Parents Should Give More Attention to Their Children

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Family is one of place whom their children can get good education or
not. So, everything which is showed by the family especially the parents to
their children will leave a deepest impression to the childrens character, mind,
and attitude. Generally, the children which are still under 17 years old, inclined
to imitate their parents behavior. So, the parents must give good attitude for
their children, in order to mae their children have good attitude too. !arents
must give more attention to their children. "hy do # say lie that$
First, the children need an attention from their parents to support their
education. %he parents can give their attention while their children are
studying. %he children will be happy because they feel that their parents give
their attention to them. #t can support their motivation in their learning process.
&nd it can mae they are better to get the best score in their school. For
e'ample, the parents help their children to e'plain again about their homewor
at home. So, the children will be more understand to the material.
Second, the establishment of childrens personality are started from the
family especially parents. %he parents are the beginning of their childrens
personality. %he parents must teach their children to have good personality.
(ecause #saac )ewton have ever said *#f the fruit fall down, it wont be far
from its tree.+ So, the children may get the attention from their parents.
%hird, parents attention becomes the greatest influence in childrens
mind. (ecause the children will imitate what is their parents do. %heir parents
must give more attention to form their children personality. ,hildrens good
attitudes are formed by their parents. %he naughty or ind children are formed
by their parents.
From the reason above, it is obvious that the parents attention is the most
important thing to the establishment of childrens personality. So, for the
parents, it will be better if they give more attention to their children. (ecause
the children who get less attention from their parents will have bad character
for their real life. &nd also for the children, they must be more appreciate and
regrettable their parents. %hey must be easily to show their problem to their
parents. So, the parents can give more attention to their children.