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Punctuality
10
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Commitment to
Instructions
GOOD:
Many instructions were followed, but there were
some that were not.
POOR:
Some instructions were followed, but there was a
considerable amount of them that were not.
Title Page
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student discussed his/her expectations of When
Germs Travel, sharing some irresolute information
or not complying with the format of a short
paragraph.
POOR:
The student failed to share his/her expectations of
When Germs Travel in a clear way. In addition,
the format of a short paragraph was not applied.
Exploring What Is
Known About the
Topic Before Reading
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student showed that he/she had discussed if the
topic presented in When Germs Travel was known
to him/her after reading the essay.
After the discussion, the student wrote a brief
summary about the topic based on quick research
that was included as evidence in the final work.
However, he/she did not manage to rely in his/her
own words to present the summary. Wikipedia was
never used.
The outside source used for the summary showed
little or no highlights, underlining, and annotations.
Recording Responses
POOR:
The student failed to discuss if the topic was known
to him/her before or after reading the essay. In
addition, the summary did not prove that some
research had been conducted. The use of Wikipedia
as an outside source was evident. Lastly, the outside
source used for the summary was not included in the
final work.
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student recorded a small number of responses to
When Germs Travel on one of the photocopies of
the essay, demonstrating that a critical reading of the
text was not achieved.
POOR:
The student failed to record responses to When
Germs Travel on one of the photocopies of the
essay.
Establishing the
Writers Thesis
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student presented a vocabulary list of terms
unknown to him/her with definitions that did not
contribute to the understanding of such terms.
POOR:
The student did not present a vocabulary list of
terms.
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Identifying the
Authors Purpose and
Audience
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student successfully identified the purpose and
the audience of When Germs Travel but did not
manage to discuss his/her findings in short
paragraph format.
POOR:
The student did not identify and discuss the purpose
and the audience of When Germs Travel.
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Considering the Way
the Writer Has
Constructed the Essay
POOR:
The student did not answer most of the suggested
questions of this tip. In addition, he/she did not
comply with the content format.
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student created a small number of focus
questions to When Germs Travel on one of the
photocopies of the essay, demonstrating that a
critical reading of the text was not achieved.
POOR:
The student failed to create focus questions to
When Germs Travel on one of the photocopies of
the essay.
POOR:
The student failed to identify and present the writers
thesis in When Germs Travel.
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Discipline-based
Vocabulary
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student created an incomplete vocabulary list of
discipline-based terms presented in When Germs
Travel, including adequate definitions.
POOR:
The student present a vocabulary list of
discipline-based terms presented in When Germs
Travel but did not include definitions.
The student did not present a vocabulary list of
discipline-based terms presented in When Germs
Travel.
Underlining and
Highlighting Important
Information
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student successfully identified the writers
thesis in When Germs Travel but failed to
properly present his/her findings in a short paragraph
format.
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student demonstrated some problems selecting
the most important details of When Germs Travel
based on the overuse of underlining and
highlighting.
POOR:
The student failed to demonstrate understanding of
the most important details of When Germs Travel.
6
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student included a section sharing his/her notes
for When Germs Travel in a disorganized way,
making it hard to understand.
POOR:
The student did not include a section sharing his/her
notes for When Germs Travel.
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Breaking Up Complex
Sentences
GOOD TO FAIR:
The student suggested ways to divide complex
sentences found in When Germs Travel but forgot
to discuss the benefit of performing this activity in
short paragraph format.
The student did not explain why he/she did not see
the need of applying this tip for When Germs
Travel in short paragraph format.
POOR:
The student did not include a section presenting
complex sentences found in When Germs Travel
in simple form or did not discuss why such a section
was not applicable for this essay.
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Question 8
1
Grammar,
Punctuation, and
Spelling
Total Score
GOOD:
The written work showed some problems in terms
of grammar, punctuation, and/or spelling.
POOR:
The written work showed major problems in
grammar, punctuation, and/or spelling.
_________/100 COMMENTS: