Story Outline: Name of Story TBD might call it H.E.

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Teta Charernsuk
pg.# Whats happening (Per page) What the scene looks like (Per page)
1. 1. Some background on the metal
availability situation
Technology as seriously made a
deficiency in the iron level making
it difficult to produce steel.

Scientist has to find out a way to
make aluminum more study
because of its abundance in the
Earth.

2. Scientist tries to find the discovery to
make aluminum foil sturdy
Have you come up with
something yet Jones?

Nope but I feel like Im getting
close.

How about you?

Dont know yet, waiting for the
right temperature.

3. Couple days later
Hahaha, I have found it. Jones!
come look at what I have
discovered!

What Simons!?! What have you
discovered?

Take a look at this.

Is this what I think it is?

It sure is.

You genius you! We are gonna
be rich.


1a. Pile of metal



1b. 2 lab partners working frantically in a
lab with a whole bunch of equipment and
stuff.




2a. Simons working at lab table


2b. Jones working at another lab table.



2c. Back to Simons



3a. Simons AH HA moment with flashing
lights and amazingness hold test tubes in
the air
3b. Back to Jones looking up in a
direction toward Simons

3c. Simons waving over Jones with a
huge smile
3d. Jones looking over Simons station
with a huge grin
3e. Simons with huge smile

3f. The two jumping and high fiving each
other


2. 1. Marketing Ideas
The partners go around to
technology places like Sony or
Nokia to promote their new
invention

1a. The 2 in front of a huge building
complex
- Then in an elevator


We are here to pitch out new
innovation that would allow your
company to finally manufacture
your new and improved
technology for a lot less.

How is that?

Takes out demo equipment to
show the new innovation

I suggest turning on the
ventilation it could get a little
smoky in here

Drops liquid onto piece of foil and
it instantly goes hard right before
the CEOs eyes

1b. The partners standing in front of a
projector with a small audience of deal
makers.



1c. Zoomed in scene of the CEO with a
questioned look
1d. Simons laying out some tubes and
other equipment onto the table

1e. Zoom in on a hand that flicks a switch

1f. Eye dropper with colored liquid
dropped onto a piece of foil

1g. CEO all wide eyed in amazement
3. 1. Deal is made with multiple companies

2. Scientist try to find others and make as
much of the liquid to defeat demands

3. Technology companies take aluminum
and make all their new electronics with
them.
1. Different logos of technology/electronic
companies
2. A large room with science equipment
and white lab coated people working with
different colored materials
3. Factory with a lot of frantic little workers
showing a line up of different stages of
manufacturing.

4. 1. Opening scene explains what has
happened over the years
- 100 years ago the advancement
of science and technology has
made it possible for people to
have assistant robots run by the
H.E.D program
H- Helpful
E- Electronic
D- Devices
and things have been running
really smoothly

2. Different Helpers
- E679: The main package does
everything a human could need
- L207: A gardening/outside
worker maintenance
- C753: Personal Chef
- S349: Shopping assistant
1. It would just look like an overview of a
city with grey buildings, a clear sky, and
some small robots










2. Drawings of the different Helpers on tv
screens
2a. A regular robot wearing maid/butler
like clothes in a house
2b. A flower pot robot with eight legs and
gardening supplies outside with flowers
2c. Regular fat square robot in the kitchen

- M820: Maintenance manager
fixes technology stuff like cars and
t.vs
- D027: a personal driver


Coming to a store near you!
2d. Short shopping bag at the grocery
store or mall, maybe both
2e. Wrench shaped robot with a built in
tool system in garage with bubble car

2f. Box shaped that shifts into an egg
shaped robot kind of like Eve from Wall-E
with hat a suit
2g. Blank panel with big bold letter
5. 1. The unveiling of the robots at the store
- Store clerk The H.E.Ds are
organized by which task they are
programed to do.
- Crowd starts shifting around the
store
- Family one looking at the main
package

OK Harlem, you take Haden and
go ahead a pick the one you kids
want

Big H which one are we gonna
get?

Which ever one you want little H.

We were one of the first families
to own an H.E.D
1. A view of the front of the store.
1a. A store clerk in front informing a large
crowd of people.

1b. Aerial view of people blobs

1c. A family with a chubby boy looking at
the robot on a shelf > price tag shows that
its like $1000 dollars
1d. A teenage brother takes a small kid
sister around the store to pick out a robot.


1e. Siblings walk hand in hand through an
aisle with the flower bot



1f. Blank colored panel with the saying
6. 1. Over the next 10 years the more
scientist discovered how to make/reuse
different materials for H.E.Ds they started
to become cheaper, and more affordable
for everyone.
2. Programs have also been extremely
improved
1. 4 sections of the page long ways
(across)
- Scientist in lab with chemicals
- Scientist in lab with microscopes
- Testing
2. People in computer lab
7. 1. Soon almost everyone was able to
afford H.E.D bots


2. Soon no one had to do many things for
themselves because we had the H.E.Ds




3. More and more satellites had to be
1.Different scenes of H.E.D bots all
around the town
Shopping
In the yard
2. People sitting on couch getting head
massage
- Taking out trash
- Cooking


3.. Just a bunch of satellites in space
sent into space due to the massive load
of responders by all the H.E.D bots.

4. Inside a control room, like the Nasa
space launch room. (Harlem)
3,2,1 launch.

BOOM PSHHHSH

We have another successful
satellite heading for extraction
point.



4a. Harlem



4b. Zoom in on a launch 4c. Back to


4c. Back to Harlem
8. 1. Meanwhile back at Harlem and Hadens

2. Harlem is heading off to the space
center

3. In the control room

- 3,2,1 launch.
*Clapping/cheering

Sir, I see a problem in the future
the people from the past had not
planned for so much interference
to be beamed to and from space.

Come talk to me about this in my
office.

Ok Sir.

You see this is a picture of the
satellites from a few years ago,
this is what it looks like today. The
past people only had this many.

What are you getting at Harlem?

I am not to sure but I feel like
something is going to happen due
to the massive load interference.

Well my best guess is for you to
do more digging in this, and dont
tell anyone until we are sure of the
situation.

I will try my best sir.
1. Boxy futuristic house

2. In the car with briefcase


3. large monitor with a view of a
spaceship with the satellite
3b. Group of workers cheering


3c.Harlem pulls boss to the side to talk




3d. Concerned look on bosses face



3e. Picture of bosses door
3f. Pictures the screen of the table
computer




3g. Questioned Boss

3h. Harlem



3i. Boss at table with serious look




3j. Harlem
9. 1. Back at home
Harlem starts to do research and
collect data about the interference
and the power of it.

Finds a really old article from the
past about a theory that is like his
hunch

I have a concluded that with the
continuation of advancing
technology more electromagnetic
interference could be a massive
problem and it could change the
Earths magnetic field. Not much
is known about the
consequences, it could be nothing
or it could be damaging to
mankind.

2. Back at the bosses office
You see this boss, they predicted
something, so Im not the only
one. I couldnt find anything else,
but the people in the past
predicted that we would be doing
this, we need to stop the satellites
before something
*Shaking, screens buzz out*
Oh no I think its happening sir, I
dont know of the outcome quite
yet!

Send everyone home sir, release
a message for everyone to leave
work, school, whatever Just go
home!
1. Harlem at computer
- A bunch of open windows







1a. A panel that shows this part of the
article









2. Bosses name plate
- Harlem at projector computer
wall explaining what he found.





Screen Buzzes out


- Concerned look Harlem



- Boss typing something up on
table computer


10. 1. Back at home
Haden! Are you OK?

Harlem!!! Is that you? Wheres
mom and AHHH!

Haden!, oh my god. E679 I
command you to stop.
1. Entering door, yelling.


-Arrives in kitchen when Haden
screams.

- Gets to her room, at door way
looking in at Haden and E679

You are no longer my leader.

Come on Haden we need to find
somewhere to go.

I know what happened *Harlem
and boss at the same time*

We need to find a way to stop
them.

Come down to the center.

2. In Garage
Ok, I need to remember how to
maneuver this vehicle. Buckle up
Haden, and call mom and dad to
meet us at the space center.

Opens Garage to only find that the
bots are destroying everything

- E679 Angry red eyes

- Zoomed in on Harlem taking
Hadens arm

- Walking down, with phone in
hand.




- Boss


2. In car with a like what is the best thing I
should do look.



2a. Army of demonic bots
11. 1. At space center
Mom, Dad! Haden

Sir, what has happened to the
H.E.Ds in this unit?

We had the prototypes that ran
on batteries and a control system
we could change, I just shut them
all down.

Harlem what is happening? Mom

The bots are under attack. The
Earth has shifted fields, the
magnetic field is different causing
a malfunction.

Whats is going to happen, can
we change it back?

Right now the bots are destroying
instead of helping even hurting
people if they wanted to. I dont
know if we could change anything.
I had a feeling this would happen
but I didnt get enough time to
1. Hugging fest


1a. Harlem and Boss



1b. Boss, with a battery in hand




1c. Questioned look on mom

1d. Harlem explaining what has happened
to his mom, hand gestures



1d. Scared expression on moms face


1e. Group looking out a window, at a
garden robot popping the tires of a parked
car.


figure everything out.

We need to find a way to stop
them, while not getting hurt, the
more time we waste in here the
more damage is being done

Wait the H.E.D bots here run on
batteries, the ones that everyone
one else has runs on self-serve
electricity, if we are able to keep
people safe while the power is off
throughout the city the bots will
eventually run out of charge.



1f. Harlem in the middle of the group,
mom, dad, Haden, and boss



1g. Light bulb over Harlem head, finger in
the air> Ah ha moment
12. 1. Hey boss, are you still able to send
those text and change the old-school
highway signs?

2. To be honest, I think so.

3. Text message
Attention citizens, as you may
know the bots have
malfunctioned, it was a mistake
made by the satellite team, we
have come up with solution of
shutting off the power in the city
and have the internal batteries of
the bots die. Make sure there are
no bots in your safe ground and
lock the doors. We suggest that if
possible people either make their
way to the space center if not
please find a safe place to stay
put. Now that the bots arent here
to help everyone will need to
reach into their deep memories
and remember how to provide for
themselves

2. Shocked and scared and lost
expressions on random peoples faces

1. Harlem Looking over toward boss



2. Boss with a thinking look

3. Shows different sections of the
message on different phones in different
panels

















2. A couple panels of a few random
people with expressions
13. 1. In the kitchen of the space center
Does anyone remember how to
cook? We cant just starve when
there is all this food around, that
would be the most stupid thing
1. In the kitchen
1a. Harlem in front asking the group



ever to happen in this generation.
Harlem

Do you remember mom? Haden

Let me take a look at what I can
work with.

Walks past some bread and
cheese
How about grilled cheese? and
*sees can of soup* tomato soup
like old times?

She cooks

They eat

They find blankets

They set up beds

They sleep



1b. Haden looking up at mom

1c. mom facing shelf


1d. mom by a table with bread looks for
cheese in fridge and sees like a can on a
shelf



1e. At the stove

1f. At a table with food

1g. Closet with blankets

1h. Little rooms with bunk beds

1i. They sleep
14. 1. They go out and see all the bots laying
around

2. They start cleaning up the pieces
talking about how they need to slow down
with technology and stuff and how it was
a good thing that they caught this
problem early on.

3. Last panel with a bot that has glowing
red eyes and says destroy

Title
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Robot over city