Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Form:
Design
Absent or
Below Basic
Figures or formatting do
not match the papers
purpose or are not
explained by author.
Developing
Proficient
Designincluding figures
and formathelps author
achieve purpose.
Form: Genre
Follows generic
conventions (whether for
instruction manual, cover
letter, etc.).
Content:
Information
Content:
Support
Advanced
Designincluding
figures and format
helps author achieve
purpose with style.
Resume format is
used correctly. It is
eye appealing. The
bullet points and
headings allow for
easy skimming.
Follows generic
conventions (whether
for instruction manual,
cover letter, etc.)
consistently and with
sophistication.
Resume genre is
achieved through the
use of action words
such as organized,
exemplified etc.
The objective is
concise.
Supplies all necessary
information with
sophistication.
Information is
supplied and
organized through
use of headings and
chunking.
Supports all claims with
specific, relevant details
and/or evidence.
Employs different types
of evidence.
The claim (objective)
is provide with
enough evidence
from the subheadings
and information.
Content:
Organization
Frequently unorganized:
difficult to find a clear
relationship between
paragraphs or sentences.
Headings are
inappropriate, unclear or
absent.
Effectively ordered
paragraphs generally
cover only one topic each
and are linked with useful
transitions. Headings are
usually appropriate and
clear.
Sentences typically flow
logically.
Citations:
Readability:
Effectively ordered
paragraphs cover only
one topic each and are
generally linked with
useful transitions.
Headings are
appropriate and clear.
Sentences flow logically
to persuade reader.
Resume headings
flow in a natural
order.
Correctly uses MLA- or
APA-style parenthetical
citations, quotation
marks, and works cited
list. Introduces each
source fullyyou know
who did the research or
talking, for whom, and
why.
N/A
Outstanding control of
language, including
effective diction and
sentence variety.
Language is concise
and clear. Good
choice in wording.
The resume
experience section
flows perfectly.
Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document?
1. Focus on setting the dates on the right side on the same vertical line to achieve a vertical whitespace
2. Maybe put heading on left side of the resume
Form:
Design
Absent or
Below Basic
Figures or formatting do
not match the papers
purpose or are not
explained by author.
Developing
Proficient
Advanced
Designincluding figures
and formathelps author
achieve purpose.
Designincluding
figures and format
helps author achieve
purpose with style.
Form: Genre
Follows generic
conventions (whether for
instruction manual, cover
letter, etc.).
Follows generic
conventions (whether
for instruction manual,
cover letter, etc.)
consistently and with
sophistication.
Content:
Information
Content:
Support
Effectively ordered
paragraphs generally
cover only one topic each
and are linked with useful
transitions. Headings are
usually appropriate and
clear.
Sentences typically flow
logically.
Content:
Organization
Effectively ordered
paragraphs cover only
one topic each and are
generally linked with
useful transitions.
Headings are
appropriate and clear.
Sentences flow logically
to persuade reader.
Readability:
Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document?
The only things I think you could work on are putting periods at the end of your sentences and maybe making it all fit on one page. Otherwise
I think it is great.
Form:
Design
Absent or
Below Basic
Figures or formatting do
not match the papers
purpose or are not
explained by author.
Developing
Proficient
Advanced
Designincluding figures
and formathelps author
achieve purpose.
Some errors with spacing
Designincluding
figures and format
helps author achieve
purpose with style.
Form: Genre
Follows generic
conventions (whether for
instruction manual, cover
letter, etc.).
Follows generic
conventions (whether
for instruction manual,
cover letter, etc.)
consistently and with
sophistication.
Content:
Information
Content:
Support
Effectively ordered
paragraphs generally
cover only one topic each
and are linked with useful
transitions. Headings are
usually appropriate and
clear.
Sentences typically flow
logically.
Correctly uses MLA- or
APA-style parenthetical
citations, quotation
marks, and works cited
list. Usually introduces
each source fullyyou
know who did the
research or talking, for
whom, and why.
Content:
Organization
Citations:
Effectively ordered
paragraphs cover only
one topic each and are
generally linked with
useful transitions.
Headings are
appropriate and clear.
Sentences flow logically
to persuade reader.
Correctly uses MLA- or
APA-style parenthetical
citations, quotation
marks, and works cited
list. Introduces each
source fullyyou know
who did the research or
talking, for whom, and
why.
Outstanding control of
language, including
effective diction and
sentence variety.
Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document?
I would say focus on spacing and verb tenses but besides that it looks really professional and good!