Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Basic
Sound
Thorough
Extensive
Score
Content
Plot and
Situation
Narrative
Devices/ Story
Details
Organisation
Voice
Overly
simplistic No
clear controlling
idea and/or
theme
Story elements
may or may not
reveal a
controlling
idea/theme
Combines story
Skilfully combines all
elements around a story elements around a
controlling idea to
controlling idea to
reveal a thought
reveal a thoughtprovoking theme
provoking theme
Lacks a
developed plot
line
Provides a
minimally
developed plot
line
Develops a
Skilfully develops plot
standard plot
line with complex
line with complex
major and minor
major and
characters and a
minor characters
definite setting
and a definite
setting
Fails to use
details,
anecdotes,
dialogue,
suspense,
and/or action
Attempts to use
Anecdotes,
details and/or
sensory details
anecdotes,
and examples
suspense,
create a sense of
dialogue, and
the characters
action,
thoughts, actions
but with minimal and appearances
effectiveness
A range of devices
such as suspense,
dialogue and
action (gestures,
expressions)
advances the plot,
gives insight into
characters, and
keeps the reader
informed/
entertained
Little to no
structure:
Exposition,
conflict
and/or
resolution/
denouement
may not exist
Weak structure:
Exposition,
sequencing of
ideas in
body and/or
resolution/denoue
ment
need some
revision
May be isolated
events with weak
sequencing
Unclear or no
Sense of purpose
sense
and/or audience
of voice,
not clear
purpose
Writers voice is
and/or audience detached from the
story
Anecdotes, sensory
details and examples
create a clear sense of
the main characters
thoughts, actions and
appearances
A range of devices such
as suspense, dialogue
and action
(gestures, expressions)
skilfully advances the
plot, gives insight into
characters, and keeps
the reader continually
informed/entertained
Effective
Skilful Structure:
structure:
Strong, engaging
Engaging
exposition Logical and
exposition
effective sequencing of
Logical
ideas based on
sequencing of
purpose and skillfully
ideas
linked to theme
based on purpose
Resolution and
and linked
denouement
to theme
reinforce theme and
Resolution and
give closure
denouement
reinforce theme
and give closure
Writers voice is
confident,
authentic and
entertaining
Reveals the
significance of
the writers
attitude about the
subject/memorabe
incident
Writer's voice is
authentic,
clever and entertaining
Skillfully reveals the
significance of the
writers
attitude about the
subject/
memorable incident
Clear sense of
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Teacher: Ms C Graham-Smith
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