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What do you think are the causes of these problems and what
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INTRODUCTION
BODY:
Articulation
CONCLUSION
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Restate my opinion
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People have differing views about whether it is parents or schools responsibility to educate
children to become well-rounded citizens. In my opinion, both families and schools play an
equal role in childrens education.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why parents could contribute geatly to
childrens development. It is believed that family is the root of every persons nature which
partly shape his personalities and who he would become in the future. In fact, a child could
even genetically inherit his parents good traits and develop those traits as his own.
Additionally, the bond between family members enables parents to easily articulate certain
lessons about life, such as a repect for their ancestors, to their kids. This is a hindrance to
many school systems which show incompetence in connecting with young students who
sometimes feel reluctant to be open to teachers and classmates.
On the other hand, I would argue that schools are also an ideal place for children to learn to
become active citizens of their society. First, childrens interactions with their peers,
cooperation or even some certain amount of rivalry for instance, could promote their
sharing and their sense of community. They will learn how to associate, make friends and
get on with others through a variety of outdoor activities, which proves vital for their future.
Secondly, schools could help children develop their patriotism and appreciation for their
lives through history lessons about how Vietnamese people, for example, defended the
nation and reclaimed sovereignty from intruders.
In conclusion, I believe that schools and families complement each other in the education of
young children.
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vi gio vin v bn b
Develop their patriotism and appreciation for their lives: Pht trin tnh yu nc
v s trn trng cuc sng ca h
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
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Identifying the essay type: Direct-question
INTRODUCTION
BODY:
types of relationships
Cyber-addiction
CONCLUSION
Restate my opinion
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Technological progress has considerably reshaped how people communicate in the modern
world. Technology has changed relationships in various ways and those could be seen as
both positive and negative.
advances. New lines of smart phones and numerous online websites, Myspace for example,
have made long-distance calls possible, which ameliorates communication across different
countries, or even continents. People do not have to travel to other nations for meetings,
especially business meetings with foreign counterparts, thanks to the help of technology.
Furthermore, the number of cyber-relationships has accelerated considerably for the past
few years. Instead of traditional face-to-face interaction with fellow friends at schools,
young students nowadays are somehow too engrossed in making friends on Facebook, or in
some cases, show disinterest in real life relationships.
Such analyzed changes could be considered a sign of progression and negativity at the same
time. There is little doubt about the convenience of long-distance communication. This is
because it facilitates the process of keeping in touch with family members, relatives and also
business partners who live far away, which is impossible with the limited technology in the
past. However, the shortcomings should not be underestimated as good things are usually
accompanied by their own flaws. The inevitibility of cyber-addiction to virtual
communication could be the price as young people are much vulnerable to new tempting
applications. This could lead to not only negligene on study but also health deterioration like
short-sight or autism.
In conclusion, both negative and positive aspects could be anticipated from the emergence
of new types of relationships which have appeared as a consequence of technological
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modernization.
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A sign of progression and negativity at the same time: Du hiu ca s pht trin v
tiu cc cng mt lc
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution
problems.
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INTRODUCTION
BODY:
types of relationships
measures)
Social disagreement
Paragraph 2: 2 alternatives
CONCLUSION
Restate my opinion
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It is believed that traffic and pollution issues would be best tackled by higher prices of gas.
In my opinion, this idea is completely flawed and there are several reasonable alternatives.
Clearly the price of fuel has little to do with pressing problems of traffic and pollution. The
inevitable demand for time-saving and safe travelling in the modern world makes the
change in price of gas become rather insignificant, which proves the ineffectiveness of the
given policy. In other words, even if the price were increased, people would still travel on a
daily basis and the problems of traffic and pollution would stay unsolved. Additionally, this
solution could easily trigger social disagreement and resentment. This, coupled with the
reluctance of using expensive fuel to travel everyday, could be counter-productive and this
proposed idea would become irrelevant.
On the other hand, alternatives to increased price of petrol show greater effectiveness.
First, the government could implement certain regulations restricting the use of private
vehicles such as cars and turn people to using public transportation. This would relieve
many roads from heavy traffic by reducing the number of vehicles, which in return alleviates
the problem of pollution caused by exhaust. Second, cycling which proves environmentally
friendly should be more encouraged in major cities. At the same time, separate zones for
cyclists should be created to avoid the overload of traffic in the rush hour when the number
of vehicles might exceed the roads capacity.
In conclusion, I believe that heightening the price of fuel used for travelling to address traffic
and pollution problems is somewhat absurd; and that some other methods should be
carried out.
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For time-saving and safe travelling: di chuyn mt cch an ton v tit kim thi
The ineffectiveness of the given policy: S khng hiu qu ca chnh sch trn
gian
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The problems of traffic and pollution would stay unsolved: Nhng vn v giao
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and
fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what
measures could be taken to solve them?
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INTRODUCTION
BODY:
types of relationships
Paragraph 1: 2 causes
Paragraph 2: 2 solutions
Higher taxes
Social awareness
CONCLUSION
Restate my opinion
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weight and deteriorating health. In my view, the causes of this are varied and there are
several practical solutions to such a problem.
There are two main underlying causes of overweight and health deterioration. Firstly, highsugar diets cause numerous diseases such as diabettes and obesity. The excessive
consumption of fast food, especially when fast food producers such as KFC or McDonald are
dominating the Western market, is taking its toll on consumers weight and health.
Secondly, the lack of exercise to maintain a strong body due to occupational aspects
complements the adverse effects of unreasonable diets on people. This is the main reason
for back pain and blood pressure among modern individuals who lead a sedentary lifestyle,
designers for example.
Some feasible remedies could be carried out to tackle the said problem. Higher taxes should
be imposed on fast food to stall the expansion of fast food producers. Consumers would be
those who bear the increased taxes which would be certainly added to the price of their
food, which gradually discourages them to purchase such a type of food. Additionally, social
awareness of the severity of little regular exercise should be heightened. This could be
executed by propagation on TV programs which would be possible if sponsored by
governments or even individual companies. In the end, people would understand the
importance of exercise to their weight and health and try to balance their work with
physical training.
In conclusion, there are several explanations for peoples overweight and health
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Stall the expansion of fast food producers: Lm chm s pht trin ca nhng nh
To balance their work with physical training: Cn bng cng vic vi rn luyn sc
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