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Coordination and coordinating conjunctions...
Coordinating conjunctions allow us to connect
independent clauses of the same level of importance in a
single sentence and avoid paragraphs composed of many
short, repetitive simple sentences. Seven different
coordinating conjunctions allow us to create distinct
relationships between clauses:
and (the most common coordinating conjunction), is
used to combine two similar ideas together:
The mechanic fixed the broken tail-light, and he replaced
the brakes, too.
Coordination in a series...
so that
Concession
and
Comparison
although,
though, even
though, as
though
him at all.
"As" is used to show similarities
between things:
As sand falls through an hourglass,
as
while, whereas
Condition
even though,
though,
although
provided that,
as long as
unless
wherever
Time
"After refers to an event or action
that occurs after another event or
action has occured. (after "a," then
"b"):
after
as soon as, as
long as
until, till
Answers to Exercises
Fragment Sentence Exercise
Fragment sentences are in italics. Explanations are in parentheses.
Then I attended Morris Junior High. A junior high that was a bad
experience. (dependent clause)
In the seventh grade every young boy goes out for football. To prove
to himself and his parents that he is a man. (dependent clause)
She opened the door and let us into her home. Not realizing at the
time that we would never enter that door in her home again.
(dependent clause)
Making up his mind quickly. Jim ordered two dozen red roses for his
wife. Hoping she would accept his apology. (dependent clause)
They were all having a good time. Until one of Joe's oldest and best
friends had a little too much to drink. (dependent clause)
any sense. Revision: That book we read for class was really long,
wordy, and confusing.
Modifier Exercise
Original sentences are in italics. Revisions follow.
Running for the bus, the rain started coming down in buckets and I
got all wet. Revision: Running for the bus, I got all wet when the rain
started coming down in buckets.
The couch was kind of ugly in the furniture store. Revision: The couch
in the furniture store was kind of ugly.
Having searched and searched for Mr. Right, it started to seem like
he didnt exist. Revision: Having searched and searched for Mr. Right,
I started to think he didnt exist.
Mad Season is a great band. They only put out one album. Revision:
Mad Season is a great band even though they only put out one
album.