Topic : What Are Your Opinions on Cosmetic Surgery?

1. Introduction
a.

Connecting information: Lookism is pervasive in our society

-case: a Korean woman golfer, Ahn Sunju had no sponsor, even though she was exposed
to the cameras continually by winning.

b. Thesis statement: In a society where lookism is pervasive, we should not criticize plastic
surgery.

2. Body
a. Paragraph1
Appearance is also ability in our society: Society makes people do plastic surgery.
- The interviewers of corporates opinion: a man of good appearance is good at selfmanagement, and good appearance helps to increase the competitiveness of society
- Beauty pays: why attractive people are more successful.
-The cases in other countries: China, USA

b. Paragraph2
Society that encourages plastic surgery: An increase in the amount of plastic surgery is
natural.
- Current situation of cosmetic surgery in Korea
- Regardless of age or sex, many people in Korea do cosmetic surgery.
- The graduates in high school think cosmetic surgery is one of the customs that
naturally have to do.
-TV programs
-Korean celebrities
-Do we have to look these situations badly?

c. Paragraph3
Plastic surgery is a product of Lookism.

-means of lookism
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a method for adapt to the society, and It can also be said that it is a result of

lookism.

3. Conclusion
a. But plastic surgery is a just one of the methods, not a solution. : We can't criticize anyone who
does plastic surgery., but surgery is not a good solution to lookism.
c. The best way to overcome social discrimination based on appearance: find our own charm.
d. A woman who shows a case to overcome the lookism: Lizzy velasquez