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Executive Resume
Abby Locke
May 9, 2013
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When you are in the hot seat for a new job, employers, hiring managers, and recruiters
all want to know the same thingwhat can you offer? For senior-level professionals,
your quantifiable, high-impact accomplishments give companies a snapshot of your
unique tangible value. So, if your executive resume lacks the WOW factor, you are not
doing a great job of marketing yourself.
In order to take a career accomplishment from average to outstanding, you need to set
the stage for the reader. For example: Increased annual sales 25% in 2006. At first
glance, this accomplishment appears impressive, however, there are several questions
that should be addressed.
What was the sales growth prior to 2006, what actions or activities directly impacted the
companys sales or was the company going through any changes/transitions during
2006? The answer to one or more of these questions can cast a whole new light on the
original accomplishment statement.
How To Create An Effective Executive Resume
Take the reader through the circumstances that led to the accomplishment; describe
what was going on the industry or company during a specific time period. Indicate
whether you were tasked with obtaining specific goals or corporate objectives. A
corporate challenge expressed on an executive resume may look like one of these:
Tasked with delivering 10% return on $700 million investment portfolio in unpredictable
real estate industry.
Charged with reducing installation costs which peaked at 20% higher above industry
norm and boosting operational efficiencies by 15%.
Hand-picked by CEO to increase profitability, improve eroding market share and repair
strained customer relationships.
Your strategy here is to show employers the extent of your leadership capabilities and
problem-solving skills; discuss what new initiatives you implemented or innovative
methods you employed. The key is not to overwhelm the reader with minor details, but
make sure to give a good overview of what steps you took to achieve the desired
outcome. A few good examples of action step sentences include:
Recruited, assembled, and trained top-performing sales team and utilized word-of-mouth
marketing strategy to build client base and generate consistent revenue stream.
Led transition team and orchestrated all facets of corporate acquisition including
financial analysis, revenue projections, valuation and pricing, and bid submission process.
Were you successful and what was the bottom-line impact of your actions? Summarize
the highlights and main points of each accomplishment into one or two sentences. Write
your career accomplishments in a format that quantifies the results and provides
direct evidence of your core competencies and qualifications. The accomplishment
statements below demonstrate how to capture powerful results:
Executive resumes have to be succinct, concise and be able to pass the 60-second
test. Regardless of how remarkable your quantifiable results may be, they lose their
impact if placed at the end of a sentence. If we took the same examples used in Step 3
and revised them, they would appear like this:
Remember that C-A-R stories are critical on executive resumes, leadership profiles and
achievement summaries; they also work well as practice material for interview
preparation.
Where do I begin? Unfortunately, you cannot hang a sign on your door and just wait
Write it yourself!
You will be better prepared for the interviews.
Be Relevant!
Everything must directly relate to your job objective.
Be Positive!
Emphasize your accomplishments and skills.
Be Specific!
Document your education, abilities, experience, etc. Present
data in reverse chronological order (most recent first).
Be Accurate!
You will be expected to perform as described. Make certain all
information is correct and verifiable.
Be Brief!
Use short sentences. Use action words to define duties. One
page only. Clearly typed, (do not use a font smaller than 10point), use good margins, and highlight important information.
Make it Error-Free!
Have someone check your spelling and grammar.
Have it Look Good!
Keep resume formal and businesslike (Professional). Keep it
clear, concise, logical flow of information, consistent style and
form, and easy to read. Use uppercase and lowercase letters.
Have consistent spacing and use consistent verb tenses.
The Bottom Line!
Does the resume arouse the interest of the employer? Does it
get the applicant invited for an interview?
EDIT - EDIT - EDIT
Resume Writing
There are two resume formats that are widely used today. These formats are:
chronological and functional. Each format has its own purpose and advantages. Which
format should you choose? It depends on several factors.
The chronological format presents your education, work experience and activities
with each section described in reverse chronological order with the most recent at the
top of each section. This type of resume is the traditional. If your skills and
accomplishments coincide with your most significant work experience and if these are
in line with your career goals, this is the format to use.
On the other hand, the functional format organizes your skills and accomplishments
into job task groupings that support your stated career objective. If you must pull
together certain skills and accomplishments from a variety of past experiences to
show your preparation for what you want to do in the future, then the functional
format is for you. People who have been out of the workplace for several years-for
example, those people who choose to stay at home to raise a family while the children
are young-benefit greatly from this format. It draws attention to what you did rather
than when you did it.
Your resume should be a brief highlight of your experiences and education. The goal
of your resume is to effectively market yourself to potential employers, and to obtain
an interview. Your resume is about you, the job hunter, not just about the jobs you've
held.
Starting from scratch: BRAINSTORM all experiences you have
had, such as: volunteer, internship, employment, etc. You may
not list everything on each resume, but if you keep a master
list, it will help you in the future.
Targeting your resume: If you are applying for more than one job,
you will need several versions of your resume. Each resume
should be tailored for each type of position. Always emphasize
the experiences you had that most directly relate to the
position for which you are applying.
Catch the Reader's Eye: Most readers will spend 20 to 30
seconds initially reviewing your resume. Using bullets, bolding
and indentations will make it easier for the reader to follow and
read relevant information. Use action words when describing
skills and experience.
Length of Your Resume: One-page, unless you have years of
experience and education.
There are certain items you as a job seeker should virtually always leave off your
resume. Besides allowing the potential employer to discriminate against you (either
intentionally or unintentionally) before he/she even meets you, including any of The
Deadly Dozen will date your resume about 30 years.
Be sure to omit The Deadly Dozen from your resume:
Height: Even if you're of average height, the potential employer
may not be.
Weight: Too thin, too fat, too perfect.any one of these might be
a strike against you in the eyes of a potential employer.
Health: Would you put anything besides "Excellent" on your
resume? It is not likely.
Sex: Though they may be able to guess this because of your
name, don't mention it anyway. You want to be hired on the
basis of your qualifications, not because you are filling a quote,
right?
salary too low, you may severely under price yourself. Wait to
discuss salary until the interview, if possible.
Sample Objective Statements
Cheerful personality.
Professional demeanor.
Talented in what.
administered
analyzed
assigned
attained
chaired
contracted
consolidated
coordinated
delegated
developed
directed
evaluated
executed
improved
increased
organized
oversaw
persuaded
planned
prioritized
produced
promoted
publicized
recommended
reconciled
recruited
reviewed
scheduled
strengthened
spoke
supervised
translated
wrote
examined
extracted
identified
investigated
organized
reviewed
Research Skills:
clarified
collected
criticized
diagnosed
evaluated
inspected
interpreted
interviewed
summarized
surveyed
systemized
developed
enabled
evaluated
explained
facilitated
guided
informed
initiated
instructed
persuaded
set goals
stimulated
educated
expedited
organized
prepared
processed
purchased
recorded
retrieved
screened
specified
systemized
tabulated
validated
develop
directed
established
fashioned
forecast
founded
illustrated
instituted
integrated
introduced
invented
managed
marketed
originated
performed
planned
researched
revitalized
shaped
Teaching Skills:
adapted
advised
clarified
coached
coordinated
communicated
coordinated
Helping Skills:
assessed
assisted
clarified
coached
counseled
demonstrated
diagnosed
Financial Skills:
administered
allocated
analyzed
appraised
audited
balanced
budgeted
calculated
computed
Communication Skills:
addressed
arbitrated
arranged
authored
directed
drafted
edited
enlisted
interpreted
lectured
mediated
moderated
corresponded
developed
formulated
influenced
motivated
negotiated
engineered
fabricated
maintained
operated
overhauled
programmed
remodeled
repaired
solved
trained
upgraded
developed
facilitated
familiarized
guided
referred
rehabilitated
represented
Technical Skills:
assembled
built
calculated
computed
designed
devised
Creative Skills:
acted
conceptualized
created
designed
approved
arranged
catalogued
classified
collected
compiled
dispatched
executed
generated
implemented
inspected
monitored
operated
policy proposals impacting on the asset forfeiture program, money laundering enforcement,
Bank Secrecy Act and Kleptocracy.
The Section works with the entire spectrum of law enforcement and regulatory agencies using an
interagency, interdisciplinary and international approach. The Section is mandated to: litigate
complex, sensitive and multi-district cases; coordinate multi-district investigations and
prosecutions; provide guidance, legal advice and assistance with respect to asset forfeiture and
money laundering investigations and prosecutions; develop regulatory and legislative initiatives;
ensure the uniform application of forfeiture and money laundering statutes; and provide litigation
assistance to U.S. Attorneys' Offices and Criminal Division components.
The Section oversees asset forfeiture and money laundering training and conducts seminars for
federal prosecutors, investigating agents, and law enforcement personnel. It also produces legal
publications and training materials to enhance its legal support functions.
The Section adjudicates all petitions for remission or mitigation of forfeited assets in judicial
forfeiture cases, administers the Weed and Seed Program and the Equitable Sharing Program,
and oversees the approval of the placement of forfeited property into official use by federal
agencies.
Job Description:
The Chief of AFMLS:
- Vigorously enforces money laundering, Bank Secrecy Act, and forfeiture laws; supervises the
work of attorneys assigned to matters requiring grand jury presentations and trial; reviews
proposed court orders and motions; renders advice as to strategy and evidence problems; reviews
appellate briefs; and supervises, counsels, and advises attorneys in the trial of cases.
Plans and supervises all policy and operational activities within the Section and implements the
Department's strategic planning for asset forfeiture and money laundering goals.
Proposes and reviews legislative initiatives and Department policies regarding asset forfeiture,
money laundering, and the Bank Secrecy Act; and assesses the implications of proposed
legislation on investigative operations.
Improves procedures for obtaining oversight and assistance to the U.S. Attorneys' forfeiture
litigation; and provides legal advice, training, and guidance on specialized aspects of money
laundering, asset forfeiture, and the Bank Secrecy Act to the U.S. Attorneys' Offices and
investigative organizations.
Consults with the Deputy Assistant Attorney General and the Assistant Attorney General
concerning legal and policy questions relating to statutes administered by the Section and the
status of important cases; reviews and approves a large volume of general correspondence, legal
opinions, authorizations, instructions, and advisory materials that emanate from the Section;
upon request, prepares testimony for congressional committees; and participates in annual
regional international conferences to foster joint asset forfeiture investigations.
Provides direct oversight over the allocation of two distinct financial resources: the Division's
general allocation and the money received from the Assets Forfeiture Fund; strengthens internal
controls for financial systems and improves efficient and cost-effective fund management and
accountability; and streamlines Section operations and reporting hierarchies to ensure that the
Section's core competencies are results oriented and citizen-centered.
Develops a comprehensive business plan for the Section which sets forth the justification for
resources and identifies areas for cost savings; acquires and leverages needed fiscal and human
resources to achieve results-oriented outcomes; and develops budget enhancements that include
both performance measures and outcomes that reflect the Section's, Division's and Department's
strategic goals and objectives.
Demonstrates a strong commitment and support for the Division's equal employment policies
and programs to enhance workforce diversity; and promotes merit promotion principles in all
aspects of personnel hiring, promotions, training and development and employee retention.
Qualifications:
Interested applicants must possess a J.D. degree and be duly licensed and authorized to practice
as an attorney under the laws of any State, territory of the United States, or the District of
Columbia. Applicants must be an active member of the bar (any jurisdiction) in good standing
and have at least 5 years post-J.D. experience. Applicants must also have a high level of
management/supervisory experience, proven leadership skill, significant trial experience, and
substantive knowledge in the areas of asset forfeiture, money laundering, and/or other cases
involving financial institutions.
Applicants must submit a resume and a separate narrative statement/response that addresses each
of the Mandatory Professional/Technical Qualification factors related to this position as well as
the Executive Core Qualifications (ECQs) related to all positions in the Senior Executive
Service.
OPM's Guide to Senior Executive Service Qualifications can assist you in writing an effective
SES application. In particular, please note the Challenge-Context-Action-Result Model that is
recommended and very helpful when drafting ECQ narrative responses. The Guide is available
on OPM's Website at: http://www.opm.gov/policy-data-oversight/senior-executiveservice/reference-materials/guidetosesquals_2012.pdf
Mandatory Professional/Technical Qualification Requirements:
1. Experience in developing and prosecuting complex federal criminal and/or asset forfeiture
cases;
2. Thorough knowledge of federal regulatory and investigatory agencies, on-going programs and
key national goals and priorities relating to asset forfeiture and money laundering;
3. Significant experience in supervising criminal and/or asset forfeiture cases and reviewing the
work product of attorneys; and
4. Ability to formulate and implement Departmental policies on all matters pertaining to assigned
areas.
Candidates will be evaluated on the mandatory Professional/Technical Qualification
Requirements identified above. If candidates are found to possess all technical requirements,
they will then be evaluated based on the Executive Core Qualifications as established by the U.S.
Office of Personnel Management (OPM) outlined below.
Executive/Managerial Requirements:
ECQ 1 - LEADING CHANGE. This core qualification encompasses the ability to develop and
implement an organizational vision, which integrates key national and program goals, priorities,
values, and other factors. Inherent to it is the ability to balance change and continuity to
continually strive to improve customer service and program performance within the basic
Government framework, to create a work environment that encourages creative thinking, and to
maintain focus, intensity and persistence, even under adversity.
Leadership Competencies: Creativity & Innovation, Continual Learning, External Awareness,
Flexibility, Resilience, Service Motivation, Strategic Thinking, Vision
ECQ 2 - LEADING PEOPLE. This core qualification involves the ability to design and
implement strategies, which maximize employee potential and foster high ethical standards in
meeting the organization's vision, mission, and goals.
Leadership Competencies: Conflict Management, Cultural Awareness, Integrity/Honesty, Team
Building
ECQ 3 - RESULTS DRIVEN. This core qualification stresses accountability and continuous
improvement. It includes the ability to make timely and effective decisions and produce results
through strategic planning and the implementation and evaluation of programs and policies.
Leadership Competencies: Accountability, Customer Service, Decisiveness, Entrepreneurship,
Problem Solving, Technical Credibility
ECQ 4 - BUSINESS ACUMEN. This core qualification involves the ability to acquire and
administer human, financial, material, and information resources in a manner which instills
public trust and accomplishes the organization's mission, and to use new technology to enhance
decision making.
Leadership Competencies: Financial Management, Technology Management, Human
Resources Management
ECQ 5 - BUILDING COALITIONS. This core qualification involves the ability to explain,
advocate and express facts and ideas in a convincing manner, and negotiate with individuals and
groups internally and externally. It also involves the ability to develop an expansive professional
network with other organizations, and to identify the internal and external politics that impact the
work of the organization.
Department Policies
Equal Employment Opportunity: The U.S. Department of Justice is an Equal Opportunity/Reasonable
Accommodation Employer. Except where otherwise provided by law, there will be no discrimination
because of color, race, religion, national origin, political affiliation, marital status, disability (physical or
mental), age, sex, gender identity, sexual orientation, genetic information, status as a parent, membership
or non-membership in an employee organization, on the basis of personal favoritism, or any other nonmerit factor. The Department of Justice welcomes and encourages applications from persons with
physical and mental disabilities. The Department is firmly committed to satisfying its affirmative
obligations under the Rehabilitation Act of 1973, to ensure that persons with disabilities have every
opportunity to be hired and advanced on the basis of merit within the Department of Justice.
Reasonable Accommodations: This agency provides reasonable accommodation to applicants with
disabilities where appropriate. If you need a reasonable accommodation for any part of the application
and hiring process, please notify the agency. Determinations on requests for reasonable accommodation
will be made on a case-by-case basis.
Outreach and Recruitment for Qualified Applicants with Disabilities: The Department encourages
qualified applicants with disabilities, including individuals with targeted/severe disabilities to apply in
response to posted vacancy announcements. Qualified applicants with targeted/severe disabilities may be
eligible for direct hire, non-competitive appointment under Schedule A (5 C.F.R. 213.3102(u)) hiring
authority. Individuals with targeted/severe disabilities are encouraged to register for the Office of
Personnel Management (OPM) Shared List of People with Disabilities (the Bender Disability Employment
Registry) by submitting their resume to resume@benderconsult.com
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and referencing "Federal Career Opportunities" in the subject line. Additional information about the
Bender Registry is available atwww.benderconsult.com[external link]. Individuals with disabilities may
also contact one of the Departments Disability Points of Contact (DPOC). See list of DPOCs.
Suitability and Citizenship: It is the policy of the Department to achieve a drug-free workplace and
persons selected for employment will be required to pass a drug test which screens for illegal drug use
prior to final appointment. Employment is also contingent upon the completion and satisfactory
adjudication of a background investigation. Only U.S. citizens are eligible for employment with the
Executive Office for Immigration Review and the United States Attorneys' Offices. Unless otherwise
indicated in a particular job advertisement, non-U.S. Citizens may apply for employment with other
organizations, but should be advised that appointments of non-U.S. Citizens are extremely rare; such
appointments would be possible only if necessary to accomplish the Department's mission and would be
subject to strict security requirements. Applicants who hold dual citizenship in the U.S. and another
country will be considered on a case-by-case basis.
Veterans: There is no formal rating system for applying veterans' preference to attorney appointments in
the excepted service; however, the Department of Justice considers veterans' preference eligibility as a
positive factor in attorney hiring. Applicants eligible for veterans' preference must include that
information in their cover letter or resume and attach supporting documentation (e.g., the DD 214,
Certificate of Release or Discharge from Active Duty and other supporting documentation) to their
submissions. Although the "point" system is not used, per se, applicants eligible to claim 10-point
preference must submit Standard Form (SF) 15, Application for 10-Point Veteran Preference, and submit
the supporting documentation required for the specific type of preference claimed (visit the OPM
website,www.opm.gov/forms/pdf_fill/SF15.pdf for a copy of SF 15, which lists the types of 10-point
preferences and the required supporting document(s). Applicants should note that SF 15 requires
supporting documentation associated with service- connected disabilities or receipt of nonserviceconnected disability pensions to be dated 1991 or later except in the case of service members submitting
official statements or retirement orders from a branch of the Armed Forces showing that his or her
retirement was due to a permanent service-connected disability or that he/she was transferred to the
permanent disability retired list (the statement or retirement orders must indicate that the disability is
10% or more).
This and other vacancy announcements can be found under Attorney Vacancies and Volunteer Legal
Internships. The Department of Justice cannot control further dissemination and/or posting of
information contained in this vacancy announcement. Such posting and/or dissemination is not an
endorsement by the Department of the organization or group disseminating and/or posting the
information.
Mission Statement
The mission of the Adrian College bachelor of arts in criminal justice program is to ready students to be
competent, knowledgeable generalists in the criminal justice field. Consistent with the mission and principles
of the College, students should deepen their ability to be thoughtful, caring, inclusive and active persons
committed to human rights and constitutional remedies, and to social justice, and trained in the liberal arts
tradition.
Adrian Colleges affiliation with the United Methodist Church informs the values, principles, and behavior of
the College and the criminal justice program. Methodisms founder, John Wesley, advocated a Christian faith
that emphasized a social consciousness. Adrian Colleges founder, Asa Mahan, opposed slavery and believed
in the power of action. The Methodist heritage encourages an active concern for peace and justice growing
out of the commitment to Christian traditions and values and an ecumenical understanding of human spiritual
experience. Because of these traditions, Adrian College has always sought to include persons from all
backgrounds, particularly those who have not been well represented in higher education.
The criminal justice program continues this tradition of commitment to the values of social action, peace and
justice, and inclusion. Students from all backgrounds are strongly encouraged to thoughtfully and critically
assess their values and behavior, now and in the future. Students are challenged to develop intellectual and
interpersonal skills to actuate these principles. The strong tradition of liberal arts education provides the
academic backbone for a broad-based, generalist foundation of knowledge, values, and skills.
Program Goals
1.
2.
To promote and develop in students an understanding of criminal justice related politics and
law; a working knowledge of best practices in community development aspects of crime prevention;
juvenile probation, detention, and residential treatment; problem-oriented community policing;
community corrections; adult probation; prison; prisoner reentry and parole.
3.
4.
5.
To prepare students for the option of graduate school or law school through exposure to
research methods, sociological theory, and a senior capstone research seminar.
Program Objectives
1.
2.
Demonstrate the ability to model best practices and current knowledge in the several
criminal justice roles at an effective entry-level of competence.
3.
Demonstrate the ability to use critical thinking skills in classroom exercises applied to
criminal justice texts, readers, role play, case-analysis, videos, academic service learning,
interviews, guest speakers and tours.
4.
Demonstrate important observational techniques, text review, and evaluate research studies
and other research-based knowledge in the criminal justice field at an increasingly advanced level
sufficient to do entry level graduate work, law school studies, and/or job-related research.
5.
Demonstrate the use of theoretical frameworks as applied to the growth of the criminal
justice apparatus and ability to explain the multiple perspectives and value conflicts revealed in the
history of criminal justice as an emerging field.
6.
7.
8.
9.
Demonstrate personal values and conduct that relate to criminal justice professional ethical
standards sufficient to encourage the criminal justice program Director to make a recommendation
for employment for you at a criminal justice agency when interviewed about your college career at
Adrian College
Have you heard me talk about the C.A.R method? If you are a client of mine, you have. Its a method I use in every
single resume. It is, to me, the single most important factor when writing about your accomplishments.
OK, so what does C.A.R. stand for and what does it mean for you?
C.A.R. stands for: Challenge Action Results
When consulting with clients and proceeding with the data mining process, I always ask them about their C.A.R.
stories. What were the stories behind their accomplishments? What was going on in the company before they took on
the issue? Give the reader some background, not a novel, just a hint of what the environment was like.
So ask yourself, what was the Challenge I faced when either a) I joined the company or B) I took on the new
situation or C) I was promoted? Briefly discuss the Challenge. Again, it doesnt have to be super lengthy. You just
want to get your message across.
For the Action portion, this is where you can talk about what you did to resolve or change the situation. What action
or steps did you take? For some jobs, it might be quite detailed, but I wouldnt advise talking about every single thing.
Summarize as best as you can. Remember, HR people have lots of resumes to review and not a lot of time.
For the Results portion of C.A.R., talk about the results. What was the percentage of production increase? How
much did you increase sales or people productivity? Use numbers and percentages whenever possible.
These are the things that stand out and make you more employable as employers want PROOF of what you are
capable of doing it shows them what you can also do for them as well.
C.A.R. is the easiest way to pull out your accomplishments if you are having a hard time thinking of what you did/do.
Before you begin your new career in the field of criminal justice, you have to prove to a
prospective employer that you have the skills, qualifications and training that are necessary
for the job. Since resumes tend to be relatively short documents, every detail you include on
that one- to two-page document has to be worthwhile. That includes your objective
statement -- that is, if you decide to include one.
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At their most basic, objective statements give the employer a clear idea of the job or work
you want to do, including a specific job title, if applicable, as well as the company or
environment in which you want to work and a little bit about why you're the best person for
that type of job. As a criminal justice major, one of your big selling points will be your
training in criminal justice, which could serve as that "little bit" about your qualifications -though you can also include other details about your skills or traits. Objective statements
are typically placed near the top of your resume, underneath your contact information.
Would you benefit from guidance on how to write a resume? If youve been struggling
to write your resume, you know how incredibly challenging it can be. The clients who
come to us for ourprofessional resume writing services describe hour after frustrating
hour of trying to figure out the proper format and find just the right words to describe
their experience and qualifications in a way that will get attention and get their phone
ringing. Many times these clients come up with what they believe is an okay resume
only to use it in the job market and have it fall flat. The true test of an effective resume,
after all, is the results that it generates for you. If your resume isnt generating results
you should look first at the methods you are using in your job search. But if you are sure
the methods you are using are effective ones, the likely culprit of the poor results is
probably your resume.
When reviewing the ineffective resumes that our clients come to us with, we see the
same mistakes time after time: Boring job descriptions that focus on the responsibilities
and functions of the job performed. Some clients take the next step and include a few
accomplishments, but accomplishments listed without some explanation of the context
in which they were delivered mean very little. Accomplishments listed without the
results, benefits, and value-add they produced for the employer mean even less.
Rather than just listing out your job responsibilities and accomplishments, I
recommend the CAR technique. When you use this technique, you will rewrite your
resumes employment section to tell a compelling story. For the maximum impact,
your accomplishments should be presented as concise success studies complete with
challenge faced, action taken, immediate result, and strategic importance. By conveying
your accomplishments in this story manner, you make a connection with the reader
and make yourself far more memorable than all the other job candidates.
After rewriting the resume (example below) to showcase the challenges, actions, and
results, it is far more compelling. This excerpt of the employment section clearly tell you
that this candidate is an expert in turning around and revitalizing underperforming
divisions and business units. That fact alone sets this candidate apart from his
competition. But the resume goes on to describe his many achievements and the results
that have been delivered through his work for the company. A boring resume has been
transformed into an irresistible one. Employers who are seeking a candidate to help
them revive the performance of their company will be drawn to this candidate and wont
be able to pass up calling him to learn more. Note also the design techniques that weve
used to make what could be an overwhelming amount of information easy to read. The
eye is drawn from key point to key point.
Here is another similar example resume. The before version includes some good
information, but it is presented in a boring and hard-to-read-at-a-glance format that
doesnt go far enough in describing the situation/challenge. It is also very light on
results. This client insisted that it was impossible to quantify results.
The after version shows again what a difference professional resume writing and the
CAR technique can make. Although we were still unable to unearth any quantified
results, we reworded accomplishments to still focus on the benefits and value add of
For more inspiration on how the CAR technique can be used to turn a dull resume into a
winner, take a look at the many professionally writtenresume examples on our site
showcasing the work of Distinctive Documents.