exzieoz0mms youre 2009 moun DEScerPTL VE SSH, PAPER 02 ~ GENERAL PROFICIENCY rane scum Question 6 (Deseription) 35 marks EXPRESSION Ci 35 marks Descriptive Answer ‘The following criteria will be used to a jess the composition: (a) Structural Coherence of Description (4) Deseription must be clearly constructed ond developed (e.g. the different components must be Linked appropriately). (63) The different focuses and facets must be Linked appropriately (e.g. background vs. foreground; main focus ve. peripheral detail). (41) ‘The interpretive interventions (reflections) of the writer | must be relevant to the purely descriptive elenents. (iv) Choice of features to be described must be clearly motivated and must effectively contribute to the whole picture: () Relation between object, state of mind, event, etc. be Sescribed and the language used. (4) Deseription, even if imaginative, mist be consistent within iteeie (45) any change in perspective (e.g. visual, mood, tone, etc.) must be Clearly established. (i) IE characters are being descrSbed, they mst be sufficiently developed. (iv), Dialogue, when used, should be functional (e.g. to develop character, atnosphere, mood, etc.) (ec) Oegantgation:~ (4) Detaiis mst be logically and effectively sequenced, (2) Bkfective use of language (4) Varied and lively use of language to create picture elenents. (4) Appropriate choice of words to create characters, sods, Cones, atmosphere and setting.0121802050 2009) ENGLISH A PAPER 02 - GENERAL PROPICTENCY DARK scum The following grid should be used in Une assessment of Question 6 ) ivy" cellent manipulation of descriptive detaiie (7) Brcellent organisation. (vi) Brcellent, “etfactive and error-free use of iangeage, 35-29 PSHM susp got, “eesintonten ot tesa + descriptive dacaiie, v) ” vesy good oygantvation 2-02 (4) Very G00d file of language though chece say ‘be the oscastons! depen tn accust cowerence | 4. | Demonstrates: (2) Goed manigulation of descriptive detaiis (43) ‘Gooa organiection. (444) metective and “accurate use of tenguase, [28-28 though there my be a fow lapeos, 3. | suagests: (4) Isconsistency in che manipuiation of descriptive docatie ($8), Some ability’ to organise events/ detatis. {2-19 (634) Some anility to use language accustteny, and stfectively but with. cone edges inconsistency fn sccurste usage meowermce |2. | suggestes ay (4) Ap inability to mnipslate vital descriptive decal do imabitity to organi an a logseal manner" ($33) Frequent, inaccurate use of Language, OR: Insutficlent information presenta’ in cy ay ay ‘Tota Seca eral Sead eo Little infomation presented © make an inability to mniputate descriptive Lnabiticy to organ: ity to use language accurately, events and [0-8 Note: A response that is too short (Je than one page, 200 words) should not be given a mark higher than 17/3.