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Twelve
Angry
Men
is
a
play
about
how
power
can
be
misused.
Discuss.
Preceding
the
civil
rights
movement
of
the
1960s,
the
McCarthyist
paranoia
provoked
much
fallacious
propaganda
from
the
American
Government.
Subsequently,
much
of
the
Governments
power
was
abused
to
promote
xenophobia
and
prejudicial
attitudes
(1).
Thus,
as
Twelve
Angry
Men
acts
as
a
social
commentary,
playwright
Reginald
Rose
condemns
the
way
in
which
power
can
be
misused
in
official
structures
such
as
the
judicial
system
(2).
As
his
protagonist
acts
as
an
embodiment
of
his
idealistic
view
of
an
American,
Rose
conveys
his
belief
on
how
power
should
be
used;
however,
his
depiction
of
the
antagonistic
Third
Juror
displays
the
reality
of
how
power
can
be
misused
(3).
This
is
compounded
in
his
personification
of
xenophobia
in
Tenth
Juror.
As
well
as
his
characters,
Rose
uses
the
nature
of
the
judicial
system
itself
to
show
the
ways
in
which
power
can
corrupt
not
only
humans,
but
government
structures
(4).
Hence,
the
playwright
conveys
the
ways
in
which
power
can
be
misused
(5).
Rose
condemns
the
adversary
system
of
trial,
utilising
the
dialogue
of
his
characters
to
demonstrate
the
ways
in
which
the
Western
judicial
system
can
promote
a
miscarriage
of
justice(6).
As
some
minor
discussion
precedes
the
beginning
of
the
jurys
deliberation,
Rose
conveys
how
the
jurors
interpretation
of
the
case
is
already
corrupted
by
the
eloquence
of
the
States
counsel.
As
Twelfth
Juror
remarks,
Whatd
you
think
of
the
prosecuting
attorney?
I
liked
the
way
he
hammered
home
his
points,
one
by
one,
in
logical
sequence
(7),
Rose
comments
on
the
injustice
of
the
State
using
their
monetary
power
to
create
a
case
with
no
dead
spots
when
the
accused
can
afford
no
such
luxuries.
Such
discrepancies
between
lawyers
manifest
themselves
into
the
jurors
discussion
and
subsequent
behaviour(8),
as
Eighth
Juror
comments,
I
would
have
asked
for
another
lawyer.
This
assertion
stems
from
another
way
in
which
the
adversary
system
of
trial
enables
misuse
of
power;
it
allows
fallible
witness
testimony.
In
a
judicial
system
entirely
centred
around
concepts
on
winning
and
losing,
Rose
demonstrates
how
the
power
of
witness
testimony
and
the
importance
it
holds
with
the
justice
system
has
the
ability
to
establish
a
winning
case
for
the
prosecution
rather
than
establish
the
reality
of
events.
Such
power
can
be
seen
in
the
jurors
assertions
that
thats
the
whole
case!
and
you
couldnt
change
my
mind
if
you
talked
for
a
million
years,
when
in
reality
no
one
ever
will
[know
what
happened].
Thus
Roses
opinion
on
the
structure
of
the
justice
system
and
the
importance
it
places
on
witness
testimony
is
conveyed
by
the
negative
portrayal
of
such
things
within
Twelve
Angry
Men.
Hence,
the
abuses
of
power
are
firmly
demonstrated
by
the
playwrights
depiction
of
the
justice
system
(9).
Rose
utilises
the
characterisation
of
the
Third
and
Tenth
Jurors
to
show
the
ways
in
which
subjectivity
and
xenophobia
respectively
can
hinder
justice.
Both
jurors
hold
enormous
power,
as
each
of
their
votes
has
the
power
to
end
a
boys
life
or
to
save
it
(10).
In
constructing
his
antagonist
as
an
embodiment
of
subjectivity,
Rose
conveys
how
someones
interpretation
of
their
responsibilities
can
hinder
the
correct
execution
of
their
task
(11).
Third
Juror
believes
he
is
more
informed
than
the
other
jurors
as
he
knows
[the
accused].
Roses
stage
direction
of
he
is
embarrassed
also
conveys
a
subconscious
urge
on
Third
Jurors
behalf
to
vicariously
punish
his
son
through
the
defendant.
This
concept
is
reinforced
by
a
second
stage
direction
pertaining
to
Third
Juror
leaping
into
the
breach
to
connote
images
of
war
and
thus
demonstrating
the
personal
importance
the
case
holds
for
the
antagonist
(12).
Thus,
Rose
demonstrates
how
power
can
be
misused
when
held
by
someone
with
a
personal
agenda.
This
is
furthered
by
Tenth
Jurors
xenophobic
characterisation,
as
he
embodies
the
crux
of
McCarthyism.
Tenth
Juror
asserts
theyre
a
danger
and
that
they
hate
us...
they
want
to
destroy
us
during
his
tirade
preceding
the
plays
denouement.
Indeed,
such
sentiments
of
fear
were
crucial
to
the
McCarthyist
propaganda
at
the
time.
Thus,
Tenth
Juror
is
used
to
comment
on
the
high
prevalence
of
discrimination
and
corruption
of
1950s
America.
In
the
characterisation
of
the
plays
antagonist
and
Tenth
Juror,
the
playwright
asserts
the
way
in
which
absolute
power
corrupts
absolutely
in
regards
to
the
legal
system(13).
Despite
demonstrating
ways
in
which
power
can
be
misused,
Rose
provides
an
idealistic
model
of
how
power
should
be
used
in
his
construction
of
Twelve
Angry
Mens
protagonist(14).
In
being
asked
for
not
guilty
votes,
Eighth
Juror
is
the
only
man
that
raises
his
hand.
This
was
not
for
any
personal
agenda,
nor
because
he
thought
the
accused
was
innocent,
but
because
Eighth
Juror
held
a
reasonable
doubt
and
cast
his
vote
accordingly.
In
imbuing
Eighth
Juror
with
a
high
level
of
intellect
Im
an
architect
Rose
gives
Eighth
Juror
the
ability
to
convince
other
jurors
that
there
is
a
reasonable
doubt.
Instead,
his
protagonist
is
not
trying
to
change
[the
jurors
minds],
however,
trying
to
objectively
separate
facts
and
the
fancy.
In
characterising
his
protagonist
as
a
man
not
aiming
to
establish
guilt
or
innocence,
but
a
champion
of
objectivity
and
reason,
Rose
provides
his
audience
with
a
model
of
how
power
should
and
could
be
utilised,
endorsing
his
value
for
reason
and
pragmatism
(15).
Twelve
Angry
Men
contains
various
sources
of
power;
some
from
the
jury
and
some
from
the
jury
system
itself.
Roses
portrayal
of
the
judicial
system
demonstrates
to
the
audience
the
way
power
can
be
abused,
as
well
as
his
characterisation
of
the
antagonist
and
Tenth
Juror.
Ultimately,
whilst
conveying
misuses
of
power,
Rose
provides
and
idealistic
model
for
the
audience,
reminding
them
of
the
value
of
critical
thinking
and
reason
(16).
COMMENTS
(1)
Notice
that
the
essay
doesnt
directly
open
talking
about
the
text.
Its
easy
to
write
In
the
play
Macbeth
or
In
the
historical
fiction
novel
Brooklyn
or
In
the
movie
All
About
Eve
but
just
think
about
how
many
times
examiners
must
read
In
the
as
the
first
sentence
of
an
essay!
It
can
be
helpful
to
research
the
historical
context
of
your
chosen
text
and
weave
some
of
that
history
into
the
opening
line
of
your
essay
and
let
it
frame
your
contention.
Youll
notice
that
the
writer
doesnt
mention
the
play
in
the
first
two
sentences;
however,
this
was
a
personal
choice
youre
totally
fine
to
mention
the
text
in
the
first
or
second
sentence!
That
said,
if
you
look
closer
at
these
first
two
sentences
they
both
deal
with
the
prompt
and
with
the
themes
of
the
play,
so
despite
not
mentioning
the
text
yet,
theyre
building
on
the
criteria
but
also
raising
the
interest
of
the
examiner.
Mentioning
propaganda
in
the
first
sentence
builds
into
the
talk
of
misused
power,
and
it
also
lays
a
great
base
for
discussing
the
Tenth
Juror
later
on.
(2)
Heres
the
contention
of
the
essay.
The
good
thing
about
this
sentence
is
that
it
is
VERY.
CLEAR.
So,
they
use
the
word
condemns,
which
is
telling
the
examiner
exactly
what
they
think
Rose
is
doing,
and
theyve
also
reused
a
prompt
word
misused
so
its
very
clear
that
they
AGREE
with
the
prompt,
and
not
only
do
they
think
TAM
is
a
play
about
how
power
can
be
misused,
but
they
think
its
a
play
in
which
Rose
actively
condemns
this
misuse
of
power.
(3)
In
this
sentence,
they
first
mention
the
third
paragraphs
mini-contention,
as
well
the
second
paragraphs
idea.
They
also
mention
Tenth
Juror
in
a
separate
sentence
even
though
theyll
be
talking
about
him
with
Third
Juror.
Youll
notice
that
it
seems
like
they
havent
relied
on
a
particular
formula
for
the
introduction.
One
popular
formula
is
to
have
one
sentence
in
the
introduction
for
each
of
the
paragraph
ideas.
What
theyve
done
here
is
actually
just
a
deviation
of
that
formula;
they
mention
all
of
their
paragraph
ideas,
and
still
do
it
in
three
sentences,
theyve
just
varied
the
punctuation
(the
first
sentence
uses
a
semi-
colon
instead
of
a
full-stop).
So
instead
of
having
Idea
number
one.
Idea
number
two.
Idea
number
three,
theyve
got
a
series
of
sentences
that
flows
a
little
better
than
three
sentences
of
the
same
length.
This
is
a
very
nice
touch
for
the
introduction
of
their
essay.
(4)
This
is
the
idea
for
their
first
paragraph.
I
like
how
the
writer
mentioned
it
last
because
its
the
first
paragraph
in
their
essay,
so
theres
a
nice
connection
between
the
end
of
the
introduction
and
the
start
of
their
body
paragraphs.
Just
note
that
theyve
demonstrated
to
the
examiner
in
their
introduction
that
theyre
sticking
to
the
prompt.
Theyve
been
very
focussed
on
the
concept
of
power
and
showing
exactly
what
the
ideas
are,
and
exactly
how
they
relate
to
the
prompt.
It
seems
as
if
this
writer
has
spent
a
lot
of
effort
on
developing
good
introductions,
which
I
think
is
a
smart
idea.
First
impressions
count
a
lot,
so
you
should
make
yours
a
good
one.
(5)
Here,
the
writer
finishes
their
introduction
by
making
their
contention
really
clear.
Unfortunately,
its
a
bit
short
and
its
essentially
just
a
rewording
of
the
prompt,
but
at
least
it
shows
that
theyre
focussing
on
the
prompt.
All
in
all,
its
a
nice
ending
to
a
great
introduction.
(6)
Theyve
got
two
portions
in
this
topic
sentence,
and
youll
notice
that
the
other
topic
sentences
in
this
essay
also
have
two
portions.
Theyve
aimed
to
answer
two
questions
with
their
topic
sentences:
(1)
What
will
this
paragraph
talk
about,
and
(2)
How
does
it
answer
the
prompt?
In
this
sentence,
the
writer
is
showing
that
theyre
talking
about
the
structural
features
of
the
legal
system
and
how
it
promotes
a
miscarriage
of
justice.
The
implicit
statement
in
this
topic
sentence
is
that,
its
the
power
within
the
legal
system
that
is
promoting
a
miscarriage
of
justice.
See
if
you
can
analyse
the
answers
to
these
two
questions
in
the
remaining
topic
sentences.
(8)
The
words
between
(7)
and
(8)
are
focussed
on
actually
ANALYSING
the
quote
from
Twelfth
Juror.
They
provided
the
quote,
and
then
they
sucked
the
analysis
out
of
it
by
saying
what
Rose
is
trying
to
tell
us
THROUGH
this
quote.
That
is,
Rose
trying
to
tell
us
that
its
messed
up
that
someone
who
is
rich
has
a
better
chance
at
justice
than
someone
who
is
poor.
They
also
use
this
analysis
to
transition
into
another
quote
so
the
basic
quote-
analysis
formula
theyre
using
doesnt
seem
as
obvious.
What
I
particularly
like
about
what
the
writer
has
done
here
is
how
theyve
kept
all
parts
of
the
criteria
in
mind.
Theyre
showing
that
they
know
the
text
with
good
evidence,
but
they
arent
forgetting
to
analyse
like
many
students
do,
and
theyve
also
transitioned
in
a
way
that
keeps
the
fluency
of
their
writing,
all
whilst
sticking
to
the
prompt
theyre
hitting
all
parts
of
the
criteria
with
nearly
everything
they
write.
(9)
The
rest
of
this
paragraph
does
the
same
thing
as
the
numbers
(7)
and
(8).
The
writer
provides
evidence,
which
shows
that
they
have
good
textual
knowledge
(part
of
the
criteria),
and
then
they
provide
analysis,
or
try
to
extract
the
meaning
that
Rose
has
put
into
his
play
(again,
analysis,
part
of
the
criteria).
They
keep
mentioning
Rose
Rose
comments,
Rose
demonstrates,
Roses
opinion.
By
doing
this,
the
essay
writer
constantly
reminds
themselves
to
answer
the
question
What
is
Rose
really
trying
to
say?
They
also
wrap
up
the
paragraph
in
a
way
that
answers
the
same
questions
they
asked
in
the
topic
sentence.
They
show
what
their
paragraph
idea
was,
and
they
show
how
it
relates
to
the
prompt,
just
to
make
sure
there
are
no
dead
spots
in
their
first
paragraph.
(10)
Here,
they
introduce
a
slightly
different
conception
of
power
than
in
their
first
paragraph.
In
their
first
paragraph,
the
writer
was
talking
about
how
the
power
behind
the
justice
system
itself
is
misused.
Now
theyre
talking
about
how
the
power
within
the
justice
system,
specifically,
the
power
of
the
very
jurors
themselves,
can
be
misused.
This
is
a
good
way
to
get
more
ideas
from
prompts.
If
you
look
at
a
particular
word
in
a
different
way,
it
can
give
you
multiple
points.
Isolate
specific
words
and
just
ask
What
does
this
word
mean?,
can
there
be
two
different
interpretations
of
this
word?
youll
find
yourself
coming
up
with
ideas
left,
right,
and
centre.
(11)
Notice
that
theyve
provided
the
analysis
BEFORE
their
evidence,
just
to
mix
things
up
a
bit.
The
idea
that
the
Third
Juror
is
an
embodiment
of
something
is
a
particular
type
of
character
analysis.
They
then
go
on
to
justify
this,
as
opposed
to
providing
evidence
then
proceeding
to
analyse,
the
process
has
been
reversed.
(12)
The
sentences
before
(12)
are
really
valuable.
The
evidence
theyre
using
is
from
the
stage
directions,
which
are
more
complex
evidence
than
regular
dialogue.
I
think
stage
directions
are
important
enough
that
I
dedicate
a
lot
of
time
talking
about
them
when
Im
tutoring,
so
I
really
like
how
this
writer
has
shown
some
good
analysis
of
stage
directions.
Not
only
do
they
use
stage
directions,
but
they
get
really
specific
with
their
analysis
in
that
they
really
swoop
in
on
the
particular
words
Rose
is
using
to
convey
meaning.
Its
similar
to
a
language
analysis.
You
dont
want
to
do
this
type
of
language
analysis
style
analysis
too
much
in
your
essay,
but
just
a
touch
of
it
like
theyve
given
here
in
the
second
paragraph
can
really
hit
the
criteria.
(13)
Theyve
done
a
similar
thing
with
Tenth
as
they
did
with
Third.
The
writer
introduces
the
analysis
first,
and
then
provides
their
evidence.
They
also
refer
back
to
the
history
that
they
mentioned
in
the
first
lines
of
their
introduction,
which
is
a
nice
touch.
One
negative
aspect
of
this
part
of
the
essay
though
is
that
their
writing
is
starting
to
seem
a
bit
rushed.
They
didnt
focus
on
Tenth
Juror
for
very
long
at
all,
especially
when
you
consider
what
a
valuable
character
he
is
for
analysis.
It
seems
like
they
sort
of
smashed
out
the
writing
because
they
started
to
run
out
of
time.
Its
a
shorter
paragraph
that
the
first
paragraph,
and
wraps
up
pretty
quickly.
But
its
still
a
very
good
paragraph
again,
it
just
goes
to
show,
you
dont
have
to
be
a
robot
and
do
everything
absolutely
perfectly
to
score
really
well.
(14)
Here,
theyve
taken
a
different
approach
to
the
first
two
paragraphs.
I
really
think
a
good
way
to
structure
your
essays
is
to
have
your
third
paragraph
just
a
little
bit
different
which
this
writer
has
done
really
nicely.
When
I
teach
these
type
of
paragraphs,
I
call
them
However
paragraphs,
in
that
you
can
have
your
contention,
and
then
say
however,
I
do
think
that
Here,
the
writer
is
saying
Yeah,
TAM
is
about
how
power
can
be
misused,
however,
I
still
think
that
Rose
shows
how
power
should
be
used.
(15)
This
paragraph
is
well
over
100
words
shorter
than
the
other
paragraphs;
theyre
obviously
running
out
of
time.
However,
it
seems
like
theyve
got
three
things
in
their
head:
analyse,
give
evidence,
and
write
well!
thats
the
criteria!
You
can
also
see
the
evidence-analysis
formula
here,
and
you
can
see
that
their
analysis
in
this
paragraph
is
a
bit
more
focussed
on
the
views
and
values
of
Rose.
This
caps
off
some
well-rounded
analysis
throughout
the
essay:
theyve
analysed
stage
directions,
specific
words,
some
of
the
history,
and
the
playwrights
views
and
values.
This
paragraph
could
be
improved
by
fleshing
out
Eighth
Juror
a
little
bit
more
hes
obviously
one
of
the
biggest
characters
in
the
play.
Its
likely
that
the
writer
just
didnt
have
the
time
once
again,
it
just
goes
to
show.
You
dont
need
to
be
a
robot.
(16)
Their
conclusion
very
quickly
caps
off
a
few
things.
It
shows
how
theyve
hit
the
prompt
with
their
contention
in
general,
and
caps
off
their
ideas
and
how
they
also
hit
the
prompt.
It
also
doesnt
end
really
abruptly,
but
transitions
nicely
into
finishing
with
a
small
message
for
the
audience.
Its
not
necessary
to
do
this,
and
some
teachers
might
not
even
like
it,
its
just
this
writers
personal
touch
on
the
essay.