Argumentation Essay Reflection

This research paper was an interesting piece for me, for it encompassed many different

aspects of my life as a Type One Diabetic as well as she a light on the horrendous state of

health care and medicines around the world. This being said I feel as though my grade of

a seventy was slightly low. My details and support were well placed and all citations,

even if not spaced properly or shifted to a sentence that is still explaining a quote, were

there. My works cited page was there as well and so I do not believe that a seventy was

high enough; however, this is a matter of opinion on how the teacher sees the mistake to

weigh on the grade. Now while my facts were there and supported, my margins were off

and my grammar, once again, was distastefully wrong. I very much enjoyed researching

all the facts about different medicines and their expenses. The writing process connected

me to a subject I felt passionate about and even helped me understand what the Price of

Life really is.