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Well if so then
check out the movie Hunt For The Wilder People. In this movie Ricky and Hector
discover and learn many life lessons as they journey through the New Zealand Bush.
They learn that You Should always be there for your friends, People can change and Do
Always be there for your friends. First when Hector broke his leg in the beginning
of the movie Ricky was there to attempt to take care of him this shows the lesson by,
after Hector broke his leg he could easily have just ditched him and gone on himself but
instead he stayed with Hector through when he broke his leg until it was over. Later in
the movie a boar is charging Hector and their dogs so Ricky shoots the boar. Shooting
the boar saved Hector from getting killed or severely hurt, this shows that Ricky was
Not only should people be there for your friends but also, People can change.
Hector really disliked Ricky in the beginning and pretty much avoided him at all costs.
After the Aunt died Ricky tried to go see Hector. Instead of welcoming him Hector
informed him that Bella wanted you, not me now get lost! However by the end of the
movie Hector and Ricky had become best friends. To become Rickys friend was not
easy for Hector and took most of the movie but this shows that People can change.
People can change however you should always, Do what you believe is right
even if others think it is wrong. When Ricky and the child services lady were standing
across the crack in the ground in the New Zealand Bush. The child services lady
shouted to Ricky Come back we can end this. Ricky replied No I will keep going.
Showing that Ricky continued to do what he thought was right which in this case was
keep running and ignore what the child services lady said to do.
If you look closely you can usually learn a life lesson or 2 from a movie. Hunt For The
Wilder People, has 3 life lessons to teach junior high viewers. Always be there for your
friends, People can change and Do what you believe is right even if others think it is
wrong. Listening to these lessons will cause us all to have a better and happier lives as
Introduction The essay begins The essay begins The essay begins The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong with an with an begins with only a
Your score: 3 introduction introduction introduction thesis statement
paragraph and paragraph that paragraph but is and not a fully
contains the contains the missing either the developed
following parts: required elements: attention-grabber introduction
attention-grabber, attention-grabber, or the bridge paragraph OR the
bridge, and thesis bridge, and thesis and/or the introduction
statement. The statement. attention-grabber paragraph is
thesis statement However, the is clich or the missing entirely.
appears as the attention-grabber transition does not
last sentence of may not be as actually lead into
the introduction. effective and/or the thesis
the transition may statement. The
not be as smooth. introduction
The thesis paragraph
statement appears contains a thesis
as the last statement that is
sentence of the located at the end
introduction. of the introduction
paragraph.
Thesis Thesis contains a Thesis contains an Thesis contains a Thesis is missing
Your score: 4 strong arguable arguable claim/interpretatio or thesis
claim/interpretatio claim/interpretatio n that cannot be statement does
n with 3 pieces of n supported by effectively argued not correspond to
evidence logical reasoning. because it is not assignments
supported by 3 pieces of thematic and/or is purpose (might be
thorough and evidence are illogical. Specific informative
logical reasoning. included but may evidence also may instead of
be more vague be missing from argumentative).
and nonspecific to the thesis
the piece of statement.
literature.
Supporting Details All supporting Supporting details One supporting Supporting details
(x2) details are logical are mostly logical detail may be may not be
Your score: 3 and connect to the but might exhibit missing and/or present or logical.
thesis . weak connectors may contain a
Supporting details to the thesis . direct quotation or Supporting details
are broad enough Supporting details specific evidence may be random or
to effectively summarize the that should appear off topic.
summarize the content of the in the body
content of the body paragraphs paragraph.
body paragraphs and do not contain Supporting details
and do not contain specific evidence. may not connect
specific evidence. to the thesis
statement or
effectively
summarize the
paragraph.
Analysis/ Body paragraphs Body paragraphs The writer has Body paragraphs
Commentary contain effective contain included plot lack analysis and
(x2) explanation of explanation of summary in some contain mostly plot
Your score: 3 evidence in your evidence in your places instead of summary.
own words. Each own words, and analysis/
piece of evidence each piece of explanations, OR, There is little
is explained in at evidence is the writer has not evidence of logic
least two explained in at explained each and/or reasoning.
sentences that least two piece of evidence
analyze how the sentences. with at least two
piece of evidence However, the sentences
proves the thesis analysis may be consistently. OR,
and supporting more obvious and the writers
details Analysis lack depth, analysis/
shows depth and therefore, not fully explanations may
goes beyond the proving the claim only state the
obvious. presented in the obvious.
thesis or topic
sentences.
Conclusion The essay ends The essay ends The essay ends The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong and with a conclusion with a conclusion ends with only a
Your score: 4 memorable paragraph that paragraph but is rephrased thesis
conclusion contains the missing either the statement and not
paragraph and required elements: link back to hook, a fully developed
contains the link back to hook, rephrased thesis conclusion
following parts: rephrasing of statement or the paragraph OR the
link back to thesis, thesis statement so-what statement conclusion
rephrasing of and key points, is weak paragraph is
thesis statement transition, and so- missing entirely.
and key points, what statement.
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may not be as
effective or logical
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