OSA Sample Scholarship Essays

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Essay #1 Score: 4.0 For as long as I can remember Ive known what I wanted to do with my life. Science has always been a passion of mine, and medicine in particular has interested me for some time. Dedicating my life to improving the lives of others is very appealing to me. After ichigan State, I plan on advancing to medical school to become a physician. I believe this program will offer me valuable skills that cannot be taught in the classroom. !hroughout high school and college thus far I have taken a rigorous curriculum and maintained a ".# grade point average. During high school I was involved in a physician shadowing program called medical mentorship. In addition, I volunteered at Sparrow $ospital this fall in patient transport. I am very familiar with and comfortable in clinical settings. I am responsible, focused, hard working and easy to get along with. I participated in a Freshman Study Abroad program this summer and thoroughly en%oyed it. Studying in a foreign country was an e&perience unlike any Ive had. !he classes were challenging and thought provoking. !he city was breathtaking and I met many friends who I still keep in touch with. Although I plan on practicing medicine in the 'nited States, I believe that studying the differences between the (ritish health care system and that of the 'nited States would benefit me a great deal in the future. It would be a valuable opportunity for me to shadow a (ritish physician, and compare that e&perience to the clinical e&posure Ive had in the 'nited States. (y participating in this program I hope to eventually combine the best of both worlds into my medical education and eventual practice. I plan to learn valuable skills that will one day make me a better doctor. Essay #2 Score: 4.0 y academic and professional goals are one as I apply to American )eligious Studies *h.D. programs. I want to study in )ome, home of the religious heart of +atholicism, to ree&amine a tradition that shaped the imagination of my youth and continues to influence my approach to religious studies. I value the skills that studying in )ome would provide for looking to international religions for new ways of understanding religion in America. In graduate school I hope to study under Dr. ,name withheld-, who researches +atholic mysticism at ,name withheld-. y e&periences near the .atican will persist beyond ne&t summer to influence my research on American +atholicism under ,name withheld-s mentorship. I am seeking an undergraduate capstone e&perience. (efore freshman year at S' I spent thirteen months as a +ongress/(undestag ambassador in the 0erman cities of

OSA Sample Scholarship Essays Flensburg and $eidelberg, which included e&tensive travel to France, Swit1erland, Austria, and Denmark. From this rich period of personal growth I ac2uired fluency in 0erman, an identity as a global citi1en, and the skills to independently navigate life in a foreign culture. It seems appropriate to support my ne&t leap in life with an abroad e&perience that will reveal the directions in which I have grown since my e&change year, as well as provide a uni2ue conte&t for e&ploring the limits of my education before beginning graduate studies. Strengths that I will bring to my abroad e&perience include e&emplary leadership and social skills, refined through my service to +ircle 3 International. 4umerous leadership positions at its club, district, and international levels have trained me to unearth creative solutions to challenges, organi1e my e&periences in the community for the purposes of both engagement and reflection, and socially navigate among diverse personalities and power differences. !hese traits will allow me to succeed in diverse situations while studying abroad. Essay #3 Score: 3.875 A Summer in Spain +ollege is a time for new and e&citing e&periences as well as a time to e&plore diverse and innovative ideas. 5hat could be better than traveling to a foreign country to learn about their ideas, history, and culture6 I believe study abroad is something that every college student should do to help avoid ethnocentrism, to e&pand their hori1ons, and to appreciate everything the world has to offer. I am particularly interested in the summer program offered in Santander, Spain. y grandmother came to the 'nited States from (arcelona, Spain as a young adult to work and go to school. I have visited family in (arcelona several times and have had the opportunity to see some of the country on one family trip when we traveled from (arcelona down the eastern coast to the )ock of 0ibraltar. Santander, however, is in a part of Spain that I have yet to e&plore. It is one thing to see a country while on vacation, but it is an entirely different e&perience to live there for an e&tended period of time. I do not think it is possible to become fluent in any language without living in that country. 7ven though I have some significant e&perience with the Spanish language, I believe that studying in Santander would deepen my understanding of not only the language, but of the culture, the people, and their history. y immigrant grandmother worked as a realtor, helping Spanish/speaking people navigate the comple& process of finding and financing their first home in the 'nited States. She inspired me to consider making the Spanish language and culture an important part of my career. I am ma%oring in finance with a speciali1ation in international business8Spanish. Since the business college does not offer a program in Spain, and understanding the language and cultural aspects are crucial when doing business in any foreign country, I believe that this program would greatly benefit me in

OSA Sample Scholarship Essays my career path. I feel very strongly that I will be able to relate my e&periences in Santander to my academic and professional goals. Academically, it is very important to me that I continue studying Spanish. 0oing to Spain gives me the chance to learn in a native environment, and I do not think there is any better way to internali1e a language and develop fluency. I have a very strong love for the Spanish language, people, and culture. A summer in Spain will allow me to bring together all of my past e&periences and combine them with this new and e&citing opportunity. here is an undeniable advantage to living and studying in Spain9 to be submersed in the Spanish way of life is the only way to fully understand and learn about how the country impacts and is impacted by the rest of the world. 4ot only will I learn about Spain, but I will also come to appreciate other countries in the world from a different point of view. I will be able to apply my new/found knowledge to my entire life and the way I look at the world around me. 5hat could be more e&citing than that6