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Mackenzie Mastrangelo

Mrs. Thomas
UWRT 1102
April 18, 2016
WID: The grammar issues that I struggled with the most are semicolons. I normally separate my
sentences with any punctuation other than a semicolon because I am not completely sure on how
to use them or where they should be placed in the structure of a sentence. I could practice using
the use of semicolons through YouTube videos or books centered around grammar. I would give
myself a 96 for my thesis because I think I did a great job at balancing between what they say
and what I say. I pulled out the most important things from my process work to make my thesis
cohesive and understandable. I followed the rubric precisely to ensure that nothing would be left
out and everything would be in a smooth flow of articles and arguments.
Reflection: I have learned a lot about my inquiry question and it helps me to see the
different views on my topic. In addition, I have learned that my annotated bibliographies have
improved my ability to write a paper and has helped to stay organized with my connections
between my sources. I believe that I have done a good job with connecting my sources and
keeping a very balanced paper between they say and I say. I have made my opinion clear and I
have assisted my quotes with explanations to show their relevance as well as my thoughts on
each of these sources. I had some difficulties with taking all of the information from my
annotated bibliographies and inquiry proposal and fitting it all into a cohesive paper with the
most important information. My audience for this thesis is for educators, students, and college
admissions offices. I feel like I took many questions and paths for my processes before so it was
very time consuming to think of how to make it all make sense in my thesis. I like this thesis

paper because I could share my opinions on differentiating views but also explain why this issue
of standardized testing matters in the real world.
Is the Test the Best?
At the end of high school, many students decide to go to a college or a university and
these schools require their applicants to take major standardized tests known as the SAT and
ACT. According to Time Magazine, the SAT originated in 1926 and the ACT was originated in
1959. As you can see, these methods of examination have been around for many years and have
been used as indicators for college acceptance. These are made to measure intelligence and
determine a persons previous educational quality as well as predict the level of college readiness
that a person possesses. Most admissions offices have set a minimum standardized test score
that applicants must obtain to be accepted which is supposed to show the level of intelligence of
their student body. Does standardized testing measure a students intelligence and ability to
succeed in college?
We have all walked into that testing classroom thinking this is the exam that determines
my future of getting into college; each question is designed to test your potential of succeeding
in the future. The amount of pressure this places on students, the millions of dollars made by
companies providing it, and the anticipation of the test scores to be released are all a part of this
process. These companies make millions constructing the test, selling curriculum, and designing
specific classes to help students pass. Many people wonder if this test is accurate representation
of a students intelligence and value in connection to success in college. Before my research, my
classmates and I thought of these tests as an unsatisfactory way to evaluate whether we could
withstand college or not. I have taken the SAT and ACT twice and I only scored average on both
of them but I was a mostly straight A student in high school so my GPA and my test scores were

not matching up. In addition, I am currently on the Chancellors List here at UNC Charlotte so I
wanted to research what these tests were actually evaluating and what it was supposed to predict.
Andy Hudlow, a student at Santa Clara University, suggests, The goal of standardized
testing is not to find out how well you think through problems, or if you can express your
opinions, or create a presentation, the goal is to find out what you were able to memorize. He
shows that students should focus on their own intelligence and not what the tests try to create
their intelligence to be. He continues to explain the fact that it is not a measure of true
intelligence by explaining, the first of many flaws with the ACT and SAT is that entire subjects
of the high school curriculum are simply brushed to the wayside. But topics such as advanced
mathematics and English are elevated far above their real world relevance. I agree with this
statement that the SAT and ACT tests are mainly about memorization and the subjects are above
real world relevance. According to College Board, the national average SAT score for 2015 is a
1490. The highest score that can be obtained is a 2400 so based on this difference in the average
score and the highest score, it proves that the subjects tested have been elevated far above real
world relevance.
Outside factors can affect a students ability to perform well, according to Amada Torres,
vice president of studies, insights, and research at the National Association of Independent
Schools. Torres elaborates on the fact that family income, living conditions, and ethnicity, three
factors that are outside a persons control, can negatively affect their college acceptance exam
score. She declares, when it comes to test results based on family income, the national gaps
remain high. In each of the three parts of the SAT, the lowest average scores were by students
from families with less than $30,000 in annual income; the highest averages were those by
students from families with more than $100,000 in annual income. Furthermore, she placed bar

graphs in her periodical to show the SAT scores based on ethnicity showing that Caucasians and
Asians have the highest scores in each subject with the other ethnicities trailing behind them. In
addition, on the bar graphs, she shows that independent schools have a higher average SAT score
than average national SAT scores. Independent private schools are offered to those who pay more
money to attend the school so this is dependent on their parents income. Moreover, public
schools are determined by where you live so anyone could end up with a public school that is not
accredited with an astounding education to prepare them for these college entrance exams.
Dylan Wiliam, a consultant that works around the globe specializing in research practices
for student learning and equipping educators, provides input in response to Amada Torress
statements. This peer reviewed journal, Standardized Testing and School Accountability,
highlights the role of educators, their high accountability, and their importance in standardized
testing. Wiliam continues on to suggest that providing accountability tests to assess school
achievement would result in high test scores to indicate their higher quality schooling. In
conclusion, he claims, tests should be designed, and their results reported, in such a way that
each students mastery of each curricular aim can be assessed with reasonable accuracy. I agree
with his explanation that teachers have a high accountability and that the education system
should raise the stakes for them and be able to assess them more accurately. However, I do not
agree with teaching straight to the test because students need to develop a love for learning
instead of strictly memorization to pass the tests in school. In response to my opinion, Wiliam
claims, Ultimately, if we are to have high-stakes tests, the search must be for tests worth
teaching to (Resnick): accountability tests that are so closely aligned with desired outcomes that
the only way to improve scores is to improve the desired outcomes. I agree with the fact that
these tests should be worth teaching to and the skills teachers would be teaching us would be

helpful to students in the real world and show different ways to analyze questions that could be
presented on the SAT and ACT. I believe that these exams are more about the ability to analyze a
question rather than the actual material that we learn in high school so it would be more to the
idea of intelligence overall rather than just a knowledge of facts that educators currently teach us.
Many colleges and universities state on their admissions websites that an applicant
should send in their standardized scores and if you do not uphold a certain score, some will
advise you not to even begin to apply. For example, on UNC Charlottes admissions website,
they state if your grades and test scores do not meet this elevated criteria, we encourage you to
consider future transfer options. As you can see, many outside factors can affect a persons
ability to perform well on the SAT and ACT so, in conclusion, I think that instead of college
admissions offices dwelling on SAT scores, high school grades and extracurricular activities
should have a higher significance. To support this conclusion, Joseph Soares, a professor of
sociology at Wake Forest University, declares, standardized test scores are based on a single
sitting of 3 to 4 hours, whereas high school GPA is based on repeated sampling of student
performance over a period of years. It shows that high schools scores are a continuous
explanation of a students ability to perform well. In addition, these grades can show a wide array
of classes that were taken and how well a student can do in many areas including electives as
well as major core classes. He suggests that the test should send the message that working hard
and mastering academic subjects in high school is the most direct route to college. These will
shift the paradigm from prediction to achievement because SAT scores predict a persons
ability to succeed in college but high school scores show the achievement and what they have
actually learned throughout high school.

Kathryn Juric, the vice president of College Boards SAT program, provided her
perspective on the SAT in an article on CNN. Juric responds to Soaress argument that high
school grades should matter more by claiming, the SAT gives students the opportunity to
demonstrate their college-preparedness despite inconsistent grading systems throughout the
nations high schools. I agree that there is some inconsistency throughout high schools in our
country but the AP Exams, dual enrollment, and rigorous coursework can demonstrate what a
person is capable of and the amount of determination they possess to complete those courses.
Juric continues to say, the SAT tests students ability to apply what they have learned in high
school and to problem-solve based on that knowledge skills that are critical to success in
college and the workforce. This can be true because it does show our ability to analyze a
question but what Juric does not focus on is that some of these questions are based on
mathematics, vocabulary, and science that students had to have learned from teachers in school
which causes them to become dependent on their teachers. Once again, this factor is out of our
control, but high school grades can portray our work ethic to obtain the grades that we got as
well as the level of classes that we took. Also, there are endless ways to solve a problem in the
real world but the SAT limits the way we can solve the problem to four or five answer choices.
Lastly, Juric claims that, Unlike other standardized tests intended to measure a students
college-readiness, the SAT requires a writing portion of the exam, an essential skill in todays ecommunications era. Writing is a valuable skill, especially in todays e-communications era,
and writing allows the college to see creativity and their ability to formulate a paper within a
short amount of time. The issue with Jurics statement is that colleges, in recent years, have not
asked for the writing portion score or they disregard the score if it is submitted because it is not
based on a standard and allows for bias from the grader at College Board.

Standardized testing does not even begin to test creativity or other characteristics and
talents that a person can possess to succeed in college. For example, a letter of recommendation
from a superior can show how the student acts in classes and their determination or willingness
to learn the material. Extracurricular activities and clubs can show a students leadership skills
around their peers and within the community. Sports and other outside activities can show an
individuals motivation to exert themselves to the fullest potential. Their volunteering
experiences can display their personality, character, and what they have a passion to serve for. In
response to my argument, Charles Lane, an editorial writer for the Washington Post, proposes the
question, Would we rather stake our childrens future on their test-taking abilities, or on their
ability to impress high school graders and letter-of-recommendation-writers? He is not in full
favor the SAT, but he suggests some reasons on why it does have some value and should still be
utilized. One reason that he presents is, the more weight a given admissions office assigns to
leadership ability, character, essay quality and other intangibles, the more discretion that
admissions office has; and the exercise of that discretion will produce anomalies and unfairness
of its own. He uses this to show that not all alternative methods are worth it and more useful
than the current ones. He explains that the SAT is a straight determinant of factors and it is not
able to be biased by college admissions but Lane does not show that the test itself can be biased
and outside factors can affect their score. He claims that it is more beneficial for us to change our
current systems and not dismiss these methods completely. I agree that the leadership and quality
characteristics can be biased but as you can see, the test is extremely biased also. I agree with
Charles Lane that we definitely to change the current systems and not completely eliminate them
but I believe leadership traits and achievements are hard to be biased about. Some achievements

can hold more value to college admissions offices but at least there are not as many outside
factors influencing this.
As you can see, there are many different views on standardized testing and the role it
should play when it comes to college admissions. At the end of the day, I agree with Charles
Lane that there should be things changed about the SAT and ACT, not for the whole concept to
be completely eliminated. In my case, my SAT and ACT score wrongfully predicted my ability to
succeed in college and I know several of my classmates have encountered this phenomenon. I
feel as though there are too many outside factors that can hinder a persons performance while
achievements are factual. Janet McClaskey claims, The problem lies not in the tests themselves,
but rather in how we approach them and, more inherently, in what we believe about them. I do
agree with McClaskeys statement that it is a lot about how we approach them and how others
perceive the score. For example, the college admissions office has the most important decision
when looking at applicants test scores. Although McClaskey does not focus on the fact that
outside factors have a huge role in the score, I do agree that the test can be a satisfactory way to
understand something about a person but it is all about the value and perception a person adds to
the score.
There are many different views on standardized testing and the role it should play when it
comes to college admissions. Moving forward, I hope to further my research in this area and
understand more of the specifics of standardized test questions. Also, I would like to understand
more of the bias that can be generated through the exams. Lastly, I would like to dig deeper and
figure out the path that college admissions offices take when determining a students worth to
their school. I would like to learn more about the process that they go through and talk first hand

with an admissions officer to see what they think about these exams as well as why some offices
do not hold as much value to prior achievements and high school grades.

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