Materials Needed: Note cards with words in a sentence, My stories
(prewritten on chart paper)
Prerequisite Skills: Students watched a video (song) about commas in
listing sentences, listened to a funny book explaining the importance of correct usage of commas, and identified where commas belonged in pre-written listing sentences
Standard(s): Language Standards
L.2.1 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
Lesson Objective(s): Students will be able to correctly order words in a
listing sentence.
1. Provide objectives: (What are students going to learn?)
Time: Yesterday, we learned about and practiced listing in a sentence. We watched a video, read a funny book, and added commas to listing sentences that I created. After we read some of my writing today, you are going to create sentences out of the words that you are given.
2. Demonstrate knowledge or skill: (Input/Modeling by the
teacher) Time: The Waffle Bar This weekend I went to a baby shower. I had a very nice time. There was a waffle bar at the shower. The waffle bar had waffles. It had hot fudge and whipped cream. The waffle bar had M&Ms! It even had chocolate chips and fruit. I put strawberries on my waffle. I put hot fudge on my waffle. Last I put whipped cream and coconut on my waffle. My waffle was melty. My waffle was tasty. I am now a huge fan of waffle bars. Ask students Did you like my writing? o Explain that my writing was choppy. One thing that I can do is add listing sentences Listing sentence what it sounds like list in a sentence 3 or more things that go together in the same spot Lets read my revised writing. The Waffle Bar This weekend I went to a baby shower. I had a lovely time. The best part of the shower was the waffle bar. The waffle bar had waffles, hot fudge, M&Ms, and whipped cream. It event had chocolate chips and fruit! I put strawberries, hot fudge, whipped cream and coconut on my waffle. My waffle tasted melty and delicious. I am now a huge fan of waffle bars!
3. Provide guided practice: (Guided practice with the teacher)
Time: o Did you like this writing more? Why? Turn and talk with a partner - wasnt as choppy o Can anyone see a place where I created a listing sentence? Thumbs up or Thumbs down to indicate understanding o What do you notice about these sentences? commas
4. Check for understanding and provide student feedback:
(How will you know students understand the skill or concept? How will they know they get it?)? Based on responses to questions, and placement of commas from yesterdays lesson (discussed briefly in the perquisite section)
5: Provide extended practice and transfer: (Independent practice
of the skill) Now, you will work in groups to build listing sentences out of the words that you are given. o After you have finished creating your sentences. Each member of your group will write down the sentence. We will meet back up front and discuss the sentences that you have created o Jigsaw - Come back as a whole group and have students state the sentences that they created. o What clues did you have about where the words were in the sentence? - capitals, periods, commas o Also discuss that students could have changed the order of the words in the list. 6. Assessment / Closure: (How do you evaluate student progress or provide closure to this lesson?) Were students able to create correct listing sentences and explain how they created their lesson. If so, tell them this, and remind them that they may try to incorporate listing sentences in their own writing and it will help your writing be more fluid and less choppy. Remember to add commas between items in your list and the word and before the last item in your list.
7. Plans for differentiation:
Intentional grouping 1. Tori, Levi, Mia 2. Paige, Blake, Sophia 3. Chloe, Sai, Elise 4. Jenna, London, William 5. Nyle, Hayden, Emma 6. Shresta, Manny, Abinav 7. Nithya, Tharan 8. Mateo, Colin
Differentiated sentences focus on core words for students that need
additional practice
TOTAL LESSON TIME: ______
8. References Consulted (Curriculum books in Drake SOE curriculum