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1.

The area is home of several villages as well as _the_ endangered orangutan.

It will cause mass deforestation and reduce the biodiversity.

2.

Regarding this matter, we urge the government not to approve the project
_or_ otherwise we'll do _a_ petition about it. Moreover, a new study by
Queensland shows that investors are losing confidence in coal due to its
falling price and China's decision to cap its coal use by 2015.

3.

taken into consideration for the sake of _our_ good

4.

I am writing this letter concerning BHP Billitons massive Indomet project. I

feel outraged!

5.

This could damage a region inhabited by remote communities and the

endangered orangutan.

6.

I suggest reserving that particular area as a preservation centre to protect the

flora and fauna of the wildlife in order to maintain the eco -system. So that,
our future generations might still experience the beauty of our natural
resources.

7.

I hope that you think about this issue in considering the future of the local
communities, the wildlife and _the_ nature in that region inhabited by all
walks of life.

8.

A 2012 WWF _report states that it contains a number of large populations of

orangutans.

9.

I would like to suggest postponing the plans, give enough time for more
surveys and research to be done by independent bodies.

10.

I spoke to the local people and they had expressed their dissatisfaction on the
idea of opening the mine.

11.

I am writing this email to express my point of view about the opening of the
mining project. I disagree __with it __ because there __ mght be a bad
impact on the environment, especially the flora and fauna.

12.

Besides that, the project may harm the daily lives and economy of the local
people.

13.

But, we our discussion with the head of the village and some of the villagers,
they have agreed to the project with some conditions and agreements.

14.

We would suggest that if you plan to continue this project you must consider
the environmental effects, especially the concern of the villagers, and the
habitat of the wild lives

15.

I am writing this email regarding on the mining problems that has devastated
the environment, affecting the villagers, orangutans and the forest.

16.

I felt very disappointed knowing that your company is going to open up a coal
mine that will cause a damage to the environment.

17.

It seem almost certain that __ pollution which are having such a serve effect
on river, the land, and plants life are endangering human health too.

18.

I would suggest that your company does more research on the effects of the
environment and do some green projects to preserve the nature __ such as
planting banana trees for the orangutans.

19.

As you may know that the nature __ is our main resources and __ heritage
from our ancestor to the next generation.