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Introduction.
Now a days we are living in a society based on
consuming. As a result some people have problems
in dealing with budgets and they get into debts by
buying things they do not need and cannot afford.
Causes
1 to purchase the goods without having the clear
idea of money in credit card
2 psychological impact of subliminal
advertisements
3 lack of awareness of serious effects that
advertisement can have on mind
Solution
1 one should learn how to manage his budget
2 to raise awareness among the people
3 keeping a record on income and monthly
spending
Conclusion
All summed up, the chances of becoming the
victim of consumer society are high now a days
because of the surrounding temptations but this
consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and
what solutions can you suggest?
The enormous growth in the use of the internet over the last decade has led to radical
changes to the way that people consume and share information. Although serious
problems have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.
One of the first problems of the internet is the ease with which children can access
potentially dangerous sites. For example, pornography sites are easily accessible to
them because they can register with a site and claim to be an adult. There is no doubt
that this affects their thoughts and development, which is a negative impact for the
children and for society. Another major problem is the growth of online fraud and
hacking. These days, there are constant news stories about government and company
websites that have been hacked, resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands
of criminals.
It is important that action is taken to combat these problems. Governments should
ensure that adequate legislation and controls are in place that will prevent young people
from accessing dangerous sites, such as requiring more than simply confirming that you
are an adult to view a site. Parents also have a part to play. They need to closely
monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain sites, which can
now be done through various computer programs. Companies must also improve their
onsite IT security systems to make fraud and hacking much more difficult by
undertaking thorough reviews of their current systems for weaknesses.
To conclude, the internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed
peoples lives, but not without negative impacts. However, with the right action by
individuals, governments and businesses, it can be made a safe place for everyone.
(285 words)
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Here they are illustrated in the paragraph, with the introductory expressions underlined:
One of the first problems of the internet is the ease with which children can
access potentially dangerous sites.For example, pornography sites are easily
accessible to them because they can register with a site and claim to be an
adult. There is no doubt that this affects their thoughts and development, which
is a negative impact for the children and for society. Another major problem
is the growth of online fraud and hacking. These days, there are constant
news stories about government and company websites that have been
hacked, resulting in sensitive information falling into the hands of criminals.
Check out this grammar lesson if you are unsure how to use modal verbs.
Here again is a plan for the problem solution essay for the solutions paragraph:
Solution 1: Governments
Idea: Adequate legislation and controls for young people
How: More complex website access criteria
Solution 2: Parents
Idea: Monitor children and restrict access
How: Use a computer program
Solution 3: Companies
Idea: Improve IT security systems
How: Review current systems in place
Here is the paragraph again. Note how it follows the plan and the clear topic sentence
that tells the reader the essay is moving on to discuss solutions (modals verbs are
underlined):
It is important that action is taken to combat these
problems. Governments should ensure that adequate legislation and
controls are in place that will prevent young people from accessing
dangerous sites, such as requiring more than simply confirming that you are an
adult to view a site. Parents also have a part to play. Theyneed to closely
monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain
sites, which can now be done through various computer
programs.Companies must also improve their onsite IT security systems to
make fraud and hacking much more difficult by undertaking thorough reviews
of their current systems for weaknesses.
Model Essay 9
Therefore, it is clear that the problems caused by overpopulation in urban areas are
very serious. Yet if governments and individuals share a collective responsibility, then it
may well become possible to offer some solutions.
to resort to illegal means to get what others have. Of course, this will include the
children in the poorer families.
However, there are ways to tackle such problems. Firstly, one of the ways to combat the
problem is to have stricter punishments. Although, as discussed above, it can be
outside factors that lead to crime, it is still important to have severe punishments to
deter teenagers from crime. All too often, because they are young, the courts are too
lenient. Parents also have to take more responsibility for their childrens actions. They
too should be punished if their children commit crime.
To sum up, several factors have led to increases in youth crime, but measures are
available to tackle this problem.
(267 words)
Comments
The topic is clearly stated in the general statement of the introduction, and the thesis
tells the reader that reasons and solutions will be discussed.
It is organized well, with reasons for youth crime discussed in the first body paragraph
and solutions in the next. Each paragraph has two ideas and they are clearly signaled
and well supported.
There are some good complex structures (In order for, often the case that,
means that,) and some good examples of topic related vocabulary (nurtured,
neglected, illegal, severe punishments, deter, commit crime).
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples
from your own experience or knowledge.
You should write at least 250 words.
IELTS Global Warming Essay - Model Answer
Probably the most worrying threat to our planet at the present time is global warming.
This essay will examine the reasons why global warming is occurring and discuss some
possible solutions.
The predominant factors resulting in the warming of the earth are the emissions of CO2
and deforestation. CO2, which damages the ozone layer, comes from several sources,
but the most problematic are those coming from the burning of fossil fuels from power
plants. This releases thousands of tones of CO2 into the atmosphere every year.
Another cause of these emissions is the burning of gasoline for transportation, which
continues to increase because of our demand for cars and also our increasing
worldwide consumption, resulting in an increasing need to transport goods. Also, forests
store large amounts of carbon, so deforestation is causing larger amounts of CO2 to
remain in the atmosphere.
Nevertheless, there are potential ways to solve these problems, or at least reduce the
effects. Firstly, governments need to reduce our dependence on fossil fuels and
promote alternatives. Plant-derived plastics, biodiesel, wind power and solar power are
all things that are a step in the right direction, but governments need to enforce the
limits on CO2 emissions for the polluting industries in their countries for these to be
effective. Also, individuals can play a part by making lifestyle changes. People should
try to buy cars with the best fuel economy, and only use their car when really necessary.
They can also switch to energy companies that use renewable energy rather than fossil
fuels. Finally, small things like buying energy efficient light bulbs, turning off electricity in
the house, and planting trees in the garden can help.
To conclude, although global warming is a serious issue, there are steps that
governments and individuals can take to reduce its effects. If we are to save our planet,
it is important that this is treated as a priority for all concerned.
(320 Words)
Sample
IELTS
Speaking
Describe someone in your family who you like.
Topic
2:
What lessons were like
And explain how you felt when you were making this choice
Describe a job you have done.
You should say:
Equally there is a very strong argument for allowing parents to decide on what care their
children receive. This is because one extremely important principle is that everyone
should have the right to choose what care they receive. For children who are too young
to make their own choice, it is only natural that their parents should make that decision
for them. This is particularly important for families that come from a culture where
certain medical interventions such as blood transfusions are forbidden. In this case, it
seems quite wrong for the government to order something that may go against religious
beliefs.
In conclusion, I do accept that there good reasons for the state to outline what care
children should receive, but parents should be able to have the last word particularly
when religious principles are at stake.
Enter your answers in the gaps.
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a very strong argument
adopt a general policy
almost everyone agrees
are at stake
grounds for arguing
I do accept that there
In this case
it seems quite wrong for
My
own view is that
one extremely important principle
responsibility of the government
Although
healthcare, there is some dispute about whether parents or the government should decide what that care
is.
may
while governments
medical provision for children. One of these is that typically the state is better able to make informed
decisions because it has access to all the latest medical research. Another is that occasionally there are
compulsory vaccination.
Equally there is
have the right to choose what care they receive. For children who are too young to make their own
choice, it is only natural that their parents should make that decision for them. This is particularly
important for families that come from a culture where certain medical interventions such as blood
the government to
In conclusion,
care children should receive, but parents should be able to have the last word particularly when religious
principles