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HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
A Campaign of the Importance of Reading

Reading habit is poor among Indonesians because most people havent realized the importance of reading

Reading is important to transform knowledge and technology. By reading, one knows the world. He or
she will understand what he doesnt see by himself or herself. The lines of the paragraphs in an article
contain pieces of knowledge. The knowledge is needed to improve the quality of humans life.
Technology transformation from other country can only be done by reading a lot various sources of
literature. Valuable books in libraries and bookstores mean nothing if they are not read.

Realizing the importance of reading will make someone motivated to read. When we know that
something is very important because it can give us valuable information, we will try to get or do the thing.
For example, a businessman who always follows latest information or news, will know what to do in his/
her business. He will make a good decision to make a transaction. Most people in all developed countries
have realized the importance or reading and they have good reading habits. In bus and train stations,
vehicles, waiting rooms, parks, people like reading. They enjoy reading which gives them valuable
knowledge and inspiration.

A good understanding toward the importance of reading can be achieved by well organized and effective
campaign. To plant an understanding in a generations minds is not an easy job. It needs a hard work from
all components of the nation, especially the government. A serious campaign which is organized by the
central and local government can help common people wake up and stand to face the real competition.
The campaign can be done through various kinds of mass media such as TV, radio, booklets, bulletins,
newspapers, magazines. It can also be conducted by teachers, parents and all people who care.

Therefore, a nation-wide effective campaign of the importance of reading by all components of the nation
should be done, facilitated by the government, to face the tighter competition. The world has forced
globalization. Those people with little knowledge will be left behind. To speed up the better change in
this country, a good reading habit is really important.
Thesis
Reading habit is poor among Indonesians because most people havent realized the importance of reading
Argument 1
Reading is important to transform knowledge and technology. By reading, one knows the world. He or
she will understand what he doesnt see by himself or herself. The lines of the paragraphs in an article
contain pieces of knowledge. The knowledge is needed to improve the quality of humans life.
Technology transformation from other country can only be done by reading a lot various sources of
literature. Valuable books in libraries and bookstores mean nothing if they are not read.
Argument 2
Realizing the importance of reading will make someone motivated to read. When we know that
something is very important because it can give us valuable information, we will try to get or do the thing.
For example, a businessman who always follows latest information or news, will know what to do in his/
her business. He will make a good decision to make a transaction. Most people in all developed countries
have realized the importance or reading and they have good reading habits. In bus and train stations,
vehicles, waiting rooms, parks, people like reading. They enjoy reading which gives them valuable
knowledge and inspiration.
Argument 3
A good understanding toward the importance of reading can be achieved by well organized and effective
campaign. To plant an understanding in a generations minds is not an easy job. It needs a hard work from
all components of the nation, especially the government. A serious campaign which is organized by the
central and local government can help common people wake up and stand to face the real competition.
The campaign can be done through various kinds of mass media such as TV, radio, booklets, bulletins,
newspapers, magazines. It can also be conducted by teachers, parents and all people who care.
Recommendation
Therefore, a nation-wide effective campaign of the importance of reading by all components of the nation
should be done, facilitated by the government, to face the tighter competition. The world has forced
globalization. Those people with little knowledge will be left behind. To speed up the better change in
this country, a good reading habit is really important.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Corruption

(Announcement of issue concern)
Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What is the relation between money and corruption?
Well, corruption is common everywhere in the world, even in the United States. Its just a matter of
intensity. However, it is quite shocking when one reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most corrupt place
in Indonesia.

The survey has made me sad, actually, because I stay and earn a living here in the capital. As most people
know, Tanjung Priok port smuggling is not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs who want to minimize their
tax payments tend to do such a thing more often. They even bribe the officials.

Well, I think the measures taken so far to overcome the problem by punishing the corruptors is still not far
enough. We have to prevent the younger generations from getting a bad mentality caused by corruption.

I believe we should start at the earliest stages in school and I think everyone should be involved in the
effort to eradicate corruption. We must not make any distinction.
Adapted from: The Jakarta Post, February 2005
To make it clear, please remember the concept of Hortatory exposition below:
Thesis
(Announcement of issue concern)
Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What is the relation between money and corruption?
Well, corruption is common everywhere in the world, even in the United States. Its just a matter of
intensity. However, it is quite shocking when one reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most corrupt place
in Indonesia.
Argument 1
The survey has made me sad, actually, because I stay and earn a living here in the capital. As most people
know, Tanjung Priok port smuggling is not a new thing at all. Entrepreneurs who want to minimize their
tax payments tend to do such a thing more often. They even bribe the officials.
Argument 2
Well, I think the measures taken so far to overcome the problem by punishing the corruptors is still not far
enough. We have to prevent the younger generations from getting a bad mentality caused by corruption.
Recommendation
I believe we should start at the earliest stages in school and I think everyone should be involved in the
effort to eradicate corruption. We must not make any distinction.
Adapted from: The Jakarta Post, February 2005
To make it clear, please remember the concept of Hortatory exposition below

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Online Job

Online jobs are selected in part-time employment for many, and some have taken more seriously. A
growing number of people are willing to take a job online. Working online has its advantages if we
manage effectively. Why not?

It offers flexibility and convenience that no other job can give. We can work from home with minimal
investment and get a good income. The idea of adding weight to our pocket and makes life easier and
comfortable is the most reassuring.

The reason behind this great opportunity is that every day there are new companies to join. Every day and
every minute men are seeking information about everything under the sky of the Internet.

As we know, the Internet is the answer to every question, web sites need to update each section and also
add reports on developments that have recently joined. Therefore, it is an expansive space for articles.

There are a number of jobs we can work online. Some of them which strongly recommended are writing,
marketing, stock trading, and online education. However we should be very careful because scamming
opportunities are always there.
Thesis
Online jobs are selected in part-time employment for many, and some have taken more seriously. A
growing number of people are willing to take a job online. Working online has its advantages if we
manage effectively. Why not?
Argument 1
It offers flexibility and convenience that no other job can give. We can work from home with minimal
investment and get a good income. The idea of adding weight to our pocket and makes life easier and
comfortable is the most reassuring.
Argument 2
The reason behind this great opportunity is that every day there are new companies to join. Every day and
every minute men are seeking information about everything under the sky of the Internet.
Argument 3
As we know, the Internet is the answer to every question, web sites need to update each section and also
add reports on developments that have recently joined. Therefore, it is an expansive space for articles.
Recommendation
There are a number of jobs we can work online. Some of them which strongly recommended are writing,
marketing, stock trading, and online education. However we should be very careful because scamming
opportunities are always there.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Smoking in restaurants

Smoking in restaurants is just not on. It must not be allowed because it is rude, harmful to others and
dangerous for the smokers.

Firstly, smoking in a restaurant is impolite. The smell of the smoke affects all people and can turn them
off their food. People pay to taste good food and not to be put off by foul smelling smoke.

Another reason smoking should not be allowed in restaurant is the harm it can do to others. Passive
smoking that is breathing in smoke made by a smoker can lead to asthma attacks and even cancer.
Finally, smoking is dangerous and a health risk to the smokers. Cigarettes cause heart and lung disease
and people should not smoke anywhere, not just in restaurants.
Therefore, smoking in restaurants is impolite, harmful to others and a health risk to the smokers and
should not be allowed in any restaurants.
Thesis
Smoking in restaurants is just not on. It must not be allowed because it is rude, harmful to others and
dangerous for the smokers.
Argument 1
Firstly, smoking in a restaurant is impolite. The smell of the smoke affects all people and can turn them
off their food. People pay to taste good food and not to be put off by foul smelling smoke.
Argument 2
Another reason smoking should not be allowed in restaurant is the harm it can do to others. Passive
smoking that is breathing in smoke made by a smoker can lead to asthma attacks and even cancer.
Argument 3
Finally, smoking is dangerous and a health risk to the smokers. Cigarettes cause heart and lung disease
and people should not smoke anywhere, not just in restaurants.
Recommendation
Therefore, smoking in restaurants is impolite, harmful to others and a health risk to the smokers and
should not be allowed in any restaurants.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Watch your Kids While Watching TV

Is it important to know what your kids are watching? Of course yes. Television can expose things you
have tried to protect them from, especially violence, pornography, consumerism, etc.

A study demonstrated that spending too much time on watching TV during the day or bedtime often
causes bedtime disruption, stress, and short of sleep duration.
Another research found that there is a significant relationship between the amount of time spent for
watching television during adolescence and early adulthood, and the possibility of being aggressive.

Meanwhile, many studies have identified a relationship between kids who watch TV a lot and being
inactive and overweight.

Considering some facts mentioned above, protect your children with the following tips:
1. Limit television viewing to 1 2 hours each day
2. Do not allow your children to have a TV set in their bedrooms
3. Review the rating of TV shows that your children watch
4. Watch television with your children and discuss what is happening the show
Thesis
Is it important to know what your kids are watching? Of course yes. Television can expose things you
have tried to protect them from, especially violence, pornography, consumerism, etc.
Argument 1
A study demonstrated that spending too much time on watching TV during the day or bedtime often
causes bedtime disruption, stress, and short of sleep duration.
Argument 2
Another research found that there is a significant relationship between the amount of time spent for
watching television during adolescence and early adulthood, and the possibility of being aggressive.
Argument 3
Meanwhile, many studies have identified a relationship between kids who watch TV a lot and being
inactive and overweight.
Recommendation
Considering some facts mentioned above, protect your children with the following tips:
1. Limit television viewing to 1 2 hours each day
2. Do not allow your children to have a TV set in their bedrooms
3. Review the rating of TV shows that your children watch
4. Watch television with your children and discuss what is happening the show

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Removing lead from Petrol

In all discussion over the removal of lead from petrol ( and the atmosphere), there doesnt seem to have
been any mention of the difference between driving in the city and in the country.

While I release my leaded petrol car is polluting the air wherever I drive, I feel that when you travel
through the country, where you only see another car every five to ten minutes, the problem is not as
severe as when traffic is concentrated on city roads.
Those who want to punish older , leaded petrol vehicles and their owners dont seem to appreciate that in
the country there is no public transport to fall back upon and ones own vehicle is the only way to get
about.

I feel that country people, who often have to travel huge distances to the nearest town and who already
spend a great deal of money on petrol, should be treated differently to the people who live in the city
Thesis
In all discussion over the removal of lead from petrol ( and the atmosphere), there doesnt seem to have
been any mention of the difference between driving in the city and in the country.
Argument
While I release my leaded petrol car is polluting the air wherever I drive, I feel that when you travel
through the country, where you only see another car every five to ten minutes, the problem is not as
severe as when traffic is concentrated on city roads.
Those who want to punish older , leaded petrol vehicles and their owners dont seem to appreciate that in
the country there is no public transport to fall back upon and ones own vehicle is the only way to get
about.
Recommendation
I feel that country people, who often have to travel huge distances to the nearest town and who already
spend a great deal of money on petrol, should be treated differently to the people who live in the city

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Example of hortatory text in the form of a letter

Dear Editor,

We are writing to complain about ads on TV. There are so many ads, especially during our favorite
programs. We think they should be stopped for a number of reasons.

First, ads are nuisance. They go on for a long time and there are so many. Sometimes there seems to be
more ads than programs.

Second, ads are bad influence on people. They try to encourage people to buy unhealthy food like beer,
soft drink, candy and chips. And they make people want things they do not really need and can not.

Finally, the people who make ads have too much say in what programs people watch. That is because
they want to put all their ads on popular programs that a lot of people watch. Some programs which are
not so popular get stopped because they do not attract enough ads, even though those programs may be
someones favorite.

For those reasons, we think TV station should stop showing ads. They interrupt programs. They are bad
influences on people, and they are sometimes put a stop to peoples favorite shows. We are sick of ads,
and now we mostly watch other channels.

David
Thesis
Dear Editor,

We are writing to complain about ads on TV. There are so many ads, especially during our favorite
programs. We think they should be stopped for a number of reasons.
Argument 1
First, ads are nuisance. They go on for a long time and there are so many. Sometimes there seems to be
more ads than programs.
Argument 2
Second, ads are bad influence on people. They try to encourage people to buy unhealthy food like beer,
soft drink, candy and chips. And they make people want things they do not really need and can not.
Argument 3
Finally, the people who make ads have too much say in what programs people watch. That is because
they want to put all their ads on popular programs that a lot of people watch. Some programs which are
not so popular get stopped because they do not attract enough ads, even though those programs may be
someones favorite.
Recommendation
For those reasons, we think TV station should stop showing ads. They interrupt programs. They are bad
influences on people, and they are sometimes put a stop to peoples favorite shows. We are sick of ads,
and now we mostly watch other channels.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
More Dust Bins is Cleaner

To improve comfort and cleanliness at the school, there should be an increasing number of dust bins.

When we look at classroom, school corridors and schoolyard, there papers, mineral water cops, straws,
and napkin everywhere. The condition of unseemliness really hinders learning and teaching environment.
They can be filled out with water coming from the rain. This can be placed for mosquito to spread out.

Anyway I notice that most of the students have responsibilities for their school environment. They put
their litter on the proper place but some of them are not diligent enough to find the dust bins. The
numbers of the dust bins in the school are not enough. More dust bins should be put beside each step,
outside of the classrooms and some along of the corridors. Probably one dust bin should be in every ten
meters. So when students want to throw away their litters, they can find the dust bins easily.

When school is equipped with sufficient dust bins, students do not have problem of discomfort any more.
So provide more dust bins and school will be very clean and become a very nice place to study.
Thesis
To improve comfort and cleanliness at the school, there should be an increasing number of dust bins.
Argument 1
When we look at classroom, school corridors and schoolyard, there papers, mineral water cops, straws,
and napkin everywhere. The condition of unseemliness really hinders learning and teaching environment.
They can be filled out with water coming from the rain. This can be placed for mosquito to spread out.
Argument 2
Anyway I notice that most of the students have responsibilities for their school environment. They put
their litter on the proper place but some of them are not diligent enough to find the dust bins. The
numbers of the dust bins in the school are not enough. More dust bins should be put beside each step,
outside of the classrooms and some along of the corridors. Probably one dust bin should be in every ten
meters. So when students want to throw away their litters, they can find the dust bins easily.
Recommendation
When school is equipped with sufficient dust bins, students do not have problem of discomfort any more.
So provide more dust bins and school will be very clean and become a very nice place to study.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Where Should Be after High School?

The National examination result will be publicly enounced in next short time. Euphoria will flood for
those who get success. In the other hand, It will be sorry to hear that there are some of them do not
succeed in their national final examination. For those who succeed soon will think to decide; where will
they be after graduating high school? Actually it will be easy to decide for those has been arranged and
thought earlier but for those have not planed yet, it will be quite confusing.

Continuing study or looking for work is the primary choice among them. When they think about
continuing study, they will think hard about the time and cost. How long the higher study will last? And
how high is about the cost. In the same way, when they think about straightly seeking job, what skill and
competence they have got is a big matter of questioning. So, doing both choices in the same time is an
alternative.

Continuing study as well as seeking job is possibly done but it will be hard for them. Conventionally
studying in the university needs much time to spend especially in the first year. It is true because they
have to do and adapt a lot of things in their new higher school. it will be very hard to looking for job.
Therefore it should come to their mind of continuing studying at higher school from their own home. As
result, the available time will be more flexible for them. Then it will be very possible to seek job and get
the appropriate one. This type of studying is publicly known as distance learning.

As the alternative method of studying, besides the conventional studying which students and the lecturer
have to meet in the fixed time and place regularly, distance learning provides possibility to grow better.
Possibly working and studying surely will create high quality graduate. Distance learning should appear
as a considerable choice for them.
Thesis
The National examination result will be publicly enounced in next short time. Euphoria will flood for
those who get success. In the other hand, It will be sorry to hear that there are some of them do not
succeed in their national final examination. For those who succeed soon will think to decide; where will
they be after graduating high school? Actually it will be easy to decide for those has been arranged and
thought earlier but for those have not planed yet, it will be quite confusing.
Argument 1
Continuing study or looking for work is the primary choice among them. When they think about
continuing study, they will think hard about the time and cost. How long the higher study will last? And
how high is about the cost. In the same way, when they think about straightly seeking job, what skill and
competence they have got is a big matter of questioning. So, doing both choices in the same time is an
alternative.
Argument 2
Continuing study as well as seeking job is possibly done but it will be hard for them. Conventionally
studying in the university needs much time to spend especially in the first year. It is true because they
have to do and adapt a lot of things in their new higher school. it will be very hard to looking for job.
Therefore it should come to their mind of continuing studying at higher school from their own home. As
result, the available time will be more flexible for them. Then it will be very possible to seek job and get
the appropriate one. This type of studying is publicly known as distance learning.
Recommendation
As the alternative method of studying, besides the conventional studying which students and the lecturer
have to meet in the fixed time and place regularly, distance learning provides possibility to grow better.
Possibly working and studying surely will create high quality graduate. Distance learning should appear
as a considerable choice for them.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Learning English through music and songs is Fun

Learning English through music and songs can be very enjoyable. You can mix pleasure with learning
when you listen to a song and exploit the song as a means to your English progress. Some underlying
reason can be drawn to support the idea why we use songs in language learning.

Firstly, the song stuck in my head Phenomenon (the echoing in our minds of the last song we heard
after leaving a restaurant, shopping malls, etc) can be both enjoyable and sometimes unnerving. This
phenomenon also seems to reinforce the idea that songs work on our short-and-long term memory.

Secondly, songs in general also use simple conversational language, with a lot of repetition, which is just
what many learners look for sample text. The fact that they are effective makes them many times more
motivating than other text. Although usually simple, some songs can be quite complex syntactically,
lexically and poetically, and can be analyzed in the same way as any other literary sample.

Furthermore, song can be appropriated by listener for their own purpose. Most pop songs and probably
many other types dont have precise people, place or time reference.
In addition, songs are relaxing. They provide variety and fun, and encourage harmony within oneself and
within one group. Little wonder they are important tools in sustaining culture, religion, patriotism and
yeas, even revolution.

Last but not least, there are many learning activities we can do with songs such as studying grammar,
practicing selective listening comprehension, translating songs, learning vocabulary, spelling and culture.

From the elaboration above, it can be concluded that learning through music and songs, learning English
can be enjoyable and fun.
Thesis
Learning English through music and songs can be very enjoyable. You can mix pleasure with learning
when you listen to a song and exploit the song as a means to your English progress. Some underlying
reason can be drawn to support the idea why we use songs in language learning.
Argument 1
Firstly, the song stuck in my head Phenomenon (the echoing in our minds of the last song we heard
after leaving a restaurant, shopping malls, etc) can be both enjoyable and sometimes unnerving. This
phenomenon also seems to reinforce the idea that songs work on our short-and-long term memory
Argument 2
Secondly, songs in general also use simple conversational language, with a lot of repetition, which is just
what many learners look for sample text. The fact that they are effective makes them many times more
motivating than other text. Although usually simple, some songs can be quite complex syntactically,
lexically and poetically, and can be analyzed in the same way as any other literary sample.
Argument 3
Furthermore, song can be appropriated by listener for their own purpose. Most pop songs and probably
many other types dont have precise people, place or time reference.
In addition, songs are relaxing. They provide variety and fun, and encourage harmony within oneself and
within one group. Little wonder they are important tools in sustaining culture, religion, patriotism and
yeas, even revolution.
Argument 4
Last but not least, there are many learning activities we can do with songs such as studying grammar,
practicing selective listening comprehension, translating songs, learning vocabulary, spelling and culture.
Recommendation
From the elaboration above, it can be concluded that learning through music and songs, learning English
can be enjoyable and fun.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
The importance of Reading

I personally think that reading is a very important activity in our life. Why do I say so?
Firstly, by reading we can get a lot of knowledge about many things in the world such as Science,
technology. Sports, arts, culture, etc written in either books, magazine, newspaper, etc.

Secondly, by reading we can get a lot of news and information about something happening in any parts of
the world which can we see directly.

Another reason, reading can give us pleasure too. When we are tired, we read books, newspaper or
magazine on the entertainment column such as comedy, short story, quiz, etc. To make us relaxed.

The last, reading can also take us to other parts of the world. By reading a book about Irian Jaya we may
feel were really sitting in the jungles not at home in our rooms.

From the facts above, its obvious that everyone needs to read to get knowledge, information and also
entertainment. Or in summary we can say reading is truly important in our life.
Thesis
I personally think that reading is a very important activity in our life. Why do I say so?
Firstly, by reading we can get a lot of knowledge about many things in the world such as Science,
technology. Sports, arts, culture, etc written in either books, magazine, newspaper, etc.
Argument 1
Secondly, by reading we can get a lot of news and information about something happening in any parts of
the world which can we see directly
Argument 2
Another reason, reading can give us pleasure too. When we are tired, we read books, newspaper or
magazine on the entertainment column such as comedy, short story, quiz, etc. To make us relaxed.
Argument 3
The last, reading can also take us to other parts of the world. By reading a book about Irian Jaya we may
feel were really sitting in the jungles not at home in our rooms.
Recommendation
From the facts above, its obvious that everyone needs to read to get knowledge, information and also
entertainment. Or in summary we can say reading is truly important in our life.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Example in daily writing

Dear friend,

Are you tired of the daily grind? Sick of working all hours of the day for little reward? Tired of having
enough money to really enjoy yourself? Well, now there is a way out.

We can show the way to give up work. Sit back and make millions for yourself and your loved ones on
property market.

Albert Smith felt just like you until he read our leaflet. Now he drives a sport car around the South of
France and his wife has one of her own too.

yes, just for reminding.
Thesis
Dear friend,

Are you tired of the daily grind? Sick of working all hours of the day for little reward? Tired of having
enough money to really enjoy yourself? Well, now there is a way out.
Argument 1
We can show the way to give up work. Sit back and make millions for yourself and your loved ones on
property market.
Argument 2
Albert Smith felt just like you until he read our leaflet. Now he drives a sport car around the South of
France and his wife has one of her own too.
Recommendation
yes, just for reminding.

HORTATORY EXSPOSITION
Into the Mouth of Babes

We are writing to you because we are concerned about the way food is being advertised to children.

What we eat now affects our health in years to come. Bad dietary habits start while we are very young.
For this reason, your government support health education that encourages a balanced healthy diet.
Australians are encouraged to get the bulk of their nutrients from fresh fruits, vegetables, and wholegrain
cereals, a lesser amount from foods high in fat, salt and sugar.

TV advertising to children presents a completely different message. Nearly 80% of food advertising
pushes fatty snacks or sweets - the very foods that should be eaten least. To make matter worse, these ads
take up much of the advertising time. This must be stopped.
TV advertising is powerful and influential. Parents, however strong-willed, the find it hard to resist
pressures created by this advertising. Children are least able to understand the tricks of the advertising
industry.

For the hours when children are the main audience, TV advertising of foods must be made to reinforce,
not undermine, the message about a balanced diet. We appeal to you, as Prime Minister, to take the lead
in calling together the advertisers, TV networks, consumers and public health bodies to decide how this is
to be done.
Thesis
We are writing to you because we are concerned about the way food is being advertised to children
Argument 1
What we eat now affects our health in years to come. Bad dietary habits start while we are very young.
For this reason, your government support health education that encourages a balanced healthy diet.
Australians are encouraged to get the bulk of their nutrients from fresh fruits, vegetables, and wholegrain
cereals, a lesser amount from foods high in fat, salt and sugar.
Argument 2
TV advertising to children presents a completely different message. Nearly 80% of food advertising
pushes fatty snacks or sweets - the very foods that should be eaten least. To make matter worse, these ads
take up much of the advertising time. This must be stopped.
TV advertising is powerful and influential. Parents, however strong-willed, the find it hard to resist
pressures created by this advertising. Children are least able to understand the tricks of the advertising
industry.
Recommendation
For the hours when children are the main audience, TV advertising of foods must be made to reinforce,
not undermine, the message about a balanced diet. We appeal to you, as Prime Minister, to take the lead
in calling together the advertisers, TV networks, consumers and public health bodies to decide how this is
to be done.