ASSESSMENT: Research Assignment Assessment requirements 1. Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 2. Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 3. Project Seven: Ex 1, 2 & 3 4. Visual Diary (see Checklist) 5. Online activities, evidence of at least 4 discussion entries 6. Self Evaluation discuss your learning outcomes Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Final Drawing It's ok to be me, 2014 tries to interpret through the process of observation a self portrait, which communicates my identity and what I felt was important to convey to others. It is titled it's ok to be me; I find myself at a point in my life where I feel very different to most people my age. I am faced with the challenge of accepting many things I can no longer do. The passion and style of my work is inspired by Egon Schiels extremely personal and expressive vision of his Self-Portrait Standing 1910. It is also inspired by Jenny Sages traditional mark making, observation and techniques, as displayed in her Untitled (Study for 'Emily Kame Kngwarreye with Lily') 1993. Finally I inspired myself through my own work on tortured, 2014 as I really liked the texture captured in this piece of work.
The following link provides footage of the face being drawn. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynDf32X2ZUQ&feature=youtu.be
Gaylene Duncan Self Portrait Its ok to be me August 3, 2014 Mont Marte lamp black acrylic paint, Willow Charcoal Thin, Young Artist White Chalk,, Kraft Paper Roll Brown Size 178.2 x 168.2 cm Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Final Drawing Close Ups These close ups for me represent the struggle to identify as ones self, and the ability to be accepting of who we are. Although this work is incomplete I really feel it was successful in conveying my idea. Through my self portrait I wanted to send a strong message, that even different is acceptable. I was thinking about those people who often struggle to accept their personal identity, because those around them often bully and shame them into believing they are less of a person. This often resulting in a loss of life. I felt if I could show my deformities and label it Its ok to be me, then they could connect being different with being ok. I used the arm instead of the feet and back, as I felt it would be easier to make this an obvious statement. The face took on its own life as I worked on it. For me it started to show those many frightened thoughts of self doubt, and I felt it really confronted the individual to dig deep and really see who they are. Despite being incomplete, I really liked where my work was heading. What I really like about this work being incomplete, is that for me currently being incomplete is the story of my life. My illness means many things are left incomplete as I cant stand long enough to complete them. So in this regard, this really is a true reflection of myself. Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Final Drawing Work In Progress I recorded myself as I drew the face to show that it was done using a one meter stick. When I started out, my intent was to do the face the way I had done it in my practice piece. However, I had to stop videoing at one point as my daughter was busy and couldn't video anymore. I moved on to the body, but whilst I was painting the body I started to see a mask in my face and found myself asking many questions about my identity, and how I see myself as an individual. This lead me to question if I should leave the face as it was. I had done the arms different to show how being different doesnt mean you cant like who you are. The face I felt, gave even bigger reason to question if it is ok to like yourself this way and then follow it up saying yes it is ok to be different. I wonder what others may think here. After much debate, I have decided to leave the face the way it is, as I feel it becomes very ambiguous in its output, and makes a clear statement that many things can appear something they are not. Here is a video link to the face being drawn https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynDf32X2ZUQ&feature=youtu.be Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Project 5: Ex 2 Structural Line Drawing Incorporating Space, Depth and Tone Final Drawing Spiritual Development, 2014 come about through exploring structural lines, which capture the form of the body and focuses on depth, space and foreshortening. The style of the drawing is inspired by two artist, Andrea Mantegna Andrea Mantegna, "Cristo Scorto"(The Dead Christ) , and his fooling around with the rules of perspective . (Mantegna 1490), and Fred Hatt, Zones 1, 2002, and his ability to see the organic physical forms as expressions of patterns and energy (Hatt 2002). The drawing talks about a complex system of beliefs which are the symbol of the spiritual development of the human being. The different mediums are symbolic of the steps of the pyramid, which symbolizes the various stages of spirituality to be achieved. To reach the top one must consider the direction of all four corners in their lives. It represents the re-integration of the being into the being. Taking the individual through to the universal state. If the state of mind is to return to its previous state one must climb down the pyramid steps.
Gaylene Duncan Spiritual Development 2014 Mixed Media, Staedtler Tradition 6B, Mont Marte Acrylic Burnt Umber, Burnt Sienna, Ultramarine Blue, Titanium White, Lamp Black, AS Artists Gouache Flesh Tint, AS Art Spectrum Watercolours Ivory Black, Cobalt Blue and Raw Sienna, Pastel Conte A Paris France 1355 No. 49 Pink, Mont Marte Skin Tint Brown, light brown, AS Artists Soft Pastel Pure Pigment Burnt Umber, Cretacolor Pastel Stick Blue and brown, Dora The Explorer Jumbo Crayons, Dark Blue, Light Blue, Yellow, Red and Orange, Mont Marte Calligraphy Pen, Medium Nibs Cartridge paper roll 110gsm, Size A2 Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Project 5: Ex 2 Structural Line Drawing Incorporating Space, Depth and Tone Final Drawing Close Ups These close ups represent a lot of personal growth, both in spiritual development and also skill ability for understanding structural lines, which capture the form of the body and focuses on depth, space and foreshortening. I have tried to really explore the many different angles through my structural lines in the hope to capture the form of the human body when clothed placing much empathies on the depth, space and foreshortening. I was really pleased with the final outcome. I felt that the structural lines gave a real sense of depth and space. The different poses offered a variety of view points. It show cased the many compressed body parts when observed through particular view points, and how these have affected the perspective and caused distortion. This effectively displaying good use of foreshortening to develop the three-dimensional volume creating much drama in the picture. Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Project 5: Ex 2 Structural Line Drawing Incorporating Space, Depth and Tone Final Drawing Work In Progress The first thing I did here was to arrange my small-scale sketches into the arrangement I was looking for using a Mixed Media, Staedtler Tradition 6B. I went with this pyramid shape as each row of people symbolise a step up the pyramid, which represents a stage in the spiritual development of the human (MMXIV Unknown). I then used a Mont Marte Calligraphy Pen, medium nib to outline the legs which move through the pyramid considering the direction of all four corners in our lives. Staring at the top of the pyramid I used Pastel Conte A Paris France 1355 No. 49 Pink, Mont Marte Skin Tint Brown, light brown, AS Artists Soft Pastel Pure Pigment Burnt Umber, Cretacolor Pastel Stick Blue and brown, to colour the highest step in the pyramid where the individual moves into the universal state. Then working down my pyramid, with the use of AS Artists Gouache Flesh Tint, AS Art Spectrum Watercolours Ivory Black, Cobalt Blue and Raw Sienna, I painted in the next level. I choice this medium as it appears less dense in substance representing less knowledge acquired from that above. The next step down was then added using, Mont Marte Acrylic Burnt Umber, Burnt Sienna, Ultramarine Blue, Titanium White, Lamp Black and AS Artists Gouache Flesh Tint, also appearing less dense in substance and representing less knowledge acquired. Finally adding in the bottom of the pyramid where it all begins with Dora The Explorer Jumbo Crayons, Dark Blue, Light Blue, Yellow, Red and Orange, which represents the lest knowledge, the beginning one would say, where the complex system of beliefs starts to form. Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 1 Drawing Transforming Microscopic Body Part to Macroscopic Final Drawing Finger Print, 2014 is a direct result of observations and transformations of the microscopic to the macroscopic with intent to provoke a discussion surrounding the contemporary interpretation of the human form. The style of the work was influenced by Hiroyuki Doi painting Untitled (HD 2210) and his remarkable use of symbolic circles and Georgia OKeeffe limited pallet in her painting White Rose with Larkspur 1927
Gaylene Duncan Finger Print 2014 Mixed Media, AS Art Spectrum Watercolours Cadmium Red and Raw Sienna Mont Marte Impasto Mont Woodless Graphite 2B and HB Mont Marte Tracing Paper Cartridge paper roll 110gsm, Size A2 Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 1 Drawing Transforming Microscopic Body Part to Macroscopic Final Drawing Close Ups These close ups represent dermatitis and its intriguing connections and juxtapositions of flaky skin next to smooth skin. Whilst the image does provide nice tonal contrast and is rather ambiguous, I was not very happy with the final outcome as I felt it failed to describe my intent as it was not a good representation of dermatitis. This work needs a lot further investigation in order to find a suitable resolution. Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 1 Drawing Transforming Microscopic Body Part to Macroscopic Final Drawing Work In Progress The first thing I did here was to take Hiroyuki Doi symbolic circles idea and using a Mont Marte Woodless Graphite HB, began creating irregular shapes with intent to depict the journey of my identity (1). Using a combination of Mont Marte Woodless Graphite HB and 2B I created the underlying greyscale (2).Then with a limited pallet made up of AS Art Spectrum Watercolours Cadmium Red and Raw Sienna, I tried to recreate the visually stimulating effects that Georgia OKeeffe work offers us (3). This I was not at all happy with as my washes were no wear near as vibrate enough. This come down to my inability to mix my washes accurately, but also the quality of the paper as it would only take so much. So I will need to spend time to develop this skill. Then using a palette knife I added in the Mont Marte Impasto to represent the cracks in the skin (4) I felt this portrayed them reasonably well. Then using some Mont Marte Tracing Paper I added some over top of impasto with raw sienna to create the darker spots in the skin (5) and finally using a combination of the of AS Art Spectrum Watercolours Cadmium Red and Raw Sienna I painted in the last of the sections (5). I believe that my practice piece was much closer to describing my intent. I found that the larger surfaces area and the quality of the paper really hindered my ability to be successful in my adding of the colours. If I was just after an abstraction and not trying to describe something I would have found this work interesting to the eye. 1 2 3 4 5 Gaylene Duncan, Finger Print, 2014, Mixed Media, AS Art Spectrum Watercolours Cadmium Red and Raw Sienna, Mont Marte Impasto, Mont Woodless Graphite 2B and HB, Mont Marte Tracing Paper Cartridge paper roll 110gsm,, Size A2 Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 2 View Finder Drawings Exploring The Notion of The Body in Space Final Drawing Foster Foster, 2014, investigates the body in space, considering an expansive landscape, and superimposing a figure with the intend to subvert the posture to create an anomaly in scale. The style of the work is influenced by three artist. Rosemary Laing who's work Bulletproofglass, 2002, made me very aware of what I did not want my work to be, forcing me to push myself harder to fully resolve the work in a manner that was easy for the viewer to interpret. Tracey Moffatt work Adventure, #5, 2004 encouraged me to make very deliberate choices in my chosen background and the look of my character. Antony Gormley made me really question the social and professional standing of the work and how this was connected to the nature of the environment I was producing at this particular time. Gaylene Duncan Foster 2014 Mixed Media Mont Marte water colour pencils and Artline200 Fine 0.4 Acid & lignin free 125 gsm paper Size 8 x 10 cm Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 2 View Finder Drawings Exploring The Notion of The Body in Space Final Drawing Close Ups Image 1 Foster This first image of Foster, 2014, I felt investigated body and space nicely. Although the man is hard to spot in the distance I deliberately made him nearly as tall as the tunnel, as to subvert his posture to create an anomaly in scale. The landscape itself I felt was more than suitable as it covered a wide area in terms of its space. In choosing my character, I really tried to take on board the nature qualities of the space. Looking back though I wish I had added a backpack on his back to make this clearer to my audience. However I felt his size and clothing were fitting. Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 2 View Finder Drawings Exploring The Notion of The Body in Space Final Drawing Close Ups Image 2 Foster This second image of Foster, 2014, also investigated body and space nicely. The landscape again considered a wide area in terms of space. However I feel that whilst I was being careful to consider the background, middle ground and forground, in terms of how people would get smaller the further away they are, as a consequence, I failed to subvert his posture leaving his body of normal scale. This would be an area in the work that Id need to re work in order to resolve the issue. Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 2 View Finder Drawings Exploring The Notion of The Body in Space Final Drawing Close Ups Image 3 Foster This third image of Foster, 2014, I believe ticked all the boxes in terms of body and space, landscape and subverting the posture to create an anomaly in scale. However what it did not do was convince me, as the man appeared very cartoonish to me. I am not sure what caused me to draw him up like a cartoon character, but I do feel for this work to be fully resolved I would need redo the man's face and upper body. Project Six: Ex 1 & 2 Project 6: Ex 2 View Finder Drawings Exploring The Notion of The Body in Space Final Drawing Work In Progress Image 1,2 &3 Foster On a whole I was happy with how Foster, 2014, come together. I liked the individual design of each image. I also liked the contrast of watercolour pencils and ink, in terms of how it looked together. But a down fall to this medium when placed together I feel, is that it creates a cartoon feel to the overall work. This would not be a problem if this was the look you were after, but in this situation it was far from what I was aiming for. This is something for me to consider in future works. Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Visual and Written Research Project 7: Ex 1 Analysis of Two Artists Who use Text in Their Work Artist 1 Lesley Dill Dill, Lesley A Word Made Flesh: Throat 1994 photolithograph with etching on mulberry paper, hand-sewn on Arches buff paper plate: 25 3/4 x 21 1/2 in.; 65.4 x 54.6 cm (Dill 1994) Lesley Dills body of work is focused on issues of identity, womens societal roles and the human conditions in general. She uses text in her work, often transposing poetry on her sculptures or models. In doing so, Dill merges the verbal and visual languages to provoke impressions which are emotionally charged, sophisticated and at the same time, raw yet well distinguished.(Database Unknown) Sited in the Article Reflections On LESLEY DILL: Words Lie Sleeping Inside Our Bodies, Dill considers herself a collector of language (Hausman 2010). Keeping this in mind, one of the reason Dill likes to use text in her work can be sited in the article titled Lesley Dill, which states that Dill suggests that through language we not only reveal who we are but also clothe, armor, and disguise ourselves (sdfolkart 2009). If we look at her work titled A Word Made Flesh: Throat 1994 it is feasible to say that the language here is being used symbolically as a visual component to dress the female figure enabling Dill to explore how the general public relate to their own bodies in terms of their personal spirituality and their connections or placement within society, connecting both the visual and written text. Furthermore it allows Dill to consider her own position, providing her with the opportunity to express her own views on the beauty of imperfection (Wyman 2012). Based on this research it is my opinion that Dill effectively connecting the text with the image as a result of her ability to embrace both her body and mind in a symbolic manner allowing her to effectively communicate her intentions to her audience at the same time as allowing herself to become more understanding of herself as an individual and as an artist. Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Visual and Written Research Project 7: Ex 1 Analysis of Two Artists Who use Text in Their Work Artist 2 Barbara Kruger Untitled (Your Body Is A Battleground) Artist: Barbara Kruger Date of Work: 1989 Medium: Photographic silkscreen on vinyl Size: 112112 (284.5284.5cm) (Kruger 1989) Barbara Kruger was best known for her conceptual collage and installation work, during the 1980s, which used sardonic statements confronting issues of sexism, classism, ideology, consumerism, autonomy, sexuality, identity, power struggles, control issues within society, and the dynamics of male and female roles (Burden 2012), which she placed on random media cut-ups and photographic images in black, red and white (Burden 2012) as a visual component. Sited in the article Women of the Underground : Cultural Innovators Speak for Themselves Kruger makes her intent regarding text clear stating I think making art, regardless of the medium, is about creating commentary, about what it means to be alive, to live another day. And thats what I try do with my pictures and my words (Burden 2012). This is how Kruger shows her connection between the visual and the written text. If we look at the work Untitled (Your Body Is A Battleground) (Kruger 1989) we can easily see how Kruger takes an ordinary image of a face and transforms one side leaving a positive and negative images of the same face, with intent to show her audience visually how women are under scrutiny. But this alone does not convey Kruger intended message of how society is fixating over the physicality of men and women. The magic happens when she adds her related text to the image Your Body Is A Battleground, (Kruger 1989) (Lauraflynn 2013). However the text alone is not enough either. When she materially alters the text to be red and white, yet another visual component, her idea is now reinforced. It is my opinion that Kruger uses her text effectively through her carefully planned judgement of text, superimposed over visual components tying the social aspect with the written word. Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Project 7: Ex 2 A Work Which Responds to Text Final Drawing Civil War, Whats Civil? Civil War, Whats Civil?, is a direct result of exploring the written text with in an artwork. Its main focus was on the concept street. The style of the work was partly inspired by Lesley Dills work A Word Made Flesh: Throat, 1994 and her concept of using written text to provoke emotionally charged, yet sophisticated impressions. It was further inspired by Barbara Kruger work Untitled (Your Body Is A Battleground) and her ability to take an image and use it to convey a powerful message on an important social issue. It was also inspired by Jean-Michel Basquiat work Untitled (Pecho/Oreja), 1982 1983 through his use of juvenile scribbles of a child. Finally it was inspired by Deborah Grant, work Detail from God's Voice in the Midnight Hours, 2013. as she combines mixed media as a collage to tell a story. The work talks of civil war in general with a focus on Ukraine, Syria and Iraq, as the civil war continues to play out. It looks at how the civil war effects all of us globally even if we are thousands of miles away and in a different country. It takes a good look from on the street at how civil war affects innocent civilians. It places a strong emphases on the casualties of war particularly the innocent children. It is designed to be confronting and begs its audience to consider what is civil in a civil war? It is a protest to those in power who could potentially end the civil war. And an attempt to bring awareness to all concerned.
Gaylene Duncan Civil War, Whats Civil?, 2014 Mixed Media, photographic and digital art Size 60 x 60 cm Callimachi 2014), (Juma 2014), (Lima 2014), (Deeb 2014), (Juma 2014), (Hana 2014) , (Ramadan 2014), (Supinsky 2014), (Shemetov 2014), (Soleimani 2014), (CZANNE c.1875) , (Getty 2014), (Age 2014), (Age 2014), (Reuters 2014), (AFP 2014), (Reuters 2014), (AFP/Getty 2014) and (DEEB 2014) (Cris 2014) (ofpalestine 2014) (Waninahi 2013) (Grigg 2013) (Software 2000-2004) Deborah Grant, Detail from God's Voice in the Midnight Hours, 2013. (Grant 2013)
Her work combines historical events along with personal experiences that make reference to contemporary social and political issues. Grant selects her materials from a variety of sources such as magazines, comic books, published text and historical art reference books. She then uses this material to translate through her signature drawing method, creating personal, non- linear narratives, which explores cultural identity, race and politics.
Her work is amazing so I would not change a thing if doing a similar work. Instead I would try to adopt her ability to combine simular mediums to tell my story.
Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Project 7: Ex 2 A Work Which Responds to Text Final Drawing Close Ups Civil War, Whats Civil? Callimachi 2014), (Juma 2014), (Lima 2014), (Deeb 2014), (Juma 2014), (Hana 2014) , (Ramadan 2014), (Supinsky 2014), (Shemetov 2014), (Soleimani 2014), (CZANNE c.1875) , (Getty 2014), (Age 2014), (Age 2014), (Reuters 2014), (AFP 2014), (Reuters 2014), (AFP/Getty 2014) and (DEEB 2014) (Cris 2014) (ofpalestine 2014) (Waninahi 2013) (Grigg 2013) (Software 2000-2004) These close ups represent my interpretation of a civil war and how it is played out on the streets for everyone to fear and suffer the consequence of a politically charges situation which could otherwise be prevented. It is my dedication to those forced to live in fear. My reality of a world that should not exist in this day and age. My personal protest against the suffering. I believe my written text was more than appropriate for this work. Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Project 7: Ex 2 A Work Which Responds to Text Final Drawing Work In Progress - Civil War, Whats Civil? Callimachi 2014), (Juma 2014), (Lima 2014), (Deeb 2014), (Juma 2014), (Hana 2014) , (Ramadan 2014), (Supinsky 2014), (Shemetov 2014), (Soleimani 2014), (CZANNE c.1875) , (Getty 2014), (Age 2014), (Age 2014), (Reuters 2014), (AFP 2014), (Reuters 2014), (AFP/Getty 2014) and (DEEB 2014) (Cris 2014) (ofpalestine 2014) (Waninahi 2013) (Grigg 2013) (Software 2000-2004) I could not have been happier with the outcome of the resolved work for Civil War, Whats Civil?. I feel the work really accomplished what I had set out to do, from the beginning. I would have liked to have had more time for this piece of work as I would have liked to have explored how the universe is being dragged in to a civil war which is not theirs to fight. I had ideas for evolving the work further showing the globe in space dragging and drawing a force of gravity sucking Australia in through helping to deliver material aid showing Australia gravitating toward the globe. Along with Americas efforts and other country, in order to show the true effect of how these civil wars have a way of evolving into a world war. Bringing the war to our very own streets.
I felt that the visual and written text related beautifully to one another in this situation. I believe as an artist this style of work really brings out the humanitarian in me and my need to concern myself for the human welfare from a pacifist stance. This is very much who I identify myself as, as an artist. Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Project 7: Ex 3 A Text Work Exploring The Everyday Final Drawing Family Tribute Family Tribute is a result of exploring text within a work of art, with focus on the everyday. The style of the drawing has been partly inspired by Sarah Lucas work Geezer, 2002 and her ability to take the English language, and make it capable of developing a natural attraction to earlier situations like realism It has also been inspired by Ralph Ueltzhoeffer work David Beckham "Textportrait" (2011) and his technique of superimposing text over portraits filled with biographical information. The drawing explores my daily life, through relationships, and daily activities. It is a tribute to those who surround me with love, and make it possible for me to do the things I love in life.
Gaylene Duncan Family Tribute, August 30 th , 2014 Mixed media, Digital collage Photos, Drawings and text Intended Size 52.5 x 92.5 cm Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Project 7: Ex 3 A Text Work Exploring The Everyday Final Drawing Close Ups These close ups represent my understanding of my daily life and routine. They represent the closes people to me. They are part of a resolved work which explored my everyday by taking a close look at my origins in life, my family, friends, my life as a student in university, myself as a child, a parent and a friend. They show how enriched my life is as a result of those around me. They are a constant reminder of how fortunate I am. Project Seven: Ex 1 2 & 3 Project 7: Ex 3 A Text Work Exploring The Everyday Final Drawing Work In Progress I was delighted with the outcome of this resolved work for Family Tribute. I feel the work had accomplished so much more than what I had originally set out to do. I found myself surprised by the origin of my name being connected to the Hebrew language. I was shocked by the connection with the Duncan Clan Badge and how it reminded me of my father. Looking back at the finish product I dont think there is anything I would change. I felt that the written text was appropriate for this image and topic. Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Mind Map Types of Sketches to try After doing some artist research I have decided that the following would be interesting to have a go at. Jenny Sage combination of loose, soft and hard, contour lines, curved lines, varying in thickness, different shades on tones to depict the emotional and physical appearance. Realist Approach. Vern ah Kee loose horizontal, vertical and curved lines, overlapping to create skin tones and form. Realist Approach Marlene Dumas fluid stroke of ink and watercolour wash. Feminist Aproach. Lucian Freud figurative aproach first in charcoal and then in paint. Egon Schiele extremely personal and expressive, intense use of lines David Hammons create using grease placed on the body and directly imprinted on paper. Einhard Zang acrylic paint rolled on and then painted over or collaged. Katie Ferris oil and paint pigments. Proportions Before I do any drawings as I will need to research proportions for the Head and Body Technique to incorporate in Final Work The contrast of the Willow Charcoal Thin, and Young Artist White Chalk Shiny Ink washes Text (For Later Piece of work) Mont Marte Gesso 6, for washes Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Proportions Before I do any drawings I think its important that I take time to consider the proportions of the human body as this really is an exercise in observations and proportioning. So I began with the head. Taking a look at two different ways of breaking the face down. The first was Betty Edwards FULL VIEW General proportions of the human head (Edwards 2003). I found this really useful as it gives you a great indication of how to go about working out where everything is located in relations to other parts of the face. I.e. how the Center of the eye lines up with the end of the mouth. But I also had a look at Paulo Fonseca Jr, "Drawing People - Lines , Shapes, & Proportions(Fonseca Jr.). As his gave a nice account of roughly how much each section of the face broke down to, which I feel is really handy to know as just a quick estimate of size comparison. (Edwards 2003) (Fonseca Jr.) Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Proportions (arcade unknown) (Perard Unknown) (Fonseca Jr.) The next important thing was to look at how the body itself was broken up into proportions. There is a lot of different ways one could go about this so I decided to have a look at three different methods. The first was another one of Paulo Fonseca Jr ideas (1), which was like a bean like structure that broke the body down into ovals and circles, divided up into 7 sections. I really liked the way this worked as it seemed very clear and really easy to get my head around. The second ( 2) by Victor Perard, was a bit more confusing, but still easy enough to get your head around, but what I really liked here was it explained the tilt of the shoulders and pelvis. This was helpful in thinking about the body aligned in different angles. The last one (3) which is a method I have used often by Online image arcade, I find is very basic but also very accurate. What I love about this diagram though is it shows you just how little of a difference can completely make all the proportions wrong. I added it here to basically remind me of this fact. 1 2 3 Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Testing So here I was just playing about getting the feel for proportions. The first couple (1) are pretty much based on Victor Perard, idea. I found that you got really nice lines using this technique.
The second one (2) is something I have done for a long time now. I cant even be sure where I learned this from as I was about 15 years old when I started doing the technique. I find this technique really liberating. I feel I can do any pose using this. I love the movement your able to capture with this style also. 1 2 Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Testing Gaylene Duncan, August 5, 2014 Self Portrait Kraft Paper Roll Brown , Black Artline CLIX 4, Willow Charcoal Thin, Young Artist White Chalk 62 cm x 37.5 Here I was attempting to capture myself using Jenny Sages traditional mark making and observation, techniques, with variation in my lines and the tonal values. I also wanted to experiment with the Willow Charcoal Thin, and Young Artist White Chalk on the brown paper. It was very hard to capture this in a photo but I really liked the contrast in the two mediums. As for my line marks I found it really hard to let myself go and be free like Jenny Sages. I feel I did this in the hair and the paints, but the rest was still to stiff. However the contrast of the Willow Charcoal Thin, and Young Artist White Chalk is something I think I will be looking to add into my final work. Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Testing My aim here was to explore with Vern ah Kees idea of loose horizontal, vertical and curved lines, overlapping to create different skin tones and form. I started by sketching in a faint outline of myself in hope to give me some guidance. But once I started to try to describe myself using these loose horizontal, vertical and curved lines, overlapping, I found it very difficult. I seem to have a real issue of letting go and allowing myself to be free in my work. I dont know if this is coming from an uncertainty in myself or the fact that I have always drawn in one style only. So years and years of one structure making it hard to brake down the walls. Whilst the portrait is very much me to look at, I really didnt like the outcome of the work at all. It felt way to busy and very messy. Very unlike Vern ah Kees style. As I want to try to create something really special in the final work, I think it will be best to leave part of my experimenting out of it. Gaylene Duncan Self Portrait August 5, 2014 Kraft Paper Roll Brown Blue Artline CLIX 4 71cm x 37.5cm Project Five: Ex 1 & 2 Visual and Written Research Project 5: Ex 1 Large Scale Line Drawing of A Whole Body Self Portrait Testing Testing out the Mont Marte Calligraphy Pen fine nib on the end of the stick was the most unusual feeling. I had never felt so uncomfortable when drawing before as I did right now. I found I had to really concentrate on the angle at which I held the stick in order to get the pen to work. This was frustrating me to no end. However I felt when I managed to get the pen to work it gave me really natural markings. When I had a go with the Mont Marte Stencil Brush round head hog bristle size 10, on the other hand I found this really easy for getting marks down on the paper. The Robert. A. Wade NEEF. 970 Taklon Round 10, was even easier again. I tried getting different size lines in term of thickness as I knew this would be needed. I also had a go at doing some soft washes, with a Mont Marte Gesso 6, which I was happy with. I was amazed that with such a large brush I could get such a thin line. I found the Art Spectrum Artist Ink Black, to be a fantastic medium to use as it was so easy to apply and when watered down gave really nice washes. I didnt like working with pens and brushes attached to the stick. I felt this really hindered my ability to work naturally. I am not sure if this is due to the length of the stick or the fact that I found it very difficult to stand up long enough to achieve what it was I was trying to do. If ever my feet and back a normal again I intend to return to this exercise to see how it would have felt had I not had this issue. Tools and Medium Mont Marte Gesso 6, Robert. A. Wade NEEF. 970 Taklon Round 10, Mont Marte Stencil Brush round head hog bristle size 10, Art Spectrum Artist Ink Black, Mont Marte Calligraphy Pen fine nib Cartridge paper roll 110gsm