EssayOutline

I.Introduction
A.Broadstatement:
Learningfrommistakes
B.Ideastointroducetopic/thesis,gettinglessbroadwitheachstatement.
1.Noperfectsocialbeing
2.Learning+Trying=Improvement
3.Evidentw/Proctorinplay
C.Thesis(topic,assertion,directionofessay,scope/message/purpose)
Throughhisinteractionswithfemalecharacters,JohnProctorprovesthatheisthemost
admirablecharacterbecauseheisabletoimprovehimselfbylearningandamendinghis
pastmistakes.

II.BodyParagraph#1
A.Topicsentence
MaryWarrensriseinpower,causesJohnProctortolosehisdominanceinsocietyand
realizehisactionscanhavemajorrepercussionsthatsignalaneedtochange.
B.Quote#1
HowdoyougotoSalemwhenIforbidit?Illwhipyouifdareleavethishouseagain!
1.Pagenumbers(55)
C.AnalysisforQuote#1
1.Proctorignorant+dominant
2.EarlyKohlbergstages(women=nothing)
D.Quote#2
Hewakemeeverynight,hiseyeswerelikecoalsandhisfingersdownmyneck,andIspin
1.Pagenumbers(119)
E.AnalysisforQuote#2
1.Beatbywomen=shatteredego
2.Vulnerabilityseepastmistakes
F.ConcludingSentence

FirstStep=vulnerability
III.BodyParagraph#2
A.Topicsentence
BytryingtobetterhismarriagewithElizabeth,Proctorprovestohimselfthathehas
mademistakesinthepastandinordertolearnfromhisfaultshemuststartbyasking
forforgiveness.
B.Quote#1
YouwillnotjudgememoreElizabethLetyoulooktoyourownimprovementbeforeyougo
tojudgeyourhusbandanymore
1.Pagenumbers(54)
C.AnalysisforQuote#1
1.Recurringtraitofhighego
2.Resultsinnoselfdevelopment
D.Quote#2
Iwouldhaveyourforgiveness,ElizabethLetthemthatneverlieddienowtokeeptheir
souls
1.Pagenumbers(136)
E.AnalysisforQuote#2
1.Admitstowrongdoings+wantsforgiveness
2.Transformation:Kohlbergstage5
F.ConcludingSentence
2ndStep:Acknowledgment
IV.BodyParagraph#3
A.Topicsentence
OnceJohnProctorhasadmittedhiswrongdoings,heisfinallyabletotakeaffirmative
actionandstophimselffrommakingthesamemistakesagainbyceasingallsignsof
lechery.
B.Quote#1
Abby,Imaythinkofyousoftlyfromtimetotime

1.Pagenumbers(23)
C.AnalysisforQuote#1
1.StillleadsAbbyon
2.Showsnoregretofaffair
D.Quote#2
Shethinkstodancewithmeonmywifesgrave!Andwellshemight,forIthoughtofhersoftly
1.Pagenumbers(110)
E.AnalysisforQuote#2
1.Admitstofaultstopublic
2.Showsdesiretoimprove
F.ConcludingSentence
3rd/FinalStep:Action
V.Conclusion
A.RestatedThesis
ProctorsAdmiration:vulnerabilityrealizationaction
B.Summaryofbodyparagraphmainpoints&ideastointroducethebigger
picture/universalidea
1.Beingbetter=efforttoimprove
2.Anyonehasthepower
3.Selfimprovement
C.Broad/UniversalScope
Betteroneself=hardbutpossible