identify buggy routes. (required generally for servicing and disabled guests only) b. Advice on Tennis court location. c. Advice on location of Kids club. d. Provide shading for kids pool. e. Provided a shaded/pergola feature within the main pool. Camel stables to be considered Consider food smells Consider wind direction Minimise staff trolley visibility

Curent GFA 18,000sqm Buggy routes are available throughout most of the resort. No tennis court is currently proposed. Kids club is located alongside kids pool close to desert. Shading is provided over kids pool A shaded pergola is provided off the main pool area with bubble jets under. No camel stable are currently provided Refer kitchen locations. Prevailing winds are along east west axis based on airport runway alignment Recesses will be provided for trolleys while rooms are being serviced. GAJ have designed a unique entrance experience while maintaining the village feel. The current proposal includes 48 covered parking spaces, and 80 above ground spaces adjacent to the hotel entrance and an additional 40 spaces adjacent to the desert camp. 6 VIP parking spots are located at hotel entrance A stair is provided connecting BOH reception to parking. GAJ propose that the retail outlets could be located off the village square in a small souk area. Direct access is provided to the Spa and conference facility from the drop off area. GAJ propose that the guest could enjoy the village experience by encouraging the journey through the streets and courtyards en route to the Spa / Conference Facility rather than a direct route from the reception area. The total number of accommodation modules is 140 The number of modules with desert or pool views is 112 (80%) This includes 9 modules facing north desert. The number of modules with garden views is 28 (20%) All ground floor rooms are provided with gardens / terraces. All first floor rooms are provided with balconies. 24 one bedroom modules are connected using vestibules allowing for a single family to take the 2 adjoining rooms. Alternatively these rooms can be occupied separately. Refer to Master Plan for buggy routes. Spa size has increased above the operators requirements as requested by Graham Steven.

Arrival Experience

a. Arrival experience to be grand with a feel of discovery and luxury. b. Consider location of Parking as this is currently the first impression upon arrival. c. Parking to be provided with shaded structure or within basement area. d. Provide VIP car park adjacent to main hotel drop-off area. e. Identify valet access into the car park. f. Porte Cochere to be provided. a. Positive sense of arrival. b. Separate luggage access is required along with security scanning machine. c. Retail souvenir shops could be adjacent to lobby space. d. Provide easy access from hotel lobby into SPA and Convention facilities (for external guests).

Hotel Lobby

Guest Rooms

Views: A large proportion of the rooms face in a North Westerly direction, while we agree that not all rooms can have a view, we should maximize as far as possible (avoiding liner design) views in the North Westerly direction. a. Refer to the attached key mix on the Jumeirah Area Programme. b. External gardens from ground level and balconies for the upper level guestrooms is required. c. Provide series of internal courts that distributes into the several guestrooms. d. Proposed village like distribution and proportion is interesting. e. Please provide a number of interconnecting guestrooms. f. Buggy route to be determined.

Spa Facility

a. Please refer to the attached Jumeirah area schedule for the suggested Spa model. b. Total separation between male and female functions. c. Consider linking the spa with the BOH

basement facilities if possible. d. The experience through the internal court yard is interesting. Can share common entrance and share a gym. Arrangement of treatment rooms to be flexible to allow variation in number of male / female rooms. Proposal to visit Park Hyatt Spa facility at Dubai Creek
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Total separation has been accommodated for in the current design. The Fitness centre is accessed through a common entrance.

a. Provide an easy link from the hotel lobby. b. Provide flexibility with the internal partitioning of the proposed meeting rooms. c. Proposed location is acceptable.

GAJ propose that the guest would enjoy the village experience by encouraging the journey through the streets and courtyards en route to the Spa / Conference Facility rather than a direct route from the reception area. Conference facility currently allows for sub-division Refer comments above Specialty restaurant has been relocated as suggested by operator, with roof top bar over. BOH rooms have been located on either side of the resort to accommodate for room servicing.

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Childrens Facility Food and Beverage

The operator would like to offer a desert experience to children, incorporating the desert traditions and themes, with desert activities on offer. Possibly a desert playground.

The idea of a common external plaza that leads to both main restaurant is interesting however we would suggest swapping the Specialty Restaurant and bedroom block that is adjacent to the pool side restaurant. This could lead to the following: a. Same BOH support could be provided for the specialty restaurant and pool side restaurant. b. Roof top bar could be relocated on top of the specialty restaurant. c. Roof top bar could benefit from attractive sun set experience and uninterrupted desert views. d. No need to double up on public toilets. e. F&B outlets are in easy reach from the VIP villas. f. All hotel guestrooms could be grouped in the same location and serviced by the relevant remote BOH facilities.
Operator views this as an important element which is an investment in the future of the hotel, which ultimately will enable a better service to be delivered by staff. A 5 minute shuttle bus ride from the resort to the accommodation is acceptable. Laundry facility and other utility areas could be housed in same location.

Staff Accommodation

GAJ have included in the concept report sample staff accommodation blocks which can be built off site (5minutes away) . Awaiting confirmation of preferred location from client and comments re design from operator. Separate Villa check in building has been omitted. Villa guests can either check in at the hotel (including access to VIP Majlis) or can be checked in at their Villas. A buggy route is provided from hotel to all villas. The Villas have been split into groups of 5 on either side of the resort and integrated into the village- scape. All Villas include infinity edge pools.

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Villas

Villa Division: The experience feels very much divided down the villa and apartments lines. As we discussed we do not require a separate entrance for the Villas, we require that they shall check in or be greeted at the reception and shall then be transported through the development taking in the experience and arriving at a single destination. This frees you to explore mixing the villas and the rooms in a more integrated fashion, while still providing privacy. a. VIP Majlis could be adjacent to main hotel lobby. Preferably connected due to hot desert climate and in order to share support functions (pantry, toilets etc.). b. Main access to Villas from relevant Majils has to be better defined. Perhaps All day dining is pushed further down and a lager access towards these villas is provided. c. Also the above route could be used from villas leading to Spa and leisure facilities from within the center of the village and main plaza. d. Consider full desert views and privacy for all villas. e. Plunge pools and spacious external areas are required for all villas. f. Please refer to Jumeirah Area Programme for the exact mix. Proceed on basis that there is no requirement for separate vehicle access to the Royal Villa. 4x4 route over sand can be assumed for now.

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Swimming Pool

The swimming pool needs to be the star of the show. Would like to explore different options on design and location. Suggested two / tree level design

GAJ have presented several options for the swimming pool including 8 full renders of the various designs

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Parking

We need to consider a % of covered parking, as you rightly advise this will assist with achieving varying levels. Please commence the soil investigation that will enable your structural engineers to explore options. Parking to desert camp to be located at desert camp. Possibly cater for up to 400 people in the future.

The current proposal includes 48 covered parking spaces, and 80 above ground spaces adjacent to the hotel entrance and an additional 40 spaces adjacent to the desert camp. 6 VIP spaces are provided at hotel entrance. Soil Investigation was instructed on 12 November 2013 Desert camp parking area can be expanded as facility grows to cater for increased numbers. These spaces would be on grade, on a compacted sub-base with a sand coloured aggregate.
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Back of House Facilities

a. Satellite kitchen size will depend on its proximity with the main kitchen. b. Laundry location to be decided preferably within the adjacent staff accommodation c. Staff canteen could be shifted to the staff accommodation block in case of near proximity. d. Also staff changing lockers could be shifted to the staff accommodation block in case of near proximity.

Location of Staff accommodation to be confirmed

Comments Extracted from Operators Initial Design Review Report Issued 2013.10.08 Item Architecture Design Summary Client / Operator Comment 1.1.1 1.1.1.1 Room / Suite Areas Please note minimum room areas above are defined as the Net Internal Area measured to the internal face of the room perimeter walls (DG, Section B03-1). Guest Room Configuration / Mix Without compromise to the current building envelope, the following room configuration is recommended; Accommodation mix is as per operators requirements All rooms have been sized as per operators requirements. Refer to area schedule in concept report for room sizes GAJ Response Status

1.1.2 1.1.2.1

1.1.3 1.1.3.1 1.1.3.2

Connecting rooms Assuming resort hotel, provide interconnecting rooms (30% of total guestroom keys). Connecting rooms should have a shared entrance vestibule - three door entrance (DG, Section B03-1). 30% of the one bedroom modules are designed so as to be connectable. 24no. rooms in total. Shared vestibules are provided to connect rooms as an option.

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Where possible all Double (Twin) Rooms should connect with either an adjoining suite or king room. Accessibility In the absence of local guidelines or where local guidelines are deemed insufficient 1% of guestrooms should be fully accessible (DG, Section A06).

Floor Plan Entrance Level

1.1.5 1.1.5.1 1.1.5.2 1.1.5.3

Access / Egress and Circulation Provide security check point / road blocker at entry / exit. Hotel drop-off directly at the corner of the roundabout is not preferred. Provide BOH corridor for valet / guest luggage. The luggage X-ray area should have direct access from the porte cochere and interior connection into the luggage store room (DG, Section B02-2). Access from Hotel lobby into SPA and convention centre is to be clearly defined. To be considered. Security point could be located on road. GAJ would have a preference not to create a security barrier at the village gate. Drop off has been redesigned to move it away from the corner. GAJ propose a BOH workshop with operator to agree design.

1.1.5.4

Access route is clearly defined through the Talise gardens

1.1.5.5 1.1.5.6 1.1.6 1.1.6.1 1.1.6.2 1.1.6.3 1.1.6.4 1.1.7 1.1.7.1 1.1.8 1.1.8.1 1.1.9 1.1.9.1

Provide bypass lane for passing vehicles in Port Cochere. Define buggy routes for guests and service access within the resort. Parking

By pass lane has been provided Buggy access has been provided to villas on either side of resort, and to specialty restaurant kitchen. GAJ propose trees be used to shade car parking areas above ground.

All above ground car parking to be shaded. Check and confirm total number of spaces. Provide light shaded structure for the VIP car park. Define traffic strategy into the underground car park and valet parking access/vertical transportation. Service Road Access / Egress for service vehicles to be defined at next design stage. Receiving Areas Detail to be provided at next design stage. General BOH and Service areas Detail to be provided at next design stage. Noted - GAJ propose a BOH workshop with operator to agree design Noted Noted The current proposal includes 48 covered parking spaces, and 80 above ground spaces adjacent to the hotel entrance with an additional 40 spaces adjacent to the desert camp. 6 VIP spaces are also provided at hotel entrance. Total spaces: 174

Refer Masterplans

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Space planning requires to be updated in accordance with Jumeirah Design Guidelines (DG) component spaces / room requirements; space flow diagrams and area programme.

Hotel Entrance 1.1.10 1.1.10.1 1.1.10.2 Port Cochere Confirm covered Port cochere will be provided that extends over the vehicle drop-off area (DG, Section B01-3). At a minimum, the port cochere should have sufficient space for at least two stationary vehicles parked nose to tail, and for two passing lanes. (DG, Section B01-3). Reception / Lobby Detail to be provided at next design stage. Space planning requires to be updated in accordance with Jumeirah Design Guidelines (DG) component spaces / room requirements; space flow diagrams and area programme. Noted. Noted - GAJ propose a BOH workshop with operator to agree design A fabric shade is provided over the drop off area

Drop off has been redesigned to accommodate for this requirement.

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Village Square 1.1.11.3 1.1.11.4 Provide shading to external plazas/courtyards through structures, light structures, landscaping/plants etc permanent Village Square has been redesigned to include additional shading introduced by trees. A unit of the small souk area also faces onto the village square.

Are the small areas on around the village square (facing the bar) considered as retail outlets?

Bedrooms and Suites 1.1.12 Standard Guest Rooms Noted Proposed rooms are brighter than Bab Al Shams rooms. A lighter coulour render & screed is proposed along with providing increased window and door opening. Refer visuals. 80% of all accommodation modules have a desert or pool view.

1.1.12.1 Would suggest that the overall look and feel of the guestroom is considered as an enhanced and superior reflection of the Bab Al Shams resort rather than being a replicate. 1.1.12.2 Confirm percentages of rooms that have desert views compared to courtyards/ garden views. 1.1.12.3 1.1.12.4 1.1.12.5 1.1.12.6 1.1.12.7 1.1.12.8 Provide an area on every floor for housekeeping linen store; F&B service pantry and colleague toilet. Advise on TV location. Luggage rack to be included. Space in front of bed is too generous. Consider revised furniture arrangement. Circular table in front of sofa to consist of multi-use i.e. to accommodate for in-room dining Tight space between sofa and bed. No space for a second chair/ in-room

Nominal areas are provided, to be refined during workshop.

TV location is directly in front of bed. Please refer to bedroom block plans. Luggage rack is provided. Please refer to bedroom block plans. GAJ recommend module width of 5m to allow for generous bathroom configuration. Module size is maintained at 45sqm. Noted, circular table to be considered. To be reviewed during workshop.

dining. Additional chair is required. 1.1.12.9 Provide Sofa Bed in order to maximise usage of room. GAJ propose similar arrangement to Bab al Shams, where room service convert the sofa to a bed for children. Larger windows and doors are proposed. Gable window can be introduced where appropriate. Noted. Noted. Current length is 1.8m

1.1.12.10 Provide adequate natural lighting into the guestrooms. Consider side openings for corner rooms. 1.1.12.11 We are in agreement with the open bathroom concept. 1.1.12.12 Minimum Vanity Basin bench should be nominal 1.6m long. 1.1.12.13 Minimum Bed Size - King Bed 2 x 2 metres and Single Bed 1.2 x 2 metres. (DG, Section B03-4). 1.1.12.14 Minimum Wardrobes Size - 1.6m wide x minimum 640mm deep. Walk-in type is preferred. (DG, Section B03-4). 1.1.12.15 Minimum Balconies Size - 7.5m2, and not less than 1.5 metres deep. (DG, Section B03-5). 1.1.12.16 Guest Bathrooms should have six-fixture types (Bath tub, Shower enclosure, Double hand wash basin, Enclosed toilet and Bidet adjacent to the toilet fixture. (DG, Section B04-1). 1.1.12.17 Minimum Bath Tub Size - 1.7m length (internal size). (DG, Section B041). 1.1.12.18 Shower Enclosure should be not less than 1.0 x 1.1mtrs, with a glass door opening outwards. (DG, Section B04-1). 1.1.13 One Bedroom suite

Beds are drawn to sizes indicated.

Noted. Current proposal complies with this guideline.

Noted. Current proposal complies with this guideline.

Noted. Current proposal complies with this guideline.

Noted. Current proposal complies with this guideline.

Noted. Current proposal complies with this guideline.

1.1.13.1 Consider entry vestibule in order to interconnect with adjacent room. 1.1.13.2 General comments comments 10-18). 1.1.14 Two Bedroom suite are applicable as above (standard guestrooms

Noted.

1.1.14.1 Twin beds in second room with zipped option. 1.1.14.2 Consider entry vestibule in order to interconnect with adjacent room. 1.1.14.3 General comments comments 10-18). 1.1.15 Villas are applicable as above (standard guestrooms

Noted. 2 bedroom suite can accommodate twin beds. Entry Vestibule is provided. Noted.

1.1.15.1 Detailed layouts to be provided. 1.1.15.2 Access to the 2 Bedroom villas on either side of the resort is compromised. Entrance to these larger villas could be through an external courtyard.

Refer concept report Villas have been relocated with more generous access, through separate private courtyards.

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General Massing Layout Refer concept report. First floor plan indicates proposed massing with a reduction of bedrooms at first floor level.

1.1.16.1 Consider level change/movement within guestroom blocks. Currently they consist of either 1 or 2 story blocks. Explore the option of omitting a number of rooms on the second floor and introducing some terraces for suites, etc. 1.1.16.2 Omit a number of rooms from the block facing the spa entrance and position as part of a second floor on top of the room block adjacent to the specialty restaurant. Resort Pool Areas 1.1.17 Pool Deck

Refer concept report for current layout.

1.1.17.1 Consider level change within the different sun deck platforms and also the introduction of a lawn area. 1.1.17.2 Provision for additional sun loungers. Talise Spa 1.1.17.3 Consider positioning spa main entrance on main circulation pathway (on same axes as village square). In addition this will be of an easier access for external guests Space planning requires to be updated in accordance with Jumeirah Design Guidelines (DG) component spaces / room requirements; space flow diagrams and area programme.

Several level changes have been introduced to pool area

A total of 186 sun loungers is provided

Spa entrance is located on the axis along the village street to the square. Access to the Spa is through the Talise gardens.

1.1.17.4

Refer current concept report.

Dining Experiences 1.1.18 1.1.18.1 1.1.18.2 1.1.18.3 1.1.19 1.1.19.1 1.1.19.2 1.1.20 1.1.20.1 1.1.21 All Day Dining Detail to be provided at next design stage. Floor allocation to be agreed. Service route to F&B outlet to be included. Speciality Restaurant Detail to be provided at next design stage. Confirm provision of sunset bar on top of the specialty restaurant. Lounge Bar (16) Confirm if this is being considered as the lobby lounge or as a stand-alone bar. Desert Camp Refer current concept report. Refer current concept report A roof top bar is provided over the specialty restaurant. A second roof terrace is proposed over the all day dining, to be confirmed. Refer current concept report

A lobby lounge is provide off the main hotel. GAJ consider this to be a location serving pastries, afternoon tea etc. It could also provide alcoholic beverages if required.

1.1.21.1 Detail to be provided at next design stage.

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Pool Bar Further discussions required regarding Pool bar servicing based on current location. Pool bar is located close to specialty restaurant which will allow ease of servicing.

Meeting Rooms and Business Centre

1.1.22.2

Space planning requires to be updated in accordance with Jumeirah Design Guidelines (DG) component spaces / room requirements; space flow diagrams and area programme. Make provision for components of space/rooms such as; pre-function area; cloak room; guest toilets; storage etc. (DG, Section B09-1). Enlarge pre-function as currently long and narrow, seen more of a circulation space.

Refer current concept report.

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Comments Received By Email & GAJ Response.

Date 4/9

From Graham Steven

Comments Please provide me with some alternative options on the enclosed concept in terms of configuration and ideas, these dont need to be developed to anything more than sketches but I would like to see a fresh approach to the layout to explore the benefits and negatives of the various arrangements. These can then be discussed in a workshop style arrangement. On the submitted concept we comment as follows: Villas & Room Division The experience feels very much divided down the villa and apartments lines. As we discussed we do not require a separate entrance for the Villas, we require that they shall check in or be greeted at the reception and shall then be transported through the development taking in the experience and arriving at a single destination. This frees you to explore mixing the villas and the rooms in a more integrated fashion, while still providing privacy. North West & North East A large proportion of the rooms face in a North Westerly direction, while we agree that not all rooms can have a view, we should maximize as far as possible (avoiding liner design) views in the North Westerly direction. Swimming Pool The swimming pool needs to be the star of the show. Would like to explore different options on design and location. Parking We need to consider a % of covered parking, as you rightly advise this will assist with achieving varying levels. Please commence the soil investigation that will enable your structural engineers to explore options.

GAJ Response A total of 12 various sketch design arrangements have been explored / presented providing a range of option leading to the current design.

Status

Separate Villa check in building has been omitted. Villa guests can either check in at the hotel (including access to VIP Majlis) or can be checked in at their Villas. The Villas have been split into groups of 5 on either side of the resort and integrated into the village- scape. GAJ have redesigned the arrangement of the bedrooms to maximize the number of rooms with desert views, while maintaining the village concept and avoiding long linear blocks.

GAJ have presented several options for the swimming pool including 8 full renders of the various designs

The current proposal includes 48 covered parking spaces, and 80 above ground spaces adjacent to the hotel entrance and an additional 40 spaces adjacent to the desert camp. 6 VIP spaces are provided at hotel entrance.

Porte Cochere We need to have a point of difference, it must feel different from bab al shams. Area Schedule The overall BUA needs to be reduced.

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Porte Cochere has been redesigned to include a feature structure leading to the hotel lobby, and to incorporate a fabric shade over the drop off area. Current GFA is approx. 18,000sqm. BUA to be confirmed. 1. Entrance Sheet (sheet 3 board) We have added a fabric shade structure across the drop off area 2. Pool Sheets (sheets 7 & 8) GAJ have added an additional page to display the pool GAJ have redesigned the pool to Reduce shading over certain areas / introduced fabric shading in lieu of barasti pergola in some areas Added 3no. planters sunken in the water in the family pool, each with a palm tree in it. Added an infinity edge to the family pool Added a fire bowl to the end of the family pool which could be beautiful at night We have reformatted the sheets. 3.Talise Spa Sheet (sheet 9) We have added a detailed floor plan (this is a Work In Progress we will update tomorrow and resend) We have added mood images 4.Desert Camp Sheet (sheet 11) We have revised the images to include a larger view of the open fire 5.Fact & Figures Sheet (sheet 12) We have added the comparison information We have added the contour levels

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Graham Steven

I need you to work on the following in order of priority. Spa Detail board. This should clear define all spaces and show the external showers etc. This will be a critical to the presentation. Improve the original Spa board. Swimming Pool. It is not capturing anyones imagination. It needs to be wow! Front elevation. Add a shade structure over the drop off point.

Improve the desert camp board. Radius drawing should be made into a board, also add some key information like levels at key points etc.

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Graham Steven

By all means as a temporary solution update the swimming pool board with the revised renders. (Note: cabanas should not be shaded from above). Maybe add some planters into the wide expanse of the family pool to break it up. We need fresh ideas for the swimming pool, not restricted by the current design. The pool needs to be stunning please sketch up some alternative proposals that provide the necessary wow factor. If you need more details call me to discuss.

we will proceed with renders of existing pool for now, we have modified the design to 1. Reduce the amount of shading over the water 2. Added planting into the family pool 3. Removed the shade from the Cabanas

Please see attached one bedroom villa options for your consideration. I have made the following revisions to the original design Reduced area to 120sqm as per operators requirements Provided master en suite bathroom with window facing the desert Reduced / redesigned external terrace area Made infinity edge pool a little larger

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Graham Steven

On review from yesterday main concern are: Town square Images, colours and just the overall look, may take a difference view? Spa to be on larger board Consider night image of the pool

GAJ have re-rendered the village square image, including revisions to tree type and sky colour Spa floor plan has been relocated to new sheet and enlarged Two nighttime view of the pool have been added to the presentation.