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The Abstract
Identify the title type for each article. Do not worry about covering all types.
Just see if you can handle the act of labeling real titles.
Each of these articles also has an opening. Can you identify their openings?
Again, do not worry about covering all types of openings.
If possible, share your results with your classmates. What sorts of titles and
openings did you find? Were some types of titles and openings more common
than others? Did these various types seem to depend on the content and form
of the articles, or the topics covered?
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Once you have used the title and the opening sentences to get your bearings, then
you are ready to tackle the article as a whole. Sometimes, however, an article may
appear (at first) to be right up your alley, only to end up being something totally
different from what you had expected after you have started reading it. This can
be both a frustrating and a time-wasting experience. Fortunately, there is a way to
sample the article in a quick fashion, so that you can decide whether or not to read
the whole piece. There is a tiny versin of the article, right at the beginning, which
you can read and then decide whether to read on. This little "article in miniature" is
called the abstract.
The abstract is the front door to a research article. Researchers use abstrais to
show readers what they can expect from the article as a whole. Abstrais typically
use one paragraph to present a brief synopsis of the nature and contents of the article. Abstracts also invite readers to take a quick look, to see if they want or need to
investgate the article further.
Abstrais for research articles are written using specific guidelines. Curts (2001)
points out that, first and foremost, an abstract is short. It summarizes the major
points of the article and most of the time it does not include bibliographic citations.
December and Katz (2003) suggest that writing an abstract involves "boiling down
the essence of a whole paper into a single paragraph that conveys as much new information as possible." Kies (2003) describes six pieces of information that every wellconstructed abstract addresses. These include the purpose of the article, its scope, the
methods used, the results of the study, critical recommendations, and conclusions.
The definitive format guide for most research articles in education is the American Psychological Association Publication Manual. The manual defines an abstract
as follows:
An abstract:
For the standard empirical article, the abstract should define the research
problem, participants, methods, findings, and conclusions.
For a review or theoretical article, the abstract should define the topic, the purpose or thesis, sources used, and conclusions.
For a methodological article, the abstract should define the general class of
methods, essential characteristics of the proposed method, range of application, and operating characteristics of the method in practice.
For a case study article, the abstract should define the subject and that subject's
relevant characteristics, the nature of the issue illustrated by the case study,
and questions raised for further work.
The APA Manual concludes its discussion of abstracts by stating that: "An abstract
that is accurate, succinct, quickly comprehensible, and informative will increase the
audience and the future retrievability of your article" (p. 15).
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Since abstracts are so formal and dense in nature, it makes sense to look for
coding patterns within abstracts. The basic coding pattern is actually quite simple.
Think of an abstract as a device with seven switches. Each of those switches can be
set to either the "on" position or the "off" position. If the switch is on, then the conten rea is present in the abstract. If the switch is off, then the content rea is not
explicitly mentioned in the abstract. The content reas and the usual order of those
seven switches are as follows:
PURPOSEPROBLEMPARTICIPANTSDESIGN
ANALYSISRESULTSCONCLUSIONS
This code, of course, is nothing more than a miniature model of the article itself. The
full article usually has all of these seven content reas. But some of these content
reas may be more important than other content reas within a given article. It is the
job of the abstract to cue readers on which aspects of the article are most important.
If a particular content rea is present, then its switch is on and that aspect of the article is reported in the abstract. If that content rea is missing from a given abstract,
then the switch will be said to be off and that aspect is not reported in the abstract.
The other aspect to the code, in addition to which content reas are covered,
is the order of presentation. The order outlined above is, more or less, the standard
pattern of presentation in most educational research articles. But there is no requirement that an abstract conform to this order. Instead, abstracts tend to order those
aspects that the researchers feel are most important for readers to know in order to
do a quick analysis of the potential usefulness of the article. Sometimes, this involves
pointing out the most important findings right away. Other times, it makes sense to
direct readers to the uniqueness of the sample or participants. Each study has its
own unique pattern of important elements. While the article itself might unfold in
a typically standard fashion, sometimes the abstract will foreground those unique
elements in a much less standard order.
The best way to understand how abstracts can be coded and decoded is to dive
right into the process of reading and coding them. Consider the following abstract
from the training article by Picasso:
This study looked at gender and early career characteristics of valedictorians
from high schools with differing sociocultural dimensions. Archival data from
30 schools from suburban reas and 30 schools from inner city reas were
examined. Overall gender differences across high school groups were not significant. Immediate career plans were also examined, with suburban valedictorians more likely to go to college and inner city valedictorians more likely to
go to vocational school. There were no differences between employment data.
A combined analysis of these data suggested that suburban males were more
likely to go to college over inner city males, and that inner city females were
more likely to go to vocational schools than suburban females.
First of all, the abstract is 115 words long. This places it within the 120-word limit
recommended by the APA Manual. As you will see, this limit is not hard and fast, but
researchers often try to at least stay cise to this limit. Furthermore, some journals are
very strict about adhering to a word length limit for abstracts, while others are more
lax. Therefore, the 120-word limit should be considered as a basic rule of thumb.
Next, you should determine which of the switches are "on" and in what order.
Here is one way to lay out that array for this abstract:
PURPOSEPARTICIPANTSDESIGN
ANALYSISRESULTS
In this abstract, the order of the content reas followed the standard pattern quite
closely. Its only key deviation was that it eliminated the PROBLEM and the CONCLUSIONS components. The following is a more detailed look at each content rea
as it was present in the abstract itself:
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[PURPOSE] This study looked at gender and early career characteristics of
[PARTICIPANTS] valedictorians from [DESIGN] high schools with differing sociocultural dimensions. [ANALYSIS] Archival data from 30 schools
from suburban reas and 30 schools from inner city reas were examined.
[RESULTS] Overall gender differences across high school groups were
not significant. Immediate career plans were also examined, with suburban valedictorians more likely to go to college and inner city valedictorians
more likely to go to vocational school. There were no differences between
employment data. A combined analysis of these data suggested that suburban males were more likely to go to college over inner city males, and that
inner city females were more likely to go to vocational schools than suburban females.
When the abstract is coded, then the reader can see that most of the abstract (80 of
116 words) focused on reporting the results of the study. This is not an uncommon
balance for abstracts to take. Very often, it is the findings themselves that are of
most interest.
The second example is drawn from the Chagall article. This article is more
complex than the Picasso article, and this fact is reflected in the abstract:
Male juvenile offenders are 40% less likely to enter the adult correctional system if they receive proper intervention (Santayana, 2002). This study began
the process of developing an empirically based model of critical factors related
to proper assessment and intervention. Key variables selected to measure for
this study included peer support, missed homework, victim awareness, part
time employment, and positive drug testing, and success in school. Factor
analysis identified two factors among these variables: one factor dealing with
"adopting a responsible role", and a second factor dealing with "social awareness." Implications of these findings for developing a model to support assessment and intervention of male youthful offenders were discussed.
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abstract is 109 words long, which is almost exactly the same length as the first
abstract. Unlike the first abstract, however, this abstract violates the rule of thumb
not including bibliographic references, but it does so for a good reason that will be
addressed below. The coding structure of this abstract, also, is a bit unusual:
PARTICIPANTSRESULTSPURPOSEDESIGN
ANALYSISRESULTSCONCLUSIONS
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This action research study was conducted with eight sets of parent-led groups
of first and second grade children from a diverse sociocultural setting. This
particular setting was in socioeconomic decline, and the three key groups that
comprised the setting all distrusted each other. It was decided by the community that the best long term remedy for this distrust was character education
taught by parents and monitored by the whole community. After a six-month
program of character education for diverse cultural groups based on the work
and curriculum of Shaftoe (2001), children were interacting much more with
each other on an informal basis. Follow up data will be collected to see if these
results persist over time.
This abstract is 116 words long, so it is essentially the same length as the Picasso
abstract. The structure, however, is much different. Its coding pattern is as follows:
DESIGN PARTICIPANTSPROBLEM
PURPOSERESULTSCONCLUSIONS
In this study, it was important to state at the outset that it was an action research
study. Action research studies follow different rules and have different goals than
more standard types of research. It is not surprising, for example, that the ANALYSIS
component was not foregrounded in this abstract, since analysis in action research
is often ongoing and Interactive, and is often confounded with the RESULTS. Again,
there was no actual discussion of CONCLUSIONS per se in the abstract, but the cali
for future research does in fact point in that direction. Again, here is the coding pattern on the abstract itself:
[DESIGN] This action research study was conducted with [PARTICIPANTS]
eight sets of parent-led groups of first and second grade children from a diverse
sociocultural setting. [PROBLEM] This particular setting was in socioeconomic decline, and the three key groups that comprised the setting all distrusted each other. [PURPOSE] It was decided by the community that the best
long term remedy for this distrust was character education taught by parents
and monitored by the whole community. [RESULTS] After a six-month program of character education for diverse cultural groups based on the work and
curriculum of Shaftoe (2001), children were interacting much more with each
other on an informal basis. [CONCLUSIONS] Follow up data will be collected
to see if these results persist over time.
The most interesting aspect of this abstract is the fact that its PURPOSE comes after
its PROBLEM, and not before, as is usually the case. This is not uncommon in action
research, however. Very often, the PARTICIPANTS must work together to see what
their common understanding of the problem is, and it is from that common understanding that the purpose evolves.
The next four examples come from the real articles. The first abstract is from
the Devine-Wright et al. article:
This paper explores children's beliefs about global warming and energy
sources from a psychological perspective, focusing on situational influences
upon subjective beliefs, including perceived self-efficacy. The context of the
research is one of growing concern at the potential impacts of global warming,
yet demonstrably low levis of self-efficacy amongst both adults and children
to effectively respond to this large-scale environmental problem. Empirical
research was conducted on a sample of 198 UK children and adults to explore
the influence of a cooperative learning environment upon children's beliefs
about global warming and energy. A comparative design was adopted, contrasting 9-12 year od members of the Woodcraft Folk educational organisation with non-members of similar age and with adult members of the same
organisation. Results indcate that cooperative learning environments can
have a significant and positive effect upon children's beliefs about large-scale
environmental problems. In particular, Woodcraft Folk children reported significantly higher levis of personal awareness and perceived self-efficacy in
relation to global warming in comparison to their peers. Secondly, unexpected
differences were identified between levis of perceived self-efficacy in children and adult Woodcraft Folk. The implications of these differences for the
design of educational programmes seeking to empower children to respond to
global warming are discussed.
First of all, we see that this is a very long abstract. At 203 words, it is well beyond the
limit recommended by the APA Manual. At the same time, it is very easy to decode.
Its coding pattern is:
PURPOSEPROBLEMPARTICIPANTS
DESIGNRESULTSCONCLUSIONS
Applying the coding pattern to the abstract, we get the following:
[PURPOSE] This paper explores children's beliefs about global warming and
energy sources from a psychological perspective, focusing on situational influences upon subjective beliefs, including perceived self-efficacy. [PROBLEM]
The context of the research is one of growing concern at the potential impacts
of global warming, yet demonstrably low levis of self-efficacy amongst both
adults and children to effectively respond to this large-scale environmental problem. [PARTICIPANTS] Empirical research was conducted on a sample of 198
UK children and adults to explore the influence of a cooperative learning environment upon children's beliefs about global warming and energy. [DESIGN]
A comparative design was adopted, contrasting 9-12 year od members of the
Woodcraft Folk educational organisation with non-members of similar age and
with adult members of the same organisation. [RESULTS] Results indcate that
cooperative learning environments can have a significant and positive effect
upon children's beliefs about large-scale environmental problems. In particular,
Woodcraft folk children reported significantly higher levis of personal awareness and perceived self-efficacy in relation to global warming in comparison to
their peers. Secondly, unexpected differences were identified between levis of
perceived self-efficacy in children and adult Woodcraft folk. [CONCLUSIONS]
The implications of these differences for the design of educational programmes
seeking to empower children to respond to global warming are discussed.
The second real article example is from the Klein study. His abstract is as follows:
On the basis of reports of the limitations of staff meetings in various professions, the contribution of such gatherings to pedagogic activities and faculty
cooperation was investigated. Organizational characteristics that differentiate
between effective and ineffective conferences were also examined. Two hundred and ninety-four teachers from 64 public schools provided information on
meetings in which they had participated and noted the factors that contributed
to their success. The findings verify the limited contribution of general meetings, and point to the advisability of consultations of smaller groups of specialized staff. The results indcate a need to imbue school principis and others
who conduct teachers' meetings with skills in communication and constructive collaboration. The implications of the findings on management of staff
meetings via Internet are discussed.
This abstract is 124 words, which is more in fine with recommended lengths. It can
be broken down as follows:
PROBLEMPURPOSEDESIGNPARTICIPANTS
DESIGNRESULTSCONCLUSIONS
Applying the coding pattern to the abstract, we get the following:
[PROBLEM] On the basis of reports of the limitations of staff meetings in various professions, [PURPOSE] the contribution of such gatherings to pedagogic
activities and faculty cooperation was investigated. [DESIGN] Organizational
characteristics that differentiate between effective and ineffective conferences
were also examined. [PARTICIPANTS] Two hundred and ninety-four teachers
from 64 public schools [DESIGN] provided information on meetings in which
they had participated and noted the factors that contributed to their success.
[RESULTS] The findings verify the limited contribution of general meetings,
and point to the advisability of consultations of smaller groups of specialized
staff. [CONCLUSIONS] The results indcate a need to imbue school principis
and others who conduct teachers' meetings with skills in communication and
constructive collaboration. The implications of the findings on management of
staff meetings via Internet are discussed.
The third example is from one of the real qualitative articlesthe Wyss study.
fter abstract is as follows:
abstract, at 159 words, is another fairly long abstract. The actual form of the
abstract is a bit complex and unusual:
PURPOSE-PARTICIPANTS-PROBLEM-PARTICIPANTSDESIGNANALYSISRESULTSCONCLUSIONS
Applying the coding pattern to the abstract, we get:
[PURPOSE] This article reports on an action research project in which [PARTICIPANTS] an external consultant, special education needs coordinator
and staff of the early years unit of a mainstream school [PROBLEM] worked
together to understand and enhance the communication learning environment
provided for[ PARTICIPANTS] 3-5 year-old pupils. [DESIGN] A transactional
rather than dficit model was adopted, such that bi-directional influences in
communication difficulties and communication learning were fully recognised.
[ANALYSIS] The focus for deliberation and action was the role, style, talk and
interaction behaviour of the adults. Concepts of optimal interactive styles from
studies of caregiver-infant interaction were applied. Activity included a mixture
of observation, discussion and reflection on current and changing practice and
related research. [RESULTS] Developments evolved that were judged to have
enhanced the communication learning environment, including increased use
of small group time and greater use of child-led 'show and tell' and sharing
time. [CONCLUSIONS] The article is written from the perspective of the external consultant and includes discussion of the action research process.
At 122 words, this abstract also conforms to normal length criteria. Also, while its
topic is innovative, the actual structure of the abstract is quite traditional:
PURPOSEPARTICIPANTSDESIGN
ANALYSISRESULTSCONCLUSIONS
Applying the coding pattern to the abstract, we get:
[PURPOSE] This paper explores the experiences of harassment and violence
endured by [PARTICIPANTS] seven gender non-conforming youth in US high
schools. [DESIGN] Based on a larger research project, it opens an inquiry into
the school-based Uves of gender-variant teens, a group heretofore ignored by
most academics and educators. [ANALYSIS] Breaking violence down into two
main types (physical and sexual), this work uses informants'voices, along with
'doing gender' theory, to analyze the experience of butch lesbian girls, trans
teenagers, and genderqueer youth. [RESULTS] The author also examines the
impact of this violence on their self-esteem, academic achievement, substance
abuse and sexual lives. [CONCLUSIONS] This paper points out the similarities and differences between gender identity groups and suggests specific
reas for school-based and cultural reform that would protect such teens.
In summary, abstrais can vary quite a bit. They can be simple or complex,
very short or somewhat longer, linear or recursive. The actual form and shape of a
given abstract depends upon the study, what the researchers wish to communicate
and foreground, and the nature and policies of the journals. In the final analysis,
however, each and every abstract must act as a short guide for an article.
Our final abstract to decode comes from the Nind study. It reads as follows:
This article reports on an action research project in which an external consultant, special education needs coordinator and staff of the early years unit of a
mainstream school worked together to understand and enhance the communication learning environment provided for 3-5 year-old pupils. A transactional
rather than dficit model was adopted, such that bi-directional influences in
communication difficulties and communication learning were fully recognised.
The focus for deliberation and action was the role, style, talk and interaction
behaviour of the adults. Concepts of optimal interactive styles from studies of
caregiver-infant interaction were applied. Activity included a mixture of observation, discussion and reflection on current and changing practice and related
research. Developments evolved that were judged to have enhanced the communication learning environment, including increased use of small group time
and greater use of child-led 'show and tell' and sharing time. The article is written from the perspective of the external consultant and includes discussion of
the action research process.
Conventional wisdom says that we should start the task of learning how to read and
understand research articles by first looking at abstracts. We have gone against
that conventional wisdom here for two reasons. First of all, we did not want to overlook the importance of titles and opening paragraphs. Secondly, abstracts are often
dense and complicated pieces of text. If we start with abstracts, we run the risk of
scaring away readers, or at the least making our readers think the process of readmg articles is harder than it might really be.
Having begun to master the art of reading abstracts, we now understand how
valuable they really are, and why we should take some time in reading them careu%. As we become skilled, we tend to adopt the following procedure for evaluating
a n article:
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We start by reading the title. As we know, the title can tell us quite a bit.
Now we read the abstract. This gives us a short, information dense picture of
the article as a whole. We now have a sense of the general aims and directions
of the article.
Finally, we read the first paragraph or so. Here, we are looking for the researchers to make their case for the importance of the research. If we cannot find a
case after reading a few sentences or paragraphs, then we have reason to be
concerned about the valu and clarity of the article.
After we have looked at these three pieces, we should have a good idea about the
article. Do we want to read it? Could it be important for our own work? If we decide
the article is worth reading, then we need to learn how to address its meatits main
points and findings. As we move through the next five chapters, we will be looking
at each major part of the article as we find it.
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Introductions
First of all, there are four training articles and four real articles whose abstracts
have not been coded. Try your hand at coding these abstracts. Compare your
results with those of your classmates.
Take a look at the three to four articles you had gathered previously. Now that
you have looked at their titles and openings, take some time and code their
abstracts as well. Given that you understand their content reas, does this help
you code their abstracts as well? Share your results with your classmates.
Finally, try your hand at writing an abstract yourself. Try to use all of the coding
categories as you crate your abstract, and try to keep t under 125 words.
You can make up any kind of study you like. When you are done, share your
results with your classmates.
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