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I. IDENTIFICATION
II. ABSTRACT
The information, examples, and practice included in this work aim to spotlight and to
explain in a brief, practical way general and useful material to improve writing. Whenever you
write, you should consider how important punctuation marks are, since they give meaning to
our writings. Besides, using the correct linking words help you organise the information, as
well as present and develop the essential ideas that will form the substance of your writing.
There is also a section devoted to run-on sentences and fragment sentences that tend to be
some of the most recurring mistakes in writing. It is hoped that these contributions will go
some way to clarify doubts and improve and identify our most common mistakes.
KEY WORDS: punctuation - writing linking words run-on sentences sentence fragments
III. INTRODUCTION
Punctuation is one of the most significant characteristics of a language, and yet, it is one
that is taken the most lightly. It is, in fact, the feature of writing that gives meaning to the
written words much like pauses and changes in tones of the voice when speaking. An error
in punctuation can convey an entirely different connotation to the one that is intended. It is
used to create sense, clarity and stress in sentences. We use punctuation marks to structure
and organise our writing. It is very important to know all the punctuation marks, their
meanings, and when to use them in order to produce a good piece of writing, especially, to
convey the correct message.
Alongside punctuation marks, linking words and other connecting devices, are the ones that
help you carry over from one sentence to another, from one paragraph to another, in a way
that allows the reader to understand the writers ideas better. Since the reader is not able to
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see the message in the same way the writer does, linking words also help you to articulate
those ideas and communicate them to other people.
IV. OBJECTIVES
a. To understand the importance of punctuation in writing;
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Comma _____________________________________________________ 07
1.3.
Semicolon __________________________________________________ 10
1.4.
Colon ______________________________________________________ 11
1.5.
Apostrophe _________________________________________________ 12
1.6.
Hyphen _____________________________________________________ 14
1.7.
Dash ______________________________________________________ 16
1.8.
Brackets ___________________________________________________ 16
1.9.
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PUNCTUATION
MARKS
Punctuation needs more attention in English teaching than it sometimes receives. It is a
systematic aspect of the written language and essential to meaning, for it performs two main
functions. One is the grammatical function of making clear the
relationship between parts of sentences and of paragraphs. The other is
the rhetorical function of indication tone, attitude, feeling and emphasis.
In speech, both these functions are carried out by such means as pause,
pitch, pace, intonation, and volume, often accompanied by facial
expressions and gestures. In written language, accurate punctuation is the
necessary substitute for these resources.
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to mark the end of a group of words that dont form a conventional sentence,
so as to emphasize a statement:
o I keep reliving that moment. Over and over again.
COMMA (,)
A comma marks a slight break between different parts of a sentence. Used properly,
commas make the meaning of sentences clear by grouping and separating words,
phrases, and clauses. Many people are uncertain about the use of commas, though,
and often sprinkle them throughout their writing without knowing the basic rules.
Commas are used
to separate the different items in a list:
o Saturday morning started with a hearty breakfast of scrambled eggs, bacon, sausage,
and French toast.
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o The school has a vegetable garden in which the children grow cabbages, onions,
potatoes, and carrots.
The final comma in these lists (before the word and) is known as the serial
comma. Not all writers or publishers use it, but it is used by Oxford
Dictionaries some people refer to it as the Oxford comma. Using it is a
matter of style, but in some cases, it can make your meaning clearer. Take a
look at this sentence:
o My favourite sandwiches are chicken, bacon and ham and cheese.
-
NOTE: It isnt entirely clear from this sentence whether the writer is listing three or four of their favourite
sandwich fillings: is ham one of their favourites and cheese another, or is it ham and cheese that they
like? Adding an Oxford comma makes the meaning clear:
when a writer quotes a speakers words exactly as they were spoken, this is known
as direct speech. If the piece of direct speech comes after the information about who is
speaking, you need to use a comma to introduce the direct speech. The comma comes before
the first quotation mark. Note that the final quotation mark follows the full stop at the end of the
direct speech:
o Steve replied, No problem.
at the end of a piece of direct speech, if the speech comes before the information
about who is speaking. In this case, the comma goes inside the quotation mark:
o I dont agree, I replied.
o Here we are,' they said.
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The following examples show the use of commas in two complex sentences:
o Having had lunch,
[subordinate clause]
If the commas were removed, these sentences wouldnt be as clear but the
meaning would still be the same. There are different types of subordinate
clause, though, and in some types the use of commas can be very important.
A subordinate clause beginning with who, which, that, whom, or where is
known as a relative clause. Take a look at this example:
Passengers
who have young children
may board the aircraft first.
[relative clause]
This sentence contains whats known as a restrictive relative clause. Basically, a restrictive
relative clause contains information thats essential to the meaning of the sentence as a whole. If
you left it out, the sentence wouldnt make much sense. If we removed the relative clause from the
example above, then the whole point of that sentence would be lost and wed be left with the rather
puzzling statement:
o Passengers may board the aircraft first. (You should not put commas round a restrictive
relative clause.)
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The other type of subordinate clause beginning with who, which, whom, etc. is known as a
non-restrictive relative clause. A non-restrictive relative clause contains information that is not
essential to the overall meaning of a sentence. Take a look at the following example:
Mary,
who has two young children, has a part-time job in the library.
[relative clause]
If you remove this clause, the meaning of the sentence isnt affected and it still makes perfect
sense. All thats happened is that weve lost a bit of extra information about Mary:
-
You should use a comma after 'however' when however means 'by contrast' or
'on the other hand':
o However, a good deal of discretion is left in the hands of area managers.
Don't use a comma after however when it means 'in whatever way':
o However you look at it, existing investors are likely to lose out.
SEMICOLON (;)
The main task of the semicolon is to mark a break that is stronger than a
comma but not as final as a full stop.
A semicolon is used
between two main clauses that balance each other and are
too closely linked to be made into separate sentences, as in
these two examples:
o The road runs through a beautiful wooded valley; the railway line follows it.
o An art director searched North Africa; I went to the Canary Islands.
surfing activities, with 65% blocking access to unauthorized Internet locations; over
one-third of the firms monitor employee computer keystrokes; half reported storing and
reviewing employee emails; 57% monitor employee telephone behaviour, including the
inappropriate use of voicemail.
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to join two independent clauses when they are closely related and the relationship is
clear.
o The robin laid three eggs; the eggs are a vibrant shade of blue.
to separate items in a series where each item contains a comma within itself.
o We took our friends to St. John, New Brunswick; Halifax, Nova Scotia; and
Sherbooke, Quebec, when they came for a visit last year. (there are both city and province
in each list item, the semi-colons make the list item more clear.)
COLON (:)
The colon is a unit of punctuation typically used to introduce a subsequent sentence
that is in some way logically linked to the preceding sentence. Therefore, one may find
colons serving as punctuation to introduce a list, to offset something that is a
consequence of the fact stated in the preceding sentence, or to lead into a quotation.
There are two main uses of the colon
to introduce a list:
o The price includes the following: travel to London, flight to Venice, hotel
accommodation, and excursions.
o The job calls for skills in the following areas: proofing, editing, and database
administration.
APOSTROPHE ()
Are you uncertain about when to use an apostrophe? Many people have difficulty with
this punctuation mark. The best way to get apostrophes right is to understand when
and why they are used.
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An apostrophe is used
Singular nouns and most personal names. With a singular noun or most personal
names: add an apostrophe plus s:
with personal names that end in -s: add an apostrophe plus s when you would
naturally pronounce an extra s if you said the word out loud:
o
with a plural noun that already ends in -s: add an apostrophe after the s:
o The mansion was converted into a girls school.
o The work is due to start in two weeks time.
o My duties included cleaning out the horses stables.
words called possessive pronouns - these are the words his, hers, ours, yours, theirs (meaning
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belonging to him, her, us, you, or them) - and with the possessive determiners. These are the
words his, hers, its, our, your, their (meaning 'belonging to or associated with him, her, it, us, you,
or them').
to show that letters or numbers have been omitted. Here are some examples of
apostrophes that indicate missing letters:
o Im - short for I am
o hell - short for he will
o shed short for she had or she would
o pick n mix - short for pick and mix
o its hot - short for it is hot
o didnt - short for did not
The Berlin Wall came down in the autumn of 89 (short for 1989).
The general rule is that you should not use an apostrophe to form the plurals
of nouns, abbreviations, or dates made up of numbers: just add -s (or -es, if
the noun in question forms its plural with -es). For example:
euro
euros
pizza pizzas
apple apples
MP
MPs
1990 1990s
These are the only cases in which it is generally considered acceptable to use an
apostrophe to form plurals: remember that an apostrophe should never be used to
form the plural of ordinary nouns, names, abbreviations, or numerical dates.
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HYPHEN (-)
Hyphens are used to link words and parts of words.
We use hyphens
in compound words to show that the component words have a combined meaning
(e.g. a pick-me-up, mother-in-law, good-hearted) or that there is a relationship between the
words that make up the compound.
o Rock-forming minerals are minerals that form rocks. (But you dont need to use them
in every type of compound word.)
noun + participle
adjective + participle
accident-prone
computer-aided
good-looking
sugar-free
power-driven
quick-thinking
carbon-neutral
user-generated
bad-tempered
sport-mad
custom-built
fair-haired
camera-ready
muddle-headed
open-mouthed
when a compound formed from two nouns is made into a verb, for example:
noun
verb
an ice skate
to ice-skate
a booby trap
to booby-trap
a spot check
to spot-check
a court martial
to court-martial
You should NOT USE a hyphen within phrasal verbs. For example:
Phrasal verb
Example
build up
break in
stop off
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If a phrasal verb is made into a noun, though, you SHOULD use a hyphen:
Noun
Example
build-up
break-in
stop-off
Compound nouns
A compound noun is one consisting of two component nouns. In principle, such nouns
can be written in one of three different ways:
one word
two words
hyphenated
aircrew
air crew
air-crew
playgroup
play group
play-group
chatroom
chat room
chat-room
In the past, these sorts of compounds were usually hyphenated, but the situation is
different today. The tendency is now to write them as either one word or two separate
words. However, the most important thing to note is that you should choose one style
and stick to it within a piece of writing. Dont refer to a playgroup in one paragraph
and a play-group in another.
to join a prefix to another word, especially if the prefix ends in a vowel and the other word
also begins with one (e.g. pre-eminent or co-own).
to avoid confusion with another word: for example, to distinguish re-cover (= provide
something with a new cover) from
word in a sensible place, so that the first part does not mislead the reader: for example, helmetnot he-lmet; dis-abled not disa-bled.
to stand for a common second element in all but the last word of a list, e.g.:
o You may see a yield that is two-, three-, or fourfold.
DASH ()
A dash is used
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to mark off information or ideas that are not essential to an understanding of the rest
of the sentence:
o Thousands of children like the girl in this photograph have been left homeless.
o My son where has he gone? would like to meet you.
BRACKETS ( ) [ ]
There are two main types of brackets.
ROUND BRACKETS (also called parentheses) are mainly used to separate off
information that isnt essential to the meaning of the rest of the sentence. If
you removed the bracketed material the sentence would still make perfectly good
sense. For example:
o
o
o
Hed clearly had too much to drink (not that I blamed him).
SQUARE BRACKETS are mainly used to enclose words added by
someone other than the original writer or speaker, typically in
order to clarify the situation:
o He [the police officer] cant prove they did it.
If round or square brackets are used at the end of a sentence, the full stop should be
placed outside the closing bracket:
o They eventually decided to settle in the United States (Debbie's home).
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ELLIPSIS POINTS:
An ellipsis is a set of three periods () indicating an omission. Each period
should have a single space or either side, except when adjacent to a quotation
mark, in which case there should be no space.
Use ellipsis points
in the middle of a quotation to indicate the omission of material, use three points with
spaces before and after the ellipsis.
o The First Amendment provides that "Congress shall make no law respecting . . . the
right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the Government for a
redress of grievances." U.S. Const. amend. I.
at the end of a quotation to indicate the omission of material, use four points -- a
three-point ellipsis and a period. The ellipsis should follow a blank space.
o The First Amendment provides that "Congress shall make no law . . . abridging the
freedom of speech . . . ." U.S. Const. amend. I.
When combining a fully quoted sentence with a partially quoted sentence, or with a
second, but nonconsecutive quoted sentence, place a period at the end of the fully
quoted sentence, followed by a space, an ellipsis, another space, and the remainder of
the quoted material. Do not place a space before a period at the end of a fully quoted
sentence.
o In a unanimous decision, Justice Holmes wrote, "The question in every case is
whether the words used are used in such circumstances and are of such a nature as
to create a clear and present danger that they will bring about the substantive evils
that Congress has a right to prevent. . . . When a nation is at war many things that
might be said in time of peace are such a hindrance to its effort that their utterance
will not be endured so long as men fight and that no Court could regard them as
protected by any constitutional right." Schenck v. United States, 249 U.S. 47, 52
(1919).
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INVERTED COMMAS
Inverted commas can be single - x - or double - x. They are also known
as quotation marks, speech marks, or quotes.
Inverted commas are mainly used in the following cases
to mark the beginning and end of direct speech (i.e. a speakers words written down
exactly as they were spoken):
o That, he said, is nonsense.
o What time will he arrive? she asked.
to mark off a word or phrase thats being discussed, or thats being directly quoted
from somewhere else:
o He called this phenomenon the memory of water.
o What does integrated circuit mean?
Single or double?
Theres no rule about which to use but you should stick to one or the other
throughout a piece of writing. Single inverted commas are generally more
common in British English while American English tends to prefer double
ones.
If you find that you need to enclose quoted material within direct speech or
another quotation, use the style you havent used already. So, if youve been
using single inverted commas, put any further quoted material within double ones and vice
versa. For example:
She still sounds amazed when she says: We were turned down because we
represented too small a minority of the population. They could still get away
with saying things like that then.
an exclamation:
o
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An exclamation mark can also be used in brackets after a statement to show that the
writer finds it funny or ironic:
o
She says shes stopped feeling insecure (!) since she met him.
People tend to use a lot of exclamation marks in informal writing such as emails or text
messages, but you should avoid using them in formal writing.
NOTE that you dont use a question mark at the end of a question
in reported speech:
o
Im about to get started on the new project, which is apparently quite straightforward (?).
BULLET POINTS
Bullet points are used to draw attention to important
information within a document so that a reader can identify the
key issues and facts quickly. There are no fixed rules about how
to use them, but here are some guidelines:
The text introducing the list of bullet points should end with a colon.
If the text that follows the bullet point is not a proper sentence, it doesnt need to begin
with a capital letter and it shouldnt end with a full stop, for example:
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If the text following the bullet point IS a complete sentence, it should begin with a capital
letter. A full stop at the end is technically required but is not absolutely essential:
The agenda for tonight is as follows:
o
o
Lists of bullet points will have more impact if each one begins with the same word
class (or part of speech) and if they are all of a similar length. Action verbs are a good
choice for the first word, i.e. verbs that describe the performing of an action. If you do
use verbs, make sure that each one is in the same tense. Heres an example of the
effective use of action verbs in a persons CV/rsum:
Duties and responsibilities included:
o
o
o
Bullet points tend to have more impact if their text is relatively short. Make sure you use
the same typeface and margin width within each section.
Bullet points are visually attractive and make it easy for a reader to locate important
information. Nevertheless, try to use them sparingly: too many bullet-pointed sections in the
same document will mean that their impact is lost.
CAPITALIZATION
As we already know, sentence boundaries are indicated
by capital letters at the beginnings of sentences and end
stops at the ends. How many other circumstances can you
recall when capital letters should be used?
I'd
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people (Diana, Stewart, Bernadette), places (London), months (April), and so on. Common
nouns are more general (person, city, month). The following list may be helpful.
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It is correct to use capital letters for personal pronouns and possessive adjectives
referring to God but in recent years it has become less usual.
o Let us praise God. Let us praise Him.
o Let us praise His ways.
o Let us praise God. Let us praise him.
o Let us praise his ways,
Either form is correct. It is important to be consistent, however, to avoid making the reader uneasy.
Use a capital letter at the beginning of the first word of a title, the last word, and all the
most important words in between.
o We all enjoyed reading A Day in the Life of a Mouse.
o Have you seen A Room with a View?
o I read it in The Independent.
Titles include: books, plays and movies, pamphlets, musical works, television or radio programmes,
podcasts, poems, journals, magazines, published speeches, works of art, websites, and manes of specific
airplanes, trains, ships, and satellites.
Capital letters are usually used at the beginning of each line of poetry. An example should
make this clear:
O that 'twere possible,
After long grief and pain,
To find the arms of my true-love
Round me once again!
Alfred Lord Tennyson, 'Maud'
Some poets (E.E. Cummings, for example) deliberately take liberties with capital letters and they should be
quoted accordingly.
Direct speech (a quotation of the actual words of a speaker) always begins with a capital
letter wherever it occurs in a sentence.
o She said, 'We will come if we possibly can.'
o 'We will come if we possibly can,' she said.
o 'We will come,' she said, 'if we possibly can.'
Structurally the sentence within the inverted commas is quite self-contained. It may help to remember
that it is a sentence within a sentence and needs its own capital letter.
Note: There is a section on the punctuation of direct speech later in the book. There are other pitfalls!
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Yours sincerely
Yours faithfully
Your loving nephew
newspaper
advertisements,
magazines,
lay-outs,
reports,
contents
leaflets,
pages,
etc.
is
possible.
The
visual
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You will see that sometimes the initial letter of key words are used, sometimes the first and last
letters, sometimes the first part of a word, and so on. It is important to use the accepted
abbreviated form. Some dictionaries list abbreviations and contractions in an appendix.
may
already
have
noticed
general
in
your
reading
as well as in your
reading
of
the
full
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However, modern typing is to omit full stops with all abbreviations and this is having its effect,
although more slowly, on hand-written practice also. It may be wise to continue to use full stops
with abbreviations in handwritten work for a little longer if you are preparing for external
examinations. Some examining boards are more traditional in their practice than others.
On the other hand, it is interesting to note that two very modern additions to our vocabulary are
never used with full stops in their abbreviated form: CFCs and pic.
Have a close look at a few different newspapers and periodicals to see where they print BBC or
B.B.C., Mrs. Thatcher or Mrs. Thatcher, 17 Oct or 17th Oct., am or a.m. This will indicate the
general trend.
Words and phrases can be shortened in a less drastic way than in the abbreviations we have
just been examining. If just a few letters are omitted, an apostrophe is used to show where this has
happened.
In some contractions, two words are combined into a new form and an apostrophe indicates the
missing letters.
Be very careful with the placing of the
apostrophe. Its function is to indicate the
omitted letter or letters, not to show where the
two words have been joined. In some words
the apostrophe appears to perform this
second function but do not be misled or you may
begin to use the apostrophe in the wrong place with
contractions incorporating 'not'.
didnt
didnt
wouldnt
wouldnt
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PUNCTUATION MARKS
PRACTICE
Quotations Marks
B. Use quotation marks where necessary. Then, try to infer the rules.
1. We are off to London tomorrow, she said. Cross your fingers it doesnt rain. We dont want to
have to take umbrellas.
2. Star Trek was a great commercial success.
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Capital Letters
C. Use capital letters where necessary. Then, try to infer the rules.
1. dr. jackson is coming in a second.
2. jenny and i went to the beach together.
3. mr. roberts said that the practice had been discontinued.
4. my favourite day of the week is thursday and my favourite subject is geography.
5. roses are red
violets are blue
sugar is sweet
and so are you
6. i saw the advertisement in the times
7. She said, we will come of we possibly can.
8. On wednesday, march 9th, the twins were born.
9. I speak english, french and italian
10. I visited london and paris
11. God the father, god the son, and god the holy spirit are the three persons of the holy trinity.
12. We shall be reading a village by the sea.
D. Punctuate the following text.
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Linking
words
WHAT ARE LINKERS?
Linkers are words that relate one idea or sentence
of the text with another. They connect the ideas
logically.
relation
that
needs
to
be
made
distinctly
clear.
For
example,
linkers
like because, so and therefore express logical relations which are different from those expressed
by although, but and nevertheless.
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TYPE OF LINKER OR
CONNECTOR
EXAMPLES
CAUSE / reason
BROAD MEANING
EFFECT/CONSEQUENCE
Introduces a consequence.
Consequently, As a consequence,
As a result, Therefore
Similarly, likewise, in the same
way
CONDITION
Introduces a condition
CONCESSION /
CONTRAST
Especially, particularly
COMPARISON
TIME
EMPHASIS
RESTATEMENT
ADDITION
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TYPE OF LINKER OR
CONNECTOR
EXAMPLES
BROAD MEANING
EXAMPLE
PURPOSE / INTENTION
infinitive of purpose)
Introduces an intention.
SEQUENCE
SUMMARY
Expresses a personal/professional
opinion or judgement.
OPINION
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LINKING WORDS
PRACTICE
A. Complete the sentences with the correct linkers.
1. We went out _________________ the weather was bad.
2. She was found guilty of fraud. ______________ of this, she resigned from the government.
She spoke Japanese as __________________ as Korean.
3. She's an expert on butterflies. What's ___________________, she knows a lot about ants.
4. ____________ the contrary, he considers bullfighting a barbaric remnant of the Roman circus.
5. _________________ it's not the best option, it is definitely the cheapest.
6. ____________________ first, everyone was confused by all the changes.
7. Not __________________ are drinks cheaper in Granada than in Valencia but also the bar
snacks are free.
8. You can camp here ________________ you have permission from the local council.
9. She left the party early, _____________________ she was enjoying herself immensely.
10. The railway splits the town in two, __________________ only physically but also socially.
11. She arrived early ____________________ that she had time for a chamomile tea.
12. As ______________ she was concerned, the special offer was a con.
13. Genetically modified crops are extremely dangerous ______________ they threaten the
biodiversity of the planet.
14. _______________________, Id like to say that I agree, secondly, explain why.
15. Camels live in the desert, _____________________ dolphins live in the sea.
16. In the end, we didnt go to the cinema. We went to the theatre _______________________.
17. I dont like strawberry ice cream. __________________, I love chocolate flavor.
18. It started raining. _______________ we decided not to go.
19. Firstly, we have to think about our budget and _____________ about how much time we have.
20. I love those soft French cheeses, __________________ Camembert.
21.
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B. Rewrite the sentences. Make the necessary changes so as to use the linkers between
parentheses.
1. Isabel apologized several times. Paul wouldnt speak to her. (but)
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2. We decided to walk even though it was raining. (in spite of)
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3. Roger works very hard to help his parents. Hes also a good student. (in addition)
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4. I love ice-cream. In addition, I love chocolate. (as well as)
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5. Id love to come. I really havent got the time. (however)
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6. Rome is a great place to visit, but it has got terrible traffic problems. (despite)
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7. Miguel was very busy yesterday. He helped me. (even though)
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8. Sarah exercises vigorously. She cant lose weight. (however)
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9. Visitors are not allowed to park here. It is a private parking area. (since)
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10. Joanne booked a babysitter because she wanted to go out for the evening. (in order to)
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11. Brenda does a lot of exercise. She is fit. (therefore)
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12. Mark heard the news on the radio. He was driving home. (while)
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13. Despite its popularity, the group hasnt reached any gold record yet. (in spite of)
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14. John bought a couple of exercise-books. He wanted to catch up with the rest of the class. (so as
to)
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15. My brother doesnt earn a good wage. My sister-in-law doesnt earn a good wage. (neither
nor) ________________________________________________________________________
16. The accident was very serious but nobody was badly injured. (even though)
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RUN-ON
SENTENCES (OR
COMMA SPLICE)
A run-on sentence occurs when two separate sentences are joined
without any form of punctuation, or any sort of word connecting them.
It is without question the simplest of all sentence errors in that its cause
is not the result of any particular misunderstanding or misconception. Below
are several examples of run-on sentences.
Examples of Run-on Sentences:
1. The computer is a useful tool it can be used for writing papers.
2. Once upon a time there was a man his name was Josh.
3. Bees dont eat flowers they gather nectar from them then they go back to
the hive.
Explanation of the Problem:
Run-on sentences usually occur because students
either write very quickly, or are not paying particular
attention to their work. Such a reason should come as
good news to most students because it means that
fixing the problem is often as simple as re-reading
ones work and then putting in an appropriate
punctuation mark.
How to Fix It:
Fixing a run-on sentence is a matter of
1) detecting the sentence in the first place, and
2) adding in a punctuation mark.
To detect the presence of a run-on sentence, a student should re-read his or her work. Reading
aloud tends to be more effective than reading to oneself because voice intonation reveals where
individual sentences start and stop. A sentence which should end in a period is typically
accompanied by a drop in the voice. A sentence which should end with a question mark will be
characterized by a rise in ones voice. Likewise, a sentence that should end with an exclamation
point will usually end with the voice taking on a more forceful tone, or a punch.
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RUN-ON SENTENCES
PRACTICE
EXERCISES: Part One
A. Eliminate the following run-on sentences by inserting an
appropriate punctuation mark (a period, question mark, or
exclamation point).
1. The man took out the garbage he was cleaning the house.
2. The woman ate a pear she smiled because it was delicious.
3. After the parade we went for a walk we needed to stretch our legs.
4. What should I do I think I am lost.
5. Ive had enough I cant take it anymore!
6. Watch my favorite movie you bet Id like to see it again.
7. There were gardens everywhere there were some in the back there were even some around
the side of the house.
8. Can you go Id really like to see you there if you cant Ill understand, of course.
9. Notecards are good for recipes scrap pads are good for keeping lists.
10. We won the lottery thats wonderful!
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15. There is a place, not far from here, at the edge of a meadow if you go there youll find a
mound of earth, with wildflowers growing upon it when the heat of the day is too much to bear, I
go there theres always a breeze, and the ground is soft sometimes I see hawks circling high
above the meadow sometimes I see a fox scampering through the grass how did I find such a
place I stumbled upon it, I suppose yesterday only the bees and bugs and silent trees knew it
was there, but now you know as well.
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SENTENCE
FRAGMENTS
What is a sentence fragment?
It may locate something in time and place with a prepositional phrase or a series of such
phrases, but it's still lacking a proper subject-verb relationship within an independent
clause:
o In Japan, during the last war and just before the armistice.
This sentence accomplishes a great deal in terms of placing the reader in time and place, but there is no
subject, no verb.
It may have most of the makings of a sentence but still be missing an important part of a
verb string:
o Some of the students working in Professor Espinoza's laboratory last semester.
Remember that an -ing verb form without an auxiliary form to accompany it can never be a verb.
It may even have a subject-verb relationship, but it has been subordinated to another
idea by a dependent word and so cannot stand by itself:
o Even though he had the better arguments and was by far the more powerful speaker.
This sentence fragment has a subject, he, and two verbs, had and was, but it cannot stand by itself because
of the dependent word (subordinating conjunction) even though. We need an independent clause to follow
up this dependent clause: . . . the more powerful speaker, he lost the case because he didn't understand
the jury.
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SENTENCE FRAGMENTS
PRACTICE
A. Read the passages below and identify the part that is a fragment and correct it.
1. Joshua found the pressure from the gas in his stomach unbearable. Although he didnt want
to be rude in the middle of geology class. An explosive belch erupted from his mouth.
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2. Phillip left work early. To memorize the vocabulary that his Spanish midterm would test the
next day. But all that he could think about was Beatrice, the cure new sales associate who
worked in the camera department.
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3. Chewing the dry, tough, whole-grain bread bought from the health food store. Lorena.
Fantasizing about a juicy cheeseburger on a soft white bun didn't improve the taste of the
soy product sandwiched between leaves of organic lettuce.
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4. My cat Fuzz loves to sleep in inconvenient places. Lately she prefers the computer table
where her long hair sticks to the mouse pad, covers the keyboard, and clings to the screen of
the monitor.
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5. Rocking and thrashing like a wild horse that cowboys had lassoed. At the other end of the
Laundromat, Bobby quietly read an old magazine, pretending that it was not his machine.
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B. Read the passages below. Identify the fragments and correct them.
1._____________________________________________________________________________
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2._____________________________________________________________________________
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3._____________________________________________________________________________
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4._____________________________________________________________________________
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EXTRA MATERIAL
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1. BURT, Angela. (1993) A Guide to Better Punctuation. Stanley Thornes (Publishers) Ltd.
2. STRAUS, Jane. (2007) The Blue Book of Grammar and Punctuation. Jossey Bass. A
Wiley Imprint. 10th edition.
3. SIMMONS, Robin L. (1997-2014). Last visit: January 14th, 2015. Grammar Bytes
Available in http://chompchomp.com/exercises.htm.
4. UNKNOWN. (2002). Run-on Sentences: A Skill Sheet. Available on web:
http://www.writeguide.com/wp-content/uploads/Run-onSentences.pdf. Last visit:
December 2nd, 2015.
5. Oxford University Press (2015) Last visit: January 16th, 2015. Punctuation
Marks Available in http://www.oxforddictionaries.com.
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