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Tuesday,May29,2007

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ComprehensiveNoteWritingPracticeFor2008Let'sDoIt!

Hi,
IaminitiatingathreadforthePassagewritingpracticeEnglishPaperIIQ3.Hopeyouallwould
participateattheirbest.
Lookingforwardtoyourcontributions!
thanks

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Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(Al
Qamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Then
everysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(Al
Baqara:2:281)

Tuesday,May29,2007

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Plzcheckwhetheruptotherequirementsandcorrecttheerrors.
2006Q3(c)
Charmsstrikethesightbutmeritwinsthesoul
Manypeoplethinkfromtheireyesanddonotbothertousetheirgraymatter.Thisisverycommon
observationthatawelldressedpersonishighlyregardedbymassesascomparetoamodestwearing
person.Thereasonmerelyisthecharmofthesightandtheimpressionofstatusthatparalyzethe
abilityofjudgment.Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,theinjusticeisdonewiththemeritoriousones.
Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworldbusinessfirmsarespeciallytrainingtheiremployeestomake
themselvesupeffectivelyinordertoimpressthecustomers.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesale
oftheproduct.Leavingasidesomereputedorganizations,someenterprisesaredeceivingpeoplein
disguise.Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserthattheproductisnotuptothemark.
However,contrarytothisphenomenon,awellrecognizedandqualityproductdoesnotneedsuch
flatteringtricks.Thequalityandmeritoftheproductspeaksvolumesaboutitsutilityforthe
customers.Whetherthesalespersonissittingonthefootpathorwhethertheproductisinanordinary
pack,thepervioussatisfactionofthecustomerwouldnotbothertoseethecharmpurchaserswould
onlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.Therefore,
newproducts,whicharedefectiveintheirmeritsbutattractiveintheirpackaging,wouldneverbe
abletowinthesoulofthecustomersovertheproducthavingsomemeritinitsquality.Hence,charm
strikesthesightbutmeritwinsthesoul.
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Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(Al
Qamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Then
everysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(Al
Baqara:2:281)

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Thursday,May31,2007

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@SecondComing,
Goodeffort!Especiallythelanguage,syntaxandorganizationaresuperb.Youhaveinterpretedthe
quotefromthepointofviewofbusiness.Nodoubt,youhaveprovedlogicallywhateveryouwantedto
saybutthesamequotecanbeinterpretedinanothersenseaswell.Likeinthismaterialisticage
mostlypeoplegoforouterlooksorfacialbeautyofapersonbutthischarmisnotlonglastingand
fadessoon.Onthecontrary,meritsi.e.differentgoodattributesinone'spersonalityleavea
permanentinfluenceonothers.Outerbeautycansatisfyonlyvisionbutmeritsmakeastrongbond
betweentwosouls....
Anyhowyoureffortisreallycommendable.Keepitup.
Regards,
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MyALLAHitisenoughformyrespectthatIm"Your"person&itisenoughformypridethat"You"
aremyGOD."You"areexactlythewayIdesire.Thuspleasemouldmetheway"You"desire.

Thursday,May31,2007

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@MuskanGhuman
Thanksforyourappreciation,ithasrealyimprovedmymorale....Iameagerlyanticipatingyourown
versionofthispassage.
Regards,
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Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(Al
Qamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Then
everysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(Al
Baqara:2:281)

Thursday,May31,2007

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Charmsstrikethesightbutmeritwinsthesoul
Manypeoplethinkfromtheireyesanddonotbothertousetheirgraymatter.Thisisvery
commonobservationthatawelldressedpersonishighlyregardedbythemassesascompare
toamodest+lywearingperson.Thereasonmerelyisthecharmofthesightandthe
impressionofstatusthatparalyze+stheabilityofjudgment.Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,
theinjusticeisdonewiththemeritoriousones.Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworld
businessfirmsarespeciallytrainingtheiremployeestomakethemselvesupeffectivelyin
ordertoimpressthecustomers.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleoftheproduct.
Leavingasidesomereputedorganizations,someenterprisesaredeceivingpeopleindisguise.
Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaserthattheproductisnotuptothemark.
However,contrarytothisphenomenon,awellrecognizedandqualityproductdoesnotneed
suchflatteringtricks.Thequalityandmeritoftheproductspeaksvolumesaboutitsutilityfor
thecustomers.Whetherthesalespersonissittingonthefootpathorwhethertheproductisin
anordinarypack,thepervioussatisfactionofthecustomerwouldnotbothertoseethe
charmpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathad
previouslygotbythem.Therefore,newproducts,whicharedefectiveintheirmeritsbut
attractiveintheirpackaging,wouldneverbeabletowinthesoulofthecustomersoverthe
producthavingsomemeritinitsquality.Hence,charmstrikesthesightbutmeritwinsthe
soul.
.
PleaselookthethingsI'veitalicised.Trytothinkwhat'swrongwiththemandgivetheminaseparate
post,I'lltrytotellyouhowyoucanimprovethem.Moreover,allofyourspellingsareinAmerican
EnglishtrytoconverttheminthestandardBritishEnglish,e.g.,grayintogrey,paralyzeinto
paralyse,behaviorintobehaviour.Therestsearchforyourself.Icanpresumeyouhavebeen
predominantlyreadingbooksofAmericanauthorsduringyourstudentship.However,Iappreciateyour
developmentofthethesis.
...Yasser
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Thursday,May31,2007

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superbeffortdear
Quote:

OriginallyPostedbysecondopinion02
Plzcheckwhetheruptotherequirementsandcorrecttheerrors.
2006Q3(c)
Charmsstrikethesightbutmeritwinsthesoul
Many(Mostofthe)peoplethinkfromtheireyesanddonotbothertouse(using)theirgray
matter.Thisisverycommonobservationthatawelldressedpersonishighlyregardedby
massesascompare(cmpared)toamodest(humblyormodestlydressed)wearingperson.The
reasonmerelyisthecharmofthe
(theisextra)sightandtheimpressionofstatusthatparalyzetheabilityofjudgment.With
thisirresponsiblebehavior,the(theextra)injusticeisdonewiththemeritoriousones.Ithas

becomeanormoftoday'sworldbusinessfirmsarespeciallytrainingtheiremployeesto
makethemselvesupeffectivelyinordertoimpressthecustomers.Suchmeasuresgreatly
improvethesaleofthe(theextra)product.Leavingasidesomereputedorganizations,some
enterprisesaredeceivingpeopleindisguise.Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaser
thattheproductisnotuptothemark.However,
(usehoweverorcotrarybutbotharenotappropriate)contrarytothisphenomenon,awell
recognizedandqualityproductdoesnotneedsuchflatteringtricks.Thequalityandmeritof
theproductspeaksvolumesabout(of)itsutilityforthecustomers.Whetherthesalespersonis
sittingonthefootpathorwhether
(orisenoughnowhetherhere)theproductisinanordinarypack,thepervioussatisfactionof
thecustomerwouldnotbothertoseethecharmpurchaserswouldonlyjudgebythe
satisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotbythem.Therefore,new
products,whicharedefectiveintheirmeritsbutattractiveintheirpackaging,wouldneverbe
abletowinthesoulofthe(theextra)customersovertheproducthavingsomemeritinits
quality.Hence,charmstrikesthesightbutmeritwinsthesoul.
Dear,thatwasasplendideffort.Itriedtofindoutsomemistakes.Thesearementionedasabove.I
maybewronginmyassessment.Irequestfurthercorrectionfromtheothermembers.
Regards
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Winnersneverquitandquittersneverwin.
LasteditedbyShootingStarWednesday,May09,2012at12:35AM.

Thursday,May31,2007

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WHEREIGNORANCEISBLISS,ITISFOLLYTOBEWISE
Itishumannaturethatitcravesforhappiness,freedomandrelaxation.Thereisnodoubtthat
humansaresentinthisworldtobearthesufferingsofthemistakecarriedoutbytheirancestorsin
paradiseAdamandEve'sblunderagainstAllah'scommand.Sointhisworld,themankindisforliving
alifefullofworries,whichstartfromthebirthwithacryforfoodandendatthelastbreathwitha
fearofdeath.Thus,thereasontobeinthisworldistobearanxieties,frustrationsandfears.Nowthe
questionisifthereisnowayoutoftensionsthenhowtoliveintheworld?Theanswerwouldbeclear
byasimplelogicthatachildisunawareofthethreatoftheweaponsofmassdestructionoran
inevitabledeath.Thebabylivesinacarelessandfearlessworld,whichisfullofjoyandliveliness.
Thisworldofneglectistherealcauseofaneverlastinghappinessofthekid.Therefore,itisthe
ignorancewhichsafethechildrenfromhighbloodpressure,heartattack,depressionandsoon.To
neglectcertainrealitiesthathavenothingtodowithourdailylifeisnecessary.Suchmatterswhich
havenoimmediatebearingsuponourdailyroutineshouldbeignored.Ponderingoversuchproblems
wouldbeoutofourscope.Therearethousandsofmomentsofjoysarelyinginfrontofustheneed
istorealizethemandaccepttherealitythatwhereignoranceisbliss,itisfollytobewise.
__________________
Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(Al
Qamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Then
everysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(Al
Baqara:2:281)

Thursday,May31,2007

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secondopinion02
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ThanksToLocateMyWeaknesses.....IHavePostedAnotherPassage,HopeYouAllWouldCorrect
This.WaitingForYourComments.....
Regards
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Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(Al
Qamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Then
everysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(Al
Baqara:2:281)

Thursday,May31,2007

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@YASSER28
SirIwouldliketoaskthatwhyshouldIstopwritingAmericanstandard.Ithinkitwouldbemistake
tomixbothBritishandAmericanspellingsandstylesbutifIamtotallyfollowingAmericanpattern
thenwhyshouldIshifttoBritish.AlsoitwouldbedifficultformetofollowBritishstandardcozIam
usedtoAmericanwayofspelling.WouldnithaveanybearinguponmymarksifIdofollowthe
Americanstandardofwritinginexam?
@YASSER28
Plzjustifythefollowingmistakesasyouhavepointedout
Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,
Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworld
Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaser
purchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviouslygotby
them.
@555
Couldyoupleaseclarifythefollowingmistakesthatyouhavepointedout?
1.Many(Mostofthe)peoplethinkfromtheireyes.
2.bothertouse(using)theirgraymatter.....("Botherto"phrasecanbeusedwithaverbword)
3.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleofthe(theextra)product.
Thanks
regards
SECONDOPINION
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Lo!manisinastateofloss.(AlAsr:103:2)Andeverysmallandgreatthingisrecorded.(Al
Qamar:54:53)AndguardyourselvesagainstadayinwhichyewillbebroughtbacktoAllah.Then
everysoulwillbepaidinfullthatwhichithathearned,andtheywillnotbewronged.(Al
Baqara:2:281)

LasteditedbyShootingStarWednesday,May09,2012at12:35AM.

Thursday,May31,2007

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Quote:

OriginallyPostedbysecondopinion02
@YASSER28
Plzjustifythefollowingmistakesasyouhavepointedout
Withthisirresponsiblebehavior,
Ithasbecomeanormoftoday'sworld
Thetruth,lateron,disclosesoverthepurchaser
purchaserswouldonlyjudgebythesatisfactoryresponseoftheproductthathadpreviously
gotbythem.
Dear,this"irresposible"isnotasuitableadjectivehere,useinstead"faulty","immature",etc.
''world's"insertcommaherenotasemicollin
''disclosesover''isnotaproperwordhere(yaarwatchingTVwhilecomposingpostsonot
cominginmindasuggestiveword)yes,watchingDAWNNEWSgaveclueuse"dawnsupon"
istead.
"previously'gotbythem"trytoremaininactivevoice,passivevoiceisconsideredstylistically
inbadtaste."Got"wordisusedininformalandspokenlanguageforwrittenyouhavetoresort
to''bought".
...you'vemissedsomeitaliciseditems,wellit'suptoyou.ButIshouldremindyouthatyou
needtostrengthenyourdefinitearticle''the"area.Moreover,youseemtomeamanagement
orITgraduateandthereisanabundanceofAmericanisminyourwriting,esp.,inspelling
conventions.DoremeberourCSSexaminersarelittleMaster'sinAmericanliteraturerather
theyareconservativefollowersofBritishconventionsofQueen'sEnglish.Itwas
information,youcanbetterdecideforyourself.

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@555
Couldyoupleaseclarifythefollowingmistakesthatyouhavepointedout?
1.Many(Mostofthe)peoplethinkfromtheireyes.
2.bothertouse(using)theirgraymatter.....("Botherto"phrasecanbeusedwithaverb
word)
3.Suchmeasuresgreatlyimprovethesaleofthe(theextra)product.
Itendtodisagreewiththefirstpointofmyverdearfellow555.Whenyouuse"Mostofthepeople"
youaregivinganegativesignalthatmajorityisfoolratheryourSecond..."Many"appealstomeasit
isgivingquitereasonablespacethattherearemanypeoplenot"nearlyallpeople".
Thesecondpointof555isquiteagreebletomeandIfeelsorryImissedthat.Dear,youhavetusea
gerundhereit'snotjustsimpleverbfirstformcase.
...Yasser
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