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Order Problems
Connection Problems
Clarity Problems
Conciseness Problems
Paragraphing problems
Embedding of large phrases and clauses
Weak sentence openers (there are and it is
Passive constructions
Lack of (or inappropriate) repetition
Faulty parallel structure
Vague this subjects
Lack of (or inappropriate) transitional tags
Excessively long or short sentences
General language
Misuse of acronyms
Lengthy noun strings
Strings of prepositional phrases
Punctuation flaws
Inappropriate nominalizations
Dependence upon talkie verbs
Wordy phrases
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