Peer Revision Sheet

Peer Editor:
Authors name:
Date:

Writing Component
How does the piece begin?
How could the author
strengthen their opening
hook?
Does the author use sensory
language/imagery to convey
setting? Give two
suggestions where the
author could add imagery.
Who are the main
characters? Give two
suggestions where the
author could add imagery to
make the characters more
descriptive.
How could the ending be
strengthened?
Does the author use
dialogue? Could they add
dialogue anywhere to make
their story more powerful?
Have they met the required
length (1 typed pages)?
What is the one thing you
liked most about their
story?
Does their story have a
hook, exposition, conflict,
climax, resolution, and
conclusion? What can they
add to each?

Class Period:

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