Writing Part 2

Youve been appointed as a student representative at your school or

college. The head has asked you to write a report on what facilities and
forms of entertainment the students would like to see introduced based on
a project you organized yourself to find out the opinions of students. In your
report explain how you gathered the opinions and make recommendations
as to what should be introduced and what benefits would result
College entertainment survey report
Purpose
This report aims at examining the results of a survey carried out to
determine which facilities and forms of entertainment the students of our
college would like to have on campus. As requested, this report also displays
some recommendations on what sources of entertainment could be
introduced or, in any case, upgraded.
The data included in this report was obtained from a random sample of 60
students, ranging from first-year to advanced undergraduates, who
responded to a survey questionnaire conducted on 16 th and 17th September.
Survey results
Of the 60 respondents interviewed, around 40 per cent commented
favourably on the range of amenities already provided. Of these, 20 per cent
did not suggest any improvements, although the remaining 80 per cent
proposed minor facilities restoration. On the other hand, 60 per cent
students were of the opinion that there was lack of entertainment options on
campus and the majority of those offered suggestions which will be
discussed below.
Improvements to consider
A first recommendation would be to restore our Olympic-size swimming pool
which would permit the development of acquatics programmes, which
students felt the college should offer. Also, they would welcome the
refurbishment of the existing changing rooms.
Though the college gym is regarded to be in fairly good conditions, many
respondents felt that weigh lifting equipment and treadmills were in great
need of maintenance.
Lastly, it would be wise to increase the offer of performances in the Concert
Hall which is deemed to be underused. Several people also expressed their
wish for extracurricular performing arts courses.
Benefits of the improvements

Recent research reports acquatics sports and fitness training to be highly

beneficial for peoples health, regardless of age. On the other hand,
fostering students creativity will surely develop their artistic talents.

Conclusion
On the basis of the findings above, it seems that students would greatly
appreciate that the suggestions and recommendations reviewed above be
implemented as far as possible. Higher quality academic performance may
derive from increased students satisfaction.