Combine the sentences in each set into a single clear sentence, and arrange

your new sentences into a coherent paragraph. Sentences that can be

turned into adjective clauses are in italics.
1.

Mr. William Herring has been affectionately dubbed "Mr. Bill" by his
music students.
Mr. William Herring is the jolliest man I know.
Mr. William Herring is the jolliest man I know, who has been
affectionately dubbed "Mr. Bill" by his music students.

2.

His outward features are often hidden behind a grand piano.

His outward features reflect the character within.
The character within is delightful.
His outward features reflect the character within is delightful
which often hidden behind a grand piano.

3.

His hair is red.

His hair is frizzy.
His hair is like Orphan Annie's.
His hair is red and frizzy, which is like Orphan Annies.

4.

His head is fat.

His head is round.
His head which is round and fat.

5.

He has small eyes.

His eyes are dark.
His eyes are hamster-like.
His eyes peer inquisitively from behind metal-rimmed glasses.
He has small, dark and hamster-like eyes which peer
inquisitively from behind metal-rimmed glasses.

6.

His mouth is small.

His mouth is always formed into a grin.
The grin is friendly.
His mouth is small, always formed into a grin which is friendly.

7.

His neck is thick.

His neck connects this funny head to a torso.
The torso is egg-shaped.
From this torso stretch two fat arms with plump hands and fingers
shaped like hot dogs.*
[* Begin this adjective clause with the phrase from which stretch . . ..]
His neck is thick, connects this funny head to a torso that is eggshaped which stretch two fat arms with plump hands and fingers
shaped like hot dogs.

8.

On one of these fingers is a gold ring.

The ring is diamond-studded.
The gleam of this ring matches the brilliance of Mr. Bill's smile.
On one of these fingers is a gold ring that is diamond-studded
which gleam matches the brilliance of Mr. Bill's smile.

9.

His Santa Claus belly, girded by a cowboy belt, hangs over baggy
trousers.
These are the sort of trousers that went out with leisure suits and
platform shoes.
His Santa Claus belly, girded by a cowboy belt, hangs over baggy
trousers which are the sort of trousers that went out with leisure
suits and platform shoes.

10. Mr. Bill's shoes, however, are invisible beneath his trousers.
Yet his walk is distinctive.
Mr. Bill's shoes, however are invisible beneath his trousers and
yet his walk is distinctive.

11. In fact, he seems to roll rather than walk.

He rolls to the rhythm of his own laughter.
His students roll right along with him.
In fact, he seems to roll rather than walk to the rhythm of his
own laughter which his students roll right along with him.