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CRITERIA SCORE
Opener (first 30 seconds): Grabs audiences attention with a story, question, etc. (topic is not clear) 3 /5
Talking about blood donation was unclear at firstI wasnt certain of your
purpose
Vocabulary Usage: Simple, natural, easy to understand. If difficult words are used, the speaker explains them 3 /5
Dominant/recessive inheritance**Japanese translation Ok, but English
explanation=better
Memorized: Speaker doesn't use notes, speaks with confidence and memorization is complete 8 /10
Not bada few more practices would help your speech immensely
Notes:
Be very careful about the pronunciation of your important vocabulary of the topic. I
couldnt clearly understand Donate Blood until you showed the advertisements for
blood drives. If someone in America was listening, they may not understand because
the advertisements are in Japanese only. I liked your topic, but your speech wasnt
cohesive. If you ask me to condense your speech to one sentence, I couldn't do it. Was
your point A) blood types B) genes C) feel happy? I wanted to have a clearer idea of
why you were talking about each topic. It seems you had 3 topicsso this speech
would improve if you only focus on one of them.