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CreativeWriting
Howtodevelopsuccessfulwritingskillsforfictionandnonfictionpublication
AdleRamet 2ndedition
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CartoonsbySimonRamet BritishLibraryCataloguinginPublicationData AcataloguerecordforthisbookisavailablefromtheBritishLibrary. Copyright1999AdleRamet. PublishedbyHowToBooksLtd,3NewtecPlace, MagdalenRoad,OxfordOX41RE,UnitedKingdom. Tel:(01865)793806.Fax:(01865)248780. email:info@howtobooks.co.uk www:howtobooks.co.uk Firstpublished1997 Secondedition1999 Allrightsreserved.Nopartofthisworkmaybereproducedorstoredinaninformationretrievalsystem(otherthanforpurposesofreview)withouttheexpress permissionofthePublisherinwriting. Note:Thematerialcontainedinthisbookissetoutingoodfaithforgeneralguidanceandnoliabilitycanheacceptedforlossorexpenseincurredasaresultofrelying inparticularcircumstancesonstatementsmadeinthebook.Thelawsandregulationsarecomplexandliabletochange,andreadersshouldcheckthecurrentposition withtherelevantauthoritiesbeforemakingpersonalarrangements. ProducedforHowToBooksbyDeerParkProductions. TypesetbyPDQTypesetting,StokeonTrent,Staffs. PrintedandboundbyTheCromwellPress,Trowbridge,Wiltshire.
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Contents
Listofillustrations Preface Acknowledgements 1 Gettingstarted Makingtimetowrite Wheredoyougetyourideas? Writingaurallyandvisually Drawingonyourownexperiences Lookingbackintoyourpast Read,read,read Checklist Assignment 2 Writingnonfiction Writingaboutwhatyouknow Lettingoffsteam Changingworkintoleisure Relatingyourlifestory Tellingtravellers'tales Findingfunnymoments Followingwhereyourideasleadyou Casestudies Checklist Assignment 3 Creatingfictionalcharacters Basingcharactersonrealpeople Visualisingbackgrounds Involvingyourselfinyourcharacters'lives Changingthecharacter Relatingtoyourcharacter Howwouldyoureactiftheyapproachedyou? Creatingconflict 8 9 10 11
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Casestudies Checklist Assignment 4 Settingandatmosphere Gettingafeelofplaceandtime Visitinglocations Imaginingwhatitwouldbeliketobethere Wearingdifferentclothesandcostumes Casestudies Checklist Assignment 5 Showingnottelling Reactingandinteractingwithpeopleandsurroundings Feelingtheheat Shiveringagainstthecold Revealingemotions Expressingfeelings Movingyourcharactersaroundtheroom Speedingandslowingthepacewithvocabulary Flashingbackandforthintime Casestudies Checklist Assignment 6 Writingrealisticdialogue Developingagoodear Actingoutasituation Losingyourtemper Fallinginlove Creatingrealisticaccentsanddialects Swearingandslang Casestudies Checklist Assignment 7 Findingtruelove Writingaromance Findingflawsattractive Overcominginsurmountableobstacles Drivingfastcarsandwearingfancyclothes Enjoyingsexandfood Heighteningallthesenses Bringingtheheroandheroinetogether Historicalsettings
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Checklist Assignment 8 Haunting,thrillingandkilling Introducinganoteofsuspense Confrontingthefearswithin Contrastingnormalitywithterror Writingamurdermystery Choosingamurderweapon Plottingandplanning Twistingthetale Lookingtothefuture Casestudies Checklist Assignment 9 Writingforchildren Thinkingbacktoyourchildhood Lookingatlifethroughachild'seyes Playingaroundwithideas Writingforeducationalmarkets Anthropomorphisinganimals Writingaboutchildren Writingpicturebooks Casestudies Checklist Assignment 10 Sendingyourworktoapublisher Seeingyourworkinprint Playwritingforyourlocaldramagroup Enteringcompetitions Vanitypublishing Selfpublishing Writingasynopsis Presentingyourmanuscript Approachinganeditor Copyrightingandsyndication Keepingrecords Findingsupportfromotherwriters Glossary Answerstoassignments Usefuladdresses Furtherreading Index
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Preface
WhatisCreativeWriting? Thepopularperceptionoftheterm'creativewriter'canbemisleading.Tosome,itconjuresupalofty,artyimage.Toothers,itimpliesamateurstatus.Acreative writeris,wefeel,somehowdifferentfromthosepublishedprofessionalswhosewordswesoavidlyreadinnewspapers,magazinesandbooks. Infact,creativewriterscomeinallshapes,sizes,agesandfromallwalksoflifeandtheirwritingcoversadiverserangeofinterests. So,whatiscreativewriting?ChambersDictionarydefinescreativeas'Havingpowertocreate,thatcreates,showing,pertainingto,imagination,originality'and writingas'Theactofonewhowrites,thatwhichiswritten,literaryproductionorcomposition'.Therefore,theterm'creativewriting'maybedefinedas: Havingthepowertocreateanimaginative,originalliteraryproductionorcomposition andcanbeappliedtoaverybroadspectrumofwritinggenres. Inthisbookwewillbelookingat: waysofdrawingonpersonalexperienceinordertowritenonfictionarticlesonawidevarietyoftopicsinanumberofdifferentstyles fictionwritingandtheworldofgenrefictionscience,romance,horrorandcrime writingforchildrenwhichrequiresspecialisedskillsthat,oncemastered,bringenormoussatisfactiontoboththewriterandthereader. Finally,therewillbeadviceandguidanceonhowtoturnyourwritingintoamarketablecommodityfor,eventhoughmanypeople
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setouttowritepurelyfortheirownpleasure,thereislittledoubtthatnothingcancomparetothethrillofhavingworkacceptedforpublicationandreadingitfroma printedpage. Author'sNote IwouldliketothankauthorsPatriciaBurns,MartinaCole,JonathanGash,MichaelGreen,SusanMoody,MargaretNashandRuthRendell,agents CaroleBlakeofBlakeFriedmann,PetersFraser&DunlopandeditorsRichardBellofWritersNewsandMaoliosaKellyofHeinemannEducational Publishersfortheirinvaluablecontributionstothisbook. Acknowledgements TheArtofCoarseSailing,MichaelGreen,ArrowBooks. CinnamonAlley,PatriciaBums,CenturyArrow. HushaBye,SusanMoody,Hodder&Stoughton. TheJudasPair,JonathanGash,Collins/VikingPenguin. SomeLieandSomeDie,RuthRendell,ArrowBooks. TheLadykiller,MartinaCole,HodderHeadline. ADLERAMET
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1 GettingStarted
MakingTimetoWrite Oneofthefirstrulestorememberisthatwriterswrite.Youshouldwritesomethingeveryday,evenifallyoudowiththefinishedpieceistearitupandthrowitaway. Writingsomething,anything,everydaywillenableyoutobuildupthedisciplineandcommitmentrequiredtoensurethatyoucanproduceacompletemanuscriptin whatevergenreyouchoose. Givingyourselfpermissiontowrite Duetoacommonmisconceptionthatunlessyouareapublishednovelist,youcannotbeconsidereda'real'writer,noviceauthorsoftenfinditdifficulttoconvince eithertheirnearestanddearestor,indeed,themselvesthattheirdesiretowriteshouldbetakenseriously. However,eventhemostfamousauthorshadtostartsomewhere,sodon'tbeputoffbyoutsidepressures.Beassuredthatyourwritingismoreimportantthan: mowingthelawn washingthedishes cleaning,dusting,gardening oranyothersimilaractivitythatwillkeepyoufromyourpenandpaper. Lockingthedoor OnesuccessfulMills&Boonauthorstatesthat,onceshehadmadeuphermindtobecomeanovelist,sheturnedoneroomofherhouseintoastudy,lockedthedoor andforbadeanyonetoenterwhilstshewasworking. Youmaynotfeelyouhavetogoquitethisfarbutitisimportanttosetasidebothaspaceinyourhomewhereyoucanworkandaregulartimetowrite.
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Makingtime Lackoftimeis,perhaps,themostcommonlyusedexcusefornotputtingpentopaper.Thiscanbejustifiedwithanumberofperfectlycredibleexplanations: Youhaveademandingfulltimejob. Youhavealargefamily. Youhavetogetthoseseedlingsplanted. Youhavetoomanyothercommitments. You'retootired. Perhapsalltheseexcusescanberolledintoonesimpleexplanation: Youdon'tthinkyou'regoodenough. Buildingconfidence Lackofconfidenceisamajorstumblingblockforthewouldbewriter.Thereisnoeasywayroundthisbutifyoureallywanttowrite,theonlyoptionistogetonand doit.Takingthefollowingstepscanhelp: Setasideacornerinyourhomesolelyforyourwriting. Keepanotebookinwhichtojotdownideas. Selectasuitabletimetowriteeachdayandsticktoit. Giveyourselfatimelimitforwriting,say,anhouradaytobeginwith. Writesomethingeverydayandevenifyouthinkit'sterrible,retainituntilthenextday. Beginbyrereadingwhatyouwroteyesterdayattheveryleastitwillencourageyoutorewrite.Atbest,itwillbemuchbetterthanyouthoughtandspuryouonto writemore. Buyagooddictionaryandthesaurus. Ifpossible,useatypewriterorbetterstill,awordprocessororpersonalcomputer.Themoreprofessionalyourwritinglooks,themoreprofessionalyouwillfeel.
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WhereDoYouGetYourIdeas? Havingmadethedecisiontowrite,thenextstepisfindingsomethingtowriteabout. Watchingtheworldgoby Watchhowpeoplebehaveineverydaysituations,jottingdownideasinyournotebookastheyoccurtoyou. Thenexttimeyougotothesupermarket,forexample,observethebehaviouroftheothercustomers.Takeafewsecondstochattothecheckoutgirlortheassistant whopacksyourshopping.Listennotonlytothewordstheysaybuttohowtheysaythem. Ifyoucommutetowork,useyourjourneytimetostudyyourfellowtravellers.Trytoimaginewhatsortofhomestheycomefromandhowtheymightleadtheirlives. Whateversituationyoufindyourselfinduringyourdailylife,observethepeoplearoundyou. Notonlyshouldyouwatchbutyoumustalsolisten.Writersareterribleeavesdroppersandwillshamelesslylisteninonthemostprivateconversations.Youcanpick upsomewonderfulsnippetsthatwilleffortlesslyturnthemselvesintoideasforallsortsofthings,frombriefletterstoyourfavouritemagazine,factualarticlesexplaining theapparentlyinexplicable,tolengthyworksoffiction. Keepinganeyeonthemedia Perhapstherichestsourcesofideasarenewspapers,televisionandradio.Keepyoureyesandearsopenfortheunusualstoriesandquirkyprogrammestuckedaway betweenthemajoritems.Allkindsofthingscancaptureyourimagination. Notsolongago,aBBCRadio4programmeaboutthepotentiallydulltopicofmakingawillinspiredmetowriteashortstoryforBellamagazine's'MiniMystery' page.Theprogrammehighlightedthelegalpitfallsfacingpeoplewhowishtomakeunusualwillsandtheideacapturedmyimagination. Havinggleanedthenecessarytechnicallegalinformation,Isoonhadtheprotagonist,beneficiaryandtermsofthewillclearlyformedinmymind.Fromthere,itwasa shortsteptowritingthestory,sendingitofftomyeditorandseeingitinprint. Sourcesofideas Ideasareallaroundyou,ifonlyyoucantrainyourselftofindthem.Listedbelowarejustafewpossiblesources:
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airports beaches buses,coaches,planesandtrains cafsandrestaurants clubs doctors'/dentists'surgeries hairdressers schoolplaygrounds shops stations. Thelistisendlessbutasageneralrule,ideasaretobefoundanywhereanumberofpeoplegatherinoneplace. WritingAurallyandVisually Havingdevelopedyourwatchingandlisteningskills,itcanneverthelessbequitedifficulttosetthemdownonpaper.Moreoftenthannot,aphrasethatsounded wonderfulinyourheadlooksdullandlifelesswhenithitsthepage. Laterinthebook,wewillbelookingatwaysofbringingyourwritingtolifeandobtainingthatvitalingredient,readeridentification.Youwilllearnhowtostimulatethe reader'ssensessothattheyidentifywiththepeoplebeingportrayed,seeandhearthesightsandsoundsyouareattemptingtoconvey. Longdescriptivepassages,nomatterhowbeautifullywritten,canbeverydullwithoutdialogue,actionorinteractiontoliventhemup.Peopleenjoyreadingabout people,soeventhemostfactualnonfictionarticlecanbeenrichedbytheinclusionofabriefinterviewwithanacknowledgedexpertoracommentfromsomeone involvedinthefeaturedtopic. Forfiction,too,thereisnobetterwaytoconveysetting,atmosphere,sights,soundsandscentsthanthroughthereactionsofyourcharacters. Whatevergenreyouchoose,besureyouknowthetruemeaningofeachwordyouuse,consultingyourdictionaryandthesauruswheneveryouareunsureaboutthe spellingorcontextofawordorphrase. DrawingonYourOwnExperiences Oneofthefirstrulesawouldbewriterlearnsisto'writeaboutwhat
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youknow'.If,however,thisruleistakentooliterally,fewwriterswouldevergaintherequisiteknowledgetowriteanhistoricalromance,murdermysteryorscience fictionnovel. FarmorepracticalistheadvicefrombestsellingauthorMartinaColeto'Writeaboutwhatyouknowandifyoudon'tknowfindout'. Youdon'tneedtohavelivedinapreviouscentury,beamurdererortravelinspacetowritegenrefiction.Thoroughresearchintothebackgroundagainstwhichyour storyissetshouldprovideyouwiththefactualinformationyourequire. Expertknowledgeisinvaluable,ofcourse.Yearsspentinindustryorinthelegal,nursingorteachingprofessionseeingactiveserviceinthearmedforcesbringingup afamilyonalowfixedincomeworkinglongshiftsonafactoryassemblylinerunningandperhapslosingyourownbusinessanyoneoftheseandsimilarexperiences offersawealthofinformationonwhichyoucandraw,butfactualaccuracyisonlyoneaspectofwriting.Youalsohavetofindawaytobreathelifeintothecharacters featuredinyourarticlesandstoriesandthiscomesfromyourexperienceofpersonalrelationships,bothgoodandbad. Fromourearliestmemoriesofchildhoodthroughourschooldaystoadultfriendships,romanticattachments,experiencesatworkandinourdomesticlives,everything thatwentintoformingourcharacterhasaparttoplayinourwriting. LookingBackintoYourPast Thereislittledoubtthatanyonewithachequeredpastwillhaveplentytowriteaboutbutmanyofusfeelwehavedoneverylittleinourlivesworthcommittingto paper. Oncloserinspection,however,thisisveryrarelythecase.Takeyourselfrightbacktoyourearliestmemories.Howdidyoufeelwhen: youweretoldoffforbeingnaughty? youwerepickedonbyotherchildren? youmissedoutonatreat? yourparentsargued? yougotdetentionatschool? youhadtohavetreatmentinhospital? afamilytraumamadeyourealisethatnothingathomewouldbethesameagain?
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Thesearejustafewexperiencesmanychildrenshare,buttrygoingupanotchinageandseeifyoucanrecallhowyoufeltwhen: youlefthome startedyourfirstdayatwork travelledabroadonyourown gotyourfirstchequebook boughtyourowncar. Seekingreaderidentification Bynow,youmaybewonderinghowsuchveryordinary,everydayexperiencescanpossiblyberelevanttocreativewriting.Surelywritingisallaboutescapism, originalideas,unusualsituations,notaboutopeninga'YoungSaver'bankaccount? Ofcourse,you'reright.Originalityisavitalingredientinanypieceofwriting,factorfiction,butthensoisrealism.Withoutrealism,youcannothavereader identificationanditisthiselementthatbringsyourworkvividlytolife. Observingeverydaylife MichaelGreen,professionaljournalistandauthorofmanyhumorousnonfictionbooks,offersthefollowingexcellentadvicetowouldbewriters:
'Observeeverydaylifewithawriter'seye.Thereliesyourmaterial.Carryanotebookandjotdownanyideasthatcomeorincidentsyoucansee.'
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Wasthefirstsentenceshorterthantheothersintheopeningparagraph? Wasthefirstparagraphshorterthanthesecond? Didthefirstparagraphtellyouwhatthearticle/storywasabout? Whatwasitaboutthearticle/storythatmadeyoureadon? (a)Youwantedtoknowhowtoperformaspecifictask (b)Youfoundthetopicfascinating (c)Youdiscoveredsomethingyoudidn'tknowbefore (d)Youhadtoknowwhathappenednext (e)Youwantedtofindouthowitallended Wasthemiddleinformative/entertaining? Wasitsetoutinalogicalorder? Dideachsection/sceneleadyouontoreadthenext? Didyoufeelcompelledtokeepreading? Ifcharacterswereincluded,couldyourelatetothem? Didtheendbringthewholethingtoalogicalconclusion? Wastheendingsatisfactory? Wereallthequestionsanswered/looseendstiedup? Didtheauthordeliverwhattheypromised? Didyouenjoyreadingit? Wouldyoureadmorebythisauthor?
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Fig.1. Analysissheet.
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UsethequestionnaireinFigureItoanalysepublishedexamplesofyourparticularwritinginterest.Whetheryouintendtowritenonfictionarticles,shortstoriesor novels,youwilldiscoverthatthesamebasicprinciplesapply. Asyourcriticalfacultiesdevelop,youmayfindyourreadingenjoymentisspoiltbythewaytechnicalpointsyouwerepreviouslyunawareofsuddenlybecomeglaringly obvious.Gradually,however,asyournewfoundunderstandinghelpsyoutoappreciatetheskillsbeingemployed,thesheerpleasureofreadingsomethingthatisboth beautifullywrittenandwellconstructedwillreturnandincrease. Bythetimethisstageisreached,yourownwritingwillbeshowingamarkedimprovement. Checklist 1.Haveyousetasideacornerofyourhomewhereyoucanwrite? 2.Haveyouestablishedasettimeofdayjustforwriting? 3.Doyoukeepanotebookofideas? 4.Doyouwritesomethingeveryday? 5.Doyoureadextensively? 6.Haveyoudecidedwhatyouwanttowriteabout? Assignment Takeyournotebookandjotdown10ideasforarticlesorstories.Bythetimeyouhavefinishedreadingthisbook,youshouldhavedevelopedatleastoneofthose ideasintoaworkableoutline.
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2 WritingNonFiction
WritingAboutWhatYouKnow Aswesawinthepreviouschapter,oneofthefirstpiecesofadviceanywouldbewriterlearnsistowriteaboutwhatyouknow. Thiscanbeinterpretedasanythingfromfactualarticlesaboutahobby,profession,orskilltowritingyourlifestory.Youcanbesurethateveryonehasexperiencein oneareaoranotherthatwillbeofinteresttosomeoneelse. LettingOffSteam Fortheavidnewspaperandmagazinereader,thetemptationtowritealearnedpiececomplainingaboutthestateofthenationortherisingpriceofapackoffrozen peascanbeoverwhelming. Itistemptingtotryandemulatecontroversialcommentcolumnsinthehopethatadiscerningeditorwillbekeentogiveprideofplacetoourwordsofwisdom.Sadly, thisisrarelythecase. Commentcolumnsareusuallywrittenbystaffwriters,wellknownjournalistsorpoliticalanalysts.Thesearetheprofessionalsconsideredbythemediatobequalified tocommenton'life,theuniverseandeverything'. However,astheinfamous'DisgustedofTunbridgeWells'discovered,thereisanoutletforthemanorwomaninthestreettovoicetheiropinionandthatisthroughthe readers'letterspage.
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Sendingletterstoeditors Theletterspageinanypublicationisanexcellentwayoflettingoffsteaminprint.Itcanalsobeawayofearningsmallamountsofcashorgiftsforyourwriting. Ifyouliketheideaofmakingyourvoiceheard,youstandabetterchanceofhavingaletterpublishedifyoufollowafewsimplerules: Writeclearlyandneatlyor,ifpossible,typeyourletter. Addressittothecorrectperson. Keepitbriefandtothepoint. Makeitastopicalaspossible. Writeaboutsomethingrelevanttothepublication'sreadership. Abriefwordofpraiseforthepublicationalwayshelps. Invitecommentsoradvicefromotherreaders. Neversendthesamelettertomorethanonemagazineatthesametime.Thesepagesoperateontheassumptionthatalllettersarefromregularreadersoftheir publication. ChangingWorkintoLeisure Thereareliterallyhundredsofmagazinetitleslistedintradedirectories,alargeproportionofwhichpotentiallyofferopportunitiesfornonfictionwriters. Knowingyoursubject Justafewofthecategoriesintowhichthesemagazinesfallarelistedbelow: animalsandpets artsandentertainment businessandfinance computers generalinterest hobbies home motoring music sports
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tradeandprofessional transport women'sinterests. Evenmoreopportunitiesforwouldbecolumnistscanbefoundinlocalinterestpublications,parishmagazines,localnewspapers,clubmagazinesetc. Becominga'stringer' Ifyouregularlywritetotheletterspageofanewspaperorcountymagazineaboutitemsofimportancetotheresidentsinyourarea,youmaybecontactedandasked ifyouwillbecomea'stringer'.Thisinvolveskeepinganeyeoutforsnippetsofnewsandviewsonlocalissuesandphoningthemintotheeditor. Manyregularcolumnistsinspecialistmagazinesbegintheirwritingcareersinthiswaybeforegraduatingtotheirownregularcolumn. Expertswhocanexpressthemselvesclearlyandbereliedupontoproducemanuscriptsondemandarefewandfarbetween.Specialistmagazinesandsmalllocal newspaperscanofferawonderfulopportunitytopursueyourwritinginterestbysharinginformationwithotherreaders. Constructinganarticle Writingaboutsomethingyouenjoycanbeareallabouroflove.Ifyouhavetheabilitytoimpartyourenthusiasmandexpertisetoalikemindedreader,yourpleasure willbeincreasedimmeasurablybyseeingyourwordsonthepagesofyourfavouritemagazine. Constructingareadablearticleis,however,notaseasyasitlooks.Firstyoumuststudyyourchosenmagazineandfamiliariseyourselfwiththelengthandstyleoftheir articles.Youropeningsentenceshouldgiveaclearindicationofwhatthearticleisaboutandonceyoubeginwriting,keeptothepointanddon'tgetsidetracked. If,forexample,youarearecognisedconnoisseurofrealalesandyouwanttoexplainhowtoassessaprizewinningpint,youmightopenthearticlewithsomething alongthefollowinglines:
Withthegrowthinpopularityofrealale,brewersarebecominghighlycompetitive.Brewingaprizewinningpinttakesskillanddedicationbutbyfollowingafewbasicguidelines, youcanfindyourselfuptherewiththefrontrunners.
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Youcouldaddtothisalistofcompetitionsandnationaleventsopentorealalebrewersanddrinkersbutverylittlemorewouldbeneededotherthansomecaptioned photographstoillustratethepiece. AsimpleframeworkofanarticleissetoutinFigure2.Themainconstituentsare: agood,attentiongrabbingintroduction amiddle,arrangedinalogicalorder,whichkeepstothesubjectanddeliverstheinformationpromisedintheintroduction anendingwhichroundsthearticleoff,bringingitlogicallybacktothebeginning. INTRODUCTION (Beginning) CONTENT(Middle) Introducethesubject,gostraighttothepoint,e.g.: 'Withthegrowthinpopularityofrealale....' Keeptothepointofthearticle,dealingwitheach relevantiteminalogicalorder,e.g.: Howtoassessthequality,i.e.'Pointstolookfor...' Tipsforbrewingyourownprizewinningales. Listofqualitybrews. Wheretofindgoodales. Roundoffarticlebybringingitbacktothebeginning,e.g. 'Followthebasicprinciplesandbeforelong,youralewill takeitsplaceonthelistofhomeproducedaward winningrealales.'
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Expandingyouridea Fromonearticleideacanspringseveralmore.Perhapsyoucouldfollowupthefirstarticlewithaninterviewwithabrewerandthisinturnmightleadtoavisittoa beerfestivalandyetanotherarticleaboutthat.Beforelong,youcouldfindyourselfbecomingaregularcontributortoawholerangeofmagazines. RelatingYourLifeStory Onepopularnonfictiontopiccreativewritersliketoembarkuponistheirautobiography. Almosteveryonehasataletotell,manyofwhicharefascinating,evenvergingontheunbelievable.Thosewhohavelivedthroughsomeprettyamazingexperiences understandablywanttowritethemdown,bothfortheirownpersonalsatisfactionandtoprovideawrittenrecordforfuturegenerations. Examiningyourmotivation Beforeyoubegintowriteyourlifestory,however,itisworthexaminingexactlywhatyourmotivesare,soaskyourselfthefollowingquestions: 1.DoIhaveafascinatingtaletotell? 2.Ismystoryunique? 3.DoIneedtoconfrontmypastinordertomoveoninmylife? 4.DoIwishtoleavemyfamilyarecordofmylife? 5.DoIwanttogivehopetoothers? 6.DoIwanttohavemyautobiographypublished?
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Beingfamous Iftheanswertoquestion6is'yes'thenextquestionhastobe'AmIfamous?'Unfortunately,ifyou'renot,thenthechancesofhavingyourbookacceptedbya publisherareveryslimindeed. Thefactisthatthemajorityofautobiographicalbooksbeingpublishedatthemomentfeaturecelebritiescurrentlyinthenews,betheysupermodelsintheirearly twenties,sportingpersonalities,leadingpoliticiansorfamousnamesfromtheworldoffilmandtelevision. Comparedtoyours,theirlivesmayhavebeenextremelydullbeforetheywerepropelledintothepubliceyebutit'sthehereandnowthatmattersandintoday's throwawaymedia,fameiseverything. Informingthepublic Manysuccessfulautobiographiesdomorethantelltheauthor'slifestory.Theyalsoprovideadocumentaryrecordofhistoricalincidentsandprocedureswhichmay havebeenhiddenfromthepubliceye. Anautobiographywhichperformsanyoneofthefollowingfunctionsmightwellbeofinteresttoanappropriatepublisher. Describesapracticewhichhasbeenconcealedfromthepublic,e.g.sendingorphanagechildrentoAustralia. Detailstheauthor'srecoveryfromapotentiallylifethreateningillnessorcondition. Isanaccountoftheauthor'sexperiencesasahostage,eitherpoliticalorduringacrime. Tellsthestoryofakidnaporhijackvictim. Givesinformationaboutaturningpointintheauthor'slifetowhichotherscanrelate,e.g.nursingadisabledchild. Detailsthesequenceofeventswhichledtotheauthorsettingupaninternationalcharitableorganisation. Providingafamilyrecord Formanycreativewriters,thesolemotivationforwritingtheirautobiographyistoprovideafamilyrecordforfuturegenerations. Awrittenrecordwillbeenhancedbytheinclusionofcaptionedfamilyphotographsandthankstothegrowthofdesktoppublish
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Foradetailedlistingofreputablebookandmagazinepublishers,seeTheWritersandArtistsYearbook(publishedbyA&CBlack). Fictionalisingthetruth Researchingandwritingyourautobiographycanprovetherapeuticinmorewaysthanone. Formany,itisawayofexorcisingtraumaticevents,confrontingtheirfeelingsandworkingtheirwaythroughbitterexperiences.Itcanalsoprovideawealthofmaterial forafictionalnovel. Whilstapublisherisunlikelytoconsiderthetruestoryofasocalled'ordinary'person,fictionalisingyourextraordinarylifeoffersamoreviableroutetoseeingyour workinprint. Changingthenames Ifyoudodecidetoturnyourautobiographyintoaworkoffiction,thenamesofyourcharactersandtheirlocationsshouldbefictionaltoo. Youmayalsoneedtoalterthefactsinordertomakethewholethingmorebelievable.Eventhoughasequenceofeventsactuallyhappeneditcanappeartobe extremelyunlikely.Ifthisistrueofyourlifestorybearinmindthat,whilsttruthisoftenstrangerthanfiction,forthepurposesofpublication,fictionhastomakesense.
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TellingTravellers'Tales Formanyofus,travelwritinginvolveskeepingadiaryandphotographalbumasapleasurablereminderofourholidaystoenjoyduringlongwintereveningsathome. Writingarticlesaboutyourtravelswithaviewtopublicationneedsaverydifferentapproach. Passingoninformation Themajorityoftravelfeaturesarewrittenbyprofessionalstaffwritersorcompiledbytraveleditors. Somemagazinesincludesmallsnippetsofinformationaboutspecialistbreaks.Theseareusuallyconfinedtodetailsoffamilyfundays,singlesoreconomybreaksand thesesectionsofferthebestpublishingopportunityfornewwriters. Wishingyouweren'there Oneofthebiggestproblemsfacingthewouldbetravelwriterisunderstandingtherequirementsofthetravelindustryandthetouristpolicyofthecountrytheywill,by theirarticle,bepromoting. Agoodtravelarticleshouldnotbeablowbyblowaccountofyourparticularholidaynoryourreactionstothepeopleyoumetandtheplacesyouvisited.Norisitan opportunityforyoutorelateyourtaleofwoeabouttheappallingjourneyyousufferedinordertoreachahalfbuilthotel,milesfromthenearestbeach. Takingafreetrip Magazinesusetravelarticlestoinformtheirreadersaboutholidayswhichwillbestsuitthem,sosomeofthepointsthatshouldbeincludedare: wheretostay whetherthelocationissuitableforfamilies thesafetyofthebeaches facilitiesavailable whetheritisnoisyorquiet whatsortofnightlifeitoffers whatthefoodislike,costandavailability placestovisitandtheiraccessibilityinrelationtotheresort
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howtogetthereachoiceofmethodsisuseful thecostoftravelandaccommodationagain,aselectionshouldbegiven. Whilstprofessionaltravelwritersreceive'free'tripsfromtouristboardsandtravelcompanies,theseareinreturnforguaranteedcoverageinwellknownpublications, sothewritermustbeabletofulfilthefollowingcriteria: Theymustbepreparedtofollowasetitinerary. Publicationforarticlesmustbeguaranteedinatleastonereputablemagazine. Anyarticlesmustincludethefeaturesspecifiedbythesponsoringcompany. Articlesmustbepublishedtocoincidewithspecificpublicitydrives. Withoutsomekindofatrackrecordasafreelancearticlewriter,itisunlikelythatyouwouldbeinvitedbyanytravelcompanytotakeafreetrip. Travellinglight Travelbooksareaverydifferentkettleoffish.Theyrangefromguidebooksproducedbytouristboardstoexcitingtalesofdaringdo. Theintrepidtravellerwhocrossesdeserts,scalesmountainsandshootsrapidsequippedwithlittlemorethanachangeofunderwear,atoothbrushandabluntpenknife willclearlyhaveafascinatingtaletotell. Itis,however,worthbearinginmindthat,moreoftenthannot,ourcannyexploreralreadyhasapublishingcontractsignedandsealedbeforethetoeofhisorher walkingboothitsthefloorofthedepartureloungeatHeathrowairport. Playingsafe Betweenthetwoendsofthescale,thestandardguidebookandtheoneoffadventure,thereisanincrediblywiderangeoftopicsfortheseasonedtravellertowrite about.Listedbelowarejustafewsuggestions:
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handyhintsonpacking travellingthroughoutpregnancyandwithababy valuefamilyfundaysout holidaysonabudget backpackers'guidestoarangeofcountries(series) travellingalone locationsoffthebeatentrack travellingacrosscontinentsbytrain/bicycle/car/motorbikeetc. Withalittleimaginationandalotofexperience,settingdownyourtravellingtalesonpapercouldleadtoendlessopportunities,notleastofwhichistoprovidea realistic,atmosphericandexcitingbackgroundforafictionalnovel. FindingFunnyMoments Asenseofhumourisoneofthemostusefulassetsanywritercanpossess. Seeingthefunnyside Ifyouareoneofthosefortunatebeingswhohasthecapacitytoseethefunnysideofeventhemostdifficultsituations,yourwritingwillbenefitathousandfold. Havingfunwithyourhobby MichaelGreenisoneauthorwhohasmadeasuccessfulcareeroutofthehumorousaspectofhishobbies.HisCoarseseriesisrequiredreadingforeveryweekend sailor,rugbyplayer,golferandamateuractor. Withaninnateabilitytohomeinonthewaytheaveragepersonwillgothroughhellandhighwaterinthenameoftheirfavouriteleisureactivity,Michael'sbookskeep youlaughingfromtheveryfirstline,astheopeningtoTheArtofCoarseSailingdemonstrates.
EveryyearIswearIwon'tspendmyholidaysailingagain.ConsideringIsaythisannually,it'ssurprisinghowmuchsailingI'vemanagedtodo.EachtimeIreturnbruised,battered andsufferingfromincipientscurvy,withagreatdentworninmybuttocksandIsay,'ThatwasterrificfunbutnextyearI'mgoing
Michaelhasagiftforhighlightingtheromanticidealandcontrastingitwiththelessthanpleasantreality.Moreimportantly,hehasarealenthusiasmforandknowledge ofhissubjects. HisCoarsebooksarenotsimplyamusingaccountsofhisadventures,theyaregenuinelyinformativeandpackedwithcolourfulcharacterswhoembellishandaddto hismisfortunes. FollowingWhereYourIdeasLeadYou Writingnonfictionisausefulmethodofgettingyourideasdownonpaper.Italsohelpsyoutounderstandtheimportanceofaccurateresearchandisawayoftraining youtoworkmethodicallyandtoasetroutine. Tryingsomethingnew Havingidentifiedjustafewofthetopicsyourpastexperiencewillequipyoutowriteabout,thenextstepistositdownanddoit. CaseStudies Valexpressesheropinions Valisaforcefulladyinhermidfifties.Shewritesclearlyandexpressesherselfwellonpaper.Shehaswrittenseveralarticlescomplainingaboutavarietyofgoodsand serviceswhich,althoughimportanttoher,areneithertopicalnorofmuchinteresttoanyoneelse.Shehastriedtohaveherarticlespublishedinanumberofwomen's magazinesbuttodate,theyhaveallbeenrejected. Lentakeslifeinhisstride LenlivedandworkedinSpainforseveralyearsuptohisretirement,whenhedecidedtoreturntotheUK.Heiseasygoingwithareadywitandlikestotryhishand atmostformsofwriting.Hekeepsacloseeyeonlocalissuesandhiswitty,topicalletterstothelocalnewspaperareregularlyprinted.Heiscurrentlyenjoyingwriting aseriesofhumorousarticlesabouthisexperienceslivingandworkingabroad.
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BasingCharactersonRealPeople Wheninterviewingauthorspluggingtheirlatestbook,oneofthemostfrequentquestionsaskedbythepresenteris'Areyourcharactersbasedonrealpeople?'The answerinvariablygivenis'Notexactly'. Inordertobeconvincing,fictionalcharactersmustringtrue.Thereadershouldbeabletorelatetothemandidentifywiththembutthedescriptionneedsonlytobe sufficienttoprojectarecognisableimage. Afterall,astheaveragereaderisunlikelytohavemether,thereislittlepointinfaithfullyproducinganaccuratelydetailedwordpictureofGreatAuntEdna.Worse still,ifEdnahadsomethingofareputationinherday,youcouldendupcausingoffenceandevenleavingyourselfopentoapossiblelawsuitifyougetyourfacts wrong. Mixingandmatching ThebestwayofavoidingthisistocomeupwithacompositeimpressionofAuntywhichwillsatisfyinterestedrelativesthatshewastheinspirationforyourcharacter butisfarenoughremovedtokeepyououtofthelawcourts. Aswithanautobiographicalaccount,mixingandmatchingenhancesyourcharactersandsurprisingly,oftenhelpstomakethemmorebelievable. Stereotypingandclichs Stereotypescanbeveryusefulinfiction.Usedwithcaution,theyofferaninstantlyrecognisableframeworkonwhichtobaseyourcharacter. However,writerswhoattempttoportraytheirownracist,sexistorsociallystereotypicalimagesinvariablycauseoffenceandtheseviewsdonothingtoimprovetheir characterisation.
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NAME:..................................................................................................................................................... AGE:......................................................................................................................................................... APPEARANCE:....................................................................................................................................... (hair,eyecolour,height,weight,buildetc.) MARITALSTATUS:................................................................................................................................ CURRENTHOME:.................................................................................................................................. OCCUPATION:....................................................................................................................................... PARENTS:................................................................................................................................................ (aliveordead?) SIBLINGS:............................................................................................................................................... (names,ages,maritalstatusetc.) CHILDHOOD:.......................................................................................................................................... (happy,sad,traumaticetc.) EDUCATION:.......................................................................................................................................... QUALIFICATIONS:................................................................................................................................ RELATIONSHIPS:................................................................................................................................... (pastandpresent) PERSONALITY:....................................................................................................................................... SPECIALSKILLS:................................................................................................................................... STRENGTHS:........................................................................................................................................... WEAKNESSES:....................................................................................................................................... ANYOTHERRELEVANTINFORMATION:.......................................................................................... ...................................................................................................................................................................
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Wewillbelookingatpoliticalcorrectnessinthechapteronchildren'swritingbutalwaysbearinmindthatwithoutdepthofpersonality,yourcharacterswillbeclichd andcardboard.Itisessential,therefore,whenbuildingcharacters,thatyouknoweverythingaboutthemandcanclearlyvisualisetheminyourownmind. Givingthemapast Justlikerealpeople,fictionalcharactersdon'tsimplyappearfullygrown.Theyhaveparents,backgrounds,siblingsandexperiencesthatshapetheirpersonalitiesand influencetheircurrentbehaviour. Assoonasasuitablecharactercomesintoyourhead,besurethatyouknowwhatsortofpersontheyare.WriteapottedhistoryorCV,asillustratedinthe suggestedformatinFigure3,whichwillgiveyouaninsightintotheirmotivationforbehavingastheydo. Testingforrealism Whilststereotypingcanbeausefulmethodofcharacterisation,beawarethatdifferentpeoplehavedifferentperceptions.Ifyoubelongtoawriters'circleorclass,the followinggroupexerciseisausefulone: 1.Writeaselectionofjobtitlessuchasteacher,plumber,TVpresenter,sculptor,nurseetconpiecesofpaperthendistributethemamongthegroup,allocating thesamejobtitletotwomembersatatime,e.g.ifthereare8groupmembers,2willhaveteacher,2plumberandsoon. 2.Askeachmembertowritetheirowndescriptionofthecharacterthejobtitleconjuresup. 3.Nowaskeachmembertoreadtheirdescriptionoutinturnfortherestofthegrouptoguessthejobofthecharacterbeingdescribed. Despitethefactthatsomeofthegroupmemberswillhavebeenaskedtowriteaboutthesamecharacter,thedescriptionswillprobablybeverydifferent.Eachimage will,nevertheless,beanidentifiablestereotype. Seeingyourcharactersincontext Havingestablishedthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferentperceptions,anotherdimensiontocharacterisationisthecontextinwhichyourcharactersareset.
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UsingaTVPresenterfromtheabovelistasanexample,thereareavarietyofoptionsopentous,dependingonthestyle,toneandgenreofthenovel.Thecharacter couldbea: young,attractiveexsportsman/woman,activitygameshowhost younganchorman/womanforregional/nationalnewsprogramme investigativejournalistforconsumerprogramme ageingnewsreader,concernedaboutfadinglooks exactorturnedmagazinecolumnist,presentingafternoonmagazinestyleprogramme expopsingerturnedchildren'sTVpresenter expoliticianturnedpoliticalinterview/commentator. Thetitle'TVPresenter'clearlyhasaverywideinterpretation.Thecharactercanbemaleorfemale,youngorageing. Theonethingallofthesecharactershaveincommonisthattheyworkinahighprofile,fastmovingindustryinwhichtheirstatusandjobsecurityismeasuredagainst theirpositionintheviewingratings. Fittingintothestoryline Havingdeterminedtheage,sexandpersonalityofyourcharacter,heorshemustnowbeplacedintothecontextofthestoryyouarewriting. VisualisingBackgrounds Whetheritisathriller,romance,lifestyleordetectivestory,yourcharacterhastobehaveinarealisticandbelievableway.Inordertodothis,theymustbeseentobe thesortofpersonwhowouldoptforthecourseofactionyouhaveinmindforthem. Inhernovel,HushaBye,authorSusanMoodydrawsvividwordpicturesofhercharacters,allthewhilegivinghintsthattheirupbringingandbackgroundswillhave aprofoundinfluenceonhowtheywillreactinthefuture. InthefollowingdescriptionofHarriet,thecentralcharacter,thereisaclearimplicationthatpartsofherchildhoodwhichshefeelsmadelittleimpactonherwillprove tohavebeenhighlyinfluentialinherreactiontothesituationsinwhichsheeventuallyfindsherself:
Harriet'sfatherisaremote,undemonstrativefigureandtheinfluenceofherrelativelylovelessearlyyearsisanintegralpartofthedevelopmentofhercharacter, particularlywhen,quitelateinthebook,herownbabyiskidnapped. Talkingtoeachother Oneofthemosteffectivemethodsofcharacterisationisthroughtheuseofdialogue.Howacharacterspeakswilltellyouanenormousamountabouttheirattitudeand personality. We'llbelookingatthetechniquesinvolvedinwritingrealisticdialogueinalaterchapterbutfornow,weneedtothinkaboutourfeelingstowardsthecharacterswe create. InvolvingYourselfinYourCharacters'Lives Wehaveseenhowimportantitistocreatebackgroundsforourcharactersinordertogivesubstancetothem.Wehavealsoseenhowtheirupbringingand backgroundsformthebasisofthemotivationfortheiractions. Establishingmotivation Knowingthestruggleyourcharactermayhavehadtoachievethestatustheyhaveattained,youwillinstinctivelyknowhowtheywillreactiftheylearnthateverything theyhaveworkedforistobetakenaway. ReturningtoourTVPresenter,wecanselectayounganchorwomanforaregionalnewsprogrammeanddevisebothbackgroundandmotivationforher.Usinga chartformat,Figure4detailsanunhappychildhoodanddifficultysustainingrelationshipswhichsuggeststhefollowingstorylinefor26yearoldSallyBlake:
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SallyBlake 26 Blonde,neatlystyled,shoulderlength Blue,brightandsmiling Slim,elegant Sensitive,quitewidewithfairlyfulllipsshowingwhite, eventeeth Single FunctionalfiatnearTVstudio BethandJames.DivorcedwhenSallywasfour.Father diedrecently,wasarespectedinvestigativereporter. Hadlittlecontactwithhisdaughter.Mothermodel, afterdivorcemarriedfashionphotographer,movedto France.SentSallytoboardingschoolinUKwhensister wasborn Eighteenyearoldhalfsister,Sophie,amodel Claude,haslittleinterestineitherSallyorSophie. Absorbedinhiswork,heenjoyshisglamorousjetsetting lifestyle.Hasfrequentaffairswithyoungwomen HappyuntildivorceandSophie'ssubsequentbirth Hatedboardingschoolandduringholidays,foughtwith Sophie,whowaseducatedathomeinFrance LanguageDegree,1stclasshonoursfromredbrick university Firstrealboyfriendwasanactivistinthestudentunion, lefthertomoveinwithadramastudent.Severalshort termrelationshipssince.CurrentlyseeingMark,a marriedchiefexecutiveinherTVcompany. SpeaksfluentFrench Ambitious,levelheadedinacrisis Scaredofformingpermanentrelationships Sallyishardworking,conscientiousandveryambitious. Scarredbyherunhappychildhoodandmorerecently,by thelossofherfather,whomsheemulates,sheis determinedtostopatnothingtoreachthetopofher profession
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Motivationforyounganchorwomanforregionalnewsprogramme AtalentscoutfromanationalnewsnetworkhasbeenfollowingSally'sprogressandoffersherajobintheirstudio.Sheintendstotakeitwhentheofferiswithdrawn. Mark,herinfluentiallover,doesn'twanttoloseheroneitherapersonalorprofessionallevelandhaspulledstringstoblockthejoboffer. BasedonwhatwealreadyknowaboutSally'scharacter,itisunlikelythatshewillgiveupwithoutafightorthatthereisanyfutureinherrelationshipwithMark.She hasneverputfamilyorfriendsbeforeherownneeds.Sheisalonerwhowasforcedtotakecontrolofherownlifefromaveryearlyageandisnotgoingtobepushed aroundbysomeonewhoistryingtomanipulateherforhisownends. Herreaction ArmedwiththeinformationaboutSally'sbackgroundandcharacter,dependingonthestyleofthebook,shecouldreactinoneofanumberofWays.Shecould: 1.BlackmailMarkintousinghisinfluencetoreinstatethejoboffer. 2.DeviseaplantomurderMark. 3.ConfrontMark,fightwithandaccidentallykillhim. 4.ConsultalawyerandtakeMarktocourt. 5.CompileanexposoftheTVindustry. 6.SecretlyconductanindepthinvestigationintocorruptioninMark'scompany. 7.SetMarkuptotaketheblameforrunningalibellousnewsstory. Sally'sreactionisdeterminedbyhertoughbackground.Theproductofalessthanperfectmarriage,shehasanabsentfatherandamotherwhotransfersheraffections tohernewhusbandandbabywithlittlethoughttoherdaughter'sfeelings. Toherstepfather,sheisanencumbrance,shippedofftoboardingschooltomakewayforherbabysister.Itisnotsurprisingthat,assoonassheleavesuniversity, SallyfindsherselfaflatinEnglandandrarelyreturnstoFrance. Shehasbeenforcedtobecometotallyselfreliantandwilltakewhateveractionshedeemsnecessarytoachieveheraims.
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SallyBlake 26 Blonde,neatlystyled,shoulderlength Blue,brightandsmiling Slim,elegant Sensitive,quitewidewithfairlyfulllipsshowingwhite, eventeeth Single FunctionalfiatnearTVstudio BethandJames.DivorcedwhenSallywasfour.Father diedrecently,wasarespectedinvestigativereporter. SawSallywheneverhewasonleave.Mothermodel, afterdivorcemarriedfashionphotographer,movedto France.SentSallytoboardingschoolinUKwhensister wasborn Eighteenyearoldhalfsister,Sophie,amodel. Irresponsibleandfunloving Claude,goodfamilyman.FondofSallybutfeelsalittle intimidatedbyherdeterminationtosucceedandisaware thatsheidolisedherfather Happy.VeryprotectiveofSophie,whomshelooksout forwhenthingsgowrong,astheyoftendo LovedboardingschoolinEnglandbutlookedforwardto holidaysspentinFranceorinLondonwithfather wheneverhewasaround LanguageDegree,1stclasshonoursfromredbrick university HasbeenrefusingMark,amarriedchiefexecutiveinher ownTVcompany,forsometime.Isadmiredfromafar byNick,acameraman SpeaksfluentFrench Ambitiousbutputsfriendsandfamilybeforecareer Alittletootrustinginherrelationships Sallyishardworking,conscientiousandambitious. AlthoughshelovesherFrenchfamily,shedecidedtolive andworkintheUKtobenearherfather.Whenhedies, sheisleftfeelingvulnerableandfrightenedofthe powerfulMark
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ChangingTheCharacter However,ifSally'supbringinghadbeendifferent,herreactionswouldchangeaccordingly.Takingthesamescenario,afewalterationshereandtherewillproducea totallydifferentresult. Rebuildingthebackground Keepingthesameframework,allweneedtodoismakeafewadjustmentstotheattitudesofSally'sparents,changeherschoolingandherrelationshipwithhersister andwehaveawholenewsetofpossibilities. We'llstillhavetheparentsdivorcingwhenshe'sfouryearsoldandhermotherremarrying,butthistimetheirattitudetowardsthechildwillbefarmorepositive,as showninthealterationstothechartinFigure5. Motivation Withthisbackground,wenowhaveawholenewsetofreactions.WhenSally'sfatherdies,herfamilyissupportiveandcaring.Herstepfatherknowshecannottake herfather'splacebutheisthereifsheneedshim. Storyline Withasupportivefamilyandahappierdisposition,Sallywillbelessaggressive,soweneedtoaddanextradimensiontothestorylinetotriggerareaction.Wecan utiliseherhalfsisterSophiewho,whilststayingwithSally,fallsinwithabadcrowd,inwhichthepowerfulMarkplaysaleadingrole. Herreaction Whilstshewouldnolongerconsiderviolence,points4to6abovewouldalmostcertainlyfitintothenewscenario.Sallymight: ConsultalawyerandtakeMarktocourt. CompileanexposoftheTVindustry. SecretlyconductanindepthinvestigationintocorruptioninMark'scompany. The'new'Sallywouldn'tgoitalone,shewouldseekhelpfromavarietyofsources:
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1.Thelawyer,withwhomshebecomesromanticallyinvolved. 2.Thelovelorncameraman,whoriskshislivelihoodtohelpwithherinvestigations. 3.Herstepfather,whosecontactsinthemediahelphertorescueSophieandputMarkbehindbars. 4.Herfather'spapershewasinvestigatingMark'sactivitiesjustbeforehedied. 5.Hermother,forsupportasafriendandconfident. RelatingtoYourCharacter Whicheverscenarioyouchoose,bearinmindthatifyoudon'tcareaboutyourcharacter,neitherwillanyoneelse. The'old'Sally(Figure4)mayberuthlessbutit'snotherfault.Ashercreator,itisyourtasktoconveyherinnermostthoughtsandfeelingstothereadersothatthey willunderstandthereasonsbehindherbehaviour. InordertotrulyrelatetoSally,youneedtoputyourselfinherplaceandimaginehowyouwouldfeelif: Whenyouwerefouryearsold,yousawyourfatherleavehome,nevertoreturn. Afteryourfatherleft,youfeltutterlyaloneandabandoned. Youwerebroughtupbyaselfish,spitefulmother. Withoutwarning,yourmothermarriedawomaniserwhomyouhardlyknewandwhoclearlydislikedyou. Youweretakenawaytoliveinaforeigncountry. Youwereconfrontedwithababysisterthenimmediatelypackedofftoboardingschool. Yourfatherdiedsuddenly,severingtheonlylinkwithmemoriesofahappiertime. Youwouldhavetobeparticularlyhardheartednottorelatetoatleastoneoftheabovecircumstances.Addingthiskindofdepthtoacharacterbringsrealismandis amajorfactorinobtainingthatvitalingredient,readeridentification.
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Caringwhathappens InoursecondcharacterisationofSally(Figure5),herbackgroundgivesuslittlecauseforconcern.Despiteherparents'divorce,shehadahappychildhoodsowe needtorelyonSally'scharismaticpersonalitytogainthedesiredeffect. Onceagain,youhavetoputyourselfinherplace.Youhaveeverythinggoingforyou,happyfamily,comfortablehomeandexcellentjobprospects.Imaginehowyou wouldfeelif,withinanincrediblyshorttimespan: Yourfather,whomyouadoredandemulated,diedunexpectedly. Asituationwithwhichyouwerecoping(i.e.Mark'sunwantedadvances)suddenlyspiralledoutofyourcontrol. Youdiscoveredthatyourbelovedyoungersisterwasinmoralorphysicaldanger. Youfeltyouwerefallinginloveatatimewheneverythinginyourlifewasbeingturnedupsidedown. Inoursecondscenario,everythingseemstobehappeningtoSallyatonceandastheauthor,youshouldberightintherewithher,concernedforher,urgingherto maketherightdecisionswhich,initially,sheisunlikelytodo,aswe'llshortlydiscoverinthefollowingsectiondealingwithconflict. HowWouldyouReactiftheyApproachedyou? Withoutrealisticcharacters,afictionalstoryisflatandlifeless.Peoplereadaboutpeople,sothecharactersyoucreateshouldnotonlyberealistic,theyshouldalso provokeareactionfromyourreader. Runningaway Everycharacterinaworkoffictionshouldbethereforapurpose.Charactersshouldneverbeusedinordertosetthesceneorcreateabackcloth. Ifyou'veplacedtheminascene,theyhavetoperformafunctionandwiththisinmind,youshouldeitherbeattractedorrepelledbythem.Iftheyonlyhaveasmall roletoplay,youmaysimplyfindtheminterestingorintriguingbutyoushouldneverbeindifferent. Whencreatingfictionalcharacters,therefore,imaginehowyoupersonallywouldreactifyoumetthemonadarknight.Wouldyou:
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Runaway? Stoptoofferassistance? Fallinlove? Berootedtothespotinterror? Befilledwithloathing? Attackthem? Avoidmakingeyecontact? Nodabriefgreetingandmoveswiftlyon? Onemethodofconveyingexactlywhatsortofreactionyourcharacterwouldprovokeisthroughinteractionwithanothercharacter. Interactingwithoneanother InthefollowingextractfromthepsychologicalthrillerLadykillerbyMartinaCole,adescriptionofserialkillerGeorgeMarkhamisgiventhroughtheeyesof JosephineDenham,acolleagueatwork:
'MrMarkham,haveyoufiveminutestospare?' ThevoiceofJosephineDenhambrokeintohisthoughts.Heturnedinhisseattoseeherstandinginthedoorway,smilingathim. 'Ofcourse,MrsDenham.'Hisvoicewassoftandpolite. JosephineDenhamturnedandwalkedbacktoheroffice.GeorgeMarkhamgaveherthecreepsandshedidnotknowwhy.Hewasalwayspolite.Chillinglypolite.Henevertook daysofffornoreason,healwayskepthimselftohimself,nevertooklonglunchesortriedtoengageherinbanter,likesomeoftheothermaleemployees.Allinallhewasamodel worker.Yetshehadtoadmittoherselftherewassomethingabouthissoft,pudgybodyandwaterygreyeyesthatgaveherthewillies.Shesatatherdeskandobservedthelittle maninfrontofher. 'Please,takeaseat.' ShewatchedGeorgetakethematerialofhistrousersbetweenhisthumbandforefingerandpullitupbeforesittingdown.Eventhisactionirritatedher.Shesawhisfunnylittle smilethatshowedhisteethandfeltevenmoreannoyed.
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truelove solvingamystery obtainingrevenge trackingsomeonedown reachingagoal. Itisasadfactofhumannaturethatnoonewantstoreadaboutanythingthatiseasilygained.Yourtaskasanauthoristothrowasmanyobstaclesaspossibleinthe pathofyourcharacterstoensurethatwehavetokeeponreadingifwearetodiscoverwhethertheymanagetoachievetheiraims. CaseStudies Junemakeseverythingallright Juneisacheerfulpersoninhermidtwenties.Themotheroftwosmallchildren,shehasanoptimisticoutlookonlifeandthisisreflectedinhercharacterisation. Unfortunately,thistendencyalwaystolookonthebrightsidemeansthathercharactersoftenlackdepthandrealism.Shealsofindsitdifficulttobringconflictintoher stories,asshelikestomaketheirlivesrunassmoothlyaspossible.Untilshecanovercomeherdesiretohaveeveryonelivinghappilyeverafter,herstorieswill continuetobedullandlifeless. Billtakesapracticalapproach BillisabusinessmaninhislatefortieswhotravelsextensivelyaspartofhisjobbothintheUKandabroad.Thefatherofteenagechildren,hehashadquitea chequeredcareer,servinginthearmedforcesforatimeandthenasaprisonofficer.Hispastandpresentoccupationshavemeantthathehaslearnedhowtorelateto awidevarietyofpeopleonvastlydifferentlevelsfromallsectorsofsociety.Consequently,hehasdevelopedtheabilitytopredicthowpeoplearelikelytoreactin stressfulsituations.Heiscurrentlywritinganovelsetagainstabackgroundoftheprisonservicewhichcontainssufficientconflictandrealismtomakeitcompelling reading. Checklist 1.Doyoureallyknowyourcharacters?
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GettingaFeelofPlaceandTime Wheneverandwhereveryourstoryisset,athoroughknowledgeoftheperiodandlocationaboutwhichyouarewritingisvital. UsingAllFivesenses Youneedtouseallthefivesenses,sight,sound,smell,touchandtaste,ifyouaretoconveyafeelingoftimeandplace. InthefollowingextractfromSusanMoody'snovelHushabye,hercentralcharacter,Harriet,isstayingwithhergrandparents.Openingwiththesenseofsmelland continuingthisasanoverridingthemethroughoutthepassage,theauthorskilfullybringsallHarriet'ssensesintoplaytopaintavividpictureofthehouseandits occupants.
ThehouseinCornwallsmelleddifferentfromtheoneinLondon:shinier,cleaner.Harriet'sgrandmotherspenthertimearrangingflowerspickedfromhergarden,polishingthe furniture,fillingthedayswithsmallroutines,doingwhatshehaddoneyesterdayandwhatshewoulddoagaintomorrow.Thelavenderscentedsheetsontheirbedswere starchedandmadeoflinentherewerestarchednapkinsatmealstoo,withmonogramsinonecorner.Shedidthingsindueseasonmademarmalade,collectedwindfalls,stirred Christmaspuddings,cutthestalksoflavenderandsewedthescentedgrainsintosachetsoflaceandribbon.Thingsweredoneatprescribedtimesmilkdrunkateleven,awalkat three,theradioswitchedonat5.54fortheweatherforecastbeforethesixo'clocknews.
MovingBackandForthinTime Theabovepassagedoesmorethansettheatmosphere,italsoconveysanimpressionoftime.
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Harriet'sgrandmotherisnotamoderncareerwoman.Sheistheepitomeofrespectability,comfortablewithherroleaswifeandhomemaker.Shelivesanorderedlife inthecountryandheroutlookisrootedinastrongsenseofdutyandthevaluesofapreviousgeneration. Removeherfromthissettingandplaceherinachromeandglassapartmentinthecentreofabustlingcityandshewillappearoldfashionedandvulnerable.Pulledout ofherowntime,shewillbelikeafishoutofwaterandtheatmospherewillbecomecompletelydifferent. Settingovercharacters Theimportanceanauthorgivestoastory'ssettingdependsnotonlyonthestyleofwritingbutalsoonthegenre.Inaromance,forexample,thebackgroundhasa majorinfluenceonthebehaviourofthecharacters.Listedbelowarejustafewexamplesofsettingstakenfromromanticnovels: aCaribbeancruiseship atropicalisland anItalianvineyard alakeintheCanadianRockies anantiquesshopandcottageinthecountry. Ineachcase,thesettingisdescribedinsensuousdetail,thescentsoffruitsandflowers,crystalclearlakes,whisperingbreezesandrollinghills. Thepaceofthestoryisalwaysslowenoughtoallowthereadertosavourthesights,soundsandflavoursbutfastenoughtomaintaintheimpetus. Makingwarnotlove Actionnovelssuchaswarstoriesusesimilartechniquestoconjureupthefeelofbattle.Shatteredbodiesandflattenedbuildings,deafeningshellfire,screamsofterror, thestenchofdeathallaround.Oncebustlingtownsarereducedtopilesofrubbleandtwistedmetal,thesurroundinglandscapebecomesamassofcraterslitteredwith burnedoutvehicles. Thistime,thepaceisveryfast,pullingthereaderthroughthehorrificsights,soundsandsmellsasquicklyaspossibletothecomparativesafetyofthenextchapter.
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Acomplexsystemofzebracrossingsandpedestrianrefugeshasbeenconstructed. Changingthelandscape Alloverthecountry,roadsarebeingwidened,housing,tradingandindustrialestatesarebeingbuilt,supermarketsarespringingup,golfcoursesandthemeparksare changingtheappearanceofthelandscape. Conversely,manytownandcitycentreshaveacquiredaneglected,derelictlookasrecessionhitbusinessescloseandoncethrivingfactoriesstandempty,the surroundingareasovergrownwithweedsandlitteredwithglassfromsmashedwindows. Soakinguptheatmosphere It'snotallgloomanddoomofcourse.Muchofthecountrysidehasremainedunchangedforgenerationsandlargetractsoflandonoldindustrialsiteshavebeen reclaimedandlandscapedbyenvironmentalists. Ifyouintendtosetyourstoryinyourownlocality,you'llbeuptodatewithanychangesandhavefewproblemsestablishingarealisticatmosphere.If,however,you wishtosetyourstoryintheareawhereyougrewuporlivedsomeyearsago,itiswellworthrevisitingthelocationinordertoestablishwhetheritstillretainsthe atmosphereyouwishtoconvey.
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WhilstthefamousnamesmentionedprovideanunmistakableLondonsetting,thereisverylittleatmosphereinthispassage.Thereistheaddeddifficulty,too,that anyonefamiliarwiththeareamaywellbegintowonderiftherouteandroadnamesarecorrect.Atbest,thiswilldistractthemfromthestorylineandatworst,they mayputthestorydownwhiletheygooffandsearchfortheirLondonAtoZ. Drawingmaps Aswithanyotherwritingtechnique,inthehandsofaskilledauthor,theuseofthiskindofdetailedinformationcanbecomeintegraltothetoneandpaceofthebook andmanywriterscananddouseittogreateffect. TheattentiontodetailawardwinningnovelistRuthRendellpaystotheroutestakenbyherprotagonists,emphasisesratherthandetractsfromtheatmosphereofher novels.Shesometimestakesthisonestagefurtherbydrawingamaporstreetplanofalocation,asillustratedinFigure6.TakenfromanInspectorWexfordnovel entitledSomeLieandSomeDie(ArrowBooks),themapdepictsthelocationforapopfestivalinanareajustoutsidethefictionaltownofKingsmarkhamandnot onlyhelpsthereadergettheirbearingsbutalsoaddsrealismtothestory. Creatingthefeelofaplace Forsomenovels,thesettingisintegraltotheplot.Untilitsdemolition,theareasurroundingtheBerlinWallwasacentralfeatureinscoresofspynovelsandthesame istrueoffamouslandmarkssuchasthe: EiffelTower EmpireStateBuilding HousesofParliament Kremlin StMark'sSquare StatueofLiberty TajMahal.
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Makingupyourownlocation Makingupyourownlocationallowsyoutodesignthelandscapetosuityourownpurposes,particularlyifitisbasedonanareawithwhichyouareveryfamiliar. Italsoallowsyoutodealwithanyunforeseenhazardsconstructedinyourabsencebythetownplanningdepartment.Theoddnewroadlayout,housingorindustrial estatecanbehappilydiscardedifitobstructsyourprotagonist'sprogressordetractsfromtheplannedstorylineandifyouneedtogetfromAtoBinahurry,youcan simplybuildyourselfanimaginaryroad. Travellingtoexoticplaces Aswehaveseen,romanticnovelsarebynomeanstheonlybookswhichuseforeignandexoticsettings.Politicalthrillers,adventurenovels,crimestoriescanallbe setagainstexoticbackgroundsandwheresciencefictionandfantasyareconcerned,theuniverseisyouroyster. However,relianceonacombinationoftravelguides,touristbrochuresandmemoriesofasevendaypackageholidaytoBenidormis,onitsown,unlikelytoprovide youwithsufficientdetailtocreatearealisticallyatmosphericbackground.Ifyouaresettingyourstoryinaforeigncountry,yourwritingwillbefarmoreeffectiveifyou arethoroughlyfamiliarwiththearea,itsclimate,peopleandpolitics. Thisisfineifyourstoryhasacontemporary,earthboundsettingbutforhistoricalorfuturistictales,researchandeducatedguessworkarevitalingredientsinthe creationoftherequiredatmosphere.
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ImaginingwhatitWouldbeLiketobethere Assumingthatyou'vedoneyourresearchandhavesufficientinformationtowriteadetaileddescriptionofyourcharacter'ssurroundings,trythefollowingtest: Pictureyourselfsittinginanarmchairinyourlivingroom.Itisaround7.30pminthemiddleofwinterandyouarereadingabook.Youhaveadrink besideyou.Nowimagineexactlythesamesceneinapreviouscenturyandthenatapointofyourchoosinginthefuture.Forallthreescenes,answer thequestionslistedbelow: 1.Whatmaterialhasbeenusedtomakethechairyouaresittingon? 2.Whatmethodoflightingareyouusing? 3.Istheroomheatedandifsohow? 4.Istheroomcarpeted?Ifnot,whatsortoffloorcoveringdoesithave? 5.Howistheroomdecorated? 6.Whatisthetitleofthebookyouarereading? 7.Whatareyoudrinking? 8.Isitinaglass,cup,goblet,other?Ifnotglassorchina,whatisitmadeof? 9.Whatareyouwearing? 10.Areyouwarmenough? Bycomparinghowcomfortableyounormallyfeelinthegivensituationwithhowyouimagineitwouldhavefeltinthepastandhowitmightfeelinthefuture,youcan bringagreatdealofrealismtoyourwriting. Livingthepart Oneadvantagehistoricalsettingshaveoverfuturisticonesisthatlifestyles,costume,homes,furnishingandutensilsofpreviousgenerationsareverywelldocumented. Researchmaterialisavailableintheformofbooks,paintings,antiques,publishedletters,historic
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buildings,museums,newspapersandformorerecenthistory,photographsandfilms. Makinganeducatedguess Forhistoricalsettings,wehavesufficientinformationtoimaginehowourcharactersrelatedtotheirsurroundings.Theonlydisadvantageisthat,ifyougetitwrong, someoneisboundtonotice. Incontrast,storiessetinthefutureoffermoreleewaytolettheauthor'simaginationrunriotbutthedesigns,materialsandlifestylesdepictedmustbebasedoncurrent scientificknowledge. WearingDifferentClothesandCostumes Thecostumesyourcharactersweardomuchmorethanjustsetthescene.Amongotherthings,they: settheperiod settheage,nationalityandoccupationofacharacter giveaninsightintothecharacter'spersonality conveyasenseofoccasion evokereaderidentification. Tohelpyourelatetothewayacharacterwouldmoveandrespondinvarioussituations,imaginehowyoureactwhenyouarewearingclothesdesignedforaspecific purpose.Ifyouhaveeverwornoneormoreofthefollowingoutfits,forexample,howdidyoufeelandhowdidyoumovearoundtheroom? afulllengtheveningdress tophatandtails aweddingdressandveil adinnerjacketanddressshirt abusinesssuit oldjeansandteeshirt overalls luxurioussilkunderwear
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thermalunderwear wellingtonboots nothingatall. Actingthepart Taketophatandtailsfromtheabovelist.Theyhaveaseeminglymagicaleffectontheirwearersothatmennotexactlyrenownedfortheirsartorialelegancesuddenly findthemselvesholdingtheirshouldersbackandtheirstomachsin.Perchedatajauntyangleontheirheads,thetophatprovidestheperfectfinishingtouch,conveying bothstyleandbreeding. Thesameistrueofthefulllengthballgown.LadieswhousuallydressforcomfortinteeshirtsandjeanscanfindthemselvestransformedintoCinderellalookalikesat thedropofaneckline.Exchangethesquashytrainerforthesatinslipperandyouhaveapictureofeleganceandfemininityinnotonlyherlooksbutalsoher demeanourandactions. Conformingorcontrasting Thefactthattheclothesyourheroiswearinghavehimlookingeveryinchthegentlemanandyourheroine'sattireimpliesstyleandbreedingisamajorfactorin characterisation. Whilstthetall,handsome,immaculatelyturnedoutchapmayfulfiltheroleofeverywoman'sanswertoherdreams,hecouldalsobeanyoneofthefollowing: aconfidencetricksterwithoutapennytohisname afashionconsciousyoungdandy,interestedonlyinhisownappearance acharmingrogue,whooverspendsonclothes,wining,diningandgambling. amanofaction,uncomfortablyrestrictedbyhisformalclothes. Thewayhewearshisclothes,hisbearing,attitudeandbehaviourwillallgiveacluetohispersonality.Doeshe,forexample,constantlyrubhisfingerroundhisshirt collar,indicatingdiscomfort?Orisheunabletopassamirrorwithoutstoppingtochecktheconditionofhissilkpockethandkerchief? Heroines,too,revealagreatdealfromthewaytheycopewith
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theirclothes.Dressedinskintighteveninggownanddrippingwithdiamonds,ourheroinecouldbe: aconfidencetrickerwithoutapennytohername avaingolddigger,determinedtotraparichhusband ashy,sportytyperestrictedanduncomfortableintheseclothes. Likehermalecounterpart,ourheroinemaybesophisticatedandelegantbutifshehasdifficultywalkinginhertightskirtormodestyhasherconstantlypullingupthe topofherdress,itwillbeclearthatsheislessthancomfortablewiththeimagesheisexpectedtoproject. CaseStudies Ivylooksback Ivywasbroughtupinaruralvillagebuthaslivedmostofheradultlifeinthecity.Promptedbynostalgia,shedecidestosethercontemporarynovelintheareawhere shespentherchildhoodanddescribesthesurroundingcountrysideinmeticulousdetail.Fortunately,shedecidestovisitheroldhomebeforeshecompletesthenovel, todiscoveranoutoftownshoppingcomplexnowcoversthefarmlandwheremostofthepresentdayactionofherstorytakesplace. Racheldemolishesanofficeblock Rachelhastheperfectlocationinmindforthefictionalcitysettingofherhistoricalnovel.Thereisnowanofficeblockonthesitebut,withtheaidofsomecareful research,sheunearthssufficientinformationaboutthehouseswhichoncestoodtheretocreateavividlyrealisticimpressionofthelayoutofcitystreetsatthetimein whichherstoryisset.Basedonherinvestigations,sheisabletodeviseherownstreetmapforreference,adaptingittosuitthestorylinewherevernecessary. Checklist 1.Areyouthoroughlyfamiliarwiththelocationyouareusing? 2.Doyouhaveamapofthearea? 3.Haveyoucalculateddistancesandtraveltimes?
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4.Doyouknowwhatmodeoftransportyourcharacterswoulduse? 5.Areyouconfidentyouknowhowitfeelstoliveinyourchosenperiod? 6.Arethecostumesaccurateanddoyouknowhowitfeelstowearthem? Assignment Selectoneofthefollowingcastlesanddescribeitasseenthroughtheeyesofavisitor: aDisneystylethemeparkfantasy astatelyhome,opentothepublic ahighlandfortress aruin anurbancastle abouncycastle. (NB:Thisexerciseworkswellinpairswithinagroup.Thedescriptionisgivenbyonepairandtheothershavetoguesswhatsortofcastleisbeingdescribed.)
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ReactingandInteractingwithPeopleandSurroundings Aswesawinthepreviouschapter,oneofthemosteffectivewaystoconveypersonality,age,settingandatmosphereisthroughthereactionsofyourcharacters. Thisinvolvesshowingwhatishappeningthroughacombinationofaction,reactionanddialogueratherthannarratingortellingthestorytothereader. Telling Writerstendtobeavidreaders,oftenwithabackgroundsteepedinclassicworksofliterature,manyofwhicharewritteninthenarrativevoice.Oneexampleofthis techniqueisEmilyBront'sclassicnovelWutheringHeights,wherethesequenceofeventsisrelatedinstoryformbyoneminorcharactertoanother. Itisperfectlyunderstandablethatwellreadwritersshouldseektoemulatethisapproachbutinamoderncontext,thetechniqueisverydated.Itslowsthepace considerablyandbythetimethesceneisset,bothyouandthereadermaywellhaveforgottenwhatthestorywasaboutinthefirstplace. Movingwiththetimes Itisatestamenttotheskillofourclassicauthorsthattheirstories
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Atthispoint,Lovejoypanicsbuthissenseofselfpreservationswingsintoactionandhemakesarapidanalysisofhissituation:
Ihadtothink.Smokewasbeginningtodriftinominouscolumnsverticallydownwards.ReflectedfirelightfromeachwindowshowedmemoreofthelivingroomthanI'dseenfor sometime.Iwasgoingtochoketodeathbeforefinallytheflamesgotme.Thebeamswouldsetalight,thewallswouldcatchfireandthefirewouldextenddownwardsuntilthe entirecottagewasablaze.
Lovejoyrealisesthathisonlyhopeistoburyhimselfinapriest'sholeundertheflagstonefloorbutheisunpreparedfortheconditionsheencounters:
Theairenteringmylungswasalreadysearinglyhot.Fromabovemyheadcamefranticgushingsounds,creakingsandoccasionalponderouscrasheswhichterrifiedmemorethan anything.The
Allthroughthepassage,Lovejoyisreactingtohissurroundingsandtherisingtemperature.Heisfacedwitharaceagainsttimeandinordertoconveythis,theauthor flicksbackandforthbetweentheraginginfernoaboveLovejoy'sheadandtheextremeheatofhisconfinedconditionsinthepriest'sholeunderthefloor.Thiskeeps thepacemovingextremelyquickly,pullingthereaderalongsothatthey,too,canfeeltheheat,smellthesmokeandsensetheterrorLovejoyisexperiencing. ShiveringAgainsttheCold Aswehavealreadyseeninsomeoftheexamplesused,ourcharacters'reactionstotemperaturewillbereflectedintheirbehaviour. Coolingdown Thereareavarietyofwaystoconveytheimpressionthatacharacterisfeelingthecold.Theymay: shiver pulltheircoatmoretightlyaroundthem carefullyselectwarmclothingtowear flaptheirarms stamptheirfeet huddletogetherforwarmth feelsleepy,riskingdeathiftheyclosetheireyes keepmovingtoincreasetheircirculation. Weatheringthestorm Whetherhot,cold,wetordry,onethingyouhavetorememberis
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Ithadbeenraininghardfordays.Waterstreamedfromtheguttersofeveryroof,pouringdownwindows,alongpavements,runninginfastmovingrivuletsalongeachroad. Beneaththestreets,torrentsofwatergushedandgurgledbeneaththefeetofthepeoplehurryingalongtheshiny,wetpavements,pushingandshovingoneanotherintheirhaste togetoutoftherain.Steelgreystormcloudsgatheredoverhead,meetingoneanotherheadoninpreparationforyetanotherdownpour.Itwasvery,verywet.(85words)
Feedingintheinformation Onemethodofavoidingthiskindofoveremphasisistofeedtheinformationtothereaderinsnippets. Ifitisrainingheavily,thenhaveyourcharacterrunforshelter,orstruggleforafewsecondswithanuncooperativeumbrella.Animpressionconveyedwithafewwell chosenverbs,adverbsandadjectiveswillbefarmoreeffectivethanwordydescription,hammeringhomeapointmadeearlyinthefirstsentence. Economywithwordsnotonlyimprovesthequalityofyourwriting,italsomakesyourworkamoreattractivepropositionforprospectivepublishers.Bearingthisin mind,tryrewritingtheabovepassageinamoreeffectiveandsubtleway.Youwillfindthat,bycuttingoutanysuperfluousinformationandincludingacharacterto reacttotheconditions,thepiecewillbefarmoreevocativeandprobablyalotshorter. (Asuggestedrewriteoftheaboveexercisecanbefoundatthebackofthebook.) RevealingEmotions Weallhaveemotionswhichrevealthemselvesthroughourwritingandtherearecertaincircumstancestowhichwereactmorestronglythanothers. Whilstourcharactersneednotbebasedonourselvesoronournearestanddearest,ourownemotionswillbereflectedintheirreactionsandbehaviour. Standingupforyourself Youmay,forexample,havebeenbulliedinthepastbysomeoneina
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positionofpower,ateacher,employer,parentorspouse.Asaresultofthisexperience,bullyingbehaviourinanyoneyouencounterwillevokesomeverystrong feelings.Thesecanandshouldbeharnessedandusedtogreateffectbyyourcharacters. Ifyoufeelstronglyaboutsomething,sowillyourcharactersbutunlessyoubelieveimplicitlythattheywillreactinacertainway,thenyourportrayalwillbeunrealistic. ExpressingFeelings Allowyourcharacterstodothetalkingforyou.Whilstitisimportantthatyourcharactersreactasthey,notyou,wouldinagivensituation,you'llbeamazedathow oftenyourattitudesandopinionsarereflectedintheiractions. Thinkingpositively Thereisnoreasonwhyemotionsshouldbenegative.Positiveattitudesworkeverybitaswellasnegativeonesandenthusiasmalwayscomesoverinanauthor'swork. Itmaybealifestyle,anideal,asportoracertaintypeofpersonbutwhateveryourpassion,youcanconveyitveryeffectivelythroughthecharacteryouwriteabout andaddrealisticbackgroundstoyourstoriesatthesametime. WritingasIdoforthewomen'smagazinemarket,mycharacters'attitudesandopinionsreflectmyownbutmustalsorelatetothereadershipofthemagazine. Theextractbelow,fromashortstoryentitled'Wishing',illustratesthefrustrationanintelligent,hardworkingbusinesswomanfeelswhentrappedinamarriagewitha dominanthusband.Shehasfoundwhatsheconsiderstobeherdreamhomebutherhusbandcontrolsthefinancesandhastobepersuadedthatthepropertyisagood investmentbeforehewillconsiderpartingwithherhardearnedcash.
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oftheirsurroundings.Thelayoutofaroom,forexample,thelengthofaroad,theinteriorofacar. Mindingthefurniture Evenwhenallthecharactersareseated,theystillnodtheirheads,shiftposition,waveahandexpressively.Theymaystandup,pacethecarpetormaketheirwayinto anotherroom.Inordertoconveythiseffectively,youneedtoknowthelayoutofnotonlytheroombutalsothebuildingandhowtheycangettowheretheywantto go. Youalsoneedtoknowwherethefurnitureisplaced,howtheymanoeuvrearounditandhowfastorslowlytheymove. SpeedingandSlowingthePacewithVocabulary Throughoutanystory,anauthorhastoincreaseandslowthepaceinordertogainthemaximumeffect.Thisisachievedbyacombinationofemotivevocabularyand thelengthofthewordsandsentencesused. Shorteningandlengtheningthesentence Asageneralrule,shortwordsandsentencesdenote: anger urgency fear pain. Longerwordsandsentencesdenote: romance contentment relaxation confidence. Youcanalsouselonger,slowersentencestohelpbuildtensionasinthefollowingextractfromMartinaCole'ssuspensenovelTheLadykiller:
ItwasSaturdayandGeorgewasaloneinthehouse.Aftercarefullywashingupthebreakfastthingsandputtingthemaway,hemadehimselfapotoftea.Whileitbrewedonthe kitchentablehewalkeddowntohisshedandbroughtbackhisscrapbooks.
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Thepaceofthesecondpassageismuchfasterthanthefirst.Inbothcasesthereaderisinnodoubtthatsomethingveryunpleasantisabouttohappenbutinthefirst example,thecharacteriscontentandthisisreflectedinthevocabularyused.Inthesecondextract,thecharactersareclearlyunhappyandthevocabularyisshort, sharpandthreatening. FlashingBackandForthinTime Flashbackisoneofthemostusefultoolsawritercanuse.It: providesaninsightintoyourcharacters'personalitiesandpasts givesbackgroundinformation describesthecharactersandaddssubstancetotheplot movesthestoryforward offershintsor'signposts'thathistoryisabouttorepeatitself. Flashinginformation Whilstthelengthofaflashbackvariesconsiderablyfromoneshortphrasetoacompletechapter,thetechniqueworksbestifyousimply'flash'toasignificantincident inthepast,thenbringyourcharacterstraightbacktothepresentassoonasyouhaveimpartedtherelevantinformation. Forexample,ifthereaderistounderstandwhyourTVpresenter,SallyBlake,behavesinacertainway,weneedtogivethemafewhintsaboutthebackgroundto thestory.Theflashbacksinthefollowingscenearemarkedinitalics:
Flashbacksshouldprovideaseriesofrevelationsaboutthecharacterswhichgivejustenoughinformationtokeepthereaderwantingtoknowmorebutatthesame time,revealsomethingthereaderdidn'tknowbefore. Intheaboveexample,thefirstflashbackinformsusthatMarkisamarriedman,thesecondthatheisviolent.Fromthesetwosnippetsofinformation,weknowthe backgroundtotheirrelationshipandcanpredictanegativereactiontoSally'sdesiretoendit. Keyphrases Listedbelowaresomekeyphrasesdesignedtoleadyousmoothlyintoflashback: Thatsummerhadbeenalmostperfect. Therehadbeenatimewhenthingsweredifferent. Asachild,hehadbeennervousandshy. Fillingawholechapter Whilstitispossibletowritewholechaptersinflashback,thiscanbecounterproductive.Asalways,inthehandsofaskilledauthor,lengthyflashbackofthistypecan beveryeffective.However,forittoworkwell,thecontentmustbecompletelyrivetingandintegraltothemainplot.Eventhen,itcansometimesbedifficulttopullthe readerbacktothepresent.Itisusuallybettertosticktobrief,rapidflashestokeepyourstorymovingsmoothlyandatagoodpace.
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Stevetriesouthisclimbingskills Steve'shobbyisclimbingandhebaseshisplotdevelopmentonsituationshehasencounteredasamemberofaclimbingteam.Bycombininghisexperiencesof climbingdifferenttypesofterrain,inavarietyofweatherconditionswithhisknowledgeofteamworkinpotentiallydangeroussituations,heisabletobringhis charactersvividlytolife.Asaresult,hisadventurestoriesarefastpacedandexciting. Checklist 1.Doyourcharactersreacttotheirsurroundings? 2.Dotheyinteractwithoneanother? 3.Haveyouclearlyconveyedtheirsurroundings? 4.Doyouknowhowtheirpastgovernstheirpresentbehaviour? 5.Dotheyfightforyourprinciples? 6.Doesthepacesetthemoodeffectively? 7.Areyourflashbacksshortandeffective? 8.Doeseachscenemovesmoothlyintothenext? Assignment Writeasceneinwhichawifeistryingtoconcealamurderweaponimmediatelyafterkillingherhusband.Thesceneshouldcontainthefollowinginformation: thewife'sappearance,includingheight,hairstyle,ageandbuild thetimeofday theseason theroomsheisin howtheroomisfurnished whyshekilledhim.
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DevelopingaGoodEar Dialogueisthebearerofinformation,plotandcharacterisation.Itperformsanumberofvitalfunctionsforthefictionwriter: Delineatescharacter. Movesthestoryforward. Createsconflict,tensionandsuspense. Explainswhathappenedinthepast. Conveysemotion. Conveysthethoughtsofthecharacters. Perhapsmostimportantlyofall,dialoguebetweenyourcharactersbringsthemtolifeinawaythatnootherwritingtechniquecan. Hearingthemspeak Untilacharacterspeaks,alltheirthoughtsandemotionsareportrayedthroughsomeoneelse'seyes,i.e.thenarrator's. Thethingsacharactersaysandthewaytheysaythemgivesamuchclearerinsightintotheircharacterandallowsthereadertomakeuptheirownmindastowhat sortofpersontheymightbe. Realisticdialoguegivesimmediatecharacterisationinawaythatnarrativesimplycannotdo.Asaquicktest,readthroughthefollowingphrasesandseewhoyouthink isspeaking: 1.'Forgoodness'sakegetyourhairoutofyoureyesandstandupstraightwhenI'mtalkingtoyou.' 2.'Icanspareyoufiveminutesbutkeepitbrief.' 3.'Holdmyhandwhilewecrosstheroad.' 4.'Goodmorning,howmayIhelpyou?'
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Recordingthespeeches Youcandothisbyimaginingitinyourheadorbyspeakingthewordsoutloudtohearhowtheysound. Youmayprefertorecordallthedialogueontapesoyoucanplayitbackatyourleisureandensurethateachcharacterhastheirowndistinctivewayofspeaking. Usethemethodwhichworksbestforyoubutmakesurethatifonecharactersays,'Hello,howareyou?',theresponseis'I'mfine,howareyou?'andnotsomething entirelyunrelated. Communicatingwitheachother Rememberthatthepurposeofwritingdialogueistogetyourcharacterscommunicatingwitheachother,nottalkingdirectlytothereader. Thetechniqueofhavingonecharactersayingsomething,whilsttheothertalkseithertothemselvesortotheaudienceaboutsomethingcompletelydifferentisbestleft toscriptwriterswhohavetheadvantageofthevisualandauraldimensionstoexplainwhatisgoingon. Havingaconversation Oneusefulmethodofbringingyourdialoguetolifeistochoosethepairyoumoststronglyidentifywithfromthelistbelowandwriteaconfrontationalconversation betweenthem: Dissatisfiedcustomer/unhelpfulshopassistant. Unreasonabletrafficwarden/iratemotorist. Disinterestedhospitalreceptionist/franticpatient. Officioustrainguard/exasperatedcommuter. Harassedshopper/pushyelderlylady. Angryhomeowner/selfishneighbour. If,bynow,youareinaflamingtemper,calmyourselfdownbyreadingwhatyouhavewritten.Thedialogueshouldbewonderfullyrealisticandvibrant. Puttingthespeechincontext Thevocabularyyourcharactersuseconveysmorethanjustpersonality,italsogivesanideaoftheirage,socialstatusand
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relationshiptooneanother.Readthetwoexamplesbelowandseeifyoucantellwhothecharactersmightbe:
ExampleA 'You'renotgoingouttonight.Iwon'tletyou.' 'Youcan'tstopme,I'moldenoughtodoasIlike.' 'You'renotsooldthatIcan'tgiveyouacliproundtheear.' 'ButI'vegottogo,everyone'sgoing.' ExampleB 'You'renotgoingouttonight.Iwon'tletyou.' 'Youcan'tstopme,I'lldoasIlike.' 'IfyougoI'llkillmyself.' 'Don'tbeafool.'
Infact,bothpassagesworkperfectlywellbutinPassageA,thewords'hesaid'and'hecomplained'arecompletelysuperfluous.
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Fromtheiractions,wecanseethatthegirlisanxioustopleasebuthasnoideahowtodealwiththesituation.Colin,ontheotherhand,isirritableandnotabouttobe palmedoffbyaninexperiencedyoungster. LosingYourTemper Inthemiddleofdomesticargumentswiththeirlovedones,itisnotunknownforauthorstostopdeadinmidinsultandreachfortheirtrustynotepadandpen. Fightingtalk Akeenwriterwillneverletagoodpieceofdialogueescape,nomatterwhenorwheretheystumbleacrossit.Iftheirpartnerhappenstohurlaparticularlyjuicy phraseatthemintheheatofbattle,theyknowthey'llonlyregretitiftheydon'tstopandwriteitdown. Weallfindourselvesinconfrontationalsituationsfromtimetotimeandthemoreyoucanidentifywiththerolesofyourcharactersandrelatetotheirfeelingsand frustrationsthemorerealistictheirargumentswillsound. Basingyourcharacters'dialogueonyourowndomesticdisputesmayseemheartlessandinsensitivebutforthetruecreativewriter,there'snosenseinwastinggood material. FallinginLove Conflictisavitalelementinanyworkoffiction,sothedialoguebetweentwocharactersfallinginloveshouldbeasvolatileasargumentsbetweenwarringpartners.
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sensibilities.Youmayfeelswearingisanintegralpartofyourcharacter'spersonalityandwithoutit,theirdialoguewouldlackrealism. Usedsparingly,swearwordscanaddimpactandpacetodialoguebutgratuitoususeofobscenitiesisoffensiveandunnecessary.Whereasceneisviolentora characterisdepictedasbeingextremelyangry,upsetorfrustrated,theoccasionalexpletivewilladdrealismandpowertothescene.Toomanyobscenitieswill, however,haveadilutingeffectandthefullimpactwillbelost. Usingslang Slangdatesveryquicklysothatacontemporarypieceoffiction,liberallysprinkledwithbuzzwordsfromuptotheminutespeech,willappearquaintandoddina fewyear'stime. Slangis,however,aninvaluablemethodofconveyingperiod.Forexample,canyoudatethefollowingphrases? 1.Shethinksshe'sthecat'spyjamas. 2.Rightonmanthat'sgroovy. 3.You'redoingmyheadin. (Answersatbackofbook.) Thecharacters'agesplayalargepartintheuseofslang.Differentgenerationshavetheirownslanglanguagesandaswehaveseen,themosteffectivemethodof conveyingadifferentlanguageisthroughtheuseoftheoddwordhereandthere,ratherthantryingtoreproduceitinlarge,indecipherablechunks. Writingdialogueisnotsomuchamatterofreproducingexactlyhowpeoplespeaktooneanotherinreallife.Itismoreaboutsettingdownonthepagea representationofspeechwhichhelpsthewriterconveycharacter,periodandplotinarealisticway. CaseStudies ElizabethusesperfectEnglish ElizabethisaretiredEnglishlanguageteacher.Afteralifetimeofcorrectingherpupils'grammar,shefindsitimpossibletoignoretherulesandallowhercharactersto speaknaturallytooneanother.Asaresult,sheisunabletodevelopclearlyidentifiable'voices'forhercharactersandtheirdialogueisstiltedandunrealistic.
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Brendaactsouteachsituation Brendaisamotheroffour.Herchildren'sagesrangefrom18to30.Sheisakeenamateuractressandmemberofherlocaldramasociety.Shehasagoodearfor languageandherfamilykeepsherabreastofthelatestslangphrases.Herinterestinthrillerwritingmeansthatsheusestough,uncompromisingcharacterswhohave colourfulvocabularies.Sheisnotafraidtouseexpletivesorslangintherightcontext.Asaresult,herwritingisvibrantandrealistic. Checklist 1.Doyourcharacterseachhavetheirowndistinctive'voice'? 2.Canyoutellwhoisspeakingtowhombythedialoguealone? 3.Haveyouusedacombinationofdialogueandaction? 4.Areyousurethedialogueisnotstilted? 5.Haveyoubeensparingwithyouruseofslangandaccents? 6.Doesthedialoguemovethestoryforward? Assignment Ifyoubelongtoawritinggroup,thereisasimpleexercisewhichdemonstrateshowaconversationdevelops. Goingclockwiseroundacircle,thefirstpersonbeginswiththephrase,'I'msorry,youcan'thavethecartonight',thenturnstothenextpersonforaresponse,whichis usually,'Whynot?'Continueinthismanner,makingarulethatthedialoguemustbebroughttoasatisfactoryconclusion. Theendresultwillusuallybeacompromisebetweenthetwocharacterswhohaveevolved.(Ninetimesoutoften,thedialoguedevelopsintoanargumentbetween fatherandson.)
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WritingaRomance Aromanceisthestoryofamanandawomanwhomeetandfallinloveagainstalltheodds.Theingredientsforastandardromanceare: attractivecentralcharacters abeginning,middleandhappyending anelementofsuspense obstaclesdesignedtokeeptheheroandheroineapart asatisfactoryconclusion,culminatinginthepromiseofmarriage. Romanticfictionistrueescapismandgreatfuntowriteasyousteepyourselfinavisionofwhatlifecouldbelikeifonlyallyourdreamscouldcometrue. Mostbutnotallromanticfictioniswrittenbywomen.Thisisbecauseitiscentredaroundaparticularlyfeminine,idealisedperceptionofwhatalovingrelationship shouldbe.Themaleheroisstrong,yetgentle.Acaring,nurturingcreature,whoputstheneedsanddesiresoftheheroinebeforehisown. Believewhatyouwrite Atongueincheekapproachtoromanticfictionsimplywon'twork.Inordertowriteconvincingly,youmustbelieveinyourcharactersandbepreparedtofall helplesslyinlovewiththehero. Thisdoesn'tmeanyoucan'tbringhumourintothestory.Providingyouarelaughingwithandnotatyourcharacters,youcanmakethemandtheirsituationasamusing asyouwish.Attheendoftheday,however,youhavetocarewhetherornotyourcharactersproclaimtheirloveforoneanotherandachievethehappyendingthatis anintegralpartofeveryromanticstory.
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FindingFlawsAttractive Bearinginmindthatattractivecharactersarecentraltotheromantictheme,weneedtoexploretheidiosyncrasiesofsexualattraction. Beautyintheeyeofthebeholder Itistemptingtodepictyourheroineasexquisitelybeautifulshininghair,immaculatecomplexionandafigureanywomanwoulddiefor. Equally,youmightinitiallyportrayyourheroasapictureofmasculinity.Tallandhandsome,withaheadofthick,luxurianthairandofmuscular,athleticbuild. Theybothlookandsoundwonderful,havewarm,caringdispositionsandtoallintentsandpurposes,areperfect.Tooperfect.Weordinarymortalsknowwehaven't achancewithpeoplelikethis.Theywouldneverfallforlittleoldus,soinordertomakeyourromanticcharactersappearmorebelievableand,moreimportantly, attainable,itisnecessarytogivethemaflaw. Fallingfortheflaw Theflawmaybephysical,perhapstheheroineisalittletooshort,theherojustaninchorsotootall.Whateveryoufeelittakestomakethemabitmorehumanthanif theywereperfectlyproportioned. However,aphysicalflaw,whilstuseful,onlyofferspartofthepicture.Aroundedcharacterwillalsohaveanemotionalhangup.Perhapstheyarestubborn,proud, impetuousorabsentminded.Thesearethesortofcharacteristicsthatwillatfirstexasperateandsubsequentlyattractonetotheother. OvercomingInsurmountableObstacles InChapter3,wesawhowimportantitistoincludeconflictinastory.Thescenarioillustratingthepointhadabeautifulyoungwomanmeetingandmarryingthemanof herdreamsandlivinghappilyeverafter. Whilstthisformulaisthebasisforaromanticstory,onitsownwithoutanyconflict,itoffersnosustainableplot. Preventingthecharactersfromsucceeding Havingcreatedyouralmostperfectcharactersandsetthemagainstasuitablyromanticbackground,itwouldbeverypleasanttosimply
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2. Nickasksherout.Sherefuses.Markoffersher promotiononconditionthatshecontinuestheiraffair.
3. Sheislevelheadedinacrisis. ShetellsMarksheneedstimetothink. ShebumpsintoNickassheleavesthebuilding. Hesensessomethingiswrong. Theygoforadrink. 6. SallyfightswithNick,refusingtolistentohis explanation. Sheresignsandwalksout. Athome,thephoneringsconstantlybutsheignoresit. 9. Everythingiswonderful.Sallyisinloveandplansto returntotheUKandtakeupthenewjob. ThensheseesNickgoingintoSophie'sroom.
5. ThefollowingafternoonSallyoverhearsNickdeepin conversationwithMark. Shemistakenlybelievestheyareconspiringagainst her. 8. NickarrivesinFrance. Astudioislookingforan'anchor'forthemainnews. Thiswaswhathe'dbeendiscussingwithMark,trying topersuadehimtoletSallygo. 11. Hurtandangry,SallyreturnsimmediatelytotheUK andthrowsherselfintohernewjob. ShemanagestobreaktheholdMarkhasoverherbut shecan'tgetoverNick. Then,sheseeshiminthestudio.
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sitbackandletnaturetakeitscourse.Sadly,that'sthelastthingaromanticwritercando.Theauthor'staskistocomeupwithdeviouswaystopreventtheheroand heroinefromgettingtogetheruntilthelastpossiblemoment. AswehavealreadyformedapictureoftelevisionnewsreaderSallyBlake,wecanuseherasaheroineforourromance.TakingthefirstCV,wheresheistheproduct ofabrokenmarriage,withadisinterestedstepfatherandaspoilthalfsister,weknowthatsheisscaredofformingpermanentrelationships.However,wealsoknow thatsheisambitiousso,forthepurposesofourstory,wewillneedtosabotage: 1.anyattemptonherparttoformalastingrelationshipwiththehero 2.anyexcitingnewcareerprospects. Gettingtoknowthehero Beforewecandeviseaplanofobstaclestotheirlove,weneedtogettoknowthehero. LikeSally,Nickwillhaveoneortwoendearingpersonalquirks.Perhapsherubsthebumponhisbrokennosewhenhe'sconcentratingorthecornerofhismouth twitcheswhenheisamused. HehasprobablybeenhurtbyawomaninthepastandhisattractiontoSallywillbeinspiteofadeterminationnottorepeattheexperience.Itwillbethesetraitswhich willmakehimirresistibletoourheroine. Jumpingtothewrongconclusion Bydraftingaplanofobstaclestothecouple'sromance,asshowninFigure7,wecanseeataglancehowtheywillfitintothestoryline. Oneofthemosteffectiveobstaclesistheromanticheroandheroine'sunerringtalentforjumpingtothewrongconclusion,asshowninFrame5. Sally'simmediatereactionwhenshediscoversMarkandNickinconversationistoassumetheyareplottingagainsther.ItneveroccurstoherthatNickmightbe tryingtohelpherbutifitdid,shewouldthoroughlyresenthisinterference.Eitherway,hecannotwin. ThenextmisunderstandingoccursinFrame10,withNick'sattentiontoSophie.ItisherfearoflosinghimtoherspitefulstepsisterthatpromptsSally'silljudged behaviour.Meanwhile,itisacombinationofprideandintegrityonNick'spartwhichgovernshisreactions.
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Rememberthat,howevermanyobstacleswethrowinherpath,Sallymusthaveovercomethembytheendofthebook. DrivingFastCarsandWearingFancyClothes Romanceandglamourgohandinhandandifyouintendtowriteromanticfiction,youneedglamoroussettingsforyourstories. Ourstoryissetaroundthefastmovingbackgroundofatelevisionnewsstation.However,theworldsofhighfashion,fastcars,thoroughbredhorsesandsporting championsalsofeatureheavilyinthiskindofnovel.Noonewantstoreadaboutthelovelifeofagaragemechanicandasecretary.Not,thatis,unlessthegarage mechanicdesignsandbuildsrevolutionaryracingcarsorthesecretaryworksforahighpoweredexecutiveofaninternationalindustrialgiant. Followinghighfashion Clothesareparticularlyimportantandalwayssetoffahero'sphysiqueoraheroine'sfiguretoperfection. Eventhepoorestheroineseemstobeabletolayherhandsonatleastonepuresilkdesignereveninggown,whilstold,wornjeansandanopenneckedworkshirt enhanceourhero'shardmanimageasmuchastheculturedsideofhisnatureisimprovedbyhisappearanceinanimmaculatetuxedo. Keepingupwiththetimes Inlinewiththeglamour/powerimage,today'sromanticheroinemaywellbeinhermidtolatetwentiesandrunningherownbusiness.Shemaydriveapowerfulcar, pilotaplane,sailayachtorbeanexperthorsewomanandwillnotappreciatebeingtreatedasifshe'sarareandfragileflower. EnjoyingSexandFood Theonlyrulerelatingtotheinclusionofsexinaromanticstoryisthatitmustbeintegraltothestorylineandportrayedwithinthecontextofalovescene.Gratuitous sex,particularlyiflinkedwithviolence,istotallyunacceptable. Practisingsafesex Someromanticwritersalwaysincludeexplicitsexscenes,othersneverdo.Itisentirelyuptoyoutodecidewhetherornotyouarecomfortablewritingaboutsex.
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Allsexualencountersbetweentheheroandheroineareimmenselypleasurableandsafesexispractised.Thisisallpartofthecaring,nurturingrolewhichisthe essenceofthetrueromantichero. Eatinganddrinkingsensuously Eatingisalmostasimportantassexinaromanticstory.Mealsaredescribedingreatdetailandrangefromplainbutwholesomesimplefaretodelicatelypresented gourmetdishes. Forexample,aromanticploughman'slunchfortwowouldconsistofafresh,Frenchloaf,deliciouslycrustyontheoutside,thesoft,whitemiddlethicklyspreadwith creamybutter.Thecheesewillbefirmandmature,servedwithageneroushelpingoftangy,homemadechutney.Thewholethingwillbewasheddownwithanamed wine,afruityredorlight,refreshingwhite. Listedbelowisaselectionofkeywordsfordescribingfoodanddrink: cool crisp crunchy crusty fresh frothy melting piquant refreshing smooth succulent tangy velvety
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Inaromance,whenheroandheroinemeet,theirfirstemotionshouldbeanyoneofthefollowing: anger dislike suspicion distrust intimidation embarrassment fear caution irritation reluctantattraction. Whatitshouldneverbeis'love'.Thatwouldbetooeasyandasweknow,withoutconflict,thereisnostory. HistoricalSettings Theadvantageofacontemporaryromanceisthatyouarewritingabouttoday'scharactersandcansetthemagainstbackgroundswithwhichyouarefamiliar.Aswe sawinChapter4,itisimportanttohaveaccurateknowledgeofalocationwhetheritisasmallprovincialtownoranexoticSouthSeaisland.Backgroundinformation mustalsobeaccurate.Knowledgeofthetelevisionindustrywould,therefore,beessentialforanyonewritingSallyandNick'sstoryandforhistoricalromances, accuracyisequallyimportant. Researchingtheperiod Foranhistoricalstorytoworkeffectively,therightmonarchmustbeonthethroneandcostumes,furnishings,vehicles,dialogue,attitudesandbehaviourmustall reflecttherightperiod. Romanticetiquettethroughtheagesisacomplexarea.Inordertowritebelievablehistoricalfiction,itisessentialthattheauthorunderstandsandisthoroughly conversantwiththeconventionsandrulesoftheperiod. Employingthelanguageoffans,forexample,isonemethodbywhichaheroinecouldembarkonaromanticliaisonwithapotentialsuitor.Likeeveryotherlanguage, however,youhavetoknowittospeakit. Youalsoneedtoknowwhowouldbedeemedanunsuitablemarriagepartnerandwhowouldbeconsideredanexcellentcatch
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accordingtotheconventionsofthetime.Methodsofovercomingparentalopposition,schemesforbetteringthemselvesorplansforelopingmustallbeworkable withinthecontextofthehistoricalsettingyouhavechosen. Attendingbanquets Eatinganddrinkingwasjustasimportantinthepast,ifnotmoreso.Forthehistoricalnovelist,itisvitalthatyouknowwhatfoodwasservedandhowitwascooked. Financealsorearsitsuglyheadas,whilsttheheroandheroinewillcarenothingformonetarygain,financialstatuswillhaveenormousimplicationsonanypotential marriageplans. Inromanticfiction,thebackgroundisasimportantastheplotandaccuracyprovidesanidealbalancefortheescapisttaleyoulongtotell. Checklist 1.Wouldyoufallinlovewithyourhero? 2.Isyourheroineattractivetobothmenandwomen? 3.Doyouwantthemtolivehappilyeverafter? 4.Doesyourstoryhaveahappyending? 5.Isthebackgroundinformationaccurate? 6.Haveyouusedallfivesenseseffectively? 7.Issexportrayedwithinthecontextofalovingrelationship? Assignment Selectoneofthefollowingpairsandwritethesceneoftheirfirstmeeting,conveyingtheirreactionsthroughacombinationofdialogueandaction: Amalelawyerwhosebrillianceincourtledtoamiscarriageofjusticeagainsttheyoungwoman'sfather. Afemalehospitaladministratorchargedwithcuttingcostsandamalepaediatrician. AminorladyinwaitingatQueenElizabethI'scourtandaSpanishcourtier.
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8 Haunting,ThrillingandKilling
IntroducingaNoteofSuspense Forsomewriters,thethrillofthechasehaslittletodowithlove.Theirpreferenceisforghostandhorrorstoriesandtheopportunitytheyoffertotaketheirwritingto thelimitsoftheirimagination. Explainingtheinexplicable Ghoststakemanyformsandappearinnovelsinarangeofguisesandmoods.Theymaybe: friendly hostile sad happy mischievous malevolent humorous helpful obstructive manipulative powerful possessive terrifying comforting. Inadditiontoallthosequalities,theformtheytakecouldbe: arestlessspirit acontentedresident apoltergeist amessengerfromthepast,presentorfuture.
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Someghostsassumeclearlyvisiblehumanform,othersareopaqueandsomearesimplyashapelesspresencebuttheonethingtheyusuallyhaveincommonisthe abilitytomaterialiseanddisappearatwill. Diggingupthepast Ghostlycharactersarenodifferentfromanyotherprotagonistsandshouldbetreatedaccordingly. Youneedtodigdeepintotheirpastsothattheirbackgroundoffersanexcellentreasonfortheircurrentexistence.Theirpastwillalsoexplaintheirattitudetothe mortalstheyencounter. Forthemortalcharacters,whethertheghostisfrighteningorfriendly,theinitialmeetingmusthaveanelementofsuspenseacreakingfloorboard,suddenicydraught, aslammingdoororwindow. ConfrontingtheFearsWithin Whilstnoteveryhorrorstoryfeaturesaghost,thetwogenresoftenoverlapasbothsetouttofrightenthereader. Horrorstoriesexploitourfearsandshockusintofacingthethingwebelievetobelurkingintheshadows.Ifyouarefrightenedofspiders,forexample,it'sbadenough ifyouseeonecrawlingupyourarm.Imaginehowmuchworseitwouldbeifyouwerelockedinadarkroomwithdozensofthemrunningaroundyou.Youmightnot beabletoseethembutyou'dcertainlyknowtheywerethere. Infact,theyneednotbethereatall,yousimplyhavetobelievetheyareandyourimaginationwilldotherestforyou.Beforelong,you'llstarttofeelthemcrawlingup yourlegsandoveryourbody. Confrontingyourworstnightmare Horrorfictionisbasedontheprincipleofconfrontationwithyourworstnightmareandcommonphobiasareusedtogreateffectinbothghostandhorrorstories. Theprospectofspendingthenightinahauntedhouse,forexample,mercilesslyexploitsournaturalfearsofthedarkandisolation.Amongthespookysensationsand incidentsguaranteedtoscareussillyare: beingcutofffromtheoutsideworld lackofwarmthandlight
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novisibleescaperoute havingsupportingcharactersmysteriouslydisappearingonebyone. Losingcontrol Theunderlyingthemeofthescenariofeaturedaboveisthatofpowerlessness. Onceacharacteristrappedinasituation,theymustrelyheavilyontheirwitsforsurvivalandifthey'vehadthosewitsfrightenedoutofthem,wewon'tholdoutmuch hopefortheirchances. Lossofcontrolorfreewillisanotherverypowerfulthemeinghostandhorrorstoriesandincludes: beingunderattackfrommonsters,e.g.werewolves,vampires,zombiesetc. beingtrappedalonewithyourworstnightmare havingyourmindand/oractionscontrolledbysomeoneevil beingunabletofindanescaperoute,i.e.everyroadyoutakeleadsbacktowhereyoustarted beingunabletodistinguishbetweenrealityandfalsehood,i.e.areyouinsane? beingtheonlyonetorecognisethegrowingdanger,i.e.beingquitealone. ContrastingNormalityWithTerror Contrastingfearoftheunknownwithabackgroundoffamiliarityproducesanimmenselystrongfeelingofterrorandsuspense. Creatinganelementofdoubt Pictureasceneofcontenteddomesticity.Ahousewifeistacklingtheroutinechoreswhenthephonerings.Justassheisabouttopickupthereceiver,itstops. Nothingparticularlyunusualhere,justawrongnumber.Unless,ofcourse,thesamethinghappenscontinuallythroughouttheday. Bythetimeherhusbandreturnshomefromwork,ourhousewifeisabundleofnerves.Hemanagestocalmher,puttingitdowntophoneengineersworkingonthe line. ThateveningtheyarewatchingTVwhenthewifehearsanoise
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outside.Husbandinvestigatesbutcanseenothing.Thecatstrollsinthroughtheopendoorandtheylaughtheincidentoff. Inbedthatnight,thewifeiswokenbythephoneringing.Herhusbandstirsbutdoesn'twakensoshemakesherwaydownstairstoansweritbutwhenshepicksup thereceiver,thelineisdead.Shereturnstothebedroomandclimbingbackintobed,snugglesclosetoherhusbandbutsomethingdoesn'tfeelright.Shetriesinvain torousehimanddiscoversheisdead,hisfaceacontortedmaskoffear. Providinganexplanation Lullthereaderintoafalsesenseofsecuritybyprovidingcredibleexplanationswhenthestrangeeventsbeginsothat,whentheterrorisrevealed,itscaresthemas muchasthecentralcharacter. Justwhenyouthoughtitwasallover Dependingonthestyleofthestoryyouarewriting,itissometimespossibletoaddevenmoreimpacttothetalebyrevivingthemonsterjustlongenoughforonelast attack. Thecentralcharacterhasfoughtandvanquishedhisfoeandisfeelingjustifiablyeuphoric.Nothingcanharmhimnow,thetown/city/worldissavedandlifeisrapidly returningtonormal. Justwhenyouthoughtitwasallover,however,whatevergrislybeingisleftafterourherohasfinishedwithithaulsitselfpainfullybackfromthedeadandmakesone last,usuallyunsuccessful,lungetowardshim. Layingthefoundationforasequel Alternatively,asyouapproachtheendofyournovel,youmayalreadybethinkingaboutasequel. Ifso,ithelpstogiveahintthatthemeansaretheretorecreatetheterror.Aflickeroflifeinatwitchinglimb,anunnoticedpodoregg,anindicationthattheconditions whichgaverisetotheterrorcouldbereproducedifcertainconditionswererecreated. WritingaMurderMystery Whilstmurdersfrequentlytakeplaceinbothghostandhorrorstories,wecanderivecomfortfromthefactthattheperpetratorsareproductsoftheauthor'svivid imagination. Themortalmurdererisaverydifferentkettleoffishasheorshemaybebasedonarealpersonorevent.
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Avoidingtruestories Allwritersexploitinformationgleanedfromthemediabutcaremustbetakentoprotectinnocentvictimsoftruelifecrime.Thediscoveryofamurdervictim'sremains oranoldnewspapercuttingmighttriggeryourimaginationbutforthefamiliesofthoseinvolved,itisatraumafromwhichtheywillneverfullyrecover.Byallmeansuse truelifecasesasaframeworkforyourstoriesbutthebackground,charactersandplotshouldbeyourownfictionalcreation. Employinganamateurdetective Fortoday'scrimewriter,thegiftedamateurdetectiveinthestyleofAgathaChristie'sMissMarpleisathingofthepast. Nowadaystheamateurisusuallysomeonewhohappenedtobeinthewrongplaceatthewrongtime.Havingstumbledacrossacrime,theybecomeentangledinthe eventswhichfollowandareforcedtosolvethemysteryinordertoextricatethemselvesfromthesituation. Theattitudeoftheprofessionalpolicemaninallofthisiseitheroneofoutrighthostilityordownrightsuspicion.Indeed,ourunwillingsleuthcouldwellfindthemselves ontherunfromthelawandunabletoconvinceanyoneoftheirinnocence. Consultingaspecialist Novelsfeaturingamateurdetectivesareusuallysetagainstspecialistbackgroundsreflectingareasoftheirauthors'ownexpertise.EllisPeters'medievalmonk,Brother Cadfael,forexampleandJonathanGash'sroguishantiquesdealerLovejoyarejusttwosuchsuccessfulfictionalsleuths. Inthistypeofnovel,thefascinatingbackgroundsgiverisetosubplotsandbackstorieswhichareasgrippingtothereaderasthecrimebeingsolved.Ifanew specialistamateursleuthistobreakintothisovercrowdedfieldoffiction,theirbackgroundmustbecompletelydifferentfromanyotherdetectiveseriescurrentlyon thebookshelves. Relyingontheprofessionals 'Policeprocedurals',whereaprofessionalpoliceofficersolvesthecrime,featureuptotheminutepolicemethodsandthelatestadvancesinforensicscience. Accuracyisvitalandthedetectiveneedstobeafairlycolourfuloreccentriccharacter. ChoosingaMurderWeapon Thechoiceofmurderweaponshouldberealistic,bearinginmind
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thatthecauseofdeathcouldbeanyoneofthefollowing: ablowfromabluntinstrument stabbingwithaknifeorsharpimplement poisoning shooting drowning strangulation suffocation. Killingeffectively Whicheverweaponandmethodyouselect,youmustbesurethatitwillworkandknowwhateffectsitwillhaveonyourvictim.Forexample,ifyouintendtostab, shootorphysicallyattackyourvictim,couldyouanswerthefollowingquestions? Howmuchbloodwilltherebe? Whatshapewillthewoundbe? Howmuchforcewillbeneededfortheblowtobeeffective? Howlongwillthevictimtaketodie? Poisoningthevictim Poisoningthevictim'sfoodisafavouritemethodbuthereagain,itisimperativethatyouknowafewbasicfacts: Isthepoisoneasilydetectable? Doesithaveadistinctivetaste/odour? Whatquantitiesareyoulikelytoneed? Isitreadilyavailableandobtainable? Whatsymptomswillthevictimdisplay? Howlongwillthevictimtaketodie? Killingbyaccident Occasionallyavictimiskilledbyaccident.Theymayfalldownricketystepsandbreaktheirnecks,havesomethingheavyfallonthemorbelockedinthecellarofan emptyhouse. Underthesecircumstances,theytendtobevictimsoftheirownevilplans,havinghatchedtheplotandfallenintotheirowntrap.
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Occasionally,however,theyareinnocent,theirdeathleadingtountoldproblemsforthecharacterwhowasinstrumentalincausingitinthefirstplace. Whenplanningamurder,beabsolutelysureofyourfactsandremember,thesimplertheplan,themorelikelyitistosucceed. PlottingandPlanning Aplotissimplywhathappensinastoryandplotdevelopmentdependsagreatdealonyourcharacterisation. Yourcharacters'reactionstoagivensituationwillhaveastronginfluenceonyourplot.Inafamilysaga,forexample,thestorywillbecentredaroundonecharacter's relationshipwiththeirfamilyandthepeopletheyencounterastheirtaleunfolds. Incontrast,crimenovelsarecentredaroundthesolutionofthecrimesothat,whilstitisessentialtohaveastrongprotagonist,thebookmustbecarefullyplottedin ordertokeepuptheinterest.aBeforeyoubegintowritethebook,youmustbeveryclearwhereallthetwistandturns,cluesandredherringswilloccur. YoushouldalsotakenoteofthefollowingadvicefromcrimewriterSusanMoody:'Youmustplayfairwiththereader.Notwinbrothersproducedinthelastchapter. Sharetheclueswiththereader,yourjobistohidethemasskilfullyasyoucan.' Planningyournovel Nomatterwhatthegenre,youshouldalwaysdraftoutaplanoroutlinewhichtakestheworkthroughfromitsbeginningtoitslogicalend. Thishelpsyoutoplotboththemainthemeandanysubplotsor
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'backstories'withinaflexibleframework.AswesawwiththeplanofobstaclestoSally'sromanceinChapter7,farmoreisgoingonthanjustherloveaffairwith Nick. Eachstageoftheplotmustbesetoutwithintheframeofachapterbychapteroutline,sothatyoucanseeataglanceexactlywhereandwheneachincidentoccurs. UsingtheplotlinefromChapter3whereSallyaccidentallykillsMark,Figure8showsthedraftplanofacrimenovel.Asyoucansee,thedetailisverysketchy.Atthis stagethebackstory,orsubplot,hasbeenomittedbuttherewillberoomwithineachframetoslotindetailsofNickandSally'sromancefromouroriginalplan. Anoutlineshouldberegardedasaflexibletool,whichmaybealteredandshapedtosuitthecircumstances.Youhavetobecomfortablewiththeideaofchangingit round,takingsomebitsoutandmovingotherstomorelogicalplaces. Devisingastoryboard Puttingitoncomputergivesyouthefreedomtoalteritatwillalthoughitdoeshelpiftheplanisinconstantviewinstoryboardorchartformwhileyouareworking. Someauthorsusewipecleanboardsorselfadhesivenoteletswhichcanbemovedaroundanddiscardedwhennecessary,whilstotherspreferalargesheetofwhite paper,draftingtheplanoutinpencil,colourcoding,erasingorcrossingoutitemswherenecessary. Whichevermethodyouselect,onceyouhaveaplantowhichyoucanwork,itismucheasiertoslotintheplotchangeswhenandwheretheyoccurandbuildupa visualpictureofthecompletednovel. Avoidingerrors Anothergreatadvantageofproducingavisualaidlikethisisthaterrorsinthestorylinecanbedetectedataglance. If,forexample,youhaveacharacterwhowaskilledinChapter3unaccountablyturningupinChapter5,youcanremedythisbeforeyougettoofarintothebook. Awrittenplanallowsyoutoseewhereeachcharacterisatanygivenmomentandtocalculatehowtomovethemfromandtoeachlocation.Italsopreventsyou forgettinganyminorcharactersalongtheway. TwistingtheTale Everycrimestorycontainsanelementofsuspense,providedbythetwistsandturnsintheplot.
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Chap3 InsufficientevidencetoholdSally.Inoffice,papersre drugsstoryshewasworkingonaremissing.She hearsnoise,seesNickriflingthroughMark'sdesk andfindingfile. Confrontshim,hisstoryislame,distractshim.Ends withhergrabbingfileandrunning. Chap6 SallyconfrontsNick.DidhemurderMark?He swearshisinnocence.Sayshewasworkingondrugs caseforrivalnewsstation. Lovescene.EndswithSallywakingtofindNick, Sophieandfilehavealldisappeared. Chap9 Sophiesufferingwithdrawal.Dooropens,itisClaude, followedSophie.Rescuesgirlsbutinsistsunsafetogo topolice.TheyreturntoSally'sflat.Endswithher discoveringitransacked.
Chap5 Atmother'shouseinFrance.Claudebehaving strangely.Sophielookspaleandill.Sallydiscovers Claudesearchingherthings. Theyargue.ShedecidestoreturntoUK.Endswith herseeingNickingardenwithSophie. Chap8 Sallyinlockedroom.Hearsscuffleoutside. Sophiehighondrugspushedin,doorlocked. Sophieconfessessheisa'mule'(carrier)forthedrugs baron.Sheisterrifiedofsomeone. Endswithfailedescapeattempt. Chap11 Nickagitated.GrabsSally,shegrappleswithhim, managestoescape,runsstraightintoClaudewho bringsherbackinside.HeconfrontsNick,bothmen accuseeachother.
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Layingafalsetrail Twistingthetaleinvolveslayingafalsetrailinsuchawaythatanysurpriseendingisafeasibleone.Thecluesmustbedoubleedged,sothatwhilstcarefullysteering thereaderinthewrongdirection,oncloserexaminationtheyactuallyleadtotherightone. Forexample,inourstoryaboutSallyBlake,theminuteNickmeetsSophie,heappearstobefollowingRoute(a)inthechartinFigure9,ditchingSallyinfavourofher sisterwhen,infact,heisactuallyfollowingRoute(b).Asbothroutesareequallyvalid,neitherSallynorthereaderwillfeelcheatedwhenthetruthisrevealed. NickappearstobeveryinterestedinSophie (a)Hefindshersexuallyattractive (b)Herecognisesthatsheisadrugaddict (a)Hewantstoditchherforhersister (b)Hewantstoprotectherfromthetruth (a)Heisavillain (b)Heisadetectiveworkingundercover (a)Theyhaverunofftogether (b)Nickhastakenhertoaclinictokickherdrug habit
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involvedwherebythereaderisbeinginvitedtounravelthemystery. Forexample,SallyisinitiallytheobviouschoiceforMark'smurdererbutcanbeeliminatedbyahelpfullydetailedpathologist'sreport. Thisleavesuswiththestandardmurdermysteryquestion:'ifshedidn'tkillhim,whodid?'Nick,ournextmostobvioussuspect,isreleasedbythepolice,leavingus freetosendthereaderoffonanumberoffalsetrailsbeforetheresolutionofthemysteryinthefinalchapter. LookingtotheFuture Futuristicstoriesareenduringlypopularandthesciencefictionwritercanchoosetowriteanyofthefollowingtypesofstory,providingtheyaresetagainstascientific background: aromance adventurestory politicalthriller psychologicalthriller murdermystery horrorstory. Explainingtheinexplicable Unlikefantasy,whichfeaturesmagicalcreaturessuchasgoblinsandgremlinswithinparallelworldsandtimezones,sciencefictionexplorestheconceptsand implicationsofspaceandtimetravel,scientificdevelopmentsandtheoreticalpossibilities. Thepremiseyouuseneednotbeprovenscientificfactbutitmusthaveafactualbasisanditmustbetheoreticallypossible.Withintheseconstraints,thesciencefiction writercanapproachthegenrefromavarietyofangles. Exploringtheinfluenceoftechnologicalchangefrombothnegativeandpositiveangles. Voicingconcernsforthefutureoftheplanet. Exploringthepossibledamagingeffectofnewtechnologywhentakentotheedgesoftheoreticalprobability. Usingtechnologicaladvancestoprovideafuturisticsettingforanadventurestoryorpoliticalnovel.
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Duetothevastdistancesinvolved,youhavetofindwaysofpreventingyourcharactersfromdyingofoldagebeforetheyreachtheirdestinationandtherearea numberofmethodsyoucanuse: suspendedanimation deepfreezing 'warp'speeddrivesforyourspaceship 'hyperspace'adimensionwheredistanceisreducedtozero a'generation'starship,i.e.amoving,livingcolonyinspace. Losingsightofthestory Sciencefictionhassomuchtoofferthewriterinthewayoftechnologicalbackground,exoticsettingsandpoliticalthemesthatitisalltooeasytolosesightofthe charactersandplot. Inordertoensurethatthesettingdoesnotswampthestory,followthesamerulesthatapplytoeveryotherformoffictionwriting:welldrawn,believablecharacters andastorythatiscarefullyplannedandplottedfrombeginningtoend. CaseStudies Boblovestoshock BobisamatureEnglishLiteraturestudent.Hisspecialinterestishorrorandhiswritingiscolourfulandimaginative.Unfortunately,heisinclinedtolethisimagination runawaywithhim,fillinghisstorieswithsomuchbloodandgorethattheshockeffecthestrivesforislost.Untilhecantonedowntheimagerybytakingamoresubtle approach,hewillfailtoachievehisfullpotentialasahorrorwriter. Sueenjoysagoodmurder Sueisagreatfanofmurdermysteriesandherclericaljobatthelocalpolicestationhasgivenheranexcellentinsightintopoliceprocedures.Drawingonthe knowledgeshehasgainedthroughherwork,sheisintheprocessofcreatingafemaleDetectiveInspectorandiscurrentlyplanningamurdermysterynovelfeaturinga backstorydealingwithsexualharassmentwithinthepoliceforce.
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Checklist 1.Wouldyourstoryallowareader'simaginationtoplayanactiverole? 2.Haveyouwrittenachapterbychapterplanofyournovel? 3.Haveyouchartedtheplotdevelopments? 4.Haveyouthoroughlyresearchedthebackgroundtoyourstory? 5.Ifyourstoryisbasedontrueevents,haveyoufictionalisedthecharacterssufficiently? 6.Isyourstorylinecredibleandwithintheboundsofprobability? Assignment Ateenagegirlisbabysittingforacouplenewtotheneighbourhood.Shehearsanoiseupstairs,investigatesbutcanfindnothingamiss,thetwochildrenaged3and9 aresoundasleep.Continuethisstoryline,includingthefollowingpoints: otherunusualeventswhichoccurthroughouttheevening anapparentlyinnocentexplanationofthenoise amoresinisterexplanationofthenoise thediscoveryofsomethingrelevanttothenoise theimplicationstothegirlandthefamilyofthisincident.
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ThinkingBacktoYourChildhood Formanynovicewriters,thedesiretowriteforchildrenspringsfromtheirenjoymentinmakingupstoriesfortheirownoffspring. Tellingbedtimestories Despitetheinfluenceoftelevisionandcomputers,bedtimeinacomfortinglylargenumberoffamiliesisstillsynonymouswithstorytime. Parentsstillenjoyreadingtotheirchildren,astheywerereadtowhentheyweresmallandwilljumpatthechancetodigouttheiroldfavouritesandintroducethemto abrandnewaudience.
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funlettingtheirimaginationrunriot. Theremaywellcomeapointwhenanadmiringrelativeorfriendurgesyoutowritethesestoriesdownandturnthemintoabookandifthisisyourintention,bearin mindthat: Familystoriesusuallyincludelotsoflittlepersonalasidesand'in'jokes. Thestoriesoftenfeatureincidentswhichareamusingonlybecausetheyhappenedtofamilymembers. Tellingstoriestoyourownchildrenisenjoyablebecausetheyunderstandandrelatetoyoursenseofhumour. Consequently,theverythingsaboutyourstorieswhichappealtoyourownchildrenmayholdlittleornointerestforanyoneoutsideyourcircleoffamilyandfriends. Broadeningyourhorizons Ifyouintendtowriteworkofapublishablestandardforchildren,youmustconsiderablybroadenyourhorizons. Beginbyexploringyourattitudetochildreningeneral.Ifyoulovethemallunreservedly,believingthemtobedelightfullyangeliccreatures,children'swritingis probablynotforyou. LookingatLifeThroughaChild'sEyes Inordertowriteeffectivelyforchildren,youneedtothinkandreactastheydo.Tohelpyoulookatlifethroughtheeyesofachild,considerhowatinybabyfunctions withinitsenvironment.Undernormalcircumstances,ababycriesforthefollowingreasons: hunger discomfort pain tiredness. Welearnhowtostopthebabycryingthroughacombinationofinstinct,trialanderror. Manipulatingadults Atthesametime,thebabyalsousestrialanderrortomanipulatetheadultswhopandertoitseveryneed.
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Itlearnsveryquicklyhowtostimulatethedesiredresponseinitsparentsandunderstandsalltoowellhowtoreactinordertoavoidcertainsituations.Ataveryyoung age,thebabywillbecapableofquitecomplexbehaviourguaranteedtodriveitsparentstodistraction. Itisatthispointthatthebabybeginstoformtheveryaccurateopinionthatadultsarehighlyirrationalcreatures. Thinkingrationally Childrenarerefreshinglydirectintheirthoughtsandactions.Incontrast,adultbehaviourcanappearextremelyirrational.Forexample,thepersonwhopraisesyoufor drawingapictureonablanksheetofpaperwill,fornoreasonimmediatelyobvioustotheaveragetoddler,punishyouseverelyfordrawingasimilarpictureonablank wall. Bythetimethechildiswalkingandtalking,itknowsthateverythingitdoeshasacertainriskfactorattachedtoit.Whenattemptingsomethingnew,itrunsa50/50 chanceofeitherbeingpraisedorgettingintotrouble. Pokingfunatauthority Onceachildhasbeguntoprogressthroughtheschoolsystem,itwillbegintorelatemuchmoretoslapstickhumour,asdemonstratedbytheenduringpopularityof comicssuchasTheDandyandTheBeano(publishedbyD.C.Thomson). Childrenadorestorieswhichpokefunatauthority,anaspectoftheirnaturewhichRoaldDahl,consideredbysometobethegreatestchildren'sauthorofourtime, shamelesslyexploited. Understandinghowitfeels Ifyouintendtowriteforchildren,youmustbeabletorelatetotheirantiauthoritarianemotions. Therewillbemanysignificantincidentsinyourchildhoodthatyouhavecarriedwithyouintoyouradultlife.Trytorememberexactlyhowyoufeltwhenthey happened,whatemotionsyouexperiencedandhowlongittookyoutogetoverthem. Itissurprisingjusthowmuchstayswithusintoadulthood,especiallyifwehavebeenatthereceivingendofparticularlyspitefulorthoughtlessbehaviour. Beingsmallandpowerless Theoneemotionthatissharedbyallchildrenisthefeelingofpowerlessnessinthefaceofadultsupremacy.
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Readwithawriter'seyebookswrittenfortheagegroupofyourchoiceandinordertoestablishthevocabularyandconceptsyoushouldbeusing,studyNational Curriculumreadingschemes. Ifyoucan,offeryourservicestothelocalschoolasavolunteerhelperandreadstoriestothechildren.Duringthesestorysessions,assesstheirreactionsbynotingthe followingpoints: Howsoondotheybegintofidget? Whichstoriesholdtheirattentionandwhichdotheyfindboring? Whattypeofstorydotheyenjoythemost? Whichstoriesstimulatereactionsandwhy? PlayingAroundwithIdeas Takeagoodlookatthelatestchildren'sbooks,particularlythosewhicharerecommendedforusewithintheNationalCurriculum.Youwillfindthattheydealwitha staggeringvarietyoftopics,rangingfromseriouslifestyleissuestofantasyadventures. Whenwritingforveryyoungchildren,youneedtousesimple,basicconceptsandfamiliarsituations.Astheirsocialskillsdevelop,
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humourplaysamuchlargerpartandincludesslapstick,puns,onelinejokesandwisecrackingcharacters. Oncethechildapproachesteenage,therangeoftopicsmatchesthatofadultmaterial,themaindifferencebeingthefastpacedstyle,vocabularyandattitude.The teenagenovelisarapidlyexpandingmarketforauthorswhohavetheabilitytoidentifywiththisdifficultstageofachild'sdevelopment. WritingforEducationalMarkets Writingforchildreninvolvesbothentertainingandeducatingthereaderandfornonfictionwriters,thereisavarietyofopportunitytodojustthat. Readingcomicsandmagazines Glancingthroughthewealthofcomicsandmagazinesonthenewsagents'shelves,youwillfindsomethingforallagegroupsandinterests. Newspapersandmagazinesoccasionallyfeaturepagesforchildrenandmaytakenature,craftoractivityarticles.Oneortwocomicshavejoinedforceswithnational organisationssuchastheBrownieswho,alongwithmanyothernationalchildren'sclubsandsocieties,producetheirownmagazine.Acombinationofspecialist knowledgeandtheabilitytowritewiththeclarityrequiredforayoungreadershipcouldleadtoawidevarietyofoutletsfornonfictionarticles. Educatingyoungreaders Bothnonfictionandstorybooksforchildrenofferenormousscopetoteachyoungreadersabouttheworldaroundthem.Thefollowingisjustatasteofwhatcanbe covered: conservationandecologicalissues engineering geography history informationtechnology manufacturing science. Bearinginmindtheexpertiserequired,theeducationalbookmarketcanbequitedifficulttobreakinto.
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MaoliosaKelly,LiteraryPublisherofHeinemannEducationalPublishers,admitsthatveryfewunsolicitedmanuscriptsareaccepted.Whilstallherauthorsare commissioned,sheispreparedtolookatunsolicitedmanuscriptsbuttheymustmeetthefollowingrequirements: Bepitchedattherightlevel,57yearolds. Communicateconvincinglywiththeintendedreadership. Authorsshouldhavesomeexperienceofworkingwithchildren. Authorsshouldfamiliarisethemselveswiththepublisher'soutput. Ifpossible,authorsshouldtalktothepublishertofindouttheirneedsandinterestsforthebookstheypublish. Beingpoliticallycorrect Politicalcorrectnessisanincreasingfeatureofallwalksoflifeandaswithallgoodintentions,thebasicideabehindtheprincipleissound.Initsbestform,political correctnessaddresses,amongotherthings,theattitudesandconceptswhichgiveriseto: racism sexism prejudiceagainstpeoplewithdisabilities theconceptthatatwoparentfamilywith2.4childrenissuperiortoanyother classprejudice. Whatarelittleboys/girlsmadeof? Untilrelativelyrecently,mostchildren'sfictiontraditionallydepictedboysastheleaders,solvingmysteries,forminggangsandgenerallyrunningtheshow.Girlswere grudginglyallowedtotagalonginordertoproviderefreshmentsandberescuedwhenevernecessary. Anystrongwilledgirlswhounderstoodanythingmechanicalorwereinanywaysportywerelabelled'tomboys'andneverquitefittedinwiththerestofthegroup. Schoolstorieshavealwaysbeenandstillareimmenselypopularbuttheschoolfeaturedwasinvariablytheboardingvarietyandverydefinitelyuppermiddleclass. Changingtimes Timeshavechangedandthankfully,attitudeshavemovedon.Black,
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Asianandforeigncharactersarenolongerportrayedascaricatures,whilsttoughgirlsandsensitiveboysareperfectlyacceptable. Today'spublishersacknowledgethatnoteverychildcomesfromatwoparentfamilyandthatgoodnessanddecencyarenotnecessarilycommensuratewithawhite, middleclassbackground. Theinfluencethesepositivechangesinattitudehavehadonchildren'sfictionshouldnotbeunderestimated. Reflectingtoday'slifestylesandvalues Modernchildren'sfictionreflectstoday'slifestylesandvaluesinafastmoving,multiculturalsociety. Inanageofinteractivecomputersandtheinformationsuperhighway,youngstershaveneverbeensowellinformed.Thechildren'sauthoroftodaykeepsabreastof thelatesttechnogicaldevelopments,isuptodatewithcurrentschoolsystemsandrelatestomodernattitudesandconcepts. AnthropomorphisingAnimals Atfirstglance,'anthropomorphising'orhumanisinganimalcharacterswouldappeartobetheidealwaytocaptureandholdachild'sattention. Changeallthecharactersinyourstorytocuddlyanimals,dresstheminpicturesqueclothes,placetheminacountrysettingandyoucanforgetallaboutmodern technology,thekidswilllovethemtobits. Assumingaparentalrole Anthropomorphisedanimalsdo,itistrue,haveinstantappealbuttheyalsoperformavarietyofotherfunctions.Theycanbe: adultsthatbehavelikechildren childrenwithcapabilitiesfarexceedingtheiractualage naughtytomakeamoralpoint ametaphorfortheirhumancounterpart. Havingyouranimalplayingthepartofasillyadultofferstheyoungreadertheopportunitytofeelsuperiorandadopttheparentrole.Thenaughtyanimalcangetintoall sortsofscrapesfromwhichithastoberescued,makingamoralpointintheprocess. Youranimalcharactermay,however,beachild.Inthiscase,itusuallyhasskills,commonsenseandabilitiesfarbeyonditstrueage
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butbecauseitisananimal,thisappearsperfectlyacceptable. Animalcharacterscanalsobeusedtoportrayfrighteningorthreateningconcepts.Themostfamiliarexamplesare,perhaps,thethemesusedintraditionalfolktales suchasthethreelittlepigsandthebigbadwolf.Themoralmessagesarealwaystherebutaremorepalatablewhendeliveredbyanimalsratherthanpeople. Appealingtoolderchildren Thereisnoagelimitforanthropomorphisedanimals.BookslikeWatershipDownaimedatyoungteenstoadultshaveaverypowerfuleffect.Theanimalsocietythey portrayisametaphorforitshumancounterpartandassuch,complexissuescanbedealtwithinawaywhichwillbereadilyabsorbedbyyoungerreaders. WritingaboutChildren Attitudesinchildren'spublishinghavechangeddramaticallyoverrecentyears.Althoughanimalstoriescontinuetobepopular,themajorityofchildren'sbookstoday haveachildastheircentralcharacter. Solvingaproblem Inthesamewaythatconflictisanessentialingredientinadultfiction,givingyourcentralcharacteraproblemtosolveisthemainconceptbehindanychildren'sstory. Thebasicformulawhichcanbeappliedtochildren'sfictionis: characterproblemsolution
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Theirmainfunctionisusuallytoperformtasksthatcannotbehandledbythechildcharacters,likeoperatingheavymachineryorwritingcheques,toprovidethe humourortoberescuedasnecessary. Theadultcharactermayalsoprovidetheproblemtobeovercomebutisrarelyofmuchpracticaluse.Childrenneedtobeabletorelatetothecharactersintheir storiesandallowinganadulttotakecontrolistantamounttosellingouttotheenemy. WritingPictureBooks Picturebookspresentawholenewsetofchallenges.Thepicturesmayperformavarietyoffunctions,dependingonthetypeofbook.Theycan: telltheentirestorywithoutanytextatall provideaninteractivedimension provideaneducationalelement addtothetone(humorous,frightening,excitingetc.) complementthestory. Inpicturebooksfortheveryyoung,itshouldbepossibleforthechildtounderstandwhatishappeningpurelyfromthepicturesalone. Movingupinage,theillustrationsshouldcomplementthestoryline,addingdepthanddimensiontothestoryandhelpingtobringthecharactersalive. Findinganillustrator Itisnotagoodideatodrawthepicturesyourselfunlessyouareatrainedillustrator.Iftheideaforyourpicturebookisstrongenough,apublisherwillfindasuitable illustratorforyou. Becausetheillustrationsaresoimportant,thismaytakesometime,possiblyyearsratherthanmonths.Duetotheskillandtimeinvolvedinillustration,theartistoften receivesahigherpaymentthantheauthor. Ontheplusside,picturebooksaresoexpensivetoproducethatifyourmanuscriptisaccepted,youcanbesureofthepublisher'scommitmenttoyouandyourwork.
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CaseStudies Vicentertainshisgrandson Vicisaretiredjournalist.Hiscolumnraninthelocalpressforovertwentyyearsbutnowhehastimeonhishands,hewouldliketotryhishandatwritingforchildren. Heusedtomakeupstoriesforhisownchildrenandenjoysretellingthemnowtohissevenyearoldgrandsonbutrecentlynoticedthechild'sattentionwandering. Whenquestioned,theboyconfessedthathefoundthestoriesoldfashionedandsaidhewouldratherbeplayingcomputergames. Bentriesanexperiment Benisascienceteacheratalargecomprehensiveschool.UtilisinghisknowledgeofschoolsystemsandtheNationalCurriculum,hedevisesaplotinwhichagroupof childrenworkingonaclassprojectmakeanamazingscientificdiscovery.Theyshowtheirteacherwhopromptlytakesallthecreditandthechildrenhavetocombine forcestoprovetotheschool'sheadthattheyarethetrueinventorsoftheformula.ThevocabularyiscorrectlypitchedandastheyarebasedonBen'sownpupils,the charactersareveryrealistic. Checklist 1.Haveyouidentifiedtheagegroupforwhichyouwishtowrite? 2.Isyourvocabularyappropriate? 3.Isyourstorytoldfromachild'sperspective? 4.Doesyourstoryreflectmodernattitudesandlifestyles? 5.Willyourstoryappealtotoday'schild? 6.Doyourchildcharacterssolvetheproblemthemselves? Assignment Wehaveallexperiencedsimilarincidentstothoselistedbelow: Yoursiblinggotapresentandyoudidn't. Yougotapresentandyoursiblingdidn't. Youwonaprize. Achildhoodillnesscausedyoutomissatreat.
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SeeingYourWorkinPrint SurveysconductedbyboththeWorkers'EducationalAssociationandadulteducationauthoritieshaveshownthatover90percentofstudentsenroloncreative writingcourseswiththeintentionoflearninghowtowriteforpublication. Unfortunately,theharshrealitiesofthepublishingworldcan,forsome,comeasaterriblycruelshock. Meetingthepublisher'srequirements Creativityis,ofcourse,avitalingredientbuteventhemostgiftedwriterwillfailintheirbidtoachievepublicationiftheyareunabletofulfilcertaincriteria.For example,themajorityofnewspaperandmagazineeditorsexpectthemanuscriptyousendthemto: betypewrittenorwordprocessedindoublelinespacingononesideonlyofwhiteA4paper bewrittentothespecifiedlength coverpreviouslyagreedsubjectmatter haveabeginning,middleandanend arrivebyanagreeddeadline. Thewriterwhofulfilstheserequirementsandcontinuestodosoagainandagainistheonewhowillconstantlyfindmarketsfortheirwork. Conversely,thewriterwhoproducesworkofexceptionalcreativitybutfailstocomplywiththeabovecriteriawillusuallymeetwithrejection. Findingtherightmarket Thefollowingmagazinesusuallywelcomegood,reliablecontributors:
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club company'inhouse' religious school specialinterest. Usefulmarketinformation,adviceonwritingtechniquesandnewsofdevelopmentsinthepublishingworldcanbefoundinanumberofwritingmagazines.Subscription addressesarelistedattheendofthebook. PlaywritingforYourLocalDramaGroup Itisnotoriouslydifficultfornewplaywrightstogettheirworkperformedinthelegitimatetheatrebutifyouareluckyenoughtohavearepertorytheatreinyourlocality, keepaneyeoutforschemesdesignedtoencouragenewauthors. RegionalArtsCouncilsoccasionallysponsorcompetitionsanddramaprojectsandoneortwoleadingplaywrightsrunschemesforyoungwriters.Itisworthkeeping youreyesandearsopenforscriptwritingprojectsinyourarea. Workingwithyourlocaldramagroup Onewayyoumaybeabletoseeyourplaysperformedisbycontactingyourlocalamateurdramaticcompany. Publishedplaysaresubjecttoperformingrightspaymentsandthisisanexpensemanyamateurgroupscanillafford.Havingatameauthorwhocankeepthem suppliedwithimaginativescriptsis,therefore,ahugeassetandprovidesthewouldbeplaywrightwithavaluabletrainingground. EnteringCompetitions Competitionsofferenormousopportunitiesforwritersineveryfieldofwritingbutperhapsmostparticularlyinthewomen'smagazinemarketwhere,formanywinners, theycanbethefirststeptowardsacareerasanovelist. Competitionsareregularlylistedinthewritingpressandoftenlevyalegitimateentryfeeofbetween1and5,butbeawarethatsomeadvertisements,particularlyin nationalnewspapers,canbemisleading.
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Payingforprizes Poetsfinditespeciallydifficulttofindapublishingoutletfortheirwork,soitisnotsurprisingthattheycanfallvictimtounscrupulousadvertisers. Theprizeispublicationinananthologywhichthesocalled'winners'areinvitedtopurchaseforanythingfromaround12upwards.Knowingthatfewwriterscan resisttheopportunitytoseetheirworkinprint,thecompetitionorganiserscanbesureofreceivingatleastoneifnotmoreordersfromeachentrant.Thebook,ifit evermaterialises,isgenerallypoorlyproducedandcontainsfewpoemsofanyliterarymerit. Thewriters'magazineWritersNewshasmountedacampaignagainstthesecompetitionsandrefusestofeatureadvertisementsforthem.AccordingtoeditorRichard Bell,competitionwinnersshouldexpecttoreceiveacomplimentarycopyofanyanthologycontainingtheirworkorifthisisnotpossible,itshouldatleastbeavailable inthelibrary. Selectingthesensibleoption Thereare,however,plentyofreputablebodiesrunningcompetitionswhich,dependingontherules,conditionsandtheprizeonoffer,mayopenusefuldoorsforthe winningauthor. VanityPublishing Despiteallthewarningsregularlygiveninthewritingpress,noviceauthorsarestillpersuadedtopartwithmoneyinordertoseetheirworkpublishedinbookform. Payingforpublication Thepriceforthisdubiousprivilegemaystartatfourfiguresandcanescalatebeyondyourwildestimagination.Horrorstoriesincludetalesofpeoplesellingtheirhomes andeverythingtheyowninordertopayforsomethingthatis,asfarasthecommercialbookworldisconcerned,completelyworthless. Ifyouaredrivenbycountlessrejectionsfromlegitimatepublishinghousestoinvestigatetheworldofthevanitypublisher,beawarethat: 1.Theirincomeisderivedfrombeingpaidtoproduceabook.Oncethispartofthebargainisfulfilled,theyhavenoneedtowasteanyexpenditureonmarketing.
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2.Vanitypublishersareundernoobligationtodistributethebookandrarelyhavedistributionoutlets. 3.Booksproducedbyvanitypublishersusuallylookunprofessionalandareeasilyidentifiedbybookretailerswhowillhavelittleinterestinorderingthem. 4.Thepublishedbooksarelegallythepropertyofthepublisher.Anypaymentsyoumakearepurelytocoverthecostofproduction. 5.Rememberthegoldenrulepublisherspayyou. SelfPublishing Selfpublishingdiffersfromvanitypublishinginthattheauthorsetsupandcontrolsthepublicationandmarketingoftheirbook. Thisinvolvespayingaprinter,findingretailoutletsandhandlingallthedistributionandpublicity.Itis,therefore,imperativethatbeforeyouembarkontheexpenseof publishingyourownbook,youarequitesurethatthereisamarketforit. Findingagapinthemarket Themajorityofsuccessfulselfpublishedbooksarenonfictionandinvariablyfillagapinthemarket. Forexample,yourbusinessmayinvolvetravellingaroundthecountrybutasyouworkforyourself,yourbudgetmaybeverytight.Perhapsyouhavebuiltupa personaldirectoryofB&Bestablishmentsofferingexceptionallygoodvalueformoney.Somanyofyourcolleaguesasktoborrowyourdirectorythatyourealiseit haspotentialasasaleablecommodity.Youobtainquotesfromlocalprintersandchoosetheonewhichwillgiveyouthebestresultatarealisticprice. Theadventofdesktoppublishinghashelpedtobringproductioncostsdown,sothismaynotbetooprohibitive,butdistributioncanstillbeaproblem.Retailoutlets areunenthusiasticabouttakingselfpublishedbooks,soyoushouldconsidersettingupamailorderoperation.Advertiseintheappropriatetradepressandproviding youdonotexpecttheprojecttomakeyoueitherrichorfamous,itcanprovetobeaverysatisfyingexercise. Sellingyouridea Beforeyouembarkontheexpenseofpublishingyourownnonfictionbook,however,itisworthtryingaprofessionalpublishinghouse.
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Ifyourideaisgoodenoughandyouareconvincedthatthereisamarketnicheforit,thenyourfirststepshouldalwaysbetocontactasuitablepublisher.Market researchisessentialinordertohelpyoufamiliariseyourselfwiththestructureandlengthofsimilarbooks.Trytofindaseriesintowhichyourtopicwillfit,thenwritea chapterbychapteroutlinealongthelinesillustratedinFigure10. Whenyouaresurethatyouhavesufficientmaterialtosellyouridea,makealistofsuitablepublishersandtelephoneorwriteaninitialenquiryletteraskingifthey wouldbepreparedtoconsideryourproposal. Iftheideaisstrongenough,youwillbeaskedtosubmityourwrittenoutlinebasedonthepublisher'shousestyle.Reputablepublisherswillusuallyrespondquite quickly,probablywithin46weeks.Anylongerthanthreemonthsandyoushouldchasethemupandifnecessary,requestthattheoutlinebereturnedtoyou(see Figure11). WritingaSynopsis Asynopsisofanovelisaresumofthebook'sstory.Leadingliteraryagent,BlakeFriedmann,issuesclearguidelinestoauthorsonhowtowriteatreatmentor synopsis.Theyrecommendthatitisbrokendownintofoursections: 1.Introductionabriefsellingstatementaboutthebook. 2.Characterbiographiesshortbiographiesofallofthemajorcharacters. 3.Statementofintentwhyyouwantedtowritethenovelandwhetheritisbasedonafactualevent. 4.Synopsisortreatmentastepbystepstorylineofthenovel. Theguidelinesexplainthatthesynopsisconveystheemotion,notjusttheplot,bymakingitclearwhatmotivatesyourcharactersandtheimpactofeventsonthem. Whilstalloftheaboveinformationshouldbeincluded,itisimperativethatyoukeepyoursynopsisasbriefaspossible.Remember,itspurposeistocapturea publisher'sattentionandholditrightthroughtotheend. Givingawaytheending Onerecurringerrorthatirritatespublishersandagentsbeyond
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TheSalesman'sB&BDirectory INTRODUCTION CHAP1:CHEAPANDCHEERFULACCOMMODATION Under15pernight Offroadparking Neartowncentre Closetomotorway CHAP2:THREESTARANDOVER Ensuiterooms FullEnglishbreakfast Specialdeals Extrafacilities CHAP3:LONGHAULSTOPOVERS Lesserknownroutes Farmhouses Warmwelcomes Valueformoney CHAPTER4ONWARDS:continueinthisformatuntilthelastchapterwhich,forthistypeofbook,wouldbe alongthefollowinglines: COSTSANDRECORDKEEPING Comparisonofcostsandservices Expenses,recordkeeping,taximplications Maps Usefuladdresses Glossary Index
Fig.10. Sampleoutlinefornonfictionbook.
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ADDRESSANDTELEPHONENUMBER date.......... ASmith Publisher LondonW1 DearMrSmith FollowingourtelephoneconversationinJanuarythisyear,asrequestedIsubmittedanoutlineforTHE SALESMAN'SB&BDIRECTORY. ItisnowthreemonthssinceIheardfromyouandIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldletmeknowwhetheryouare interestedinpublishingthebook.Ifnot,IwouldappreciateitspromptreturnsothatImaysubmititelsewhere. Thankingyouinanticipation. Yourssincerely AWriter
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beliefisthesynopsiswhichpromiseswonderfulthingsbutfinisheswithsomethinglike:
'Ifyouwanttoknowwhathappensnext,you'llhavetoreadthebook!!!!'
Sadly,theywon't.They'llprobablyjustheaveasighandsendyourmanuscriptbackinthenextavailablepost. Yoursynopsisisyoursalespitchandshouldcontainallyourmanuscript'sstrongestpoints,includingdetailsofasatisfactoryending. PresentingYourManuscript Thereisnoabsoluteruleaboutwhatyoushouldsendtoeitherabookpublisheroranagentbutunlessstatedotherwise,itisgenerallyasynopsisandthreechapters. Submittinguserfriendlymanuscripts Oneofthefirstquestionsstudentsonmycreativewritingcoursesaskis'DoIneedatypewriter?' Handwrittenmanuscriptsarealmostalwaysreturnedunreadso,ifyouwanttobepublished,yourmanuscriptmustbetypewrittenindoublelinespacingononeside onlyofA4sizedwhitepaper. Theequipmentyouuseisamatterofpersonalpreferencebutifyouintendwritingformainstreammagazinesornewspapersonaregular,professionalbasis,thenbeing userfriendlytakesonawholenewmeaning. Unlessotherwisestated,fictionmanuscriptsshouldstillbesubmittedonA4whitepaperasabove,butonceashortstoryhasbeenacceptedforpublicationyoumay beaskedtoresubmititondisc.ItisrarelyfinanciallyviableforyoutopaysomeonetotranscribeitforyousotheinitialoutlayforaPCcanproveanexcellent investment. Technophobicarticlewriters,ontheotherhand,canfacerealproblemsasmagazinesandnewspaperstendtolooktoelectroniccommunicationfortheirtopical features.Manymainstreampublicationsnowaskwouldbecontributorstofaxthemwithanideaandaworkingoutline,ratherthanpostingacompletedmanuscript. RegionalnewspapersmaywellrequestthatcontactismadeviaEmail. Whilstthereisstillplentyofopportunityinthehugerangeof
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smaller,specialisedpublications,ambitiousarticleandshortstorywriterscannotaffordtoburytheirheadsinthesandandignoretheimpactoftheInternetonthe mainstreampublishingindustry.Formoreinformationonwritingforthemainstreammarket,seemybookWritingShortStories&Articles. Removingstaplesandpins Neverusestaplesorpinstofastenthepagesofyourfictionmanuscript.Oneofthequickestwaystoannoyaneditoristowoundtheirfingersonspitefulfasteners. Anothersurefireirritantistheclearplasticfolder,whoseslipperysurfacecanbealmostguaranteedtosendapileofmanuscriptscrashingtothefloortheminute anyonewalkspasttheeditorialdesk. Thinkingahead Everyeditor,publisherandagenthasa'slushpile',apileofunsolicitedsubmissionswhichhavetoberead. Inordertoensurethatyourmanuscriptfindsitwayfairlyquicklytothetopofthepile,hereareafewsimpletips: 1.IncludeabriefcoveringletterandfrontsheetwitheachmanuscriptasshowninFigures12and13. 2.Numbereachpageconsecutively. 3.Headeachpagewithyournameandthetitleofthemanuscript. 4.Finisheachpagewith'm/f...'or'cont/d.'toindicatemoreistocome. 5.Endthefinalsheetwiththeword'End'oralineofasterisks. 6.Manuscriptsshouldbeposted,unfoldedinalargeenvelope. 7.Placebookmanuscriptsunboundinacardfolderorbox. 8.Neverfastenyourmanuscriptwithpinsorstaples. 9.Alwaysattachsufficientpostagetocoverthefullcostofreturningyourmanuscript. 10.Ensurethatyourreturnenvelopeislargeenoughforyourmanuscript.
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ADDRESSANDTELEPHONENUMBER date.......... ASmith FictionEditor TheMagazine LondonW1 DearMrSmith Pleasefindenclosedashortstoryofapproximately1,000wordsentitled'Acceptance'whichIhopeyouwillfind suitableforpublicationinTheMagazine. Ihaveenclosedreturnpostageforyourconvenienceandlookforwardtohearingfromyouinduecourse. Yourssincerely AWriter
Fig.12. Samplecoveringletter.
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ApproachinganEditor Oneofthemostfrequentdisappointmentsfornewwritersishavingtheirmanuscriptreturnedwithastandardrejectionletter. Therejectionitselfisdisappointingenoughbutauthors,keentoknowwheretheyaregoingwrong,longforafewpearlsofwisdomfromthepublishingestablishment. Givingencouragement Editorsaresimplytoobusytowritepersonallytoeveryonewhosendsthemamanuscriptbutifyourworkshowspromise,somewilltakethetimetoscribbleafew briefwordsofencouragement. Somehavetwostandardletters,oneanoutrightrejection,theotherrejectingthepiecebutaskingtoseeanythingelseyouwrite.Ifyoureceivethesecondtype,send somethingelseoffwithoutdelayyourtoeisinthedoor. Occasionally,aneditorwillphoneyou,eithertoacceptthepieceoraskifyoucanalteritslightly.Ifyouwanttoseeyourworkinprint,agreetoanychangesthey suggest.Youmaynotlikeamendingyourworkbutitwillbeworthitinthelongrun. Itisnogoodexpectingbusyeditorstoteachyouyourcraft.Itisuptoyoutodeveloptheabilitytoassessyourownworkandapproachtherightmarket,sobefore yousubmitamanuscript: Researchthemarketthoroughlytoestablishthepublisherslikelytobeinterestedinyourmanuscript. Findoutiftheeditorprefersinitialapproachestobeintheformofenquirylettersorispreparedtoconsidercompletedmanuscripts. Establishthenameofthepersontowhomyoushouldaddressyourmanuscript. Allowsixtoeightweeksbeforeyouwriteachaseupletter(Figure11). Takeanyeditorialadviceyouareofferedandactonit. Multiplesubmissions Untilrecently,sendingyourmanuscriptsimultaneouslytomorethanonepublisherwasfrowneduponbytheindustry. Now,however,publishersrecognisethathavingtowaitmonthsforananswercanbefrustratingandarepreparedtotolerateauthors
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makingmultiplesubmissionsprovidingthisisstatedinthecoveringletter. Lookingatitfromthepublishers'pointofview,bysubmittingyourmanuscripttothem,youareofferingitforsale.If,whentheyagreetobuyit,youtellthemyou've justsoldittosomeoneelse,theywillbejustifiablyannoyedthatyouhavewastedtheirtime.Thisisnotagoodwaytowinfriendsinthepublishingindustry. CopyrightingandSyndication Assoonasyoucommityourworktopaper,itbecomesyourcopyright.Youmaythenofferforsaleanynumberofrightsinthatworkforpublicationpurposes,e.g.: FirstBritishSerialRights(FBSR) foreignrights,i.e.French,German,Americanetc. specificrightsforasetperiod allrightsforallpurposes. Signingawayyourcopyright FBSRmeansthatthepurchaserhastherighttopublishthemanuscriptonceonlyinBritain.Thesameappliestofirstforeignrightsbutyoucanalsosellsecond,third etc.rights.Broadcasting,filmand,withthegrowthoftheuseoftheInternet,electronicrightsarealsoindemand. Themoretimesyousellamanuscript,themorecomplicatedthecopyrightprocessbecomesbutthinkverycarefullybeforeagreeingtosellyourworkonan'Allrights forallpurposes'basisasyouwillbesigningawayallownershipofyourmanuscript. Copyrightisacomplexandspecialisedfieldandifyouareatallconcernedabouttherightsyouarebeingaskedtosell,youshouldconsultanexpert. Gettinganagent CaroleBlake,jointmanagingdirectorofleadingliteraryagency,BlakeFriedmann,statesthatthemainadvantageofhavinganagentisthattheauthorhassomeoneon theirsidewhowillgivethemhonestcriticismthatwillimprovetheircareerprospects. BlakeFriedmannreceivesapproximately400unsolicitedmanuscriptspermonthbut,onaverage,takesononlythreetosixnew
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authorsayear.Likepublishers,literaryagenciesspecialiseinspecificpublishingareasandonceagain,marketresearchisimperativebeforemakinganinitialapproach. Asageneralrule,agentsdonothandleshortstoryandarticlewriters,whomaybebetterservedbyasyndicationagency. Syndicatingyourstories WithashrinkingUKmarketforshortstories,manywriters'trytheirluckabroadandareputablesyndicationagentcanlightentheloadconsiderably. Theywillsellyourstorytoasmanymarketsaspossibleallovertheworld,keeparecordofsalesandsaveyoubothlegworkandheavypostagecosts. Inreturn,ofcourse,theywilltakeapercentage,sobeforeyouhandoveryourmanuscripts,makesurethetermsareagreedinadvanceandinwriting.Reputable syndicationagenciesarelistedinTheWritersandArtistsYearbook. KeepingRecords Fromthedayyousendyourfirstlettertoaneditor,youshouldkeeparecordofwhenandwhereyousentit,whetheritwaspublishedandifso,howmuchyouwere paid. InformingtheInlandRevenue Oncepaymentsstartcominginonaregularbasis,itisimperativethatyouhaveaclearrecordofeverythingyouearnfromwriting. Bearinmindthatallpaymentsfrompublishinghousesareputthroughtheirbookssoevenifyoudon'tinformtheInlandRevenueaboutyournewsourceofincome, yournamewilleventuallycometotheirattention. Offsettingyourcostsagainsttax Youcanoffsetthecostofmaterialssuchaspaper,ribbons,inkcartridges,postageetc.againsttaxand,ofcourse,capitalexpenditure.suchasPCs,desksandfiling cabinets. Keepreceiptsofeverythingyoupurchaseandrecordallyourincomeandexpenditure.SuggestedformatsforrecordkeepingareillustratedinFigures14and15. ThereareanumberofusefulleafletsavailablefromtheInlandRevenueandyourtaxinspectorwillbepreparedtoadviseyouoryoumayprefertoengagean accountant.Shoparoundtoestablish
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howmuchyouarelikelytobechargedandremember,accountancycostscanbeoffsetagainsttaxandwillprovetobeaveryworthwhileexpensewhenyourwork reallybeginstotakeoff. FindingSupportfromOtherWriters Writing,weareconstantlytold,isaverylonelyoccupationeventhoughtheimagethispresentsisactuallyveryromantic. Thereyouare,justyou,yourwordprocessorandyourcharacters.You'velockedthedoor,takenthephoneoffthehookanddisconnectedthedoorbell.Thereis nothingtopreventyoufromproducingamasterpiece.Unfortunately,youcan'tthinkofawordtowrite. Confrontingwriters'block Itisarguablewhetherwriters'blockactuallyexistsorwhetheritissimplybroughtaboutbytheprovisionofperfectconditionsinwhichtowrite. Likeourfictionalcharacters,wewillstrivetoovercomeanyobstacleinordertofulfilourambitionstoseeourworkinprint.Removethoseobstaclesandwe immediatelyyearnfordistraction. Welongtohavesomeonetotalkto,preferablyalikemindedpersonfromwhomwecangainsomepositivefeedback.Weneedotherwriters. Joiningawriters'circle Fortunately,helpisathandintheformofwriters'circles,conferences,seminarsandcourses. Yourlocallibraryshouldhavedetailsofwriters'activitiesinyourareaandwritingorganisationswillbeonlytoopleasedtoaddyournametotheirmailinglists. Societiesandassociationsforwritersarelistedattheendofthisbookbutforsomeexcellentonthespotadvice,herearesomewordsofwisdomfromestablished writingprofessionals: 'Ilookforastrongstorywithbelievable,interestingcharactersthatIknowIwillbeabletointerestapublisherin.Mostirritatingaresloppywriting,authorarrogance andincorrectassumptionsaboutthetrade.'(CaroleBlake,agent) 'Don'tjustsittheregetonwithit!'(PatriciaBurns,novelist) 'Ifyoudon'tenjoywhatyouarewriting,nooneelsewill.'(MartinaCole,novelist)
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Anthropomorphisation.Givinganimalcharactershumancharacteristics. Article.Afactualpiecewrittenforpublicationinamagazineornewspaper. Backstory.Backgroundstorylineorsubplotagainstwhichthemainactionisplayedout. Clich .Stereotype. Conflict.Problemsandemotionsprovidingtheobstaclestobeovercomeinaworkoffiction. Copyright.Thelegalownershipofpublicationrightsinapieceofwrittenwork. Dialogue.Conversationbetweencharacters. Doublelinespacing.Leavingablanklinebetweeneachtypewrittenlineonapage. Fiction.Amadeupstory,notfact. Flashback.Amethodofrevealingbackgroundthroughsnippetsofinformation. Genre.Theliterarycategoryintowhichyourworkfalls. Inhousemagazine.Publicationsproducedbycompaniesfortheiremployeescontainingitemsofnewsaboutstaffandchangeswithintheorganisation. Interaction.Howcharactersreacttothepeople,settingsandobjectsaroundthem. Lettertotheeditor.Letterintendedforpublicationonamagazineornewspaper'sletterspage. Location.Wherethestoryisset. Motivation.Thereasonsforacharacter'sbehaviourandattitudes. Mule.Someonewhocarriesconcealeddrugsthroughcustomsfordrugsmugglers. Multiplesubmission.Sendingthesamemanuscriptsimultaneouslytoanumberofdifferentpublishers. Narrativestyle.Usinganarratortotellthestory.
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Nonfiction.Fact. Outline.Flexiblestepbystepplanofamanuscript. PC.Personalcomputer. Piece.Anarticleintendedforpublication. Plot.Theplanofeventsrunningthroughastory. Policeprocedural.Acrimenovelwherethedetectiveisapoliceofficer. Politicalcorrectness.Therequirementthatattitudesandvocabularyinyourmanuscriptarenotoffensivewithregardtorace,sex,creedetc. Pottedhistory.Briefresumofacharacter'sbackground. Protagonist.Themaincharacter. Readeridentification.Charactersandsituationswhichareinstantlyrecognisabletoyourintendedreadership. Redherring.Cluedeliberatelyimplicatingthewrongsuspectinacrimestory. Selfpublisher.Anauthorwhopublishesandmarketstheirownbook. Shortstory.Aworkoffictionoflessthan10,000words. Showingnottelling.Usinginteractionratherthannarrationtodepictthesequenceofeventsinanarticleorstory. Slushpile.Collectionofunsolicitedmanuscriptswaitingtobereadbyaneditororagent. Stereotype.Afixedimageofspecificgroupsbasedonage,sex,race,religion,socialstatusetc. Stringer.Contributorofitemsofnewstoalocalnewspaper. Syndication.Tooffermanuscriptsforsimultaneoussaletopublicationsworldwide. Synopsis.Astepbystepresumofabook'sstory. Unsolicitedmanuscript.Amanuscriptsubmittedunrequestedforapublisheroragent'sconsideration. Vanitypublisher.Acompanywhichwillagreetopublishyourmanuscriptinreturnforpayment.
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AnswerstoAssignments
Chapter5SuggestedRewriteof'Showing'Not'Telling'Exercise Original Ithadbeenraininghardfordays.Waterstreamedfromtheguttersofeveryroof,pouringdownwindows,alongpavements,runninginfastmovingrivuletsalongeach road.Beneaththestreet,torrentsofwatergushedandgurgledbeneaththefeetofthepeoplehurryingalongtheshinywetpavements,pushingandshovingoneanother intheirhastetogetoutoftherain.Steelgreystormcloudsgatheredoverhead,meetingoneanotherheadoninpreparationforyetanotherdownpour.Itwasvery, verywet.(85words) Rewrite ItwasthethirdtimethisweekClairehasbeensoakedtotheskinonherwaytoworkandshe'dhadenough.Why,shewondered,didheavyrainbringouttheworst inpeople?Thewaytheypushedandshoved,itwasasthoughtheybelievedthey'ddissolveiftheygottoowet.Anxiously,Claireloweredherumbrellatopeerupat thesky.Moregreyclouds.Notahopeofabreakintheweather.(77words) Chapter6DatetheSlangExpressions 1.192030s. 2.196070s. 3.198090s.
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UsefulAddresses
BlakeFriedmann,Literary,TVandFilmAgency,3741GowerStreet,LondonWC1E6HH.Tel:(0171)6314331. TheBritishScienceFictionAssociationLtd,MembershipSecretary,PaulDillinger,1LongRowClose,Everdon,Daventry,NorthamptonshireNN113BE. ComedyWritersAssociationofGreatBritain,KenRock,61ParryRoad,WolverhamptonWV112PS.Tel:(01902)722729. CrimeWriters'Assocation,60DraytonRoad,KingsHeath,BirminghamB147LR. HeinemannEducationalPublishers,HalleyCourt,JordanHill,OxfordOX28EJ. NationalAssociationofWriters'Groups,TheArtsCentre,BiddickLane,Washington,Tyne&WearNE388AB.Tel:(0191)4169751. NationalUnionofJournalists,AcornHouse,314320Gray'sInnRoad,LondonWC1X8DP.Tel:(0171)2787916. NewPlaywrightsTrust,InterchangeStudios,DalbyStreet,LondonNW53NQ.Tel:(0171)2842818. RomanticNovelistsAssociation,ChairmanAngelaArney,43WiltonGardens,Shirley,SouthamptonSQ12QS. SocietyofAuthors,84DraytonGardens,LondonSW109SB.Tel:(0171)3736642. SocietyofWomenWriters&Journalists,110WhitehallRoad,Chingford,LondonE46DW.Tel:(0181)5290886. WomenWriters'Network,55BurlingtonLane,LondonW43ET.Tel:(0181)9940598. Workers'EducationalAssociation(WEA),LondonDistrict,44CrowndaleRoad,LondonNWl1TR.Tel:(0171)3878966. Writers'GuildofGreatBritain,430EdgwareRoad,LondonW21EH.Tel:(0171)732807456.
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FurtherReading
AslibDirectoryofInformationSourcesintheUK. 501Writers'QuestionsAnswered,NancySmith,Piatkus. ChambersTwentiethCenturyDictionary. CollinsElectronicEnglishDictionary&Thesaurus. DirectoryofWriters'Circles,availablefromOldacre,HordernsParkRoad,ChapelenleFrith,DerbyshireSK126SY. HowtoMakeMoneyWritingFiction,CaroleBlake,BoxtreeBooks. HowtoTurnYourHolidaysintoPopularFiction,KateNivison,Allison&Busby. HowtoWriteHorrorFiction,WilliamF.Nolan,Writer'sDigest. HowtoWriteStoriesforMagazines,DonnaBaker,Allison&Busby. ResearchforWriters,AnnHoffman,A&CBlack. Roget'sThesaurus,PenguinBooks. TheBloomsburyGuidetoGrammar,GordonJarvie. TheCraftofWritingArticles,GordonWells,Allison&Busby. TheHutchinsonConciseEncyclopedia,CenturyHutchinson. TheOxfordDictionaryofQuotations. TheWaytoWriteNovels,PaddyKitchen,ElmTreeBooks. TheWriter'sHandbook,Macmillan. WritersandArtistsYearbook,A&CBlack. WritingforMagazines,JillDick,A&CBlack. WritingforRadio,RosemaryHorstmann,A&CBlack. WritingStepbyStep,JeanSaunders,Allison&Busby. HowToBooksonSuccessfulWriting AwakeningtheWriterWithin,CathyBirch Copyright&LawforWriters,HelenShay. CreatingaTwistintheTale,AdleRamet. MakingMoneyfromWriting,CaroleBaldock. PublishingaBook,RobertSpicer. ResearchingforWriters,MarionField.
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StartingtoWrite,Marina&DeborahOliver. WritingaNonFictionBook,NormanToulson. WritingaPantomine,LesleyCookman. WritingaTextbook,PennyGrub&DanutaReah. WritingAboutTravel,Brian&EileenAnderson. Writing&PublishingPoetry,StephenWade. WritingandSellingaNovel,MarinaOliver. WritingEroticFiction,PamelaRochford. WritingFeatures&Interviews,ChristineHall(2nded.). WritingforPublication,ChrissMcCallum(4thed.). WritingforRadio,ShaunMacLoughlin. WritingforTelevision,WilliamSmethurst. WritingHistoricalFiction,MarinaOliver. WritingHumour,KenPearson. WritingReviews,CaroleBaldock. WritingRomanticFiction,MarinaOliver. WritingScienceFiction,Fantasy&Horror,ChristopherKenworthy. WritingShortStories&Articles,AdleRamet. Magazinesforwriters FreelanceMarketNews,SevendaleHouse,7DaleStreet,ManchesterM297WL. FreelanceWriting&Photography,ClarendonCourt,OverWallop,Stockbridge,HampshireSO208HU. TheNewWriter,POBox60,Cranbrook,KentTN172ZR. Writers'News,POBox4,Nairn,ScotlandIV124HU. WritingMagazine,POBox4,Nairn,ScotlandIV124HU.
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A accent,76,77,79 agents,117,120121,124,127 alien,99 animals,20,108109 anthropomorphising,108 atmosphere,14,4649,5152,56,5859 autobiography,2325 B background,28,3341,4445,4748,52,58,63,6668,81,84,8687,8990,92,98,100101,108 C characterisation,31,33,35,40,41,44,55,70,76,94 children,101111 comics,104,106 competitions,22,114115 conflict,41,4344,70,75,81,86,109 copyright,124125 crime,24,52,64,92,9496 D detective,34,92,100 dialect,76 dialogue,14,35,58,7072,7476,7879,8687 E editors: approaching,123 lettersto,2021,30,125 educationalmarkets,106107 F flashback,6667,69 frontsheet,121122 G ghosts,8891,99 H historical,24,5254,56,8687,99 horror,8891,98,100,115 humour,28,80,99,103104,106,110 I ideas,1214,16,18,68,105 illustrations,23,110 InlandRevenue,125,127 interaction,42,48,59,64 K killing,37,69,73,88,93,95,98 L letters: chaseup,119,123 covering,121,122,123 toeditor,2021,30,125 locations,2526,28,46,48,5052,56,86 M manuscript: presentation,113,120121,123 submitting,120121,123
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unsolicited,107,121,125 maps,5052,56 media,13,19,24,40,92 motivation,2324,33,35,39 murder,15,69,9192,94,98,100 multiplesubmissions,123 N nonfiction: article,1314,1618,19,2123,2627,29,106,120121 book,16,116 column,19,21,111 O openings,21,23,28,46 originality,16 outline,18,9496,117118 P pace,4748,51,5859,61,6566,6869,78,106,128 picturebooks,110 planning,94,100 playwriting,114 plotting,51,66,6870,74,78,81,83,87,92,9495,100101,105,111,117 politicalcorrectness,33,107 publishing: self,116 vanity,25,115116 R readeridentification,14,16,40,54 realism,16,33,40,44,49,51,53,56,68,74,7778 recordkeeping,118,125127 redherrings,94,97 rejection,113,115,123 rewrite,12,52,62,74 romance,15,34,47,65,80,8286,95,98 research: background,15,25,29,5253,86,101 market,117,123125 S sciencefiction,52,98 selfassessment,123 sex,34,45,8485,87 slang,7779 slushpile,121 stereotyping,31,33,45 storyboard,95 stringer,21 suspense,65,70,80,8890,95 syndication,124125 synopsis,117,120 T travel: time,99 writing,26 twistinthetale,95,97 V vocabulary,6566,7273,79,102,105106,111