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English II Practice

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THE ADVANTAGES OF GROWING UP IN A SMALL TOWN: METRO
By: Class 1E
1. I Nyoman Pande Suputra (13.7653)
2. Indra Pratama Adi Nugraha Nur Hidayat (13.7665)
3. Inri Yohanis Juwita Awom (13.7668)
4. Irnanda Mas Putri (13.7672)
5. Jazmi Thirafi Arif (13.7676)



SEKOLAH TINGGI ILMU STATISTIK
JAKARTA
2013 / 2014

Outline:
THE ADVANTAGES OF GROWING UP IN A SMALL TOWN: METRO
Living in a small city give us the advantages
1. Make us healthier than the one who growing up in the big city
a. Better food than in the big city
b. Better air because no pollution
c. Greener environment
2. Lifestyle
Better education of character (good attitude, more respect, nice)
3. Give us more peace
a. No criminality
b. No traffic jam and hedonism, avoid the noise of factory and vehicle

Rough Draft

THE ADVANTAGES OF GROWING UP IN A SMALL TOWN: METRO
Metro is a small city in Lampung province, living in a small city like Metro can give
us the advantages, such as: Make us healthier than the one who growing up in the big city.
For example, we get the better food than in the big city because there are many kind food
result by Metro with good quality, and we get the better air in metros territory because no
pollution, have more green environment either from the air, water and soil. Second
advantages is about Metros lifestyle, we get the better education of character like have a
good attitude, more respect, and be nice to the people around. living in Metro city can give us
peace, because there is no criminality that may can occurred in other place, also no traffic jam
because people who live there have not been many who use private vehicles, no hedonism,
avoid the noise of factory because the number of factories still less than in the big city. maybe
because some of this advantages which become the reasons of peoples to choose and live in a
small city like Metro.

Second Draft
THE ADVANTAGES OF GROWING UP IN A SMALL TOWN: METRO
Living in a small city like Metro name of a city in Lampung Province- can give us
many advantages. The advantages we get by living in small city such as: make us healthier
than the one who growing up in the big city. It is happened because we can get the better food
than in the big city since there are many kind of good food in Metro. Not only that, we can
get the better air in Metro because there is no pollution there. It has greener environment than
the big town one. Metro has a good quality of the air, water and soil. Second advantages is
we can get the better education of character to have a good attitude, to be more respect, and to
be nice with the other people around because the people there show it all in their daily life.
Living in Metro city can give us peace, because there is no criminality that may occurred in
the big town. There is also no traffic jam because people who live there didnt like use their
private vehicles. No hedonism there because there is no place support it. living in a small city
like Metro also make us avoid the noise of factory because the number of factories still less
than in the big town. This is just a little advantages we can get from living in a small town
like Metro.

Final Copy
THE ADVANTAGES OF GROWING UP IN A SMALL TOWN: METRO
Living in a small city like Metro name of a city in Lampung Province- can give us
many advantages. The advantages we get by living in small city such as: make us healthier
than the one who growing up in the big city. It is happened because we can get the better food
than in the big city since there are many kind of good food in Metro. Not only that, we can
get the better air in Metro because there is no pollution there. It has greener environment than
the big town one. Metro has a good quality of the air, water and soil. Second advantages is
we can get the better education of character to have a good attitude, to be more respect, and to
be nice with the other people around because the people there show it all in their daily life.
Living in Metro city can give us peace, because there is no criminality that may occurred in
the big town. There is also no traffic jam because, people who live there didnt like use their
private vehicles. No hedonism there because, there is no place support it. Living in a small
city like Metro also make us avoid the noise of factory because the number of factories still
less than in the big town. This is just a little advantages we can get from living in a small
town like Metro.