Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
FINAL
draft
A scholarly adult that knows about the time period, but does not have all the details
Audience:
about specific events.
5-6 paragraphs (it can be longer if necessary)
[A paragraph can vary in the amount of sentences but should have a complete idea]
Along with your final draft, please pass in the following essay materials:
Document Analysis two-column notes (Handout #15)
Document packet (Handout #14)
Submission
Planning Sheet (Handout #16--the one with the buckets on the front)
First draft (Handout #17)
Second draft packet (Handout #18)
WRITING YOUR FINAL DRAFT
Your final draft should follow the structure below:
PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION
Hook
Background Information: Who was Andrew Jackson? What is he famous for?
Thesis: Andrew Jackson ___________ democratic because
Was or was not
PARAGRAPH 2: Claim #1
Topic Sentence/Claim (First reason WHY he was/was not democraticits in your thesis!)
ANALYSIS of evidence Depending on your argument (i.e., whether or not he was democratic), you need
to explain how the evidence shows he did or did not meet at least one of the criteria for being democratic:
o Government actions reflect the voice wishes of the People
o promotes social, political, and economic equality for all (including equal OPPORTUNITY)
Transitional Statement:
o 1. Look at topic of next paragraph
o 2. Create a statement that connects topic of this paragraph to the next one
PARAGRAPH 3: Claim #2
Follow the same structure as Paragraph #2, but for Claim #2
PARAGRAPH 4: Claim #3
Follow the same structure as Paragraph #2, but for Claim #3
PARAGRAPH 6: CONCLUSION
o Restate your thesis
o Clincherwhy is it important to have democratic leaders?
o How democratic is our current government? Explain!
Group
Portfolio Sample #4
AB
FINAL DRAFT
Using your planning sheet and the WAG, respond to the following prompt: