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First Language Urdu
Paper 1 (Reading and Writing)
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1
9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
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1
9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
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9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
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9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
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Mark Scheme
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2
Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each
question answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text [i.e. 1 and 2 or 3 and 4], they will be
penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts but on different texts they will not be penalised.
Passage-based questions
-
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the
text as a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material
and to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of
the text under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay Questions
-
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good points
and noting a few observations in the margin (eg 'good point', 'irrelevant', 'excessive
quotation', etc).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (eg 'rambling answer, shows some knowledge but
misses point of question') is particularly helpful.
Don't forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the two
marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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verse (i)
verse (ii)
verse (iii)
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9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
Detailed response: the candidate knows what the poem is about and
conveys the required elements clearly; the language of the poem is
mentioned and there is some evidence that the candidate has some
knowledge about the verse form/poetic style
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
A limited attempt: the candidate has written about the central theme
but the result will be limited and scrappy; there has been no attempt
to consider any language aspects of the poem leading to some doubt
that the candidate has sufficient understanding of the verse
form/poetic style to adequately answer a question on this text
0-2
Very Poor
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22-25
Exceptional
work
20-21
Very Good
18-19
Thorough
16-17
Painstaking
14-15
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
12-13
Sound
10-11
Basic
6-9
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
0-5
Poor
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Syllabus
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Paper
2
9 -10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
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13 -15
Excellent
10 12
Good
7-9
Satisfactory
4-6
Poor
0-3
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant
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22-25
Exceptional
work
20-21
Very Good
18-19
Thorough
16-17
Painstaking
14-15
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
12-13
Sound
10-11
Basic
6-9
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
0-5
Poor
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General comments
In general the performance of candidates was more than satisfactory, with the majority producing some very
good work. The majority of candidates wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate responses to
both questions. There were only a few candidates whose written Urdu was not up to the task, and a small
number of scripts which were poorly presented with messy handwriting, crossings out and scribbled
insertions which made the work very difficult to read.
The length of some of the responses was far too long. The rubric states that answers should be about a side
and a half of paper, depending on the size of handwriting. The length of some answers was more than
double that amount. Frequently these over-long answers lost marks for structure and content. It is very
important to follow the rubrics if high marks are to be achieved.
Comments on specific questions
Question 1
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Question 2
This question asked candidates to give their opinion on:
It is the duty of every citizen to pay income tax according to their income.
The most able candidates produced excellent essays discussing the purpose of tax, which were well planned
and constructed, expressing their ideas and opinions in their own words. Most of them argued that paying
tax was necessary for good governance of the country, that it was quite right to pay tax, but the government
should neither waste this money on themselves nor on foolish projects. The weaker candidates tended to
lack focus in their answers and to move from point to point in an unstructured way relying too much on the
material already contained in the passages.
Very few candidates adequately discussed the according to income part of the statement and lost marks as
a result of this. Most candidates simply reiterated the statement in this way:
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General Commente
General comments
The overall performance was very good, with candidates displaying a good command of language as well as knowledge of
the texts. Most candidates demonstrated an ability to write very detailed responses and showed a confident use of complex sentences. Their answers were relevant and well illustrated. All four questions were attempted by some candidates.
Comments on specific questions
Section 1 Poetry
Question 1
This question was about a poem Nazam-e-Qumee by Akbar Allaha Abadi.
There were four parts to this question and candidates were required to answer all four parts. This was by far the
most popular question in this section and generally the responses were very good.
(a)
Almost all the candidates answered this part correctly except for a few who confused the names of the
two poets, Akbar Allah Abadi and Nazir Akbar Abadi.
(b)
Most candidates answered this part very well and comprehensively, giving a lot of detail in their
answer.
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(c)
Most candidates answered this part very well. They showed a good understanding of the central
idea of the poem and conveyed all the required elements with sensitivity, except for including a
discussion of the language of the poem and its poetic style. Candidates were expected to include
some points about the poetic style and verse form of the poem.
(d)
Almost all the candidates answered this part very well. Most candidates not only gave the
meanings of the words but used them in their own sentences, which gave evidence of their
command of the language.
Question 2
Mir Taqi Mir
Most candidates who answered this question showed that they had a very good understanding of the topic.
They discussed the poets early life, his writing style, the hardships he faced throughout his life and the effect
of these on his poetry. Candidates who achieved the highest marks were those who illustrated their answer
with quotations from his poems and compared his very high standard of poetry to that of other poets who
themselves expressed appreciation of Mir Taqi Mir in their own poetry.
Section 2 Prose
Question 3
In (a) only a few candidates effectively discussed the character of Ustaad. Those that did so, made their
points in a clear and thorough way. The remainder of candidates who attempted this question merely
narrated the story and did not write about the character.
Similarly (b) was very well attempted by some candidates. Candidates who discussed the social tragedy
marked by the arrival of the East India Company, the background of Muslim society and its downfall,
achieved excellent marks. Those who only narrated the story without reference to the context and
background did not achieve good marks.
Question 4
The majority of candidates wrote very well in answer to this question, explaining their own feelings about the
Jirga System and the cultural background of the society. Some candidates however, only narrated the story
which was not what was asked for in the question.
Candidates who achieved the highest marks were those who illustrated their answers with a brief
background to the society, its cultural values, the Jirga system and the position of women. Some of the
answers were outstanding in their inclusion of appropriate quotations from the text.
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These mark schemes are published as an aid to teachers and students, to indicate the
requirements of the examination. They show the basis on which Examiners were initially
instructed to award marks. They do not indicate the details of the discussions that took place
at an Examiners meeting before marking began. Any substantial changes to the mark
scheme that arose from these discussions will be recorded in the published Report on the
Examination.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the Report on the
Examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark
schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the June 2005 question papers for most IGCSE and
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.
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First Language Urdu
Paper 1 (Reading and Writing)
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Mark Scheme
GCE O LEVEL JUNE 2005
Syllabus
3247
Paper
1
Question 1
Communication (maximum 10 marks)
Points that may be included:
the main point here is that the candidates should compare and contrast, not write a
summary of, both passages
rich boy in poor school stranger in a new country
teasing ignoring
helpful teachers ignored by teachers
both students amazed at what they experience
the first person narrative third person narrative
the best responses will include a concluding sentence or paragraph
9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
Note:
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Syllabus
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1
Some ability
structure.
to
develop
argument;
clear
9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
[maximum 25 marks]
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1
Question 2
Communication (maximum 10 marks)
Main points which may be included:
9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
Some ability
structure.
to
develop
argument;
clear
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9-10
Excellent
7-8
Good
5-6
Satisfactory
3-4
Poor
0-2
Very Poor
[maximum 25 marks]
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These mark schemes are published as an aid to teachers and students, to indicate the
requirements of the examination. They show the basis on which Examiners were initially
instructed to award marks. They do not indicate the details of the discussions that took place
at an Examiners meeting before marking began. Any substantial changes to the mark
scheme that arose from these discussions will be recorded in the published Report on the
Examination.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the Report on the
Examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark
schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the June 2005 question papers for most IGCSE and
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.
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First Language Urdu
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Poet's name
[1]
(b)
(c)
[3]
(d)
[10]
4 marks for the poet's message about the teaching of permanence in love.
(e)
[5]
[Total: 25 marks]
How the poet portrays political disorder in his poetry with special reference to
his poem in the syllabus.
How his poems portray moral deterioration with special reference to his poem
in the syllabus. How his poems portray the economic disorder of his age with
special reference to his poem in the syllabus.
22 25 Exceptional
work
20 21 Very Good
18 19 Thorough
16 17 Painstaking
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14 15 Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
12 13 Sound
10 11 Basic
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Weak
05
Poor
(a)
Points to be included:
11 12 Excellent
9 10
68
Good
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Points to be included:
11 13 Excellent
9 10
68
Good
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Poor
02
Very Poor A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected
from the required story or any other story; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant.
[13]
Question 4: Essay question
Points to be included:
13 15 Excellent
10 12 Good
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Poor
03
Very Poor
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Points to be included:
9 10
Excellent
78
Good
56
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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General comments
The performance of the majority of candidates was more than satisfactory, with many of them producing very
good performances. There seemed to be no significant problem for them coping with the different technical
demands of the new question format, the only limitations being that of:
the candidates ability to understand and respond appropriately to the texts and the questions
The paper consisted of two passages of about 350 words each, on a linked theme of My First Day at
School. The first passage was a first person recount of the mainly very negative experiences of the author,
the famous Urdu poet Faiz Ahmed Faiz, in a school in Sialkot. The second passage was an account of a
Pakistani boys first day in a school in London.
Candidates had to read these passages and then answer just two questions which required extended
responses. Marks were awarded for content, language and organisation/structure on a scale of 10, 10 and
5, giving a total mark of 25 for each question. There was equal weighting to each question giving a total for
the paper of 50 marks.
Comments on specific questions
Question 1
donoN ybaratoN ke havale se nye talyb ylmoN ke taaseraat ka muwazana kijiye
Compare the students experiences with reference to both passages.
This question required candidates to write a direct comparison of the two contrasting experiences discussed
in the texts.
Candidates were expected to:
It was the second point that made the difference between satisfactory and good performances.
This question was satisfactorily rather than well answered by most candidates. The best were those who
were able to extract the main points of each passage and fit them together in such a way as to make
appropriate comparisons and contrast. Of course there are points from each text that should be mentioned:
the fear and apprehension, the reaction of the other students and teachers and the impressions of the new
students themselves.
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The best ones were those who wrote their own response to the question, comparing and contrasting these
different experiences. The most significant problem this year was that far too many candidates simply wrote
two lengthy paragraphs, the first paraphrasing Passage A and the second summarising Passage B. Indeed,
some even wrote the Urdu word for summary, khwlaasa, at the beginning of their responses. Because they
were asked to compare the two passages, merely summarising them without making any direct comparisons
or contrasts did not enable them to score high marks. That is not a muwazana. The better candidates wrote
about the students in each school and then commented on their behaviour, the teachers and compared and
contrasted their behaviour, and so forth. They did not merely paraphrase the whole passage without
comment.
A vital part of the assessment criteria is to reward candidates use of Urdu; if they are copying text from the
passage, it is not their language and will not be rewarded. This question required information and ideas from
the passages to be used, not nearly every word. Of course it is appropriate to quote from the texts, but a
quote is a line or two, not a whole paragraph. Copying out large chunks of the text means that they are not
going to be rewarded with high marks for using their own words and consequently cannot be given many
marks for language.
Question 2
The main thrust of this question, although based on the main theme of the texts, is to provide a stimulus for
more creative and imaginative writing on a topic deriving its theme from the texts, but not directly so. This
time the candidates were asked to give their ideas on:
yskul meN nye aane vaale tulba ki mushkylaat
The difficulties faced by newly arrived students in school.
This gave candidates an ideal opportunity to demonstrate their powers of language and argument. The
better candidates produced well planned and constructed essays discussing the problems faced by students
and giving practical suggestions to make things easier for them. They were able to make their points using
their own words within a planned framework, unlike weaker candidates who merely rambled from point to
point in an unstructured way.
Although the question was designed so that candidates would not need to make use of much material from
the passages, the weaker candidates did rely overmuch on material from the passages. One surprising point
of interest emerged, and that was the fact that very few candidates made any mentioned of their own
experiences at school in their responses.
Presentation of work is important and though there were very few candidates whose written Urdu was not up
to the task, a minority of papers displayed a very messy handwriting style with crossings out and scribbled
insertions.
The length of some of the responses is also problematical. The rubric states that answers should be about a
side and a half of paper, depending on size of handwriting. The length of some scripts was well over double
that limitation; these will have lost some marks for structure and content. It is very important to follow rubrics
if high marks are to be achieved. That being said, overall the majority of candidates wrote relevant,
interesting and linguistically accurate responses to both questions.
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General comments
The overall performance of candidates was very good. They showed a good command of language as well
as sound knowledge of the texts. Most candidates demonstrated the ability to write very detailed responses
and showed confident use of complex sentences. Their answers were relevant and well illustrated.
Candidates attempted all four questions in the paper.
Comments on specific questions
Question 1
Poetry
This question was about a poem written by Assad Ullah Khan Ghalib.
There were five parts to this question and candidates were required to answer all five parts. The majority of
candidates attempted this question and on the whole the responses were very good.
(a)
Almost all the candidates answered this part correctly except for a few who mixed up the name of
the poet Jigar Murad Abadi with Mir Taqi Mir.
(b)
In general candidates answered this part well and the majority wrote comprehensive answers,
however they gave little information about the poem and the hidden meaning of the verse.
(c)
This was a very straightforward question and almost all candidates received full marks.
(d)
Most candidates answered this question very well, expressing the sentiments of the poet and
showing a good understanding of the depth of feeling portrayed and making good reference to the
verses.
(e)
Very few candidates were able to explain the meaning of the given phrases. Many candidates
used the phrases in sentences without demonstrating that they understood the meaning.
Question 2
Azir Akber Abadi
With the exception of a very few candidates, most showed a very good understanding of this topic and were
able to discuss the political, socio-economic era of his time. Those who illustrated their answers with
quotations from his poetry achieved the highest marks.
Question 3
Prose
(a)(b)
Most candidates answered this question very well. Candidates covered the topic well and were
able to correctly identify unacceptable social themes. They were also able to effectively
communicate their feelings around the poor treatment of women by Jirga.
Very few candidates adequately discussed the character of Girl. Those who did picked up all the
relevant points and clearly explained them. The remainder of candidates who attempted this
question, narrated only the story rather than writing about the character.
Question 4
This proved to be a straightforward question for candidates. The majority wrote very well explaining their
own feelings about injustice against women in todays society with reference to the text. Again some
candidates only narrated the story, which was not what was required by the question. Candidates were
expected to refer to examples from present society as well.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and students, to indicate the requirements of the
examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were initially instructed to award marks. It does
not indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking
began. Any substantial changes to the mark scheme that arose from these discussions will be
recorded in the published Report on the Examination.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the Report on the
Examination.
CIE will not enter into discussion or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2006 question papers for most IGCSE and
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.
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Question 1
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[25 marks]
Communication
Points to be included:
It is factory made
Tea is ancient
Tea is natural
Language
[10 marks]
[15 marks]
When to drink
Language
[10 marks]
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Syllabus
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Good
Generally sound grasp of complex sentence structures and grammar. Some lapses but
usually accurate. Attempts to use variety of vocabulary. Some use of idiomatic language.
5-6
Satisfactory
Tends to be simple and repetitive in use of structures. Basics mostly accurate, vocabulary
simple: much drawn from texts.
3-4
Poor
Nearly all that is written is simple and repetitive. Sentence structures basic containing
many errors. Own vocabulary limited.
1-2
Very poor
Very simple and repetitive sentence structures containing many errors. Weak grasp of
grammar and use of own vocabulary very limited.
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Paper 2
This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and students, to indicate the requirements of the
examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were initially instructed to award marks. It does
not indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking
began. Any substantial changes to the mark scheme that arose from these discussions will be
recorded in the published Report on the Examination.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the Report on the
Examination.
CIE will not enter into discussion or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2006 question papers for most IGCSE and
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.
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Mark Scheme
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Syllabus
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidate's ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, Examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text, they will be penalised; both
questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts but on different texts they will not be penalised.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the
text as a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their
material and to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the
workings of the text under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a
text works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay Questions
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good
points and noting a few observations in the margin (e.g. 'good point', 'irrelevant', 'excessive
quotation', etc.).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (e.g. 'rambling answer, shows some knowledge
but misses point of question') is particularly helpful.
Do not forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the
two marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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[1 mark] if both names are correct. No mark for half correct answer.
(b)
(c)
(d)
(e)
(f)
Excellent
67
Good
45
Satisfactory
23
Poor
01
Very Poor
[6 marks] 1 mark for meaning and 1 mark for its effect in the poem. Candidates have to
choose only three out of six.
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22 25
Exceptional
Work
20 21
Very Good
Thorough
16 17
Painstaking
14 15
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
12 13
Sound
10 11
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
18 19
05
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[10 marks]
Points to be included:
Mr Niaz's character
Mrs Niaz's attitude towards subordinates
Her thoughts about the little boy
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the passage well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter.
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the passage has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
12
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant.
9 10
(b)
[8 marks]
Points to be included:
Overall views of bureaucrats regarding their subordinates
Main theme of the story
Behaviour of two characters, i.e. Mr Niaz and Mrs Niaz
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the required story well selected;
makes points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
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Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the required story has been
identified; makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the
subject matter.
45
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the required story has been
identified but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the
subject matter.
23
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the required story has
been picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to
be focused on the question; irrelevant material from other stories has
been introduced.
01
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the required
story or any other story; question may not be addressed; answer may be
largely irrelevant.
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[7 marks]
Points to be included:
Character of Mr Niaz
Strictness of Mrs Niaz
Steps taken by Mr Niaz on the demand of his wife
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the required story well selected;
makes points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the required story has been
identified; makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the
subject matter.
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the required story has been
identified but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the
subject matter.
23
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the required story has
been picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to
be focused on the question; irrelevant material from other stories has
been introduced.
01
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the required
story or any other story; question may not be addressed; answer may be
largely irrelevant.
45
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22 25
Exceptional
Work
20 21
Very Good
18 19
Thorough
16 17
Painstaking
14 15
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
Sound
10 11
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
12 13
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[15 marks]
Points to be included:
Mother's general attitude
Her treatment of family members
Her treatment of outsiders
Ambition
13 -15
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the required story well selected;
makes points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
10 -12
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the required story has been
identified; makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the
subject matter.
79
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the required story has been
identified but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the
subject matter.
46
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the required story has
been picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to
be focused on the question; irrelevant material from other stories has
been introduced.
03
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the required
story or any other story; question may not be addressed; answer may be
largely irrelevant.
(b)
[10 marks]
Points to be included:
Brief description of Safder's character
Brief description of the girl's character
Girl's unwillingness for the wedding
Safder's interest in helping her
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the passage well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter.
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the passage has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
9 10
12
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant.
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Exceptional
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20 21
Very Good
18 19
Thorough
16 17
Painstaking
14 15
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
12 13
Sound
10 11
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
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General comments
The performance of the majority of candidates was at least satisfactory, with some producing very good
performances. A significant number of candidates, however, with good linguistic ability and competence in
reading the given text, failed to follow the instructions closely, which affected their ability to respond
appropriately to the texts and questions.
The paper consists of two passages of approximately 350 words each, on a linked theme. This years theme
was drinks. Candidates are asked to read the passages and then answer two questions which require
extended responses. The first question requires candidates to compare and contrast the two passages.
Many candidates merely summarised the two passages without contrasting or drawing any comparisons
between the two texts.
QUESTION ONE
DonoN ybaratoN ke havale se cae or koka kola ki samaji ahmiyat ka muwazana kijiye
Compare the social importance of tea and Coca Cola with reference to both passages
This question was a direct comparison of the contrasting drinks discussed in the texts. Candidates were
expected to:
(i) make comparisons making direct reference to these texts
(ii) use their own words as far as possible.
It was point (i) that made the difference between satisfactory and good performance
This question was satisfactorily rather than well answered by most of candidates. The best responses were
from those who were able to extract the main points of each passage and fit them together in such a way as
to make appropriate comparisons and contrast. Of the similarities the most obvious were the popularity of
both drinks, the stimulating effects and cost limitations. There were more contrasting points than similarities.
Many candidates simply wrote two lengthy paragraphs, the first one paraphrasing Passage A and the second
summarizing Passage B. Indeed, some even wrote the Urdu word for summary, khwlaasa, at the beginning
of their responses. Because candidates are asked to compare the two passages, merely summarizing them
without making any direct comparisons or contrasts did not enable them to achieve high marks - that is not a
muwazana. The better candidates wrote a number of points and compared and contrasted them and did
not merely paraphrase the whole passage without comment.
A vital part of the assessment criteria is to reward candidates use of Urdu; if they are copying text from the
passage, it is not their own language and will not be rewarded. This question required information and ideas
from the passages to be used. It is appropriate to quote from the texts, but a quote is a line or two, not
nearly every word. Copying out large chunks of the text means that candidates are not going to be rewarded
with high marks for using their own words and consequently cannot be given too many marks for language.
That being said, many candidates wrote excellent Urdu using mostly their own words.
QUESTION TWO
The purpose of this question, although based on the main theme of the texts, is to provide stimulus for more
creative and imaginative writing on a topic deriving its theme from the texts, but not directly so. This time the
candidates were asked to write a response to a friend who has sought advice on healthy drinks:
aap ka dost aap se sahit baksh mashrubat ke bare meN mashvarah karta hai. Aap use kya mashvarah
deNge?
Your friend asks your advice on healthy drinks. What advice would you give?
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The overall performance in this question was higher then in the first. It gave candidates an ideal opportunity
to demonstrate their use of persuasive language and their imagination.
The better candidates produced well planned and constructed essays discussing the pros and cons of
different types of drinks, giving practical suggestions for healthy drinking. They were able to make their
points using their own words within a planned framework, unlike weaker candidates who wrote in an
unfocussed and unstructured way.
Although the question was designed so that candidates did not need to make use of much material from the
passages, the weaker candidates relied too much on the given material and wrote solely on the benefits or
otherwise of tea and Coca Cola. This limited the scope of their response, which could and should have
included any drink, particularly healthy ones such has water, milk, lassi, juice, etc. Candidates were not
restricted in the format of their response, some wrote dialogues, some paragraphs on each drink, but most
wrote in the form of a letter. Several candidates appeared to be unaware that the word mashruba refers to
drink not food and wrote on food without mentioning drink and therefore lost marks for content.
There were very few candidates whose written Urdu was inadequate, although a small number of candidates
presented their work in a messy way, with crossings out and scribbled insertions, in contrast to those who
wrote well planned and organized essay.
Many responses were well over the prescribed length. The rubric states that answers should be about a side
and a half of paper, depending on size of handwriting. The length of some scripts was well over double that
limitation and therefore lost some marks for structure and content. It is very important to follow the rubrics if
high marks are to be achieved. At this level it is an appropriate linguistic skill to write concisely and therefore
necessary for candidates to try to keep within the prescribed limits.
The majority of candidates, however, wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate responses to both
questions within the prescribed limits.
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General comments
The overall performance of candidates was very good. On the whole candidates showed that they had a
good command of the language and a thorough understanding of the texts. Most candidates were confident
in their ability to use complex sentences enabling them to write very detailed and relevant responses to the
questions, which were well illustrated. Candidates attempted all of the four questions, including Question 5
and 6, which were set on the recently introduced text.
Comments on specific questions
POETRY
Question 1
This question related to a poem entitled Shekwa written by Allama Iqbal.
There were six parts to this question and candidates were required to answer all six parts. This was a very
popular question for candidates and the majority of the responses were very good.
(a)
Almost all candidates answered this part correctly except a few who named the poet but did not
give the title of the poem. Both the poet and the title of the poem were required.
(b)
The majority of candidates answered this part very well and comprehensively. A few candidates
however were unable to express the inner meaning of the verse.
(c)
Most of the candidates answered this challenging question very well. Candidates expressed the
sentiments of the poet very well making reference to the verses and showing a good understanding
of the depth of the feelings portrayed.
(d)
This was a very straightforward question and almost all candidates got full marks.
(e)
This part of the question was well attempted. The majority of candidates were able to compare the
given poem with another poem from the text and showed that they understood them very well.
(f)
The majority of candidates achieved full marks for this part, writing very detailed responses in
confident and articulate language.
Question 2
Altaf Hussain Hali
With the exception of a very few candidates, the majority showed a very good understanding of the topic.
Most candidates wrote about the simplicity and natural style of his national poems. Those who illustrated
their answers with quotations from his poetry achieved the highest marks.
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PROSE
Question 3
(a) Almost all candidates who attempted this question scored very good marks. Candidates covered the
topic thoroughly and were able to correctly identify the habits of Mrs Niaz. They illustrated their points with
quotations from the original text.
(b) The majority of the candidates discussed the attitude of civil servants giving examples from society.
Some very good answers were given which were clearly explained with quotations.
(c) This part of the question was again answered very well with good marks achieved.
Question 4
Most candidates answered this question very well and included their own feelings about society. Again
those who supported their answers with quotations from the text scored the highest marks. Candidates were
expected to give their own opinion in relation to the question which they did successfully.
Question 5
(a) Candidates who attempted this question on the new set text answered very well and achieved good
marks. They were able to write extensively about the characters.
(b) The second part of the question was very well attempted and candidates supported their answers with
close reference to the novel.
Question 6
Only a few candidates attempted this question and those who did made close reference to the text and
gained high marks.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2007 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Question 1
Communication Points that should be included:
[10]
[10]
[5]
[Total: 25]
Question 2
Communication Main Points which can be included:
[10]
[10]
[5]
[Total: 25]
Note 1: Mark up to a page and a half and ignore anything above for content.
Note 2: In Question 1, if content irrelevant or lifted language marks should be reduced by at least one
box on grid below.
Language marking grid for Questions 1 and 2
VERY GOOD
GOOD
SATISFACTORY
POOR
VERY POOR
910
78
56
34
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2007 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text, they will be penalised; both questions are
to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts but on different texts they will not be penalised.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay Questions
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good points and
noting a few observations in the margin (e.g. 'good point', 'irrelevant', 'excessive quotation', etc.).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (e.g. 'rambling answer, shows some knowledge but
misses point of question') is particularly helpful.
Don't forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the two
marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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[1]
[3]
Excellent
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Good
45
Satisfactory
23
Poor
01
Very Poor
[8]
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Excellent
56
Good
34
Satisfactory
12
Poor
[8]
[5]
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[5]
Exceptional
work
1718
Very Good
1516
Thorough
1314
Painstaking
1112
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
910
Sound
78
Basic
46
Weak
03
Poor
[20]
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Excellent
1012
Good
79
Satisfactory
46
Poor
03
Very Poor
[15]
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
12
Very Poor
[10]
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Question 4
Points to be included:
How important is character?
Those nations who do not have character, how do they suffer?
Background to the story.
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial
and lacking in relevance.
Any ideas will not be expressed
coherently.
05
Poor
[25]
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Excellent
1012
Good
79
Satisfactory
46
Poor
13
Very Poor
[15]
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
12
Very Poor
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Question 6
Points to be included:
Her anxious nature.
Her love for her father.
Her careless attitude etc.
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial
and lacking in relevance.
Any ideas will not be expressed
coherently.
05
Poor
[25]
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GENERAL
The performance of the majority of the candidates was more than satisfactory, with many producing very
good performances. Candidates coped well with the different technical demands of the question format, the
only limitations being that of
(a)
The candidates' ability to understand and respond appropriately to the texts and the questions, and
(b)
The standard format of this paper is that there are two passages of about 350 words each, on a linked theme
which this year was Food, Diet and Health.
The first passage was an historical account of the development of cooking and types of food popular on the
subcontinent, while the second passage was a more health related passage on the effects of changing to a
modern western style diet and its problems.
Candidates had to read these passages and then answer just two questions, both of which required
extended responses. Marks are awarded for content, language and organisation/structure on a scale of 10,
10 and 5, giving a total of 25 marks for each question. There was equal weighting to each question giving a
total for the paper of 50 marks.
QUESTION ONE:
DonoN ybaratoN ke havale sesahyt mand zindagi men ghiza ki ahmiyat ka muwazana kijiye
With reference to both passages compare the importance of diet in a healthy life.
This question required candidates to write a direct comparison of the two contrasting facts and comments
discussed in the texts.
Candidates were, as always, expected to:
(i)
(ii)
As always, it was a combination of the above two points which provided the Examiners with the opportunity
to discriminate between the poor, the satisfactory and the good candidates performances.
This question was satisfactorily rather than well answered by most of the candidates. The best were those
who were able to extract the main points of each passage and fit them together in such a way as to make
appropriate comparisons and contrast. Of course there are points from each text that should be mentioned:
the importance of a balanced diet, effects of a modern fast food diet, etc., but this does not mean that the
content should be copied word for word. Such responses scored lower marks for language because the
language used was copied from the text and was not the candidates own.
The best responses were those who wrote their own response to the question, compared and contrasted
these different facts and points of view expressed in the two passages. The most significant problem this
year was that far too many candidates simply wrote two lengthy paragraphs, the first paraphrasing Passage
A and the second summarising Passage B. Indeed, some even wrote the Urdu word for summary,
'khwlaasa', at the beginning of their responses. Because they were asked to compare the two passages,
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merely summarising them without making any direct comparisons or contrasts did not enable them to score
high marks. That is not a 'muwazana'.
The better candidates wrote about the points raised in each passage and then commented on their differing
points of view and compared and contrasted the relative importance in each passage of diet and health.
They did not merely paraphrase the two passages without comment.
QUESTION TWO
The main thrust of this question, although based on the central theme of the texts, is to provide a stimulus for
more creative and imaginative writing on a topic deriving its theme from the texts, but not directly so. This
time the candidates were asked to write a letter giving advice to a friend.
'Aap ka dost ghar ka khana taqriban chor chukka hai awr bahyr ke khane ko tarjih deta hai- apne dost
ko khat ke zariye fast food ke nuqsanat se aagah kijiye'
'Your friend has practically given up home cooking and much prefers take-aways, etc. Write a letter to your
friend making him aware of the disadvantages of fast food, take-aways, etc.'
This gave candidates an ideal opportunity to demonstrate their powers of language and argument. The
stronger candidates produced well constructed and often amusing letters telling their friends off for not eating
mothers good home cooking and wasting money and health on rubbish food. Some were very forceful and
got their point across very well. They were able to make their points using their own words within a planned
framework, unlike weaker candidates who merely rambled from point to point in an unstructured way.
Although the question was designed so that candidates would not necessarily need to make use of much
material from the passages, the weaker candidates did rely overmuch on material drawn from the passages.
One surprising point of interest emerged, and that was the fact that there were some candidates who held
very strong views on the subject of diet and health and were enjoying the chance to berate a friend about his
unhealthy lifestyle. Certainly the humour displayed by a good many candidates was here entirely
appropriate in an informal communication between friends.
This question was much better attempted by candidates than the first task.
There were very few candidates whose written Urdu was not up to the task, although a minority of papers
displayed very messy handwriting style with crossings out and scribbled insertions. Presentation of work and
clear legible handwriting is important.
The length of some of the responses was also problematical. The rubric states that answers should be
about a side and a half of paper, depending on size of handwriting. The length of some scripts was well over
double that limitation; these will have lost some marks for structure and content. It is very important to follow
rubrics if high marks are to be achieved.
That being said, overall the majority of candidates wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate
responses to both questions.
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General comments
The overall performance of candidates was very good. Candidates showed a very good command of
language as well as knowledge of the texts. Most candidates demonstrated the ability to write very detailed
responses with confident use of complex sentences structures enabling them to communicate their points
well. Most candidates answers were relevant and well illustrated. All six questions were attempted by some
candidates.
Comments on specific questions
Section 1: Poetry
Question 1
This question was about a poem/ghazal written by Bahader Shah Zafar .
There are five parts to this question and candidates are required to answer all five parts. This question was
very popular and the majority of candidates gave excellent responses.
(a)
Almost all candidates answered this part correctly except a very few who did not name the poet.
(b)
The majority of candidates answered this part well and comprehensively, though a few candidates
were unable to explain the background to the poem.
(c)
Most candidates answered this more challenging part of the question very well. Referring to
second poem in the text, candidates expressed the sentiments of the poet very well and showed a
good understanding of the depth of feeling portrayed.
(d)
This was a very straightforward question and almost all the candidates gained full marks.
(e)
A very popular part of the question. Candidates demonstrated the ability to write very detailed
responses and showed a confident use of complex sentences. Most candidates gained full marks.
The question required using the words in sentences, so candidates who just mentioned the
meaning of those words were awarded fewer marks.
Question 2
This year this question was divided into two parts: one worth five marks and the second worth twenty marks.
Part 1 was about Mir Taqee Mir asking candidates to give reasons for his gloomy poetry. The majority of
candidates answered this part very well and secured full marks.
Part 2 was about five poetic qualities/features. Candidates were required to find these five qualities in any
two poets from the prescribed texts apart from the poet discussed in Question 1.
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Apart from a very few candidates, most showed a very good understanding of the topic. Most candidates
were able to discuss the poetic qualities/features well and those who illustrated their answers with close
reference to the texts achieved the highest marks.
Section 2: Prose
Question 3
(a)
Almost all candidates who attempted this question gained good marks. Candidates covered the topic well
and correctly identified the value of Mrs Niazs independence. They were also able to give quotations from
the original text.
(b)
Again the majority of candidates competently discussed the attitude of civil servants, giving examples from
society. Some very good answers with quotations were given mentioning all the relevant points clearly and
lucidly.
Question 4
This proved to be a very straightforward question for many candidates. The majority wrote very well
explaining their own feelings about the nation. Again those who supported their answers with close
reference to the texts gained the most marks.
Question 5
This was the least popular question set on a passage from the new novel; however candidates who
attempted it performed very well and secured good marks.
(a)
Candidates were clearly able to write about the mental conflict Sulat Jehangir was experiencing.
(b)
This part of the question was very well attempted and candidates illustrated their answers with close
reference to the novel.
Question 6
Only a few candidates attempted this question but those who did answered well with good references from
the text.
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GENERAL
The performance of the majority of candidates was at least satisfactory, with many producing very good
performances. The main problem that again faced many candidates was that of understanding exactly what
is required by the questions and responding appropriately. This is assuming that candidates possess the
linguistic ability and competence to do so.
In this paper there are two passages of about 350 words each on a linked theme. This year the theme was
the historical development and current state of the clothing industry in Europe and Asia.
Candidates are required to read the two passages and answer the two questions that follow them, both of
which require extended responses. Marks are awarded for content (10 marks), language (10 marks) and
organisation/structure (5 marks) giving a total mark of 25 marks for each question. There is an equal
weighting to each question giving a total for the paper of 50 marks.
QUESTION ONE
donoN ybaratoN ke havale se maghrib awr mashriq men malbusat ki sanat ke mawjuda halat ka
muwazana kijiye
With reference to both passages compare the current state of the clothing industry in the East and West.
This question required candidates to write a direct comparison of the two contrasting facts and comments
discussed in the two texts.
Candidates are expected to:
(i)
(ii)
This question was satisfactorily rather than well answered by most candidates. The best were those who
were able to extract the main points of each passage and fit them together in such a way as to make
appropriate comparisons and contrasts between them. Of course there are points from each text that should
be mentioned: the differing attitudes to ready-made and home made clothes, the changing focus of
manufacturing clothes from west to east, the relative expensiveness of manufacture in the west while cheap
labour and factories are available in the east, etc. This does not mean that the content should be copied
word for word. Such responses scored lower marks for language because the language used was copied
from the text and therefore does not demonstrate the candidates language abilities.
The best responses were from those candidates who wrote their own response to the question, comparing
and contrasting the different facts and points of view expressed in the two passages. The most significant
problem this year was that far too many candidates simply wrote two lengthy paragraphs, the first
paraphrasing Passage A and the second summarising Passage B. Indeed, some even wrote the Urdu word
for summary, 'khwlaasa', at the beginning of their responses. Because they were asked to compare the two
passages, merely summarising the passages without making any direct comparisons or contrasts did not
enable them to score high marks. That is not a 'muwazana'.
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QUESTION TWO
The aim of this question, although based on the main theme of the texts, is to provide a stimulus for more
creative and imaginative writing on a topic which derives its theme from the texts, but not directly so. This
time the candidates were asked to write a composition on the following theme:
'aap ke mulk men fashion ke asraat.
'The effects of fashion in your country.'
This question gave candidates an ideal opportunity to demonstrate their ability to write Urdu. Fashion is a
topic upon which many young people hold strong opinions and there were certainly some very powerful
invectives against fashion as a western concept which is corrupting Pakistani young people. The better
candidates however produced well constructed, balanced and often amusing essays on the subject. They
were able to make their points using their own words within a planned framework, unlike weaker candidates
who merely rambled from point to point in an unstructured way.
Although the question was designed so that candidates would not necessarily need to make use of much
material from the passages, the weaker candidates did rely overmuch on material drawn from the passages,
or more worryingly missed the point entirely and wrote an essay on the clothing business in their country.
This of course did not earn them high marks because they had not addressed the question. On the whole,
this question was much better attempted by candidates than the first task.
There were very few candidates whose written Urdu was not up to the task, although a minority of papers
displayed a very messy handwriting style with crossings out and scribbled insertions. Presentation of work is
important and some scripts were much harder to read than those that were clearly written and neatly
presented.
The length of some of the responses was also problematical. The rubric states very clearly that answers
should be about 250 words. The length of some scripts was well over double that limitation; these scripts will
have lost some marks for structure and content. It is very important to follow rubrics if high marks are to be
achieved.
That being said, overall the majority of candidates wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate
responses to both questions.
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General comments
Overall the performance of candidates was very good. The majority of candidates demonstrated the ability
to write very detailed responses that were relevant and well illustrated. Most candidates had sufficient
command of the Urdu language to enable them to express their ideas competently. Candidates attempted
all four questions in the paper with Questions 1 and 3 being the most popular.
Almost all the candidates answered this part correctly although some candidates only gave the
poets name and not the title of the poem which was required as well, thereby only scoring one
mark.
(b)
The majority of candidates answered this part very well and comprehensively.
candidates were unable to express the inner meaning of the verse.
(c)
This was a fairly straightforward question but required reference to the poem with examples. With
reference to the verses, most candidates expressed ways to make a nation popular. On the whole
most candidates answered very well.
(d)
This part of the question was well attempted. The majority of the candidates were able to give their
own opinion with reference to the poem and showed a good understanding of the text.
(e)
A very popular part of the question. Candidates demonstrated the ability to write very detailed
meanings for the words and phrases and apart from a very few candidates the majority achieved
full marks.
A very few
Question 2
Shikwa Jawab e Shikwa by Allama Iqbal
Apart from a very few candidates, most showed a very good understanding of the topic, describing and
discussing the poets qualities in encouraging the nation to be vigilant and in his message of continued
struggle. Those who illustrated their answers with close and relevant reference to his poetry achieved the
highest marks.
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Section 2: Prose
Question 3
Dastak Na Do by Altaf Fatima
(a) and (b)
Almost all candidates who attempted this question achieved high marks. Candidates covered the
topic well and were able to correctly identify the habits of both characters using good, relevant
quotations from the original text. There were some very good comparisons made between the two
sisters.
Most candidates discussed Safder Yasins feelings and his love for Gatee and gave relevant
examples from the text about Amma Begums attitude. There were some excellent pieces of
writing with well chosen quotations. Those who picked up all the appropriate points with clear
explanations in their answers scored high marks.
Question 4
In response to this question candidates were expected to give their own opinions, justifying their thoughts
and feelings with relevant examples from the text and in this most candidates were successful.
The majority of candidates wrote good essays in response to this question and wrote about their own
feelings and opinions when comparing Amma Begum with Jehangir Mirza. Again candidates who supported
their answers with quotations which demonstrated why Amma Begums character was so interesting
achieved the best marks.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2008 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Question 1
Communication
It is important to focus on the question The current state of the clothes industry.
Reference to the past is fine in order to show changes particularly in the west.
Big factories but no raw materials and expensive labour importing eastern raw materials.
A big investment small profit because costs are going up rent, labour, etc., so closed down
and shifting to the east.
Whereas in the east there is a tradition of hand making, cheap labour and western companies
in with factories, plenty of raw materials, so small investment big profit.
comparing and contrasting the two passages: Ideally these points should be put one against
the other so that a direct comparison is made in order to achieve top marks for content, for
example In the west labour is expensive and there are no raw materials but in the east
labour is cheap and there are plenty of raw materials.
910
78
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
If the passages are not compared but largely summarized then apply the following maxims:
If a summary is made with no comparison at all:
Content maximum 4/10
Organization maximum 2/5
Language maximum 8/10
If some comparison is made:
Content maximum 6/10
Organization maximum 3/5
Language maximum 10/10
If the length is significantly over 250 words (300+) then read everything and go down 1 mark
band for content if you would have given 8 then go down to 6. If you would have given 6 then
go down to 4.
[max 10]
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Language
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Communication
910
78
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
[max 10]
Structure
5
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Language
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began.
All Examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2008 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors, which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text, they will be penalised; both questions are
to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts but on different texts they will not be penalised.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay Questions
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good points and
noting a few observations in the margin (e.g. good point, irrelevant, excessive quotation, etc).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (e.g. rambling answer, shows some knowledge but
misses point of question) is particularly helpful.
Dont forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the two
marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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[2]
(b) Two marks for how the poet feels and why he feels like that.
[4]
Excellent
45
Good
23
Satisfactory
01
Poor
Excellent
45
Good
23
Satisfactory
01
Poor
[5]
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Points to be included:
Unity
Organisation
Struggle and to know about the past
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
1213
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
05
Poor
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(a)
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
(b)
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
12
Very Poor
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Very Good
1819
Thorough
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Painstaking
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1213
Fair
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and
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Sound
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2009 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Points that may be included: comparing and contrasting the two passages
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
910
78
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Excellent
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Good
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Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
910
78
Structure
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Language
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Some candidates will write well in excess of the 250 word limit.
MAX 5
MAX 3
Q2: Ideally this should be presented so that it is clear that an interview has taken place, although it is
NOT necessary to present it as a dialogue.
A) IF THERE IS NO MENTION OF AN INTERVIEW:
CONTENT:
ORGANISATION
LANGUAGE
MAX 7
MAX 6
MAX 4
B) Material should be drawn from both passages so there should be mention of traffic in the West. If
not reduce content mark by 1.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2009 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors, which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text, they will be penalised; both questions are
to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts but on different texts they will not be penalised.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay Questions
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good points and
noting a few observations in the margin (e.g. good point, irrelevant, excessive quotation, etc.).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (e.g. rambling answer, shows some knowledge but
misses point of question) is particularly helpful.
Dont forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the two
marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully; shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
78
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter.
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject
matter.
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
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Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Sound
45
Basic
03
Poor
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Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
Knowledge of plot and characters is displayed. Makes points which are not
then illustrated or developed. Will be a visible attempt to relate points made
to the question.
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
No clear material: marks in this category are awarded almost on the basis of
quantity: up to 3 for a sentence or 2 showing a glimpse of knowledge; 4 or 5
where this is also a hint of relevance to the question.
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Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant
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Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Sound
45
Basic
03
Poor
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Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
Knowledge of plot and characters is displayed. Makes points which are not
then illustrated or developed. Will be a visible attempt to relate points made
to the question.
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
No clear material: marks in this category are awarded almost on the basis of
quantity: up to 3 for a sentence or two showing a glimpse of knowledge; 4 or
5 where this is also a hint of relevance to the question.
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Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully; shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
78
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter.
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject
matter.
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
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Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Sound
45
Basic
03
Poor
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Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
Knowledge of plot and characters is displayed. Makes points which are not
then illustrated or developed. Will be a visible attempt to relate points made
to the question.
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
No clear material: marks in this category are awarded almost on the basis of
quantity: up to 3 for a sentence or 2 showing a glimpse of knowledge; 4 or 5
where this is also a hint of relevance to the question.
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Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant
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Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Sound
45
Basic
03
Poor
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Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
Knowledge of plot and characters is displayed. Makes points which are not
then illustrated or developed. Will be a visible attempt to relate points made
to the question.
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
No clear material: marks in this category are awarded almost on the basis of
quantity: up to 3 for a sentence or two showing a glimpse of knowledge; 4 or
5 where this is also a hint of relevance to the question.
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A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
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GENERAL
The format of this paper, designed to test the abilities of first-language candidates, includes two passages of
about 350 words each, on a linked theme, upon which two questions are set. Candidates are required to
read these passages and answer the two questions both of which require extended responses. Marks are
awarded for communication (10), language (10), and organisation/structure (5), giving a total of 25 marks for
each question. There is an equal weighting to each question giving a total for the paper of 50 marks. This
year the theme was the behaviour of people from different parts of the world when they are driving.
The performance of the majority of the candidates was satisfactory, with many producing a good standard of
written work. A few candidates however had significant problems understanding and responding
appropriately to the texts and questions.
QUESTION ONE
donoN ybaratoN ki roshni men mashriq awr maghrib men traffic ke bare men logon ke ravayya ka
muwazana kijiye
In the light of both passages compare the behaviour of people concerning traffic in the East and West.
This question required candidates to write a direct comparison of the two contrasting facts and comments
discussed in the texts.
Candidates were expected to:
(i)
(ii)
This question was satisfactorily rather than well answered by most candidates. The best responses were
those that extracted the main points from each passage and fit them together in such a way as to make
appropriate comparisons and contrasts between them. There are points from each text that should be
mentioned: the differing attitudes towards other road users, the traffic police, respect for the law, the
acceptance or otherwise of responsibility for accidents. All these points highlight the differences in the
behaviour of road users from west to east, but this does not mean that the content should be copied word for
word. Such responses containing large chunks of copied material scored lower marks for language because
the language written was not their own.
The best examples were from those candidates who wrote their own response to the question, comparing
and contrasting the different facts and points of view expressed in the two passages. The most significant
problem this year was that far too many candidates simply wrote two lengthy paragraphs, the first
paraphrasing Passage A and the second summarising Passage B. Indeed, some even wrote the Urdu word
for summary, 'khwlaasa', at the beginning of their responses. Because they were asked to compare the two
passages, merely summarising them without making any direct comparisons or contrasts did not enable high
marks to be achieved. That is not a 'muwazana'.
The more able candidates wrote about the points raised in each passage and then commented on their
differing behaviours. They did not merely paraphrase the two passages without comment.
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QUESTION TWO
The main purpose of this question, although based on the main theme of the texts, is to provide a stimulus
for more creative and imaginative writing on a topic deriving its theme from the texts, but not directly so. This
time candidates were asked to write a composition on the following theme:
aap apne college ke rysale ke liye mwqami traffic police ke incharge ka interview lete hayn. donon
ybaraton ki roshni men interview ka matan lykhiye.
You interview the local traffic police chief for your college magazine. Write the text of the interview.
This gave candidates an ideal opportunity to demonstrate their ability to write Urdu. The format of the
composition was not determined, but many candidates chose to present it as a dialogue, which on occasion
proved very interesting.
The stronger candidates produced well-constructed and often amusing
compositions on the subject.
By using the interview format candidates had the opportunity to frame questions and answers which
demonstrated that they had understood material from the passages. They were able to make their points
using their own words within that framework, unlike weaker candidates who merely rambled from point to
point in an unstructured way.
On the whole, candidates performed better in this question than in the first task.
LINGUISTIC ABILITY
This paper is aimed at first-language Urdu speakers so a high standard of accuracy is required to gain top
marks. There were very few candidates whose written Urdu was not up to the task, and a minority of papers
displayed a very messy handwriting style with crossings out and scribbled insertions. The length of some of
the responses is also problematical. The rubric has been changed this year and states very clearly that
answers should be about 250 words. The length of some scripts was well over double that; these candidates
will have lost some marks for structure and content. It is very important to follow the rubrics if high marks are
to be achieved.
That being said, overall the majority of candidates wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate
responses to both questions.
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General comments
Overall the performance of candidates was very good. Most candidates demonstrated the ability to write
very detailed responses that were relevant and well illustrated. The majority of candidates had sufficient
command of the Urdu language to enable them to express their ideas clearly and competently. A few
candidates did not appear to read the rubric carefully and subsequently lost marks. Equally it is important to
read the questions carefully before answering to ensure that the specific focus of the question is addressed.
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Question 4
The majority of candidates wrote very well in response to this question and explained and described their
own feelings and opinions about society in a way that was relevant to the question. Again candidates who
were able to support their points with close and relevant quotations from the text scored the better marks.
Section 2: PROSE
Question 5
(a) This question was based on the passage and the majority of candidates answered this question very well
showing their ability to write about the wish the author had in his mind. Some candidates however did not
address the specific focus of the question being asked of them and as such the marks awarded to them were
limited.
(b) This part of the question was very well attempted and candidates gave their answers with reference to
the essay. The question was about characterisation and candidates were asked to write about the character
of illusion.
Question 6
Only a few candidates chose to answer this question but those that did showed that they had studied this
essay very well indeed, and included good, relevant references from the text and achieved high marks.
Question 7
Mirat ul Aroos
This question was a very popular choice.
(a) Candidates who answered this part did so very well, including relevant quotations and references from
the text, achieving good marks.
(b) In this part of the question candidates were required to give their own opinion of the character of the
mother of Muhammad Aqil, referring to both the present society and to the text. The majority of candidates
wrote very convincingly on the topic and achieved very good marks.
Question 8
Relatively few candidates attempted this question but those who did gave good responses with appropriate
references from the text gaining them high marks. The question required candidates to give their own
opinion about how realistic both characters are. Again those who answered with examples from the text and
with reasons from day to day life scored the highest marks.
Question 9
Dastak Naa Do
This question proved not to be very popular this year. Those candidates who did attempt the question
tended to give very brief responses with little reasoning. However, there were a handful of candidates who
had evidently studied this novel thoroughly and answered with relevant examples and giving their own
opinion where appropriate.
Although part (b) was a general type of question it also related directly to the novel. The majority of those
who attempted it did not answer with close enough reference to the characters featured in the novel.
Question 10
This question was again not very popular. The few candidates who attempted this question did so quite well,
fulfilling the demands of the question, embellishing their answers with quotations from the novel.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2010 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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910
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter
78
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
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Excellent
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Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
910
78
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Good
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Satisfactory
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Poor
02
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2010 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, Examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text (i.e. 1 and 2, 3 and 4, 5 and 6, 7 and 8 or 9
and 10), they will be penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passage-based questions or two essay questions (e.g. 1 and 5, 2 and 6,
etc.), they will be penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay Questions
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good points and
noting a few observations in the margin (e.g. good point, irrelevant, excessive quotation, etc.).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (e.g. rambling answer, shows some knowledge but
misses point of question) is particularly helpful.
Dont forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the two
marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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Points to be included:
910
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Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
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Points to be included:
How the poet has guided the Muslims to work hard and struggle.
How the poet has shown the Muslims to follow the practical way of life.
How the poet has tried to stop the inferiority complex in Muslims.
Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
1415
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
Sound
Basic
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Points to be included:
Candidates' own opinion and judgement about the qualities of two poets particularly in the field of
love. Candidates are expected to explain all those feelings without which love poetry does not
complete.
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
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Points to be included:
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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02
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
Candidates have to give reasons why people like his verse even though no Western society
exists in the East.
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
1415
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Points to be included:
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
2225
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
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Points to be included:
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Excellent
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points thoughtfully; shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
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Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully; shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
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Points to be included:
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Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
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Excellent
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Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
910
(b) 10 marks
Points to be included:
The reason for not writing such a letter for his older daughter.
The circumstances which led to his stopping writing the letter for Akbri.
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
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Exceptional
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2021
Very Good
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1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
1819
05
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Points to be included:
Why family people think that Gatee is responsible for Masaoods ill-treatment.
The circumstances that led to this situation.
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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Points to be included:
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
2225
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
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GENERAL
In this paper there are two passages of about 350 words each on a linked theme. This year the theme was
literature and reading. Following the passages, there are two questions: the first directly based upon the
texts and the second on a topic leading naturally from it, but which does not depend on it. Both questions
require extended responses. Marks are awarded for content (10 marks), language (10 marks) and
organisation/structure (5 marks), giving a total mark of 25 for each question. There was equal weighting to
each question giving a total for the paper of 50 marks.
The performance of the majority of the candidates was satisfactory, with many of them producing good
performances. As in previous sessions, candidates ability to understand and respond appropriately to the
texts and the questions had a profound effect on performance.
QUESTION ONE
adab awr mutala ke shawq par badalte hue zamane ke asrat.
donoN ybaratoN ki roshni men is bayan par apne kheyalat ka azhar kijiye.
The effects of passing time on the pleasure of reading and literature.
In the light of both passages express your ideas on this statement.
This question required candidates to write their response to this question using the facts and comments
discussed in the texts.
Candidates were, as always, expected to:
(i)
(ii)
As always, it was a combination of the above two points which discriminated between poor, satisfactory and
good performances.
This years set question was not, as in other years, a muwazana Compare and contrast. This is in line with
the specifications for this paper, which do not specify a muwazana type task only, but rather allow a variety
of questions. Scrutiny of many of the scripts and overall statistics indicates that the less prescriptive
question in this years paper proved advantageous to the majority of candidates, who have performed better
on Question 1 this year in comparison with previous years.
The candidates who scored the highest marks were those who were able to extract the main points from
each passage and fit them together in such a way as to make appropriate comments relating to the passage
of time. There are points from each text that should be mentioned: the love and popularity of literature and
reading in the old days; the fact that poetry was a common interest keenly discussed in cafes and reading
books was a very popular hobby for many people; but as time passed poets no longer gathered as they used
to; people were attracted to new media, etc. Candidates should remember that content should not be copied
word for word from the texts. Where language is copied, lower marks are awarded as the language is not
the candidates own.
As in previous years, the best answers were by candidates who wrote their own response to the question
and used different facts and points of view expressed in the two passages. The most significant problem this
year was that far too many candidates simply wrote two lengthy paragraphs, the first paraphrasing Passage
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As in previous years, very many otherwise linguistically able candidates wrote what amounted to not much
more than a selection of sentences from the texts, mentioning in great detail the Pak Tea House and the
comings and goings of poets, whose names and activities were copied straight from the passage. This
cannot be given high marks either for content or for language, because firstly the question has not been
answered, and secondly much of what is written is not the candidates own language.
Stronger candidates wrote about the points raised in each passage and then commented on the effect of
time on literary and book-reading. They did not merely paraphrase the two passages without comment.
QUESTION TWO
The aim of this question, although based on the main theme of the texts, is to provide a stimulus for more
creative and imaginative writing on a topic deriving its theme from the texts, but not directly so. This time the
candidates were asked to write a composition on the following theme:
'' aap apne college ke rysale ke liye kitaben parhne ki ahmiyat par ek mazmun likhiye.
Write an article on the importance of reading books for your college magazine.''
This gave candidates an ideal opportunity to demonstrate their ability to write Urdu in a less restrictive
format.
Stronger candidates produced well-constructed and often engaging and highly readable
compositions on the subject. On the whole, candidates made much better attempts at this question than the
first task. This is reflected in the marks achieved.
A high standard of accuracy is required to gain top marks for language. There were very few candidates
whose written Urdu was not adequate. There were a small number of scripts which demonstrated a weak
grasp of Urdu spelling and orthography, although, by and large, the grammatical details were correctly
observed. Presentation of work is also important and some scripts were harder to read than those that were
clearly written and neatly presented.
The length of some of the responses was also problematical. The rubric clearly states that answers should
be about 250 words. The length of some scripts was well over double that; these scripts will have lost some
marks for structure and content. It is very important to follow rubrics if high marks are to be achieved.
That being said, overall, the majority of candidates wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate
responses to both questions.
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Generally the paper was well attempted and the majority of candidates fully understood the rubrics and
performed well. Candidates demonstrated their ability to write fluently. There was good use of grammar and
appropriate and colloquial expressions were used, showing good command of the Urdu language.
In this session, a number of candidates tried to answer more than two questions while others attempted two
essay type questions. The rubrics state that candidates should answer just two questions (one from each
section) and that one question should be passage-based and the other an essay question. Candidates are
advised to read the instructions carefully.
Those candidates who attempted the question wrote very good answers, showing they were fully
prepared for this type of question.
(b)
This part of the question was also very well attempted by candidates, although a number of
candidates wrote more generally about the question but did not refer to his other poems from the
syllabus. Those who answered the question including references to his other poems achieved high
marks.
Question 2
This question was very popular and most candidates understood the demands of the question. A few
candidates wrote only about one poet instead of two and could therefore only be awarded a maximum of half
of the marks available for this part. Candidates are reminded to read the question carefully before
attempting to answer.
Question 3
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Question 8
(a) and (b) This question was also a very popular and well attempted. The majority of the candidates who
had studied this novel answered very well, achieving high marks. A few candidates, however,
summarised the whole novel rather than answering the question and therefore achieved low marks.
Question 9
Dastak Naa Doo
(a) and (b) This question was less popular than other questions. Those candidates who attempted this
question discussed all the reasons for Gatee leaving home. Candidates who gave their own
opinion with reference to the novel achieved high marks.
Question 10
A good number of candidates attempted this question and achieved very good marks.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2011 question papers for most IGCSE,
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revival of cricket.
Points that may be included:
DECLINE:
too long, 5 days
no results
weather to hot or too cold
low attendance
people not afford time/tickets
REVIVAL
rethink at the top
introduction of 1 day matches
exciting finishes
big hitting
crowds come back
man of the match
cash prizes
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Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject
matter.
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Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject
matter.
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject
matter.
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may
not be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant.
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If the passages are not compared but largely summarized then apply the following maxims:
If a summary is made with no comparison at all:
Content maximum 4/10
Organization maximum 2/5
Language maximum 8/10
If some comparison is made:
Content maximum 6/10
Organization maximum 3/5
Language maximum 10/10
If the length is significantly over 250 words (300+) then read everything and go down 1 mark band for
content if you would have given 8 then go down to 6. If you would have given 6 then go down to 4.
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Question 2 is a less prescriptive task and as long as the candidate responds appropriately to the task
set they are not bound by the material from the given texts.
There should be equal weight to the positives and the negatives of cricket.
Candidates should at this level write a conclusion to their arguments to access the highest band for
content.
910
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes
points thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter.
78
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified;
makes some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject matter.
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified
but may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter.
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been
picked out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be
focused on the question.
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may not
be addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant.
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
910
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
CIE will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
CIE is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2011 question papers for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level syllabuses.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors which do not impede communication.
Rubric Infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, Examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text (i.e. 1 and 2, 3 and 4, 5 and 6, 7 and 8 or 9
and 10), they will be penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts or two essay questions but on different texts they will be
penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
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(a) 10 marks
Points to be included:
910
78
46
13
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
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(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
1415
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
Sound
Basic
45
03
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25 marks
Points to be included:
Candidates own opinion with reference to Momins poems on how his beloved does not
respond to him positively in love while the poet himself does. The candidates are expected
to explain all those feelings without which the love poetry is not complete.
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
1819
05
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(a) 10 marks
Points to be included:
Candidates point of view about the poem Qanaat with reference to the poem.
How a person who does Qanaat becomes prosperous etc.
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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Syllabus
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25 marks
Points to be included:
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
2225
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
1213
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(a) 10 marks
Points to be included:
910
78
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
56
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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25 marks
Points to be included:
Candidates point of view on the given essay according to their own knowledge and
understanding of the text.
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
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02
(a) 10 marks
Points to be included:
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
910
78
56
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
Akbarys character.
Aqals character.
Difference between both characters.
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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25 marks
Points to be included:
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
2225
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
05
Poor
1213
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Syllabus
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02
(a) 10 marks
Points to be included:
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant
(b) 15 marks
Points to be included:
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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10 25 marks
Points to be included:
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
1819
05
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Key message
In order to do well in this examination, candidates should:
in Question I, answer the question set rather than summarise the two passages
General comments
The standard format of this paper, designed to test the abilities of first-language candidates, is to include two
passages of about 350 words each, on a linked theme of, this year, the decline and revival of cricket,
following which there are two questions, one directly based upon the texts and the second on a topic leading
naturally from it, but which does not depend on it.
Candidates were asked to read these passages and then answer two questions, both of which required
extended responses. Marks were awarded for content, language and organisation/structure on a scale of
10, 10 and 5, giving a total mark of 25 for each question. There was equal weighting to each question giving
a total for the paper of 50 marks.
The performance of the majority of the candidates was satisfactory, with many of them producing good
performances.
This paper is aimed at first-language Urdu speakers so a high standard of accuracy is required to gain top
marks. There were very few candidates whose written Urdu was not up to the task.
Candidates should take care to present their work clearly and neatly so that everything the candidate has
written can be rewarded.
The length of many of the responses was problematical. The rubric states very clearly that answers should
be about 250 words. The length of some scripts was well over double that; these will have lost some marks
for content. Examiners are instructed to read the whole piece but to penalise overlong essays by reducing
the content band down by one band. For example if a candidate was to have been given 8 for content, only
6 would be awarded to an overlong response.
It is very important to follow rubrics if high marks are to be achieved.
That being said, overall the majority of candidates wrote relevant, interesting and linguistically accurate
responses to both questions.
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As in previous sessions, it was a combination of the above two points which provided the Examiners with the
opportunity to discriminate between and reward varying levels of performance.
This year, the key part of the question is apne tasuraat, your impressions. This means that candidates are
required to record their own reaction to the material presented in both of the texts.
This question was satisfactorily rather than well answered by most candidates. The best answers were
those that were able to extract the main points of each passage and present them, along with their own
comments on the material, using accurate and idiomatic Urdu, employing a range of vocabulary and
structures.
Although candidates are required to mention points from each text, for example, the long time taken to
complete a five-day match, the weather, the revived popularity of one-day matches, etc., they should take
care not to copy word-for-word from the texts. In this session, many candidates copied large chunks of text
almost verbatim, concentrating, for example, a hundred words or so on trivial points such as Hitlers and
Roosevelts reactions. Such responses scored lower marks for language because the language used was
copied from the text and was not the candidates own.
As in previous sessions, the best responses were those that gave the candidates own response to the
question and used different facts and points of view expressed in the two passages. The most significant
problem this year was that far too many candidates simply wrote two lengthy paragraphs, the first
paraphrasing Passage A and the second summarising Passage B. Indeed, some even wrote the Urdu word
for summary, khwlaasa, at the beginning of their responses.
This year the better responses contained points raised in each passage and included the candidates own
opinions and ideas and comments on them. In simple terms, they answered the question set. They did not
merely paraphrase the two passages without comment.
Question 2
The main difference between this question and the first one is that, although based on the main theme of the
texts, its purpose is to provide a stimulus for more creative and imaginative writing on a topic deriving its
theme from the texts, but not directly so. This time the candidates were asked to write a composition on the
following theme:
aap apne college ke rysale ke liye cricket ke fawaid awr nuqsanat par ek mazmun likhiye.
Write an essay on the advantages and disadvantages of cricket for your college magazine.
This gave candidates an ideal opportunity to demonstrate their ability to write Urdu. The better candidates
produced well-constructed and often thought provoking compositions on the subject.
Although there was no defined format for the essay, most candidates structured their essays in one of two
ways. The first wrote two separate paragraphs while others wrote on particular matters from both points of
view. They were able to make their points using their own words within that framework, unlike weaker
candidates who merely rambled from point to point in an unstructured way.
On the whole, this question was much better attempted than the first question and this is reflected in the
marking.
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Key message
To do well in this paper, candidates must make sure they understand all the demands of the question. They
must produce a response which is entirely relevant to the question set and supported with appropriate
examples from the text.
General comments
Overall, the performance of the candidates this year was very good. The candidates have shown good
command of language as well as of the text. Most of them have demonstrated the ability to write very
detailed responses and have shown confident use of complex sentences. Their answers were relevant and
well illustrated. The majority of the candidates have followed the instructions and attempted both questions
in the papers.
(b)
This was a very straightforward question and almost all the candidates scored high marks. This
part of the question was very well attempted. Candidates have shown that they know about Mir
Taqee Mir and in their answers they have provided references and examples from his Ghazals.
Question 2
Momin Khan Momin
This question was a less popular question. Those who attempted this question have shown reasonable
understanding of the topic. Most of the candidates have discussed what was required in the question. A few
generally wrote on the features of Momin Khans poetry scoring low marks.
Question 3
(a)
For this question, answers on either Dar Safat e Qanaat or Qanaat or both were accepted.
Examiners took into account that candidates did not have the Qanaat poem in front of them and
extensive and thorough marking and post-marking checks were carried out to ensure that no
candidates were disadvantaged. Marking statistics showed that this was a popular question and
that candidates generally did well on this question.
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The second part of the question was more general about the poet and again this was very well
attempted. The majority of the candidates scored high marks for this question. The candidates
have given useful quotations from his poetry to justify their answers.
Question 4
This was very straightforward and the most popular question for the candidates. The majority of the
candidates have written very well and explained how the poet has criticised all those who have forgotten
their Eastern values and have adopted Western values. Again those who supported their answers with
quotations scored full marks.
Section 2: Prose
Question 5
(a)
This question was based on the passage and a good majority of the candidates answered this
question very well, giving examples from the text. All those who attempted this question scored
very good marks.
(b)
The part (b) of the question was very well attempted too and candidates gave their answers with
reference to the essay. It was based on the characterisation and candidates were asked to
compare two characters in the text. Those who scored full marks compared two characters and
gave the reasons for the character being full of life.
Question 6
A high number of candidates attempted this question and those who answered gave references from the text
and scored high marks. It was clear that those who have shown the ability to answer this question properly
had studied this work very well.
Question 7
(a)
This question was less popular than other questions in the paper. The candidates who answered
this part did well. Those who have included quotations and references from the text while
answering this question scored high marks. Candidates who simply narrated the whole story could
not score high marks.
(b)
Part (b) of the question was a comparison between two very important characters. The candidates
were required to give examples from the text to prove their answer. Those who attempted this
question answered this part of the question very well and scored high marks.
Question 8
A small number of candidates attempted this question and those who answered with references from the text
scored high marks. The demand of the question was to prove Mama Azmat a negative character, who was
involved not only in theft in the house but created misunderstandings between Asghari and her in-laws. A
few candidates only wrote on the first part of the question and ignored the second part scoring fewer marks.
Question 9
(a)
This year Question 9 was less popular than other questions. A small number of candidates
attempted this question. Some candidates had prepared fully and answered with examples and
illustrated with their own opinion. Others wrote very short responses without any reasoning. These
candidates could not be awarded high marks.
(b)
Part (b) was a general type of question on a very important character. Those who attempted this
question gave very good reasons for the importance of the character with reference to the novel
and scored very good marks.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2012 question papers for most IGCSE,
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.
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[maximum 25 marks]
910
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes points
thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter
78
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified; makes
some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject matter
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified but
may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been picked
out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be focused on
the question
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may not be
addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
If the passages are not compared but largely summarised then apply the following maxims:
If a summary is made with no comparison at all:
Content maximum 4/10
Organisation maximum 2/5
Language maximum 8/10
Is some comparison is made:
Content maximum 6/10
Organisation maximum 3/5
Language maximum 10/10
If the length is significantly over 250 words (300+) then read everything and go down 1 mark band for
content if you would have given 8 then go down to 6. If you would have given 6 then go down to 4.
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Paper
01
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
Very simple and repetitive sentence structures containing many errors. Weak
grasp of grammar and use of own vocabulary very limited.
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Question 2
Syllabus
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01
[maximum 25 marks]
910
Excellent
Very detailed response: material from the text well selected; makes points
thoughtfully, shows insight or engagement with the subject matter
78
Good
Detailed response: relevant material from the text has been identified; makes
some clear points; shows some engagement with the subject matter
56
Satisfactory
Competent response: relevant material from the text has been identified but
may lack detail or clarity; a mechanical response to the subject matter
34
Poor
A limited attempt: some appropriate material from the text has been picked
out but is used randomly and sometimes does not appear to be focused on
the question
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected; question may not be
addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant
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Paper
01
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
Very simple and repetitive sentence structures containing many errors. Weak
grasp of grammar and use of own vocabulary very limited.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes must be read in conjunction with the question papers and the report on the
examination.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions or correspondence in connection with these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2012 question papers for most IGCSE,
GCE Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level syllabuses and some Ordinary Level
syllabuses.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidate's ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors, which do not impede communication.
Rubric infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text (i.e. 1 and 2, 3 and 4, 5 and 6, 7 and 8 or 9
and 10), they will be penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts or two essay questions but on different texts they will be
penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
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Syllabus
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02
[10 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
13
02
[15 marks]
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
810
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Points to be included
[25 marks]
Candidates' own opinion with reference to Iqbal's poems about how he has awakened the
Muslims of sub-continent with the help of his poetry. The candidates are expected to explain
all those elements of his poetry without which the purpose of his poems is incomplete.
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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Syllabus
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Paper
02
[10 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
13
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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His quality as an international religionist.
Reference from his poems about human life and national problems.
Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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Syllabus
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02
[10 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
13
02
[15 marks]
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
810
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Points to be included
Character of Akbar Azam.
Character of Anar Kali.
Syllabus
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Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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Syllabus
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Paper
02
[10 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
13
02
[15 marks]
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
Poor A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from
the required story or any other story; question may not be
addressed; answer may be largely irrelevant.
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Our Andaish Khan as father.
Candidates are expected to give examples from the text about his character.
Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
250
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02
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
13
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
[15 marks]
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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The character of China Man.
His feelings for Gatee's family.
His way of living life.
Syllabus
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02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
1617
05
252
Key messages
In order to do well in this examination, candidates should:
in Question 1, answer the question set rather than summarise the two passages
General comments
The overall performance of the candidates was very good. The candidates showed a good command of
language and structure, as well as content. Most candidates demonstrated the ability to write very detailed
and comprehensive responses and showed confident use of complex sentences. Their answers were
relevant and well illustrated. The majority followed the instructions and attempted both questions from the
paper.
Though less so than last year, the length of a few responses was problematical. The rubric states very
clearly that answers should be about 250 words. The length of some scripts was well over double that; these
will have lost some marks for content. Examiners are instructed to read the whole piece but to penalise
overlong essays by reducing the content band down by one band. For example if a candidate was to have
been given 8 for content, only 6 would be awarded to an overlong response.
Candidates should take care to present their work clearly and neatly so that everything the candidate has
written can be rewarded.
Question 1
In this question the candidates were asked to compare ancient and modern marathons and present the
answer including their own ideas. This year the majority of the candidates differentiated effectively between
comparison and summary. Candidates generally did very well on this question. They paid attention to both
language and structure and to giving their own views. Due to the high standard of the answers, the majority
of the candidates scored high marks. There were a few candidates who did not adhere to the word limit and
could therefore not score the highest marks.
Question 2
This question was of the same standard as previous years. Most candidates attempted this question very
well, giving their own ideas about the popularity of sports. Those who provided a range of ideas to make
sports popular scored very good marks. Those who just wrote about the Government responsibility to make
sports popular did not score such good marks. Again, most candidates demonstrated very good language
as well as structure in their answers.
As in Question 1, there were a few candidates who wrote over the word limit and could therefore not achieve
the highest marks.
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Key messages
To do well in this paper, candidates must make sure they understand all the demands of the question. They
must produce a response which is entirely relevant to the question set and supported with appropriate
examples from the text.
General comments
The overall performance of the candidates was very good. The candidates have shown good command of
language as well as the text. Most of them have demonstrated the ability to write very detailed responses
and shown confident use of complex sentences. Their answers were relevant and well illustrated. The
majority of the candidates have followed the instructions and attempted both questions from both sections of
the paper.
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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner
Report for Teachers.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions about these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2013 series for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level components and some Ordinary Level components.
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Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Sche
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June
013
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GC
GCE O LE
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stion
n2
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S
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247
7
Pape
er
0
01
[m
max
5 mar
m rks
xim
mum 25
s]
ointts ma
may iinc
clud
de:
Po
Co
om
mmun
nica
atio
on [m
xim
mum
m 10
1 mark
ks]]
max
Ve
V
ery de
etaiiled
d re
esp
pon
nse
e: ma
materriall fro
he ttex
xt wel
w l se
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m th
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Good
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Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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INTERNATIONAL EXAMINATIONS
GCE Ordinary Level
This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of
the examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not
indicate the details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners meeting before marking began,
which would have considered the acceptability of alternative answers.
Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner
Report for Teachers.
Cambridge will not enter into discussions about these mark schemes.
Cambridge is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2013 series for most IGCSE, GCE
Advanced Level and Advanced Subsidiary Level components and some Ordinary Level components.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidate's ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors, which do not impede communication.
Rubric infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text (i.e. 1 and 2, 3 and 4, 5 and 6, 7 and 8 or 9
and 10), they will be penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts or two essay questions but on different texts they will be
penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
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02
910
Excellent
78
Good
Satisfactory
13
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
46
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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Points to be included:
[25 marks]
Aspects of Ghalibs poetry such as themes of sadness, humour, use of similes and
metaphors, philosophical thinking, depth of meaning, etc.
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
2225
1213
05
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Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
13
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
910
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
810
57
14
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Points to be included:
[25 marks]
The poets love for his country and the description of beautiful scenes. How those who live
abroad develop love for their country and feel at home when reading the poem. Any other
points supported by reference to the poem.
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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Good
46
Satisfactory
13
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
910
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
810
57
14
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Points to be included:
[25 marks]
Candidates are expected to explore the way the author thinks about culture and civilization
with close reference to his work included in the syllabus.
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
2225
1213
05
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[10 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
Poor
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
13
02
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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Points to be included:
[25 marks]
The novel became popular because it was written for women. Candidates should
demonstrate their ability to discuss characterization in the novel, giving examples of different
characters.
2225
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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02
[10 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
46
Satisfactory
13
Poor
02
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
1415
Excellent
1113
Good
810
Satisfactory
57
Poor
14
Very Poor
A weak attempt: little useful material has been selected from the
required story or any other story; question may not be addressed;
answer may be largely irrelevant.
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[25 marks]
Candidates are required to explore his romantic character, his importance in the novel, his
interest in the family and his personal views about different characters.
Exceptional
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair relevance
and knowledge
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
2225
1213
05
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Key messages
It is important to include relevant material from both passages in response to Question 1. Question 2
requires candidates to write using the appropriate style, format and vocabulary of a speech rather than a
general essay on the topic.
General comments
The overall performance of candidates was very good. Candidates demonstrated a good command of the
language, wrote detailed responses and were confident in their use of complex sentences. Most responses
were relevant and well illustrated. Some candidates did not address the specific question asked and did not
keep to the word limit.
Comments on specific questions
Question 1
The majority of candidates showed a high level of reading and writing skills, appropriately using material
from both passages in their composition. Weaker responses were characterised by a tendency to write a
general composition on the topic without using examples and ideas from the given passages. Candidates
need to use material from both passages in response to the question; in some cases material from only one
passage was used. Some candidates could improve their performance by writing more concisely, making
sure that they keep to the word limit.
Question 2
Most candidates performed well in this question. The best responses used an appropriate writing style and
wholly relevant material in their speeches, providing good justification and examples in support of their
thoughts about how students are builders of the nation. Most candidates kept their focus on the question,
were concise and stayed within the word limit. Candidates need to write in the appropriate format asked for
in the question; some candidates did not write in the format of a speech and instead wrote an essay on the
topic. Weaker responses were less focussed, over long and did not provide examples in support of their
ideas. Candidates need to answer the specific subject matter of the question; some wrote about successful
people being those who work hard (the topic for Question 1), rather than students as builders of the nation,
and therefore some of their content could not be credited.
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Key messages
Answers need to address the specific focus of each question and show an understanding of the texts beyond
their literal meaning to the issues and attitudes that they raise. Some candidates wrote only general essays
and needed to include an informed response to the texts.
General comments
Overall the performance of candidates was very good. Candidates showed a good command of language
which meant they were able to communicate their exploration and understanding of the texts clearly. Most
wrote very detailed responses which were relevant and well illustrated.
Comments on specific questions
Section 1: Poetry
GHAZLEIN
Question 1
Iqbal
(a) Many candidates answered this part well and comprehensively. A few candidates did not organise or
express their thoughts clearly.
(b) This part was very well attempted. The strongest candidates showed a good understanding of Iqbal's
use of humour in describing his feelings and supported their ideas with examples from the text.
Question 2
Ghalib
Candidates who attempted this question demonstrated a very good understanding of the topic. The best
responses included a detailed discussion of the features of Ghalibs poetry and included well chosen
quotations from his poetry to illustrate their points.
NAZMEIN
Question 3
Iqbal
(a) This part was very well answered by most candidates. The best responses showed a detailed
understanding of the text and appropriate use of quotations from it.
(b) This part was again very well answered. The majority of candidates explored the features of Mard e
Momin. There were some very good responses in which candidates focussed clearly on the question and
made close reference to the poetry in support of the points they made. Weaker candidates tended to write
more generally about the poem or gave only an explanation of the verses.
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Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
If the passages are not compared but largely summarised then apply the following maxims:
If a summary is made with no comparison at all:
Content maximum 4/10
Organisation maximum 2/5
Language maximum 8/10
If some comparison is made:
Content maximum 6/10
Organisation maximum 3/5
Language maximum 10/10
If the length is significantly over 250 words (300+) then read everything and go down 1 mark band for
content if you would have given 8 then go down to 6. If you would have given 6 then go down to 4.
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Paper
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910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Question 2
Syllabus
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Paper
01
[maximum 25 marks]
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Paper
01
910
Excellent
78
Good
56
Satisfactory
34
Poor
02
Very Poor
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Key Messages
It is important to include relevant material from both passages in response to Question 1.
Candidates are reminded that in order to access full range of marks they need to read the task for
Question 2 carefully and to write within the specified word limit using appropriate style, format and
vocabulary.
General Comments
The majority of candidates performed well in both questions. Candidates wrote detailed responses, have
demonstrated a good command of the language and were confident in their use of complex sentences.
Comments on Specific Questions
Question 1
The question required candidates to write an essay on Agriculture and Environment. The majority of
candidates performed well in this question showing a high level of reading and writing skills. Strong
candidates have demonstrated their ability to appropriately select material from both passages and to use it
effectively in their writing.
Weaker responses were characterised by a tendency to write general composition on the topic without using
examples and ideas from the given passages or using material from only one passage. Candidates are
reminded to use material from both passages in response to the question in order to access full marks.
Question 2
Most candidates performed well in this question. The best responses used an appropriate writing style and
wholly relevant material in their speeches, providing good justification and examples in support of their
thoughts about the role young people play in protecting the environment. Most candidates kept their focus
on the question, were concise and stayed within the word limit.
Candidates are reminded to write in the appropriate format asked for in the question; some candidates did
not write in the format of a speech and instead wrote an essay on the topic. Weaker responses were less
focussed as candidates did not provide examples in support of their ideas and did not keep within the word
limit. Candidates are reminded to answer the specific subject matter of the question in order to achieve full
marks available for content.
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Maximum marks 50
Candidates will write their answers in Urdu. Examiners will look for a candidates ability to
communicate effectively and will ignore linguistic errors, which do not impede communication.
Rubric infringements
In order to facilitate a clerical check, examiners are requested to write the number of each question
answered and the mark awarded on each script.
If candidates answer two questions on the same text (i.e. 1 and 2, 3 and 4, 5 and 6, 7 and 8 or 9
and 10), they will be penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
If candidates answer two passages/texts or two essay questions but on different texts they will be
penalised; both questions are to be marked and the best mark taken.
Passage-based questions
Examiners should consider the extent to which candidates have been able to identify the
significant issues raised in the passage and, where appropriate, have applied these to the text as
a whole.
Examiners should consider how successfully the candidates have manipulated their material and
to what extent they have shown depth of awareness and knowledge of the workings of the text
under discussion.
Examiners should reward candidates whose answers show good understanding of how a text
works and how an author has conveyed the key issues.
Essay questions
It is very helpful if Examiners comment on the scripts. This means simply ticking good points and
noting a few observations in the margin (e.g. good point, irrelevant, excessive quotation, etc.).
A brief comment at the end of an essay (e.g. rambling answer, shows some knowledge but
misses point of question) is particularly helpful.
Dont forget to write your mark for each essay at the end of that essay, and to transfer the two
marks to the front of the script, and total them.
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910
78
46
13
Syllabus
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Paper
02
[10 marks]
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
A limited attempt: the candidate has written about the central theme
but the result will be limited and scrappy; there has been no
attempt to consider any language aspects of the poem leading to
some doubt that the candidate has sufficient understanding of the
verse form/poetic style to adequately answer a question on this
text.
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Syllabus
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Paper
02
1415
Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
45
Sound
Basic
03
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Paper
02
Points to be included:
[25 marks]
Candidates own opinions about the writing style of Mir Taqee Mir specifically with reference
to his simplicity of emotions and use of fluent words to present his point of view.
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
2225
1213
05
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910
78
46
13
Paper
02
[10 marks]
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
A limited attempt: the candidate has written about the central theme
but the result will be limited and scrappy; there has been no
attempt to consider any language aspects of the poem leading to
some doubt that the candidate has sufficient understanding of the
verse form/poetic style to adequately answer a question on this
text.
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Paper
02
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
Sound
Basic
1415
45
03
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Points to be included:
How the poem is the history of rise and fall of the Muslim nation.
How the poem has become a lament for the Muslim society.
His quality and attractive way of writing this poem.
Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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910
78
46
13
Paper
02
[10 marks]
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
A limited attempt: the candidate has written about the central theme
but the result will be limited and scrappy; there has been no
attempt to consider any language aspects of the poem leading to
some doubt that the candidate has sufficient understanding of the
verse form/poetic style to adequately answer a question on this
text.
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Syllabus
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Paper
02
Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
45
Sound
03
Basic
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Points to be included:
His quality as a father of Urdu short stories.
His quality as writer about reality.
Syllabus
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Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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910
78
46
13
Paper
02
[10 marks]
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
A limited attempt: the candidate has written about the central theme
but the result will be limited and scrappy; there has been no
attempt to consider any language aspects of the poem leading to
some doubt that the candidate has sufficient understanding of the
verse form/poetic style to adequately answer a question on this
text.
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Syllabus
3247
Paper
02
[15 marks]
1415
Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
45
Sound
03
Basic
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Points to be included:
Candidates own views about characters.
Comparison between both characters.
Examples from the novel about the real character.
Syllabus
3247
Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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910
78
46
13
Paper
02
[10 marks]
Excellent
Good
Satisfactory
Poor
A limited attempt: the candidate has written about the central theme
but the result will be limited and scrappy; there has been no
attempt to consider any language aspects of the poem leading to
some doubt that the candidate has sufficient understanding of the
verse form/poetic style to adequately answer a question on this
text.
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Syllabus
3247
Paper
02
[15 marks]
1415
Exceptional
work
1213
Very Good
1011
Thorough
89
Painstaking
67
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
45
Sound
Basic
03
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10 Points to be included:
Candidates own views about gaining everything with money with examples.
Paper
02
[25 marks]
2225
Exceptional
work
2021
Very Good
1819
Thorough
1617
Painstaking
1415
Fair
relevance
and
knowledge
1213
Sound
1011
Basic
69
Weak
Candidate may have read the text but the answer is insubstantial and
lacking in relevance. Any ideas will not be expressed coherently.
Poor
05
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Key Messages
All candidates are required to select one question from section one Poetry and one question from section
two Prose. Answers need to address the specific focus of each question and show an understanding of the
texts beyond their literal meaning to the issues and attitudes that they raise. Some candidates wrote only
general essays and needed to include an informed response to the texts.
General Comments
Overall the performance of candidates was very good. Candidates showed a good command of language
which meant they were able to communicate their exploration and understanding of the texts clearly.
Comments on Specific Questions
Section One
Question 1
(a)
Most of the candidates answered this part well and comprehensively by giving reference to the
Ghazal and by expressing their opinion about the poet.
(b)
This part was very well attempted. Stronger candidates showed a good understanding of the
poetry included in the syllabus.
Question 2
Candidates who attempted question on Mir Taqi Mir demonstrated a very good understanding of the topic.
The best responses included a detailed discussion of the features of poetry including the use of similes and
metaphors.
Question 3
(a)
The question on Akber Alah Abadi poem Agar Mazhab Giya was very well answered by most
candidates. The best responses showed a detailed understanding of the poem and appropriate use
of quotations from it.
(b)
This part was very well answered. Stronger candidates focussed clearly on the poets ideas about
modern education and made close reference to the poetry in support of the points they made.
Question 4
This question was about Halis poem Musadus e Hali. There were some very good responses with in depth
discussion of the author's use of sentiments to communicate the value of religion and culture. Many
candidates discussed Eastern values and included good use of quotations in support of the points made.
Candidates are encouraged to answer the specific question asked and avoid merely giving an explanation of
the whole poem without addressing the specific question.
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Section Two
Question 5
(a)
This question was generally answered well. Stronger responses addressed the specific question
asked on the authors sense of humour with reference from the given passage. Weaker candidates
gave only a general response about the text.
(b)
This part was well attempted. The best responses showed insight into the authors style and made
close reference to his work.
Question 6
This was another popular question. The best responses demonstrated candidates understanding of
Munshee Pram Chands style; candidates answers were well-argued and articulate with close references to
Munshee Pram Chands work.
Question 7
(a)
This part invited candidates to compare the three characters. The best responses explored which
character was in the right, justified their answer in a sensitive and informed way and included
relevant quotations and references from the text.
(b)
This question was very popular. Candidates were asked to write about the reality and style of the
passage. Stronger candidates supported their answers with close references and quotations from
the text.
Question 8
This question was generally well answered. The best responses included a comparison between the two
characters and showed an understanding of the author's use of language to create his effects. Many good
answers included a discussion of Akbari character that can still be seen in our present society.
Question 9
(a)
In this question the candidates were required to write about Safder Yaseens character. Stronger
responses showed a thorough understanding of the characters nature and included informed
personal opinion with close reference to the text.
(b)
This part was based on relationship between Gatee, her mother and sister. Stronger candidates
produced well-balanced answers exploring the reasons why Gatee became rebellious.
Question 10
Most candidates addressed the question very well, showing a good understanding of the characters,
relationships and situations in the novel. Stronger candidates justified the idea that not all can be bought with
money, making appropriate references in their responses and drawing on examples from the text.
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