Filmfest 2014 Judges Comments On Videos

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1403Freest1 AWayofLife
Thiswasafun,highenergy,piece!Ienjoyedthe
initialgraphicsusedtoshowthetitleandsplitthe
shots,andtheeditingbetweenshotswastimed
wellandkeptthingsreletivelyinteresting.(Didyou
getpayedforadvertisingEmiratesAirlines?)Idid
feeltherewasalackofstoryordirectionyes,we
arewatchingadayinthelifeofthemain
character,yetitmostlyjustmotivatedmetoget
upoffmycouchandworkout,itdidn'treallygo
muchanywhereelse.Still,hadmeinterestedand
wasputtogetherwell!(Notsureifthemusicwas
copyrightfree,itwasdefinatelygreatmusic
though.)
1403Freest1 AWayofLife
Veryinteresting.Ifeellikesomeoftheshotswere
toolong,makingitalittleboring.Also,itdidn't
feelliketherewasmuchofastory.Withthese
kindsoffilms,itisimportanttohaveaflow:part
oneleadingintoparttwoandsoon.Yourfilm
couldhavebeeninanyorderandstillmadesense.
Thecameraworkwasverygoodthough.Check
thewindowsyourshootingthroughforraindrops
though;thatwayyoucan'ttellthecameramanis
inacar.
1403Freest2 ADayinBrussels
ThiswasextrafunformetowatchbecauseI
workedattheUSEmbassyfor4yearsasasummer
hireandrecognizedmanyofthespotsthatwas
showninthevideo!Asforthetechnicalsideofthe
videoitself,thoughtherewerealotofwell
selectedlocations,thevideodidn'tseemtohave
muchstoryordirection.Justacollectionofshots
perhapshavemoreofadirection(i.efollowing
someonethroughtheirday,ashevisitsallthecool
locationsinBrussels)ormaybeavoiceover
explainingabitaboutthecultureandarchitecture
ofbrussels?)
1405Freest1 TheWrongWaytoRaiseFunds
Interestingidea,butIdon'tfeellikethestorywas
veryclear.Ididn'tfullyunderstandwhatwas
happeningthewholetime.
1601Freest1 Brainstorming
Easystorytofollow.Thesoundlevelswereall
overtheplace,though.
1601Freest2 AussieKoalas
Veryfunny.Thesoundwasn'ttoobadanditwas
veryeasytofollow.Nicework.
1601Freest3 WICOR
Ithinkitwasverygoodatgettingthepointacross.
Thesoundwaseasytounderstand.Goodediting
workaswell.
1601Freest4 StayLow
Verygoodstoryandeditingjob.Ilikethe
simplicityofeverything:straighttothepoint.Nice
work.
2412Docume2 TheTruthaboutStereotypes
Youdidagoodjobaddressingstereotypes.I
appreciatedtheeasinessstudentsshowed
speakingaboutitandinsomecaseseventhe
abilitytolaughaboutthemselves.
Ididnoticethatsomedifferencesintheaudio
qualitybetweentheinterviews.Havinganextra
setofearslistentothevolumeofthedifferent
audiocliplevelsmayhelpcatchsomeofthelarger
volumedierences.
Theswitchbetween'studio'interviewand'manon
thestreet'styleinterviewsintheclassroomswasa
goodwaytoshowthatitisn'tjustsomethingafew
chosenstudentsfeelwhenbeingaskedtocomein
andspeakonthetopic.
Theclassroominterviewshelpedshowhowreal
theissuecanbe.Ididnoticethedifferenceinthe
audioandvideoqualitybetweenthetwotypesof
shots,thoughthatistobeexpectedwhen
shootingoutsideofastudio,havingabetter
microphoneorsomeportablelightstohelpwith
thelightingwouldhelptheoveralllook,soundand
feelofthevideo.
Goodjobandkeepupthegoodwork!
2412Freest1 Wolfman
VERYwelldone!Ilovehowyouracting,editing,
andvideostylesallworktogether.Thesound
qualitywasverygood,andthestorywaseasyto
follow.Nicework!
2412Freest2 Ric'sFinal
Iappreciatedthejokeaboutthebadlylitscenes.
Goodstory,easytofollow.Goodeditingjob.I
wishtherehadbeenmoresounddesignthanjust
thenarration,however.Itreallywouldhavemade
thefilminmyopinion.
2601Freest1 HowWeNeverMet
Goodstory,goodediting,andgoodvideo.The
lightingwasalsoverygood.
3605Freest1 10StepswithCulinaryArts
Veryinformational.Asahowtovideo,Ithinkit
wasmadequitewell.Nicework.
3605Freest2 CleanUp
Veryoriginal!Ithinkeverythingaboutthispiece
wasgood.Youhadprettygoodlighting,great
sound,andeasytounderstandstory/purpose,and
greatediting.Nicework.
3605Freest3 10StepBokehPhotography
Itwasaveryinterestingfilm.Thecamerawork
wasgreat.Whilethesoundwasgoodinquality,it
didn'tlineupwiththevideoforthesecondhalf.
Thenarratorsweredoingstepswayaheadofwhat
thevideowasshowing.Otherwise,thelighting
andeditingwerebothgreat.Goodwork,just
needsthatsoundfixed.
3605Freest4 10StepstoCollege
Greatnarrationandveryniceshots;however,
mostoftheshotswereheldtoolongandbecame
boring.Besuretocutearliernexttime.Also,just
atip,don'tletyoursubjectchewgumwhenon
camera.It'snotveryflatteringandcanbe
distracting.
4402Freest1 Meow
Cute.Easytounderstand.Nicebeginning,middle,
andend.Goodvideoworkalso.Overall,very
good.
4405Freest1 AlternateEnergyScienceFair
First,thePinksongmadenosenseintherewhat
soever.Second,itwasreallyhardtounderstand
thepeopleintheinterviews.Eitheryouneed
subtitlesorjusthaveanarrationinstead.Editing
seemedoddforthisfilm.Thecameraworkwasn't
toobadthough.Overall,Ithinkitneedssome
work.
4408Freest1 TechnologyinYourSchool
Besurenottousethesamecliptwicewhile
editing.Theinterviewswerehardtounderstand
andtoolong.Whenyouhavesomeonebeing
interviewed,don'talwaysshowtheirface.Cutto
somethingthatshowswhattheyaretalkingabout
it.Itwillmaketheinterviewsmuchmore
interesting.
4408Freest2 GlobalExpansion
Verywelldone.Thelightingisgreat,theaudiois
veryeasytounderstand,andtheeditingworks
reallywell.Awesomejob.
4463Comple1 KTVEpisode7
Greatjob!Alotoftopicsandsavingthebestfor
last!IamjustdisappointedthatIdidn'tlearnmore
aboutmobs,Iwastryingtogettipstobecome
beeratminecrathanmykids.
Youalldidgreat,involvingalotofpeoplegiving
morepeopletheopportunitytobeinvolvedthan
justanewanchorapproachofnewsinastudio.
Ialsowasimpressedwiththevideogamecapture
attheendofthesegment.
Youdidagreatjobinforminganddealingwith
Bullying.
Iamimpressed,youhaveagoodteam,creative
graphicsandalotoftalent.Onethingtoworkon
perhapswouldbeamoreequalbalanceinthe
volume.AttimesIhadtoturnmyvolumedown
forthemusicandthenbackupagainforthe
speakingparts.Ididnoticethoughthatyoudid
havethebaseballsoundwhenhehittheballas
thenarrationwasgoingandeachwasbalanced
wellandtherewasnowindnoisefromthe
outdoorfootage.Goodjob.
Keepupthegoodwork!
5601OriginC1 PlayStopRepeat
Goodmusicchoice.Veryskilledcinematography.
Dialogueiswellwritten.Veryinterestingidea.I
actuallywannaseethismovie.
1401Freest1 1401Freest1
Theidea,andwaythestoryistoldiscreativeand
thehumorbetweenthenarratorandprotagonist
isclever.Thoughtheaudioisextremelyquiet
whentheprotagonisttalksmakingitdifficultfor
theviewertounderstand,amicrophonewould
definitelyfixthisproblem.Alsotherewereafew
jumpcutswhichweusuallytrytoavoidperhaps
fillitinwithacloseupofaface,etc.
1401Freest1 TheProtagonist
Thisseemslikeagoodstory,buttheexecution
wasnotsogreat.Itisverydifficulttohearanyone
exceptthenarratorandthestoryisveryhardto
follow.Also,Ididn'tunderstandtheendingatall.
Finally,whenediting,makesuretowatchtheflow
ofyourfilm.Thisonewasverydifficulttowatch
duetooddcutsandalackofcontinuity.
1401OriginC1 HouseSale
Obviousskillinmodelingandcompositing.Good
ideatogowithanimation.Productcouldhave
beenmorebelievable.
1401OriginSF2 Rush
Thiswasaverycuteidea!Themusicworked
perfectlywithwhatwasgoingonbutcouldhave
beenlouder.Atonepointtheactorlookedatthe
camera,makingitanawkwardshot.Thiswasn'ta
trailersothebeginningscreenwasunnecessary.
Workongettingavarietyofcloseupsandwide
shotsandmixingthemtogethertohelpholdthe
audience'sattentionandshowmoreaction.The
fliptransitioninthebeginningwasdistractingand
unnecessary.
1401OriginSF2 Rush
GoodContinuitycleanexitsandentrances.
Somecamerashotstiltedabit,butotherwise
cameraworkwasgood.
Abitmorestorydevelopmentsothatthefootage
complimentsthemessage.Whatisthemessageor
feelingthestoryissupposedtoevoke
1401PSA601 Bullying
Scenarioandresultsareabitunrealistic.Camera
workisgoodasistheaudiolevel.Actorswere
namedattheend.Maybeadisqualification?
1401PSA601 psa
Wasmusicoriginalasrequired?
Unnecessaryzoomingandcameramovement.
Endtlesnotonscreenlongenough.
Whythetransitionswiththethreestudentsat
end?
Keepruleofthirdsinmindwhencomposingshots.
Continuityelevatordooropenasvictimexit,but
doorisclosedinnextscenewithbully.
1403Freest2 Brussels
Beautifulcamerawork.Whileitdidn'thavemuch
ofastory,Istillthinkitwasverywellmade.The
editingalsoworksverywellwiththemusicchoice.
Nicejob.
1403OriginC1 BrigandsAthletics
Reallyexcellentediting.Creativecameraangles,
greatcandidshotsofstudentswitheyecontact.
Musiccopyrightobtained?Veryenjoyablevideo.
1403OriginC2 BrigandPride
Soundcouldhavebeenmanagedbetter.Creative
ideabutoverbearingatpoints.Foleysoundcould
havemadethesettingseemlessquietandmore
real.Allinall,veryfunny.
1403OriginM1 Wyatt
Verycuteandalotoffun.Thevideowentvery
wellwiththesong.Onlyissuewasthatthefocus
wasnotverygoodandthesongwasoftennotin
syncwiththeperformers.
1403OriginM2 Candy
Thisisnotanoriginalmusicalpiece,pertherules,
thereforeshouldbedisqualified.
1403OriginSF1 Pizza
Icantellyouwereworkingwithdifficultlighting
butthewhitebalancecouldhavebeenbetter
adjusted.Addingmusicandsoundeffects(for
examplewhenthepowerwentout)wouldhave
enhancedthevideo,althoughthewhistlingatthe
endwasveryeffective.Gooduseofcloseupsbut
couldhaveusedafewdifferentanglesandatripod
forsomeoftheshots.Storyneedalittlebitmore
explanationbutgoodjobonacreativeidea.
1403OriginSF1 Pizza
Goodbeginningofthestorybutthemiddleand
endcouldusealilemoredevelopment.
Soundqualitywasgood,alittlebackgroundmusic
couldhelpwiththeemoonalimpact.
1403OrignC2 MeanProtein
Veryentertaningcommercial.Verycreative.
Soundwasstartling,butthatwasprobablythe
intent.Perhapsalowvoicesaying"Mean
Protein...instoresnow"wouldhavemadeitfeel
morelikeacommercialasmostproductscontaina
tagline,butthiswasaverywelldoneeffort.
1403PAS301 Hannah
Messageisseemsapparentatthestartislostat
theendwiththescrollingnoticetouploadand
sharepicturesviaawebsite.WasthisPSAcreated
byyouordidyouactuallyuseanonlineserviceto
doso?Toomanyblankframesatthestart(The
actualvideofootageforthepieceshouldbeplaced
between15framesofblackatthestartandfinish
tocreatethecorrecttime.).Thisisbasicallya
digitalstorytellingtypevideointhattherearejust
digitalpicturesplacedontheeditingtimelinewith
asomestopanimationforthetext.AddedKen
Burnseffectwouldhavebetterenhancedtheclip.
Theframesoftheentirecliparenotthesamesize.
1403pas301 Hannah
Toolong1m12sfromrstnotetolast.
IsthisaPSA?Seemsmoreappropriateasa
commercialorpromoforlimemango.com.
Musiccutsoff.Wasthisoriginalmusic?Didyou
readtherules?
NomovementofpicturesthinkKenBurns.
Moreeffectiveifcuttothebeatofthemusic.
1403psa302 Bam
NotaPSA;shouldbeenteredasacommercial.
Runningtimeof22sdoesn'tmeetminimum
requirementsofcommercial,noranyPSA
category.
Whysilenceunderproductpicture?Doesn'tt.
Goodedits,useofcoloreffects.
1403PSA302 BAM
ThisPSAisnot30secondsinadditiontonothaving
the15framesofblackatthestartandendofthe
clip.Themessageisspecific,targetaudiencenot
apparentandimpactnoneffective.
1403PSA302 BAM Only7secondsandnoclearmessage.
1403PSA601 Enjoylife
Endedabruptly.
Nicetitles,butwhyis"LIFE"inallcapswhen
otherswerenot?
Fastmoon/stopmoonclipseecve.
Closeupshotofclockwasoutoffocus.
Whyusetheclipoftheteamrunningtosideline?
Doesn'tfeellikeitbelongsinthespot.
1403PSA601 Inspiration
PSAhasaclearlytargetedaudiencewithan
appropriateandmeaningfulmessage.Theshot
compositionsandeditingarewelldone.PSAhasa
clearlytargetedaudiencewithanappropriate
meaningfulmessage.VeryAppleesque;nicely
done!
1403PSA601 wyatt
Verygood.Becarefulwithaudiolevels.Nice
cameraworkandeffects.
1405Freest1 1405Freest1
Ididn'tfullyunderstandthestory,Itseemedto
movefrombuyingaplaystation,tohacking,to
buyingdrugs?Maybe,sinceitwasastory,some
soundwouldbeappropriate?Orcloseupsofthe
objectsbeingexchanged.Themusicselectionwas
good,thoughtrytotransitionthemusicabit
smootheralso,tripodshotsaddastrongsenseof
professionalism.
1447Freest1 Reality
Thiswaswellshot,afunstory,andniceuseof
filters.Theslowmotion,color,andmusicduring
thesequencewiththeangelwasveryeffectiveat
makingherpresencesomethingspecialand
makingtheaudiencehaveapositiveassociation
withher.Whenshedies,eventhoughwejustmet
her,theaudiencedoesfeelanemotional
attachment.Andthebeginningandfinishing
establishingshotsmakeasolidbeginningandend.
welldone!
1447Freest1 Reality
Reallywellmade.Theeditingwasverywell
thoughtout.Thecameraworkwasgreat.The
lightinglookedwonderful.Ididn'tcompletely
understandtheending,butIstillthoughtitwas
great.Verywelldone!
1601Docume1 MassIncarceration
Goodchoiceofmusic,itservedasbackground
noisewithoutdistractingfromthevoiceover.
Therewasoneroughaudiotransitioninthe
beginningbutotherthanthattheaudiowasvery
clear.Ilikedthetextyouusedthroughoutthe
video,justmakesurethecolorofthetextdoesn't
makeitblendinwiththepicturebehindit.There
wastoomuchuseofpanningandzoomingonthe
pictures,itwasjumpy,distractingandsometimes
madethemhardtoview.
Thisdocumentarywasorganizedwellwithminor
mistakes.
Veryinformative,balancedandwellresearched.
Voiceoverisveryclearandwelldone.Itwas
smarttousethetechniqueofusingstatistical
infographicsinthebeginningandtowardtheend
ofthemovie.Thoughthegraphicswerenotthe
bestresolution,andpanningtheimagewas
sometimesquick,itcouldhavebeenused
throughoutthemovie.Whilemostofthepans
andmovementofthestaticimageswaswelldone,
careshouldbetakentomakesurethoughtabout
themovementhelpstellthestoryanddoesn'tjust
helppassthetime.Overallareallywelldone
piecethattellsanimportantstory.Greatwork.
Yourdocumentarywaswellorganisedandthought
through.Fromthebeginningitwasengaging.I
reallylikedthewayyoustartedwithan
introductiontothetopicbeforethetitlesequence.
Ialsolikedthewayyoustartedthebackground
soundtrackandthemooditset.Iunderstandthe
limitationscreatedbyroyaltyfreemusicandfor
themostpartthemusicworkswell.Iwas
wonderingthoughifperhapstherewouldbeaway
tousethemusic/soundtrackto
underline/emphasizesomeofthepointsyouare
sharing.Usingapauseinthemusicorslightswitch
ofmoodordynamicscouldhaveperhapsadded
somedramacemphasis.
Iwasimpressedwiththepresentationofthe
narration.Attimestherewereafewspotsitcould
havebeensmootherandothersperhapsatad
slower.
TwosmallthingsInoticedattheendwerethe
soundofamouseclickorkeyboardjustbeforethe
endcreditsandthesuddenendofthesoundtrack,
whichstopsbeforethefinalnoteiseitherfaded
awaysmoothlyorthesongends.Thosearesome
smalldetailstolookforintheposteditingthat
1601Docume2 Flight1549
Startedoffwithaintriguingbeginning,theaudio
usedgrabbedmyaenon.
Ireallyenjoyedtheanimatedfootageyouused,I
knowitishardtogetgoodfootagefora
documentary.Howeveryouusedtoomuchofthe
audiothatwasn'tyours,youdefinitelyneeded
morevoiceoverswithyourownresearch.The
voiceoversyoudidhavewerewellresearchedbut
hardtohear.At5:45yourepeatyourself,this
mistakecould'veeasilybeenavoidedifyouhad
proofedyourvideo.
Someofthemusicwastooupbeatfora
documentaryaboutaplanecrash.
1601Docume2 Flight1549
Excellentuseofrawaudioandgraphicsinthe
beginning.Voiceoverwasnoteasytohearovera
somewhatrepetativesoundtrack.Gooduseof
photographyatthetimeoftheplanecrash.Don't
beafraidtostartthescriptoverifthere'saslight
skipinthescript.Niceuseofsplitscreentoward
theend.Thiswasaninformativepiece,butthe
scriptandmusicweresoftandrepetativeattimes
whenyouwanttocaptureanaudience.Thetext
graphicsusedwerenotalwaysthebestcolor
schemetobeseenoverparticularpictures.
Overall,averycomprehensivelookattheevent
whichcouldbeevenbetterwithattentiontothose
smalldetails.
1601Docume2 USAirways1549
Ireallyenjoyedtheanimationsoftheflightand
thelanding.Havingwitnessedthisonthenews
whenithappened,itwasnicetoheartheresults
oftheinvestigationsandwhathappenedtothe
pilotandcrew.
TherearesomethingsInoticedthatIwouldliketo
suggesttoconsiderforfuturepresentations.When
usingaudiofromdifferentsourcesyoumaywant
toworkonthebalance.Theairtrafficchatterwas
muchlouderthanyournarration.Eventhe
backgroundmusicisperhapsatouchtooloud.
OneotherthingInoticedwasthequalityofthe
narration,therearetimesapoppingsoundistobe
heardandoncethereisevenabacktobackrepeat
ofthesamesentence.Takingalittlemoretimein
thepostproductionorhavinganothersetofears
listenmighthelpavoidthosesmallthingsthat
mighthappenwhenworkingonaproject.
Iappreciatetheworkyoudidandthetimethat
wentintothisdocumentary.Ifeelmoreinformed
ofwhathappenedandnowfeellikeIknow'the
restofthestory'
1601Featur1 1601Featur1_Bowser_Basketball
Interestingstory.Alittledifficulttocomprehend
duetosomebackgroundnoiseandmusicofsome
kindwouldhavebeenbeneficialduringthesports
stillscenes.Overall,excellentcameraworkand
heldmyinterest,particularlytheinterview.
1601Featur1 AndreBowserBasketballFeature
Reportersvoiceisclear,Iwouldsuggestadditional
rehearsalbythereporter.Moreinflectioninthe
reportersvoicewouldincreaseinterest.
Sometimesitseemedmonotone,especiallyatthe
beginning.
Frequentchangesofthecameraanglesduringthe
interviewkeptinterest.
Noaudiointhemiddleofthefeature.Iwould
suggestaconclusionorwrapupattheendof
interview.
1601Freest1 FilmBrainstorm
Ireallyenjoyedthisone.Youguyswerecreative,
energetic,andfun.Thoughtherewereafewsound
inconstancies(perhapstransitionthesoundclips
toprovideacleanersequence.)Igivea5onfun
creativity.3onsoundquality.4onshotquality.
Goodjob!
1601Freest2 AussieKoalas
Theideabehindthisvideowasfun!Though,the
soundwasinconsistentwiththesequence,and
voicevolumealteredsignificantly.
1601Freest3 WICOR
Ilikethefunstyleherethatcreatesacheesy,
funnyapproachthatsoverthetop!Itshigher
energyandpeoplecanreallyfeelthat.Theissues
thatdetractedfromthevideosubstancewas
primarilyaudio.ItissaidthatAudioismore
importantthantheVisuals,soassoonasyouhave
theaudiomixedeffectively(nocutoffs,lowvoice
recordings,andanattempttoreducenon
essentialnoise)thenyouguyswillhaveakiller
style.
1601Freest4 StayLow
Themessageofgratitudeisagoodonetopresent.
Toenjoywhatwehaveinthepresentmomentis
oneofthemostimportantfeelingstohave.
(Though,inmyopinion,doesn'tmeanyoucan't
aimhigh!Butthat'sjustme.)Thetitlesonthis
videowasgood,thevideoqualitywasgood,and
audioqualitywasgood!(though,themusicmight
havebeenatadtoopowerfulwiththesoftvoice.)
1601OriginC1 cloning
Graphicswerealittledifficulttoread.Niceediting
jobtocreatethe"clones,"butthecommercial
endsveryabruptlyandwithoutataglineorsales
pitch.
1601OriginC1 Cloning
Ideawasunderstoodbutnotportrayedwell.No
advertisingoftheactualproduct;nowaytogetit.
Cloningeffectwaspulledoffcleanly.
1601OriginC2 CombatBoots
Theshotofthebootsisanicetouch.Black
graphicsoveradarkbackgroundaredifficulttosee
andthetextoftheadisnotonthescreenlong
enoughfortheviewertoread.Thetaglineisvery
lightanditsoundedlikethecameramanstarted
laughing.don'tbeafraidtostartoverifthat
happens.
1601OriginC2 CombatBoots
Cheesytransitions.Higheraudiolevelsfor
dialogue.Shotofbootsbecameredundant.Laugh
attheendofthevideocouldhaveeasilybeen
editedout.
1601OriginC3 Recycle
Nicecameraanglesinthebeginning.Thebrady
bunchideaiswelldone.Allinallthiswasaclean
andcutecommercialforrecycling.
1601OriginC3 Recycle
Verycoolshotsoflegsandfeet.Cleancuts
throughout.Messagewasclearandmotivating.
Videocollageofdifferentpeoplewasan
interestingpartandwaswelledited.
1601OriginSF1 IllegalHomework
Alotofminorissueswiththisprojectsuchas
lighting,audio,andshakyshotswithbad
composition.Itwasnicetoseeavarietyofshots
usedforonescene,forexampletheshotsfrom
abovereallyaddedtothefightscene.Buttryto
workoncontinuitywhilefilmingsoyouwon'thave
touseasmanycrossfades.Greatjobtellingthe
story,usingvoiceoversandcreativeideas.
Howeversomescenescould'vebeendeletedsince
youdidgofiveminutesoverthetimelimit.Overall
Ireallylovedtheidea,thesurpriseendingandthe
specialeffects.Greatjob
1601OriginSF1 IllegalHomework
Thevideoisoverthemaximumtimelimitof7
minutesandwillscorelowbecauseofthat.
Nicespecialeects(re/smokeingym)
Goodcomposionformostofthefootage.
Continuitybetweenshotscouldbeimprovedbut
gooduseofavarietyofshots(conversation
scenes).
Storylineowedwell.
Abitexcessivewiththefightscene,probablynot
necessarytogetpointacross.
Nicesurpriseending.
1601OriginSF2 Stonehenge
Theintroductionlastedwaytoolong,therewas
toomuchblackinbetweenandyoushowedthe
titleandFamilyEntertainmenttwice.Thepurpose
ofanoriginalshortfilmistotellastoryinavideo,
everythingyoutoldtheaudienceinthetext
(besidesthetitle)shouldhavebeencommunicated
withouttext.Alwaysremembertoproofyour
videobeforefinishing,Ifoundtwospellingerrors
(genraanduncove).Soundslikeyouusedvoice
oversforthefirstscenewhichwasasmartwayto
makeyourselfaudible.Therewerealotof
unsteadyshotsinthefirstscene,butyoudida
greatjobmixingupyourwideandcloseupshotsin
thebedroomscene.Awesomejobusingthe
specialeffectsandsoundeffectstomakeitlook
supernatural.Verycuteidea,thebiggestissue
withthisvideowastheunprofessionalbeginning.
1601OriginSF2 Stonehenge
Cleverstoryideaandniceonlocationvideo
footage.
Titlesequencenicebutabittoolong.
Spellingmistakeuncove
Camerashotcomposioncouldbeimproved.
Talentedacngbythelilegirl.
Specialeffectsweregoodandaddedinterestto
thevideo.
1601PSA301 SaggingPants
PerthePSArules,"Theactualvideofootagefor
thepieceshouldbeplacedbetween15framesof
blackatthestartandfinishtocreatethecorrect
time."Thisislackinginadditiontotheneedto
cleanthecameralens.Themessageissomewhat
effective,butdidnotthinkthatpullingdownone's
pantsisappropriateasaPSAonTV.
1601PSA301 SaggingPants
Besidesthefactthatitisendorsingaformof
bullying,thevideoproduction(videoandaudio)is
okay,butitlookedrushed.Noeffects?
1601PSA301 Saggingpants
Notlestoreinforcemessage?
Totalofthreeshots,thefirstandlastwerethe
same.
Varietyofshotpossibilitiesmissedcloseupof
sagger'sshock,povofsuitapproachingtopull
downpants.
Whatswag?Makesnosenseotherthantorhyme.
Didn'tunderstandsuit'slastword.
Trimdeadspaceatstarttooertleatend.
Cleanlenspriortoshoong.
1601PSA302 Play
Greateffectiveandmeaningfulmessagetotarget
audience.Alsoveryniceshotcompositions!Per
thePSArules,"Theactualvideofootageforthe
pieceshouldbeplacedbetween15framesofblack
atthestartandfinishtocreatethecorrecttime."
Thisislackingintheclip.
1601PSA302 Play
Verygoodvideo!Goodcameraangles,clips
matchedthemessage,varietykeptmyattention.
Bigquestion:Aretheretwoactressesorisone
duplicatedonthescreen?Ifonlyone,Excellent!!If
youusedtwins...verysneaky,butSMART!
Isthemusiclegalforthiscompetition?
1601PSA302 Play
Nicejob.
InteresngPOVshots.
Lastshotwithtitletalentlayingdownbutnot
playing?Isthisbecausesunissettingonalong
dayofplaying?
Transitionfromfirstshottoseconddoesn'twork
aswellasthepairofshotsslidingdownpoleand
landing.
1601PSA601 Bullying
Good,strongvisualmessage,butconfusingwritten
messageattheend.Whythesemifocus
throughout?Notanegativeforgrading,just
curious.
1601PSA601 Bullying
compositionsareweekdone.Intermsofediting,
someofthelightingisdimmerthanother.I
suggestdoingsomecolorgradingandfiltersto
correct.Theunderlyingmusicisnice,butitends
abruptlyratherthanasuggestedfadeout.
1601PSA601 Bullying
Doviewersneedtoseeallofthetexting?
Impressivelyfast,but....
Denitelynotafanoftheghng.
"Youdon'tknowhowmuchofwhatdohurts
others,"Proofreadyourtitles.Punctuation
counts,too.
Handheldcamerawasshakymotionintentional.
Distracting.
1621OriginC1 Jahnik9000
Dialoguewaswellwritten.Musicchoiceflowed
withthevideo.Shotswerecuttogethercleanly.
Editingandtimingthroughoutthevideois
managedwell.Productcouldhavebeensoldmore
withmoredialogue.
1621OriginC1 Jahnik9000
Verynicelydone.Theeffectsworkverywelland
arecreativlydone.
1621OriginC2 ReMute
Verywelldone.Lightingissometimesabitoffand
onepersonsteppedonaline,butthiswasavery
creativeproductweallwishwehadatschoolorat
workanditwasveryentertaining.Welldone!
1621OriginC2 ReMute
Interestingandhumorousidea.Mainactorhelped
givethecommerciallife.Severaljumpcuts.Sound
ofthenarrationwasclearandwellwritten.
Awesomeconcludingscene.
1621PSA301 CFC
Videoworkandeffectsareverygood,butactors
aresmiling/smirking.Itsoundsasthoughtheactor
issaying,"There'sabetterwaytodie."That'sabit
powerfulforaCFCcommercial.Abettermessage
wouldhaveraisedthegrade.
1621PSA301 CFC
Thinkaboutthemessageyou'resendingwhite
kidgivesmoneytotwoblackkids,oneofwhichis
holdingsign"workfo'food."Blackkidsfightover
themoney.Thenwhitekiddonatesthemoneyto
CFC.MaybeI'mmistaken,buthardnottosee
raciststereotypeshere.
Varietyofshotswasgood.Maintainedscreen
direcon(180degreerule).
Wasmusicoriginal?
Ideawasthere,execuonwasn't.
1621PSA301
CFCPSAThere'saBetterWayto
Give/RollingCoin
ThemessageofthePSAiscurrent,appropriate,
meaningfulandeffective.PerthePSArules,"The
tocreatethecorrecttime."Thisislackinginthis
PSA.
1621PSA302 Can'twearthis
Goodoriginality,videoquality,andeffects.Could
havebetterprops...Isthemusiclegal?
1621PSA302
DressCodeNoHatsorInappropriate
Logos
ThePSAmessageiseffectivetotheapparent
targetaudience.PerthePSArules,"Theactual
videofootageforthepieceshouldbeplaced
tocreatethecorrecttime."Thisislackingfrom
yourPSA.Inconstantcolorgradinginregardto
teacheratwhiteboard.
1621PSA302 psa
Niceidea.
Jumpcutwiththehat,otherwisegoodeding.
Centerthelowerthirdtitleverticallyonthestripe
aswasdonefortheending.
2412Comple1 StudentSpotlight
Showopenerwasenergeticwiththegraphicand
music,niceintroofthenewsteam.Needa
smootheredittransitionfromintroto
newscast..seemedjustabitofahardcut
Anchorsfeltlikeagoodteam..However,they
needtoaddresstheaudiencewhen
2412Comple1 StudentSpotlight
Ienjoyedwatchingyourentry,itwasinformational
andinteresting.Iwaspleasedtoseethejoyyou
displayedinmakingtheintroclipandintheover
alldeliveryoftheinformaon.
Eachofyouspokeclearlyandwereeasyto
understand.OnethingIwouldsuggestworkingon
isaconsistentvolume.
Thevideomixwasnicetowatch,youdidn'trest
toolongonanyonevideoandthetransitionswere
notdistracng.
Keepupthegoodworkandwhoknowswemight
soonseeyouonAFN!
2412Docume1 ShinsJourney
Greattopicchoicebutthisdocumentarylacked
anystorytellingstructure,itwasbasicallyonelong
interview.Theinterviewitselfwaswellsetupwith
goodheadroomandthedrumsintheback.Asfar
asediting,theaudiolevelswerewelladjusted,the
bandplayingwasjustloudenoughtobeheard
withouttakingawayfromtheinterview.TheBRoll
footagewasusedveryefficientlyandstayed
relevanttowhatwasbeingdiscussed.However
mostoftheBRollfootagewasunsteadyandhad
toomanyzooms.Ienjoyedwatchingthis,butit
neededanintroduction,middleandconclusion.
Nexttimetrystoryboardingbeforefilming
anything.
2412Docume1 ShinsJourney
Graphicsinthebeginninginblackweretoughto
see,whichwastoobad,becauseitwasacreative
waytodisplaythebandmembers.Soundmixing
wasdoneprettywell.Intervieweewaseasyto
hearovertheoriginalmusic.Itwouldhavebeen
nicetohearsomeoftheotherbandmembers.It
wasdifficulttoknowifthiswasreallya
documentarytellingastoryorjustaninterview
withabandmember.Theinteviewportionsmight
havebeenstronger,aswell,ifthereweretwo
cameraanglesonthebandmembertoprovide
somevariety.Originalmusicfromthebandwas
funtolistentothroughout.Nicejob!
2412Docume1 Shin'sJourney
Ienjoyedthisdocumentaryaboutyourband.
Workingwithmusiciansmyselffromtimetotime
itwasnicetoseethepleasureyouhaveasaband
inplayingtogether.
Iunderstandthechallengesofgettingtherights
forusingvarioussongswhenmakingavideoand
thatcanbedifficultdependingonthesongs/artists
andrecordcompany.HoweverIfeltasthoughyou
wereusingthesamesonginthebackgroundover
andoveragainandintheendyoudidn'tpostany
creditsatall.
WhatIwasmissingandwouldliketosuggest
perhapsifyouweretodoadocumentaryonyour
bandagain,wouldbesomepausesbetweenthe
interviewsectionsinwhichyouplaysomeofthe
musicmoreaudibly.Perhapsshortsegmentsof
differentsongsorhighlightsofeach
instrumentalist.Youintroducethematthe
beginningandyetyoudonotgivethemachance
tobeheardmuchthroughoutthedocumentary.
Shinoftenbeginsasentencewith"well".Sinceyou
donotneedtoshowhimwhenhestartsthe
answeryoucouldeditthe'well'outandthenthe
narrationwouldflowsmoother,thatisjustone
thingInoticed,thatcannotalwaysbehelpedas
2412Docume2 Stereotypes
Thiswasagreatideaforadocumentary,butit
lackedorganizationandresearch.Itstartedout
withacreativebeginningbutalmostallshotswere
unsteady,obviouslyhandheldandhad
unnecessaryzooming.Theinterviewsweretoo
shorttogetanythingoutofandhadno
backgroundinformation.Yourtransitionswere
inconsistent,maybenexttimetrytouseBRoll
footagetoavoidcrossfadetransitionsinthe
middleofashot.Theblackbackgroundworked
reallywellfortheinterviewsbuttheheadroom
wasoff.Overallacutepiecebutnotinformation
andresearchforadocumentary.
2412Docume2 Stereotypes
Excellentbeginning;gooduseofmusic,graphics,
andslowmotionshots.Audiowasprettygood,
butthereweretimeswhentheaudiocouldhave
fadedmoresmoothlyfromshottoshot.Thiswas
entertainingandaboutatopicthatisn'talways
discussedfully.\Studentswerecandidandshots
weredoneprettywell,butIfeltitfellshortof
sendingamessagebasedonwhatthose
stereotypesmeanforstudents.Ifeltthatthis
wouldhavebeenagreatstarttoamovie,butit
endedabruptly.
2412Featur1 2412Featur1_Grease
Toocute,reallyenjoyedthisfeaturestoryandwish
thatIhadtheopportunitytoseeit.Onlything
thatwouldhavemadeitbetterwouldbesomeof
themusicduringthescenesthatwereshowed.
Greatjob!
2412Featur1 Grease
Greatintro
Nicetransionsthroughout
Keptmyinterest
Wouldsuggestmoreofaconclusionorwrapupof
thestory
Excitementthroughoutthepiece
Narraonboarderedonthemonotone
Audiowasgood
Goodshotsequences
2412Freest1 TheWolfman
Thiswasawelledited,andverywellfilmed,
parodyofoldbmovies.Everythingwasvery
tastefullydone,thoughthestorydoescutoffvery
soonandthereisn'tmuchofastorypunch.But
thecamerashots,lighting,audio,andfilterswere
verywellcompositedandusedeffectively!Good
Job!
2412Freest2 Ric'sFinal
Ithoughtthestorywasfairlyintricateandcreative
thoughtheaudio(andfootage)hadafewissues
whereitcutoutabittoosoon.
Eventhoughthestorypiecesitalltogether,the
footageseemslikeamontageoffairlyrandom
shotsthatdon'tseemtostronglyfittogether
maybebecauseofchangesinvideoqualityanda
lackofconnectionwiththemaincharacter?
2412OriginM1 MetalFused
DarrenL.,isclearlyaverytalentedperson,with
manyskills.Ithoughtthispiecewasgreatasit
managedtocreatetheessenceofamusicvideo,
whileportrayingasongthatwasmostly
instrumental.Myonlycriticismisthatthegraphics
wereunnecessary.Theydidnothingtofurtherthe
piece.Inthefuture,findoneotheraspectofthe
processtoshowperhapsthemixboard?
Overall,greatjob!
2412OriginSF1 AndSoItGoes
Goodjobongettingcreativeshotsandanglesbut
thereweresomeheadroomissues.Forthemost
parttherewerenoinconsistenciesswitchingshots
buttrynottousecrossfadesforshotsinthesame
scene.Thestorywaswellscriptedandtoldwith
outanyconfusions.Trynottousecrossfadesfor
shotsinthesamescene.
3
2412OriginSF1 Andsoitgoes
Goodcameraworkwithavarietyofshotsand
cameraangles.
Goodbeginning,middleandendofvideo.
Carefulwiththecopyrightedmusic,bettertouse
royaltyfree.
2412OriginSF2 SuperJohnO
Thebeginningwasconfusingandcouldhavebeen
shortened.Howevergoodsequencingofshots
showingactionandthemusicfitperfectly.The
flyingeffectswerewelldonebuttrytobemore
consistentwithyoureffects.Forinstancemaybe
pickonetransitiontouseforthewholefilm.AlsoI
wasunsureofthepurposeofthesmallervideoin
theleftcornerandbecauseyouonlyusedittwice
itfeltoutofplace.Workonyourstorytelling,this
wasalilehardtofollow.
Overallacreativeidea,Ilovedhowyoucutback
andforthbetweenthetwoperspectivesandhow
closetheywerebutalsocompletelydifferent.But
nextmetrytopickamoreappropriateidea.
2412OriginSF2 SuperJohnO
Nonoriginalmusic?
Gooduseofavarietyofcamerashots,using
mulpleangles.
Goodgreenscreeneect.
Storylineisconfusing.
Afewjumpcuts.
2412OriginSF3 FauxPas
Lightingwasthebiggestissuewiththisfilm,alot
ofscenesweretoodarkorhadbacklighting.The
secondissuewouldberoughaudioandaudio
transitions.Althoughtheplotcouldhaveused
moredepth,youdidagreatjobtellingthestory
withoutconfusingtheaudience.Themusicfitwell
andthesoundeffectshelpedtellthestory.Itwas
refreshingtoseesuchalargevarietyofshotsused
forjustonescene.Iwouldsuggestworkingon
transitionsbetweenscenestolettheaudience
knowthescenehasended.Besidesthat,thisisone
ofthemoreprofessionalfilmsI'veseenwhile
judgingthefilmfest,greatjob.
2412OriginSF3 FauxPas
Composionandframingisgood.
Useofavarietyofshotsiseecve.
Thestoryneedsamoreeffectiveandmemorable
ending.Whatfeelingorresponseareyoutryingto
evokeintheviewer?
Voiceoverandbackgroundmusicarewelldone.
2412OriginSF4 Cursed
Lightingwasabigissue,Iknowitishardtoget
goodlightingwhilefilminginthedarkbutworkon
adjustingthelightingbeforefilmingandalsowhile
editing.ThescenewiththeGooglesearchneeded
musicornoiseadded.Trytobeconsistentwith
youreffects,thedreamsceneanditseffectswere
verywelldonebutIfelttheblackandwhitewas
outofplaceandunnecessary,theshockingmusic
wasenough.Asidefromafewaudiotransitions
theeditingwasverysmoothandthestorywas
effectivelytold.Goodwork!
2412OriginSF4 Cursed
Capvangstarttothestory.
Niceuseofavarietyofshotsandangles.
Trytoavoidusingtextscreenstodescribeevents,
usethefootageandaudiototellthestory.
Lighnglterusedeecvely.
Soundseectsarewelldone.
Theswitchfromsleepingtothebussceneisabit
confusingforthestorysequence.
Backandforthshotbetweenstoneandmain
characteriseecve.
2412PSA301 recycling
Targetaudienceisapparentwithameaningfuland
effectivemessage.Niceeditingofvideoandaudio!
2412PSA301 Recycling
Titleshouldbe"Littering"not"Recycling."Very
goodaudioeffects(isthemusiclegal?)and
originality,butmessageiscloudy.Ifyou
litter/don'trecycle,someonewillattackyouwhile
someoneelsecleansupthemess?It'scute,butdid
the"litteree"learnalesson?Istilllikedit,though.
2412PSA301 Recycling
Wasmusicoriginalasrequired?Cutsoatend.
Whycrumplethepaper?
Isthismessageaboutrecyclingorkeepingthe
schoolclean?
2412PSA302 drinking
Themessageisspecificandmeaningfulalongwith
aneffectiveimpact.Thelower3rdattheendof
thePSAiscutoff(outofviewintheclip)andthere
isno15framesofblackatthestartoftheclip.
(Theactualvideofootageforthepieceshouldbe
placedbetween15framesofblackatthestartand
finishtocreatethecorrecttime.)
2412PSA302 drinking
Beautifulset!Cameraischoppyonopeningscene,
thengoodthroughout,buttoomuchtimewas
wasteddisplayingthetitle.Messageiscloudyand
soundslikeanafterthought.Moremessagecould
bepassedduringtheentireclip.Itlookslikea
namewasdisplayedattheendandtheframewas
cut.Notgood.
2412PSA302 Drinking
Interesngshots.
Endtitlewasoffscreenatbottom;unabletoread
it.
2412PSA303 NoButts
Messageiseffective.Handheldcameraworkis
shaky.Inaddition,istheclipoftheburninghouse
shotbyyou??Theclipendabruptly.Isuggest
fadingoutthemusic.Alsothereareno15frames
ofblackatthestartofthePSA.Pertherules:the
tocreatethecorrecttime.
2412PSA303 nobutts
Goodmessagethroughoutuntiltheendwhen
speakeradvisesto"burnthebutts."Badchoiceof
wordsafteravideoaboutfirehazards.Videois
choppyandunsteadywhenfilmingthecigarette
butts.Lookedlikeadigitalzoom.Distinct
differenceinaudiofromfirstvoicetonext.
2412PSA303 Nobutts
Shakycameramovementwasdistracng.
Gooduseoftitlesandvoiceover.
2601Featur1 2601Featur1
Learnedquiteabitsothankyouforthat.Thelevel
ofdetailandexcellentcameraworkwereboth
notable.Veryimpressedwiththequalityofthe
videooverlaywiththe"FundamentalsofArt
Student".Lookedprofessionallydone.
2601Featur1 fundamentalsofArt
IntroInteresng,Narraonwasnotmonotone.
WellPaced
VeryeecveuseofBRoll
Goodconclusion
Audioverygood
MusicOverwhelming,detractsfromnarrationand
spokenparts
Goodgraphicsandtles
Goodvarietyofshotsequences
Goodpacing
BRollusewasgood
2601Featur2 2601Featur2_RicsFinal
Verywelldone.Enjoyedthecontent,action
scenesandtheaudiooverlay.Only
recommendationtoofferwasthatthefontchoice
wasalittledifficulttoreadforusoldfolks,haha.
2601Freest1 Howwenevermet
Thiswasfunandengagingtowatch.Lovedthe
storylineandthewayitwasputtogether,shots
werewellrecordedandpositioned,audiowas
great,andeditingwasfairlysmooth.
2601OriginC1 NellieTheDoll
Greatvoiceover!Creativeandexactlythekindof
catIwouldwant.Cutedisclaimer,thoughtthe
textwastoohardtoread.
2601OriginC1 NellietheDoll
Startedoffslowbutpickedupafterproductis
introduced.Narratorsoundsclearandisvery
amusing.Dialoguewaswrittentomatchthevideo
andtheproductadvertisementwasexecuted
great.
2601OriginM1 Shine
Verysweetandcute.Ithoughtthevisualswerea
perfectmatchwiththelyrics.Thevideowasalot
offuntowatch.Mymaincriticismsarethatthe
videowasoccasionallyunfocused.Andthatthe
musicwasnotmixedverywellwiththevideo,asit
seemedhotallthewaythrough.
2601OriginM2 Memories
Pertherulesforthiscategory,allmusicistobe
original.Thisisnotoriginalmusicandtherefore
shouldbedisqualied.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F5tIkDDhSOk
2601OriginSF1 TheHoppingDead
Alotofgreatideas,goodeffectsandcreative
shotsusedinthisfilm.Keepworkingonyour
lighting,steadyshotsandrecordinggoodquality
audio.Anotherissueiscontinuity,trytofilm
everythingandfromdifferentanglessoyoucan
editwithoutanyjumpcutsorcrossfades.The
HoppingDeadwasareallycuteideaandthestory
waswellputtogether.
2601OriginSF1 TheHoppingDead
Goodvideoshots,avarietyofshotsandangles.
Storylinewasclearbutneedsanending,tobe
continuedisnotagoodending.
Audiolevelwasnotconsistent,tooloudincloset
comparedtorestofthevideo.
2601psa601 psa
Rednotbestcoloroftitles;hardertoreadfor
someviewers.
InteresnguseofB&Weect.
Handheldcamerashakymotioncanbe
distracng.
Editofboyrunningwasn'tassmoothasitcould
havebeen.
2601psa601 Smoking
Videoandeffects/graphicswereverygood.Music
wastoodramatic(aswastheacting).Speaker
stuttered.Withoneline,youcouldhavetrieda
couplemoretakes.Overall,okay.
2601PSA602 Don'tdodrugs
Ilikedthisvideo,exceptforthegrammarinthe
dialogue.ThiscouldbeonAFNexceptforthevery
poorgrammarandthebackgroundnoise(sounds
likeshufflingpapers).Cameraworkandeffects
weregood.
2601PSA602 Don'tdodrugs
Nicevoiceoverjob.
Editsseemjarring;notsmoothlyowing.
Nicelighngonthenarrator.
Keependtitleonscreenlonger,.
2601PSA602 MaketheRightChoice
compositionsandeditingarewelldone.
3403Comple1 3403Comple1BulldogNews
Niceattemptofshowingeventsfromaround
school.Thereweresomeissueshowever.The
showopenislong.InthesegmentonPE,the
audiolevelswereallovertheplace.Inthe100
Daysofschoolsegmentalotofschooleventswere
talkedaboutbutneverseen.Showtheaudiance
whatisbeingtalkedabout.
3403Comple1 BuldogNewsApril2
Openingsegmentfornewscastwouldhavebeen
goodtoshowyour/anchorsandreporters..song
choicedidn'tt
Anchorsdidgoodjob,thinkitwouldhavehelped
themtohavemoreopportunitiestobreakuptheir
scriptwithsegments/segues.Theanchors
3403Comple1 BulldogNews
Ladiesyoudidangreatjob!Alwayskeepingasmile
onyourfaceandlettingyourschoolknowwhat
wasgoingon.Iwouldbeinterestedinknowing
moreaboutyourcoachesrulesonDodgeball,itisa
slightlydifferentversionthanIamusedtoand
wouldhaveneverknownaboutitifyouhadn't
reportedaboutit.
Itisgreattoseethatyouhavetheopportunityto
dothesenewssegmentsatyourschool,whenI
wasyouragethiswouldhaveneverhappened.So
enjoytheprivilegeoflearningsuchexcitingthings
soearlyoninlife!
OnesuggestionIwouldhaveforyouistotryand
practicethenamesoffellowstudentsbeforeyou
golive.EveryonealwaysmessesmynameupandI
amusedtoitandIcanlaughatallthejokes.Some
peoplehoweverhaveahardtimewhenpeople
snickerattheirnamessotakingthetimeto
practicenamesforaalittlebitbeforea
presentationisawaytohonorafellowstudent,
especiallyifitisadicultname.
Keepupthegoodwork!Itwasagreatnews
segment!
3403Featur1 3403Featur1_Wood_ShipsGR5
Greatvideoandsoundedlikeafunlearning
assignment!!
3403Featur1 WoodenShipsinGrade5History
Repoterhadastrongvoice,goodinecons
Appropriatetling/graphics
Goodedits
hadasignoastheconclusion
Suggestmorecontroledlightingwheninterviewing
3403Featur2 3403Featur2DiggingGeraniums
Greatvideoandtrulylookslikeeveryonewas
workingsuperhard.Willshowthisvideotomy
wifesosherememberstobringoursinnext
Winter.Thankskids!
3403Featur2 DiggingGeraniums
BackgroundmusicdistractingbutthedBlevelwas
loweredduringvoiceover
Goodtling/Graphics
GooduseofBRoll
Niceedits
Conclusionwasgood
Naturalsoundgood
Gooduseofnaturallightingitwasconsistent.
3403OriginSF1 SatanicJacket
Thisoriginalshortfilmneededasolidstoryline.
Thisstoryjustleftmeconfused.Forinstance,who
isthisgirl?Whydidsheputthejacketon?Why
doesthefirstgirldisappearaftersheremovesthe
jacket?Itshardtotellastoryinaminuteand45
seconds,thisdefinitelycouldhavebeenlonger
withabiggerplot.Workonyourcontinuity,inone
shotsheisontheground,asecondlatersheis
standingupwalking.Greatjobusingmusicand
effectstoshowwhenthegirlispossessedand
whenshestopsbeingpossessed.
3403OriginSF1 SatanicJacket
Interesngspecialeectsandcreavevideo.
Maybenotstartthespecialeffectuntilthejacket
isputonbytheinialcharacter.
Gooduseofavarietyofcamerashots,exceptfora
fewconnuityerrorsandjumpcuts.
Thisisagoodstarttoastorybutneedamore
clearbeginning,middleandend.
3403OriginSF2 FrenchFry
Creativestoryideabutcouldbedevelopedalittle
further.
Somefootageisunnecessarilyshaky.
Avoidzooming.
Soundqualitycouldbeabetter,useamicrophone
andavoidocameradirecons.
3403OriginSF2 FrenchFry
ThebiggestproblemIsawwasthecamerawork.
Theshotswereunsteadyandhadexcessive
zoomingandpanning.Trytofilmseveraldifferent
angles(ormaybeawideandcloseupshot)ofa
sceneandeditbackandforthbetweenthemto
holdtheaudience'sattention.Thiswillalsogive
yourfilmamoreprofessionallook.Greatjobon
theaudiobutremembertokeepyourboommic
outofthecamera'svieworedititout.Thiswasa
shortbutfunnyvideo,whodoesn'twantagolden
frenchfry?
3403OriginSF3 ZombieInvasion
Goodjobusingavarietyofcamerashots.
Acoupleofjumpcutssoremembertochange
angleorscale(orboth)betweenshots,thisalso
helpswithconnuity.
Thinkaboutdevelopingthestorymoreorhaving
somekindoftwistorsurprisesomethingto
evokefeelingswithintheviewer.
3403OriginSF3 ZombieInvasion
Itwasrefreshingtoseeavideowithsteadyshots
andzoomingonlyusedforeffect.Therewerea
fewjumpshotsthroughoutthevideo.Whenthe
musicoraudiochangedandendeditwasvery
abrupt,soworkonaudiotransitions.Althoughthe
storywashumorousandwellplannedout,itcould
havebeenalittlelonger.
3605Docume1 3605Docume1
Ienjoyedthepassiontheseplayersdisplayfor
theirteam.Theunityandteamworkoftheteam
areportrayedinthisvideo.
Havingthedifferentshotsoftheworkoutand
practiceshelpedshowthehardworktheteamput
intothegengreadyfortheseason.
Thevariationofshotsofinpracticeandoutsideof
practicewasagreatwaytoshowthetogetherness
oftheguys.OnesuggestionIwouldhaveisthatif
youdoshotsontheroadyoutrytofindawayto
balancethelightingjutabitmore.Itcanbe
difficultbutattimeseasytrickssuchasusinga
bunchofaluminumfoiltoreflectlightingontothe
facesmakesahugedierence.
Keepupthegoodwork!
3605Docume1 PreSeasonBaseball
Great,clearshotstoopenthemovie.Thepans
wereabitquickattimes,butthelightandangleof
theoutdoorshotswereterrific.Lightingwashed
outinteviewees;itlookslikeonlyonelightwas
used.Itwouldhavebeengoodfortheretobetext
totaketheviewerthroughthetypeofquestions
beinganswered.Effectsinweightliftingscene
enhancedthestory.Intervieweeswerefidgety.
Tip:don'tinteviewpeopleinchairsthatmove!
Nicecameraworkagain.Thiswasagood
overviewofpreseasonball,butperhapsamore
clearstorycouldhavebeenframed.Welldone.
3605Docume1 PreSeasonBaseballDocumentary
Workonyouraudiotransitions,theoverlapping
madeithardtohearandthemusictransitions
couldhavebeensmootherattimes.Youusedalot
ofcrossfadestocuttoadifferentshotduringthe
interviews,tryputtingBRollfootageoverthe
transitioninstead.Theinterviewshotswere
composedverywellwithgreatlighting.Fora
documentaryaboutabaseballteamtherewastoo
muchfootageofworkingoutatthegym,Iwas
expectingmorefootageoftheindoorpractices.
Overallthisprojectwaswellputtogether,hadfew
technicalproblemsandcreativeediting.Greatjob!
3605FEATUR1 3605FEATUR1
Alwaysimpressedwiththequalityvideosfrom
Ramstein.Reallyenjoyedthestoryand"meeting"
theteam.Themusicinthebackgroundaddeda
solidtouch.GoRoyals!
3605FEATUR1 FreshmanFrenzy
GoodIntro
GoodBRoll
Greatuseofcameraanglestokeepinterest
goodvarietyofcamerashots
Greatconclusion
Suggesttheuseofreflectedfilllighttosoftenthe
harsesidelightinginsomeshots.Willalsolight
thefacemoresincethebaseballcapshavea
tendancytocastshadowsonthefacemakingit
hard(er)toseethesubjectseyes.
3605FEATUR2 3605FEATUR2
BestvideoIhaveseenorjudgedinseveralyears
andcouldverywellseethisvideoshowingonAFN.
Stellarwork(particularlyonthegraphicsand
transitions).Keepupthegreatwork!!
3605FEATUR2 What'sinYourLunch
Firstreporterwellpolishedandprofessionally
dressed.Presentedherselfwell,.Suggestslowing
thepaceofspeakingandenunciatewordsmore.
Somewordswerediculttounderstand.
Secondreporterclearvoice,suggestlesshand
movementthatcanbedistracting.Suggested
wearingatopwithsleevestoconcealbrastraps
etc.
BRolluseeecve
Watchtheheadroom
Goodgraphics/tles
NaturalSoundandmusicoverwhelmedthe
subjectsvoices...wasdistracting.
3605featur3 (notsureofthetitle)RamsteinHSS2S
Notle
Animatedgraphicsdistracng
Narratorclearstrongvoice
Needtoimproveonedits
Suggest3pointlighngonthecounselor
Musicdetractsfromvideo
3605featur3 3605FEATUR3
LoveRamsteinHS!!Earlycameramovementsin
thevideowerealittlejerkybutthenthemoreI
watchedthebetteritgot.Lovedseeingthisvid.
3605FREEST1 HollandaiseSauce
Veryinformative!Cleancut,camerawas
positionednicely,andinformationwasclear.Not
sureaboutthe"oldfashioned"videofilter,butit
didaddspice!
3605FREEST2 #Cleanup
Ienjoyedthis!Ilikedthesingingrecordingquality
andtheservicemessage!Idwatchoutforthe
headroominthefuturethough,alwaystrytoleave
alittlespaceandnotcutoffthetopofthehead.
goodjob!
3605FREEST3 HowTo:BokehPhotography
Hey,youguysdidsomeniceworkthatwasalso
veryinformative.Itremainedinterestingandreally
lookedsharp.Imsureyoumayalreadybewell
awareoftheaudiolagonthevideothatwas
uploadedhere,though,takenintoconsideration
withoutthelag,thingswerealmostperfect.The
musicdidgetclosetobeingtostrongagainstthe
narration,maybethenarrationshouldbealittle
moreexpressiveandfun!Thevoicecarriesthe
energy!Alltogether,verywellmade.
3605FREEST4 10StepstoPreparingforcollege
Thisvideowaswellshot,tolditsinformationwell,
andveryrelevantforthehighschoolaudience.
VoiceaudioistheonlythingIfeltwasn'tas
smoothastherest.
3605ORGINC1 CFC
Greatstopanimation,extremelyclearshotsand
lighting.IwouldusethisinourofficeCFCnext
year.Verynicelydone!!!
3605ORGINC1 CFCCommercial
Shotswereofhighquality.Stopmotionwasdone
verywellandwasveryprecise.Impressiveediting
andcinematography.Lightingwaswellcomposed.
Coolideathatwasexecutedperfectly.
3605ORGINC2 S2SCommercial
Cuttogetherwell.Shotsaresteadyandcreative.
Musicflowswiththevideonicely.Messagewas
delivered.Goodtransitionsandcolorcorrection.
3605ORGINC2 TeachersCare
Reallygreatuseofblackandwhiteandslow
motiontocreateatheme.Thefontattheend
didn'tworkforsuchalongphrase,butthe
commercialwaswelldone.
3605PSA151 Cyberbulling
Beginningofvideowasverygood,thenlooked
rushed.Audiocouldhavebeenmuchbetter.BTW,
itshouldbectrl,ALT,delete,notesc...
3605PSA151 Cyberbullying
Themessageiscurrent,specificandmeaningfulin
additiontotargetaudienceeffectiveness.Isuggest
abetterwaytorecordthespeakersasitdoesnot
matchthesoundqualityoftheotherportionof
theclip.Accordingtothecategoryrules,"The
tocreatethecorrecttime.",therearenoblack
framesatthestart.
3605PSA151 psa
ExcellentworkinB&Wpart.Colorportionwith
speakingpartdoesn'tfitandseemsasifanafter
thought.
"RiseUp"tledoesn'ttstyleofspot.
"hp://"notnecessary.
URLnotonscreenlongenough.
3605PSA301 AutoTech
Okayvideo,butwhyshowscenesofdroppedtools
andsomeonewipingtheirfacewithdirtyhands?
Nothingreallywrongwithit,butwasn'tthere
otheroptions?Maybeshowingstudentsworking
on/learningaboutengines?Also,graphicsand
audiowereinconsistent.
3605PSA301 AutoTech
Abruptchangeinthemusic.
"SafetyFirst"lowerthirdnotonscreenlong
enoughtoview.Whywas"First"smallerthanthe
"Safety"?Centerverticallyoverthestripe.
3605PSA601 JustSmile
Goodvideo,butthebeginningdoesn'texactlyfit
thestyleoftherestofthevideo.Goodgraphics,
message,andaudio.
3605PSA601 Justsmilte
Verynice.
Openingwithsadgirlneedsbookendingwithshot
ofherhappyattheend.Viewerslovehappy
endings.
3605PSA601 SmilePSA
compositionsandeditingarewelldone!
3605PSA603 Ramsteintrash
Goodvideo,effects,andaudio.Ifyoustartwith
comicalmessage,youshouldcontinuethelight
heartedmessagethroughout.Weirdnoisebefore
dialogue.Isthemusiclegal?Soundslikea
movie/gamesoundtrackortrailer.
3605PSA603 Ramsteintrash
Concernedstudentactuallycontributedtothe
trashatthestart.
Moreeffectiveifthe*rest*ofthehallwaywasalso
trashed.
Camerashotnevervariedwhy?
3605PSA603 TrashPSA
compositionsandeditingarenicelydone.
3605psa604 Cleanupyourgarbage
Whitebalanceyourcamera!
Toolongwiththestaredown.
Nicejobwiththemultiplechoicetitleandsound
effects.
3605psa604 Trash
Verynice.Ienjoyedeveryglancefromtrashto
faceandfelttheintensity.But,theaudiolevels
wereinconsistentand,nodoubt,themusical
selectionswerefromavideogamesoundtrack.Is
themusiclegal?
3605psa604 Trash60SecondPSA
compositionsandeditingarewelldone!
4402Featur1 4402Featur1_Cheerleading
IwasintownfromWashingtonDCforthis
competitionsoIgottoseesomeofit.Stellar
cameraworkandreallycapturedtheexcitement.
OnlyrecommendationIcouldofferistoslow
downalittlebitvoicewise.Apartfromthat,the
videoitself,theanglesandthelightingwere
perfectinmyopinion.
4402Featur1 Cheerleading
Builtandkeptinterestlevelthroughout
Narrator/Reportervoiceclearandstrong.Useda
varietyofineconstokeepinterest.
GooduseofNaturalsound
Aenongengsbeginning
Goodshotsequences,suggestfewerVLS/XLSand
moreclosershotsoftheaction.
4402Freest1 Meow
Toldaninterestingstoryhere,wasafunskit.I
foundthattheaudiowasfairlychoppy,perhaps
throughsometransitionsonyouraudiosothereis
nopopsbetweenangles.
4402OriginC JROTC
Niceediting.Theseweregoodshotsofstudentsin
action;veryclear,butcouldhavebeenmore
creativein"selling"ROTCtoprospectivestudents.
4402OriginC1 Finance
Niceuseofgreenscreenatthebeginning.There
wasabufferingproblemwiththisvideothatIdid
notexperiencewithanyothers,butthatcould
havebeenaplatformissue.Niceuseofgraphics.
Musicwasextremelyappropriateandacompelling
story.Iwanttowatch!
4402OriginM1 Reason
Greatwork!Thispiecelooksandfeelslikeamusic
video.Cameraworkwasgoodandthespecial
effectsfeltappropriate.Goodjob.
4402OriginSF1 JumpingBean
Thisoriginalshortfilmwashilarious.Soundslike
youhadsomegreatlines,buttoooftenitwashard
tohearwhatthecharactersweresaying.Tryusing
micsandvoiceoverstomakeeverythingheard.
Theeditingshouldhavebeenmorecomplexwitha
widevarietyofanglesandshotsandnojumpcuts.
Theconstantzoominginandoutwasvery
distracting.Thisprojecthadalotofcreativitybut
toomanytechnicalproblems.
4402OriginSF1 JumpingBean
Thevideodidhaveavarietyofcamerashotsbut
toomanyinstancesofunnecessaryzooms,pans,
andothercameramovementsthatdetractedfrom
thestory.
Atlescreenwouldhavebeennicetohave.
Itisbettertoshowpeoplewhatishappening
ratherthantohavescreentellingthem.
Storylinewasabithardtofollow,neededinitial
shotsequenceshowingevilpersonabducting
vicm.
Usingaboommicrophonemighthelpavoidsome
oftheechoorgeneralbackgroundnoisewhen
lmingoutside.
4402PSA151 ASACS
Goodtransitionfromb&w(sad)tocolor(finding
help).Audiowassteady.Iwasconfusedabouthow
lookinginaschoollockerisrelatedtobeingsador
needinghelpfromASACS,sothemessagewasa
littleunclearatthatpoint.
4402PSA151 ASACS
Goodvoiceover,useofB&Weect.
Firstshotwhynotawideshotshowingtalentat
bottomofframe,makingthemlooksmalland
unimportant?
Goodsecondshotwithemptyhallway.
Don'tgetpointofthirdshot.
Signondoor"Sessioninprogress.Pleasedonot
disturb.Thankyou."Yetstudentattemptsto
enter.
Dissolvetransitionshowsstudentwalkingaway
fromdoorway.
Shotofroomplacardnotstraight.Tripodnot
level?
4402PSA151 ASACS
Themessageiscurrent,specificandmeaningfulin
additiontotargetaudienceeffectiveness.Niceuse
ofshotcompositionsanduseofcolor.Theclip
seemstoendquiteabruptlyinregardtotheaudio.
Isuggestafadeoutoftheunderlyingmusic.
4402PSA301 Theft
Good,simplevideo.Isthesecondmusictrack
legal?Soundslikeamoviesoundtrack.
4402PSA301 Theft
Musicabruptlyendedatsecondscene.
Neverseevictim'shead.Needbettershot
compositionorwassheinwitnessprotection
program?
Niceuseofendtlesandsoundeects.
Wideshotsaresame;novariationofcamera
shots.
Goodeditsalthoughlastonedidn'tfeelsmooth.
4402PSA301 Theft
Niceoveralljob!Goodshotcompositions,editing
andnicechoiceofmusic.Themessageisspecific,
meaningfulwithaclearlytargetedaudience.
4402PSA302 Wash
Goodvideoandmessage.Audio(speaking)could
havebeenbetter.Videonotcenteredonboth
actorswhentogether.
4402PSA302 Washyourhands
Whyendmusicasthetwomeet?
Editsdonotfeelsmooth.
Shotcompositioninscenewithtwostudentscould
beimproved.Soundofhanddryerwasdistracting
inthescene.
4402PSA302 WashYourHands
Messageiscurrent,specific,meaningfulwitha
clearlytargetedaudience.Niceshotcomposition,
editingandIlikedthechoiceofmusic.One
criticismisthattheaudioofthedialoguehasa
verynoticeablebackgroundhiss/noise.
4402PSA601 Suicide
Wow!Excellent!Onlydiscrepancy,voiceatthe
endiscoveredupbythemusic.
4402PSA601 Suicide
Endedabruptly.
TITLESWEREINALLCAPS.Why?Sometitleshad
theshadowattribute,othersdidnot.Be
consistent.
Tripodinbackgroundofshot.
Ihopethebathroomoorwasclean!
Nicestarttothevideo.
4402PSA601 SuicidePrevention
appropriateandmeaningfulmessage.Goodshot
compositionsandediting.However,theunderlying
musicseemedatadtooaloudanditalsoended
abruptlyratherthanasuggestedfadeouttomatch
thefadetoblack.
4402PSA602 DomesticViolence
Goodcameraworkandmessage.Thereisabig
detractioninthevideowhenlaughterisheard
whenboyfriendhitsgirlfriend.Audioisalsochoppy
duringdialogue.Thismessageistoostrongtolet
thelaughternotaffectthegrade.Therestofthe
videoisverygood.
4402PSA602 Domesticviolence
Voiceoversoundedalilerushed.
Inconsistentsoundlevels.Remembertomaintain
consistentscreendirecon(180degreerule).
Alittlehardtotellifitwasthesamegirldueto
changeofhairstyle(loose,thenponytail).
Needtofixinappropriatesoundslaughatthe
slap,"hey"asgirlanswers"Baby,Iwasn't...."
Trimclipbetterasgirlroundscornerandstops
runningaliletoosoon.
Goodeditsforthemostpart.
4402PSA602 DomesticViolence
compositionsandeditingarewelldone.Audio
seemedtocutoutafewsecondsandthequalityof
themalespeakeroutsideseemedechoey.
4403Docume1 SchoolTour
Althoughthisdocumentarywasshort,itwasvery
wellputtogether.Thevoiceoverwasclearandthe
footagealwaysstayedontopic.Almostallofyour
footagewaswelllitandsteadysoIwassurprised
toseeyouusedafewpoorqualityshots.Great
choiceofmusic,itkeptthedocumentaryexciting.
Thelastminuteofblackattheendshouldhave
beentakenout.
Musicsoftinthebeginning.Nice,clearvoiceover.
Pansarenicelydonethroughout,ifabitquickat
timesandshotsareclearandwelllit.Shotsdonot
alwayslineupdirectlywiththescript.Allaround,
nicevirtualtouroftheschool.Wouldhavebeen
nicetohearfromthestudents.
Ireallyenjoyedtheintroductiontoyourschool.
Beginningwiththebusesarrivingandclosingwith
thebusesleavingwasanicetouchtocompletethe
virtualtour.
Justwatchingtheshortclip,Iamimpressedand
feelinformed.
Therewasagreatvariationofshotsshowingthe
manyopportuniesforstudents.
SomethingInoticedinoneortwoplacesisthata
panwasusedthatvariedinitsspeed.Overallthe
videowasputtogetherverywell.
AtrickIuseattimeswhenImessupapanshot
andhaveaspecificspotIwanttofillwiththeshot
is,thatIfindthesmoothestpartofthepanand
thenifIcanmakeitfit,slowitdowntofillthetime
neededforthesegmentinwhichitisshown.
Thoughthepanmaybeslowerthanoriginally
plannedasmoother,slowerpancanbeless
distractingthanvariationsinspeed.Ifallelsefails
astaticshot,orjustaframecaptureorpicturethat
isslightlyenlargedandthen'moved'acrossthe
viewareacanalsocreateapanoramicvideoshot.
Greatjob,Ireallyamimpressedatwhatyour
4403OriginSF1 4403OriginSF1Werecow.mov
Videofootageisgood.
Theisagoodbeginningofastorybutyouneed
moreofaplot.Themiddleofthestoryismissing.
Characterdevelopmentisimportantintellinga
story,whyisthestudentlookingfortheWerecow?
4403OriginSF1 Werecow
Theaudiowasgreat,reallyeasytounderstand.No
majorlightingorcameraissuesandgoodchoiceof
musicbutitdidstopandrestartfornoreason,it
couldhavebeeneditedsotherewasnobreak.A
humorousidea,butveryshort.
4405Freest1 AlternateScienceFair
Thiswasaniceoverviewofthealternateenergy
sciencefair.Itsummedupthefairnicelyand
clearly,thoughitwouldhavebeennicetosee
moreofavarietyofshots,angles,etc!Trynotto
zoomduringtheshotasitcantakeawayfromthe
professionalismofthevideo.
4405OriginC1FD FieldDay
Gooduseoffadesinconjuncitonwiththemusic.
Graphicswereappropriateifabitflashy;thiswas
nicelydoneandthemoviecreditswerecreativeas
well.
4405OriginC1FD FieldDayAshli
Fast"fadetoblack"shotswereexcellent.Music
thatwaschosenwentwellwiththevideo.Text
titleswereplacedappropriately.Messagewas
unclearandpurposeshouldhavebeenexplained
more.
4405OriginC1LB LunchBunch
Cutefilm.GreatuseofTeachersandspecial
affects.Don'thesitatetostartoverifactorsstep
oneachother.Thiswasfuntowatch.
4405OriginC1LB LunchBunchVideo
Dialoguecouldhavebeenlouderatpoints.Special
effectswereimpressiveandwellexecuted.Good
lightingandcomposition.Scriptwaswellwritten.
Messageandpurposeunclear.
4405OriginC2 SumCommercial
Interestingideabutcouldhavebeenexecuted
better.Couldhavehadmorevarietyofshots.Nice
musicalcuesandgoodchoiceonthesubtitles.
4405OriginC2 SumCommerical
Wereitonlysoeasy!Niceuseofeffectsand
graphicstoassistwiththevideo.Thiswasfunto
watch!
4405OriginM1 MeandMyGirls
Thisisnotanoriginalpieceofmusic,pertherules
ofthiscategoryandthereforeshouldbe
disqualied.
Also,doyouhaveclearancerightsfortheDisney
Channelbugfoundontheboomofthescreen?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FvSJmY493H
o
4405OriginM3 NoahMusicVideo
Pertheinstructionsforthiscategory,thisisnotan
originalpieceofmusicandshouldbedisqualied.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcZRA5bed6c
4408Freest1 VideoProductionOverview
Thiewasanexcellentlookatyourvideo
productionclassandlookedveryprofessionalfora
highschoolproduction.Thesmartboardcomment
seemedabitoutofplace,andthetextgraphicsat
theendtookawhiletogettothepoint,butother
thanthatyouguyswererightontrack.
4408Freest2 GlobalExpansion
Verywellshot.(goodangels,etc)
Veryprofessional.(presentaon.)
Ithinkthefilmzoom(andsittingbackwardona
bench?)wastheonlythingthatwasblatantly
distractingfromthemessage.butotherthanthat
thiswasexcellentforaschoolnewspiece.
4408originsf1 PatchMurderMystery
Audiowashardtohearattimesandinconsistent,
definitelythebiggestissuewiththisproject.There
wereveryfewcameraissues,goodjobonfilminga
varietyofshots.Whenthelightswereoffitwas
hardtotellwhatwasgoingon.Greatuseofmusic
andsoundeffects.Asidesfromafewscenes,you
didagreatjobshowingtheactionthrougha
varietyofshotswithoutjumpcuts.Greatwork,
althoughtheendingwasalittleviolentforaschool
project.
4408PSA301 Sharealocker
Wow!I'mneverlettinganyoneusemylocker!In
allseriousness,verystrong(maybetoostrong)
message,goodvideo.Maybemessageshouldhave
beenabouttrust.Ilikedit,butaudiowasclipped
attheendandmadeitlookabitrushed.Very
closetoexcellent.
4408PSA301 ShareALocker,ShareaCell
Themessageisspecificwitheffectiveimpacton
targetaudience.
4408PSA301 Sharelocker/Sharecell
Excellentaudioofthetwogirlstalkingatlocker;
notsomuchinthecell.
Gooduseoftheclockwipe.
Usetlestoreinforcemessage.
NotsurewhowasmoreexcitedtheMPorthe
dog!
4408PSA601 LittleEars
compositionsandeditingarewelldone.Nice
scriptingandactingbytheyoungkids,which
visuallyincreasesthemeaningofthemessage.The
clipdidnotcontaintherequired15framesofblack
attheend(itdidnotfadetoblack).
4408PSA601 Littleearsareeverywhere
IlikedthisvideothefirsttimeIsawitonAFN.Only
change,the"elevenyearslater"graphicisabittoo
slow.Alltherestisgreat.
4408PSA601 Littleearsareeverywhere
WhyhaveIseenthesekidsbefore?AFN?
Thebleepseemstoohighpitched.Would1kHz
tonefromBarsandTonehaveworkedbeer?
SlowtitlesElevenyearslater.
4436PSA152 ChangeMakesUsStronger
Clipisspecific,current,meaningfulandeffective.
Niceworkonshootlocationsandcomposition.
Alsonicetoreflectchangeasnotedwiththe
differenthallwaycolors.Asstatedintherules,
"Theactualvideofootageforthepieceshouldbe
placedbetween15framesofblackatthestartand
finishtocreatethecorrecttime."Thereareno
blackframesatthestartoftheclip.
4463PSA151 WearYourGlasses
Themessageisspecific,meaningfulandeffective.
Nicecameraworkandediting.Goodjoboverall!
4463PSA151 Wearyourglasses
Goodvideo!Interesting,clear,smoothmessaging.
Is"IntheHalloftheMountainKing"allowedasthe
soundtrack?Ifso,goodallaround.Astrongertopic
wouldhavebroughtahighergrade.
4463PSA151 Wearyourglasses
Nicejob!
Goodvarietyofshots.Liketheunfocusedshotof
whiteboard,andPOVshotofglasses.
Beerifendtleusedtwolines.
Keeptleonscreen.
Musicappropriateandeffective;hopeitwas
original.
4463Comple1 4463Comple1_KTV_Episode7
Overallanicejobofshowcasingschoolactivities.
Minecraftwasagood,currenttopicforstudent
audiance.Greenscreenwasusedwell.Audio
soundedhollow.
4463Comple1 KTVEpisode7
Greatintro,nicethatyouintroducedthe
newscasttopicswiththereporterstandupinthe
beginning..Also,itwasgoodthatwewere
introducedtoentirenewsteam..However,
segmentwasabittoolong..couldhavebeen
shortenedabit.
Thinkthenewsc
4463Documen1 IllegalImmigration
Thisdocumentarywasobviouslywellplannedand
storyboarded.Therewereextremelyfewtechnical
issues.Goodjobswitchingbackandforthbetween
yourvarietyofsourcesandstayingontopic.
Althoughitwouldhavebeenhelpfultohavemore
BRollfootageorpictures.Mybiggestproblem
withthisdocumentarywashowmuchyourelied
ontext,insteadoftext,voiceoverscouldhave
beenusedtotransitiontothenextinterviewor
topic.Voiceoversalsowouldhaveallowedyouto
addinyourownresearchandbackground
information.
4463Documen1 Immigration
Beginningclipisdark.Graphicforthefirst
inteviewisfartooquicktoreadandtheaudio
qualityvariesthroughoutthefilm.This
documentaryprovidesaniceglimpseintothe
importanceofthedreamact.Overallawelldone
video.Twocamerasforvarietyofanglewith
interviewscouldenhancethismovie.
4463Documen2 Bullying
Audioisnotnotinsyncinthebeginning.Niceuse
ofshotsinthebeginning,buttheycouldbeslower.
Excellentvarietyofclips,statistics,andinterviews.
Audioininterviewsweresometimesinconsistent.
Sourcesforstatisticsmayhavebeenlistedatthe
end,butshouldallbevettedascrediblesources
andcitedalongwiththegraphicwhentheyare
displayed.Overallthiswasaverysuccessful
documentarythatgetsthepointacrossabout
bullyingfromlotsofdifferentangles.Welldone!
4463Documen2 StopBullying
Greatjobonthisdocumentary!Itwaswell
plannedoutandputtogetherwithfewtechnical
difficulties.Youpresentedyourtopicthrougha
seriesoffacts,definitions,interviewsandpersonal
stories.Goodjobonyourlowerthirds.Itcould
haveusedafewmoresourcesotherthanthe
interviews,maybesomepicturesandmorecharts
withdata.
4436PSA152 Changemakesusstronger
Goodworkonthevideo,buttheaudioisvery
choppy.Whyistheactorwalkingfunny?Thenon
swingingarmattractstheviewerseyetoseewhyit
isdifferentattheend.
4436PSA152 Changemakesusstronger
Niceidea.
Narrator"glitched"atonepoint.Couldn'tthat
havebeenxed?
Brightwindowinbackgroundmakesbacklightinga
bitofaproblem.
Endingseemedabrupt.
Whynothaveendtitlechangetoshowmonthof
militarychild?
4463PSA301 MilitaryChildrenservetoo
Wow!Excellentvideo!Grabsthesubconscious
withthevisuals.Verynice.Whytheneedfora
faketear?Arealonewouldbringthecrowd
completelyintoyourworld.Somedialoguewasa
littlewordy,butstilleffective.
4463PSA301 MilitaryChildrenServeToo
Targetaudienceisveryapparentwithaspecific,
currentandverymeaningfulmessage.Niceshot
compositionsandediting.Justoneminornotein
regardtotheunderlyingmusic.Theclipended
withasingle"unresolved"noteofapianothat
makesitfeelhanging.
4463PSA301 MilitaryChildrenServeToo
Punctuaonusecommaandperiodinendtle.
Lettalentexitframeonrstedit.
Narraonendsalileabruptly.
Tripodnotlevelinrstshot;talentwalksuphill.
Goodshotinscene2.
Keepruleofthirdsinmindwhencomposingshots.
What'sthepointofthecomputerlabshot?
4463PSA302 Youarenotalone
Verynice,but....speakervolumewastooloud,
detractedfromthesoftmusicanddidn'tfitthe
moodofthevideo.Stillverygood.
4463PSA302 Youarenotalone
HowcanviewerstellgirlisPCSing?
Whyusecreditrollforendtle?
Goodopeningshots.
Continuityerrorwithgirl#2'sheadposition.
4463PSA302 You'reNotAlone
Targetaudienceisapparentwithaspecificand
meaningfulmessage.Niceshotcompositionsand
editing.
4463PSA303 KeepitClean
Messageiscurrent,meaningfulandspecificwitha
clearlytargetaudience.Niceshotcompositionand
editing.IliketheB/Wcolorgrading.
4463PSA303 Keepitcleanmakeitgreen
Thisvideoflowedwellandhasagoodmessage.
Thelightinginsomescenes,though,detracted
fromtheoverallqualityofvideo.Whatwasthe
raisingofthehandsattheend?
4463PSA303 Keepitclean,makeitgreen
Preygood!
GooduseofB&W,thencolor.
Endtitlesnotonscreenlongenough.
4463PSA601 DearDad
Goodintentions.Cameraworkisgood,butmusic
startstoolateandvoicecan'tbeheardverywell.
It'sobvioustheactorisscribbling.Thisisaserious
video.Takethetimetodoitright.
4463PSA601 DearDad
Messageiscurrent,meaningfulwithanapparent
targetaudience.Perthecategoryrules,"The
tocreatethecorrecttime."ThisPSAdoesnot
containtheframes.Underlyingmusicfitswellwith
thePSA.
4463PSA601 DearDad
Whycompletelysilentatstart?Doesn'tworkwell.
Punctuaoncounts!servecommatoo.
Shotheldtoolongoncloseupofshoulder.Also,
closeupofhand,notthewring.
Singleshotoftheboy'sfacialexpression;other
shotwasofsideview.Moreeffectiveifviewer
seesemotion.
4463PSA602 DearParents
Ilikedeverythingexcepttheloudalarmsoundat
thebeginning.Otherwise,greatvideo!Actorsare
veryconvincing.Almostlikethey'vereally
experiencedmultiplemovesanddidn'tlikethem
verymuch.:)
4463PSA602 DearParents
ThePSAmessageiscurrent,specify,meaningful
withaclearlytargetaudience.Goodjobwithshot
compositionsandediting.
4463PSA602 Dearparents
Don'tunderstandopeningsoundsbeforeMom
speaks.
Wherearethekidslooking?Lessdistractingif
directlyintothecameraasthey'resupposedtobe
talkingtotheviewer.
Wallcolorseemstovaryconsistentlighng?
Niceendtitles.
4601OriginC1 HouseSale
Nicecomputeranimation.Iassumethemodel
wascreatedbythefilmakerandtheflythoughwas
nice.Thevisualsdidnotalwaysmatchupwiththe
text(noACinaplacethathasallthoseholes!!!)
andthemusicsoundedlikevideogamebackground
music.The'seal'graphicswereagoodidea.
5503Freest1 Code:Red
Puttingthestudentsinfrontofthebackground
wasgood,consideradifferentcolororpicturefor
thebackgroundtoseparatethestudentsfromthe
backgroundbeer.
Classroomsceneswerewelldone,consider
changingtheanglewhichyoufilmfromforamore
interestinglook.
5503Freest1 Code:Red
Thestudioshotswerewellcomposited!
wasagoodacngjobandstorysequence.
certainshotscouldbefocusedbetter
5503OriginSF1 StudentRescue
StoryideaprobablymoreeffectiveasaPSAor
documentarybuttherewasgoodinformationin
thisvideo.
Useofavarietyofshotswasgoodbuttherewas
someunnecessarycameramotionandsomeshots
couldhavebeenshortenedtomakethestoryflow
smoother.
Audiowasnotconsistent,somehissinsomeshots.
Paymoreattentiontothecompositionofeach
shot.
5503OriginSF1 StudentRescue
IthinkthiswouldhavefitbetterunderthePublic
ServiceAnnouncementcategory.Therewereafew
audioissuesbutgreatjobusingavarietyofclose
upsandwideshots.Therewereafewjumpshots
andyoucouldheartheaudiochangewhenthe
shotchanged.Thisprojectcouldhaveusedsome
musicinthebackground.Youdidagreatjob
informingyouraudienceonsafetyandcameup
withsomecreativeideas.
5509Comple1 5509Comple1
Yournewssegmentwasniceandinformative.You
didagoodjobsummarizingsomerecenteventsso
thatevenIassomeonewhoisn'tapartofyour
schoolfeelasthoughIknowwhathappened.
Youreallydidprettywellwiththekeyingmakingit
reallyappearasthoughyouhaveanicefancyand
largestudio.
OnesuggestionIwouldhavewouldbeto
occasionallyhaveacloseupshotofyournews
anchor.Ithinkitwouldgiveitevenmoreofa
personaltouch.
Keepupthegoodwork!
5509Comple1 5509Comple1
Showopenwascleanandprofessional.Niceuseof
theTriCastervirtualset.IfyouusingaTriCaster,
yoou'rerasingthebaronproduction.Withthat,
morecameraangleswouldhelpbreakupthe
newscast.DuringtheChristmasPKGthenatual
soundwasmissingfromthebroll.
5509Comple1 WildcatWeeklyNews
Nice,cleangraphicintrototheshow..Virtualsetis
agoodtouchaswell..givesitthatnewscastfeel
Onceanchorstartstalking,gofromtheExtreme
LongShotofthestudiotoamoremediumshotof
theanchorsothataudiencedoesn'tfeeldistantf
5509Documen1 IntroductiontoMalta
Youraudiosoundedlikeithadbeenrecordedwith
justacameraandnomic.Iwouldalways
recommendusingamic,especiallyforvoiceovers.
Whydidn'tyouuseanymusicinthedocumentary?
Almostallofyourshotswereunsteadyandshaky
whichreallytookawayfromthefilm.Itwas
refreshingtoseeadocumentarywithsomuch
originalfootage,greatjobgoingoutandgetting
thefootageyouneeded!Forthemostpartyour
footagealwaysmatchedupandrelatedtothe
voiceovers.Thisdocumentarywaswellorganized
andresearched.Youjustneedtoimproveonthe
technicalissuessuchasaudioandqualityfootage.
5509Documen2 AllAboutYearbook
ThistellsaboutwhattheYearbookclassatNaples.
Attimes,theinterviewsdragon.PressPasseswas
missplelledinthegraphic.Graphicsareoften
inconsistentinthecapitalizationofwords
throughoutwhichcanbeverydistracting.
Rainbowgraphicsaredifficulttoseeanddon't
providethecleanestlinesfortheviewer.Itwould
havebeennicetoseetheyearbookcoming
togetherandthestorycouldhavebeentold
perhapsmoreeffectivelybypicturesthanthelong
interviewwiththeteacher.
5509Documen2 AllAboutYearbook
GreatjobusingBRollfootagethatisrelevantto
theinterviewinthebeginningbutthelast
interviewwastoolongandhadverylittleBRoll.
Someshotswerereallyjumpyandhad
unnecessaryzooms.Withsomanyinterviews
lowerthirdswouldhavebeenhelpfultointroduce
thepersonandexplainhowthey'rerelatedto
Yearbook.Althoughtheinterviewswereeffective,
afewdifferentsourceswouldhavehelpeddevelop
thedocumentaryandkeeptheaudience
interested.Alwaysbesuretocheckyourshot
compositionandleaveheadroom.
Greatvideoforagreatprogram.ClubBeyond
soundslikeanofferingthatwouldbewelcomeat
nearlyallDoDEAschools.Thankyouforthe
insight.
5509Featur1 ClubBeyond
Narrator/Reporterclear,strong,andinteresting
voice
overallgooduseofavailablelighng
Nonaturalsound
Goodoverallpacing
Appropriatetles
Subjectsexhibitenergythrougout
Suggestiftheopeningtitleshotweremorevibrant
itwouldgrabtheviewersattentionmore.
5509Freest1 OneUp
Icanunderstandthestorybutitcouldusemore
explaining,whatisthetwoguysrelationship?How
longhasthisbeengoingon?
Trytomixuptheuseofthecamera,moveit
verticallyandhorizontallywhensettinguptoget
moreinterestingangles.
5509OriginC1 NAHSBoosterClub
Shotsweresteadyandwellsetup.Allrequired
informationwasgiven.Actingcouldhavebeen
betterbuteditingdidagoodjob.
5509OriginC1 NaplesAthleticBoosterWebsite
Thiswasreallywelldone.Actorscouldhave
projectedmore,butthiswasareallyinformative
commercialforsomethingstudentscanactually
use.Thinkaboutscreenshotsofthetwitterfeed
thatareabitmoreclear,butallinall,agreat
commercial
5509OriginC2 MarchieMellows
Nicestopanimation.Cutesoundtracktothe
commercial.Goodcameraangleandagreatvoice
overforthepitchthatmatchedthegraphic.This
washighquality!Congratulations!
5509OriginC2 MarchieMellows
Thestopmotioncouldhavebeenmoredetailed
andusedmoreframes.Funnyconceptand
appropriatetexttitles.Musicandvoiceflowed
wellinthevideo.
5509OriginM1 ChappedLips
Funsong,interestingvideo.Itseemedlikethis
videowasthrowntogethertheweekendbeforeit
wasdue,asthelastfewshotsdon'tmakeany
sense.Muchofitwasoutoffocusandafewof
theshotsetupsseemedliketheyshouldhavebeen
cropped(theguitarontheground,whosehands
areintheframe?Ortheshotwiththeguyplaying
theguitar,whyisthebullyinred,sittingnextto
himonstage?)Itmayhavebeenbesttoendthe
songatthepointthattherap/talkingbegan,asthe
videolostfocusatthatpoint.
5509OriginSF1 NaplesNightmare
Therewereafewplotissueswiththisshortfilm,it
leftalotofquestionsfromthebeginning.For
example,whoisthisgirl,howdidshegetthechip
inherheadandwhydothesepeoplewantthe
chipout?Icouldn'tfigureoutwhothebadguy
was.Therewereafewsoundeffectsmissing,for
examplewhenthegirlwashitovertheheadand
thesirennoisecameandwenttooquickly.Music
alsoshouldhavebeenadded.
5509OriginSF1 NaplesNightmare
Goodvarietyofvideoshots.
Hardtoreadthecellphonetexts,maybeusea
voicemessageinstead.
Somelightmusicinthebackgroundmighthelpset
theemoonaltoneofthestory.
Alittlemorestorydevelopment,whatisthe
importanceofthechip.
Ithoughtthechipneededtobesurgically
removed?
5509PSA301 DrivingSafety
Niceshotcompositionsandediting!Messageis
specificandmeaningfulwithaclearlytargeted
audience.Nicemusicchoicealso.Thereisnofade
toblackattheendoftheclip;"Theactualvideo
footageforthepieceshouldbeplacedbetween15
framesofblackatthestartandfinishtocreatethe
correcttime."
5509PSA301 Followspeedlimit
TitlesinALLCAPS?
Goodvoiceovernarraon.
Gooduseofsoundeffects.
5509PSA301 followthespeedlimit
Notsureifatricyclevideoistherightonefora
speedlimitvideo.Upuntiltheend,Ithoughtitwas
goingtobeaboutwearingahelmet.Lighting,
audio,andeectsweregood,though.
Isthemusiclegal?
5601Docume1 TrailofTears
Goodjobusingpictures,mapsandtexttopresent
theinformation.VerycreativetoimitateAndrew
Jackson'svoiceandfilmsomeofyourownscenes
reenactingtheTrailofTears.Theaudiowasfuzzy
andinconsistentandtheeditingwasroughat
times.Althoughitwasashortdocumentary,you
foundaverycreativeandinnovativewaytotell
thestoryoftheTrailofTears.
Nicejobtellingthestory.Attimes,thescriptvoice
overistoofast.Audioisveryinconsistent.
Movementfrompicturetopictureandthecuts
andeffectsareoftenfartooquickanddistracting.
Imageschosenarenotalwaysoftheresolution
necessaryforthescreen.Thiswasacompelling
topic;withafewtweaks,thestorywouldbetold
evenbetter.
Nicejobtellingthestory.Attimes,thescriptvoice
overistoofast.Audioisveryinconsistent.
Movementfrompicturetopictureandthecuts
andeffectsareoftenfartooquickanddistracting.
Imageschosenarenotalwaysoftheresolution
necessaryforthescreen.Thiswasacompelling
topic;withafewtweaks,thestorywouldbetold
evenbetter.
5601Featur1 5601Featur1WelcometoAEHS
GreatMusicTheme.
AlilediculttohearthechildrenwiththeMusic.
Nosubtlesforeachdierentcountry/language.
Thanksfortheopportunityforseeingthevideo.
5601Featur1 WelcometoAEHS
Musicmadeithardtohearthenarraon/dialogue
Ideaisverycreave
Flagegraphicswellused.
5601Freest1 ToyfromHell
Overallthefilmwasverywellmade,very
suspensefulandgreatuseofthemusic,itwas
apparentbutnotoverpowering.Spendmoretime
ontherestoftheaudio,(perhapsalouderdoor
slam?)
Cameraworkwasgood,lightingwaswelldone,
evenwhenitwasdim.
5601Freest2 TheReturn
Thesepiavideowaswellmadebutyourproject
coulduseamorecoherentstory,Howcanyou
betterportraywhythisvideoshouldbeseenby
themalecharacter?
Also,spendalittlemoretimeonyoursound,the
mixwasgreatbutyourlevelsandtechnicalaspects
couldimprove.
Spendmoretimeworkingonthesoundsrelative
toeachotherandbalancingandeveningthemfor
acleaneraudiotrack.
5601OrginSF1 Touch
Thiswasareallygoodideaforyourstoryandyou
didagreatjobusingsoundeffectsandeditingto
keepthevideocreative.Thiswasagreatstart
workingwithspecialeffects,butkeepworkingon
improvingthem.Therewereafewunsteadyshots
withunnecessaryzooming.Alsoalwayscheckfor
continuityerrors,forexampleinconsistentaudio
orjumpshots.Thekidswereadorableandthis
videohadsomereallygreatideas!
5601OriginC1 PlayStopRepeat
Greatbackgroundmusic!Gooduseofeffectsand
anicevoiceover.I'mconfusedastowhysheis
stilllatethough!
5601OriginM1 OTUF(overlyturnedupfellas)
Veryfunandcreative!Youdidagreatjobin
craftingasolidhiphopvideo.TheonlycriticismI
haveisthatyoushouldhaveusedmorelighting.
Thescenesinthekitchenareabittoodark.It
feelslikeyoureliedabittooheavilyonnatural
lighting.Lastly,theuseoftheMichaelCera
graphicfeelsappropriate,howeverdidyouget
clearanceforit?
5601OriginSF1 Touch
Cleverstoryidea.
Gooduseofspecialeects.
Soundeectswerewellulized.
Trytoavoidusingwordstotellthestory,later
thatevening,insteadusethevideofootageto
tellthestory.Alsotheending,tobe
continuedwasaliledisappoinng.
Crossingtheaxiswhenfilming/editingisabit
confusingfortheviewer.
Mostofthelmingandcomposionwasgood.
5601OriginSF2 DeadRECkoning
TheBlairWitchProjectmeetsZombies.
Goodbackgroundmusictosettoneoflm.
Soundeectsgood.
Theconceptofthefoundcamerawasgoodbutthe
storyneededsomekindoftwist,characters
challengesorothereventstomakeitmore
interesng.
5601OriginSF2 DeadRECkoning
Themusicwaswellpickedbutitshouldhave
changedtofitthescene.Forexamplewhenthe
zombieattackedorhewasinjuredandbeing
rushedtothecouchthemusicshouldhavebeen
moreurgentandintense.Goodjobusingsound
effectstomakethezombiesmorerealisticbutat
timesitwasconfusingbecauseitsoundedlikethe
actorswerealsomakingzombienoiseseven
thoughtherewasonlyonezombie.Thisshortfilm
didn'tfeelveryplannedorstoryboarded.Overall
goodjobusingcreativeideasandtellingthestory
withoutconfusingtheaudience.
5601PSA301 Healthy
Goodoverallmessageandvideoquality,poor
dialogue/choiceofwords.Ifthevideoisforthe
NHA,shouldn'tyoumentionhavingahealthy
heart?Don'tassumeyouraudiencealreadyknows
theconnection.
5601PSA301 Healthy
Messageisapparenttoatargetaudience.Quality
ofthestillimagesarenotthesameasthefootage
quality.Thevoiceoverfeltabitrushedinplaces.
5601PSA301 Healthy
Voiceoversoundsasifrecordedatdifferenttimes
andlocaons.
Openingtitleusesdifferentfontattributesinthe
work"Respect".
Keepruleofthirdsinmindwiththeshotatthe
house.
5601PSA601 StudentAbsence
Theeffectscouldbebetter.Sceneswereabit
confusingandmessageisnotasclearasitcould
be."Don'tbeabsent"or"StayinSchool."These
aretwodifferentmessages.
5601PSA601 StudentAbsence
ThePSAmessageiscurrent,specific,meaningful
withaclearlytargetaudience.Perthecategory
rules,"Theactualvideofootageforthepiece
shouldbeplacedbetween15framesofblackat
thestartandfinishtocreatethecorrecttime."
Thisislackinginadditiontoblankframes
appearing4546secondsintheclip.Somecolor
gradingcouldhavebeendonetobetterimprove
theoverallclipduetosomeoftheuncontrolled
lighting.
5601PSA601 Studentabsences
Goodmessagedeservesbeervideoillustraon.
Bedroomscenewastoodark,nodoubtduetothe
brightlightcominginfromthewindow
(backlighng).
Abrupttransitionfromthecouchto
commencementscene,andbetweenthe
graduates.Unnecessaryzoomingandcamera
movement.Roughedits.
Punctuaoncounts!(Endtle)
"18days"whatDoDEAruleisthat?
5644OriginC1 Everock
Thisiscuteandthemusicwaswellchosenforthe
commercial.Thissucceededinbeingfunny.Nice
job.
5644OriginC1 Everock
Veryfunnyidea.Propsweregreat.Shotswere
steady.Soundcouldhavebeenmanagedbetter.
Couldusedifferentshotsandmoreexplaining
abouttheproduct.
5644OriginC2 MagicBottle
Nice,clearpicture.Clearvoiceover.Commercial
stopsveryabruptlyanddoesn'tfullyconvincethe
audience.
5644OriginC2 MagicBottle
Beginningstartedoutwellthenfeltrushed.Shots
werecreative.Greenscreeneffectwasedited
well.Inbetweenthequestionsaskeditseemed
verysilentmaybebackgroundfoleycouldhelp?
5644PSA301 Stopgangviolence
Videoqualityandaudiowasgreatuntilone"gang
member"smirkedwhenagunwaspointedathim.
Audio"blam"wasineffective.Videochoppedat
theendandIdoubtthemusicislegal.Itreally
startedoutverywell.
5644PSA301 StopGangViolence
Themessageisspecificandmeaningfulwitha
clearlytargetedaudience.Niceshotcompositions
andediting.However,theendingfeltabrupt.The
freezeframedidnotaddtothemessage.Alsoit
wouldhavebeenbettertouseasoundfileforthe
gunshots.
5644PSA301 Stopgangviolence
Musicendsabruptly.
Wrongentrycode60secondPSA.
Someveryniceshots.
Becarefulofraciststereotypesblackkidsas
gangmembers,whitekidastheshooter.
5644PSA302 don'ttextandwalk
Audioisnearlynonexistent.Icouldn'thearone
word.Videolooksveryrushed.
5644PSA302 Don'tTextandWalk
Goodshotcompositionsandediting.PSAhasa
clearlytargetedaudiencewithanappropriateand
meaningfulmessage.
5644PSA302 Don'ttextandwalk
Checkyoursoundlevels!
Misspellinginendtle.Sponsered?Proofread!
Niceuseofgreenscreen.
Whyisgirlsmallerinsize?Intenonal?
Havethetexterleaveframebeforecutting.

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