Nowadays, corruption is very common to happen.

Corruption is
happen in many field in Indonesia, such as in education, health,
sport, politics, government, etc. Well, corruption in Indonesia is the
hottest topic for our country. We see, every news program, at least
once, showed some news about corruption. But, what is corruption?
In economic aspects corruption is the misuse of public office for
private gain.
Some people think that the government dont care about it. Do you
think so? Well, in our opinion our government actually care about
corruption in Indonesia but until now corruption in Indonesia is still
rooted. We know that corruption is a serious problem that must be
solve quickly. Because corruption brings many disadvantages. So,
what are disadvantages of corruption?
First, corruption also hurts the poor indirectly because corruption is
an impediment to economic growth, reinforces inequality, and
distorts public expenditure allocation.
Second, corruption affects society as a whole it is the poor who
suffer from it. Corruption eats into an already tight budget and extra
expenditures mean cuts in other basic needs areas.
Moreover, the effects of corruption are not merely financial. They
may also be profoundly economic, moral, and social.
So, what is the government doing to handle corruption? The
government of Indonesia makes Indonesias Corruption Eradication
Commission (Komisi Pemberantasan Korupsi/ KPK). It is a
government agency established to fight corruption. The KPK vision is
to eradicate Indonesian from corruption.
But, what can we do? Corruption wont stop unless we choose to
stop it. Thats way, we must care and prevent opportunity of
corruption to happen and dont do it. We can also encourage our
government to changes the current system and to create firm laws
for corruptor, quickly inform KPK if we know or see corruption
happen, we can also join campaigns to fight corruption and to build
good governance around the world. And we have to prevent to
younger generations from bad mentality. So, LETS STOP
CORRUPTION TO SAVE INDONESIA FREE FROM CORRUPTION!
Corruption, Do you know what the meaning of corruption is? What is the relation
between money and corruption? Well, corruption is common everywhere in the
world, even in the United States. Its just a matter of intensity. However, it is quite
shocking when one reliable survey claims Jakarta as the most corrupt place in
Indonesia.The survey has made me sad, actually, because I stay and earn a living
here in the capital. As most people know, Tanjung Priok port smuggling is not a new
thing at all. Entrepreneurs who want to minimize their tax payments tend to do
such a thing more often. They even bribe the officials.Well, I think the measures
taken so far to overcome the problem by punishing the corruptors is still not far
enough. We have to prevent the younger generations from getting a bad mentality
caused by corruption.I believe we should start at the earliest stages in school and I
think everyone should be involved in the effort to eradicate corruption. We must
not make any distinction.

Questions :
Why the people do a corruption ?
Wheres the most corruption place in Indonesia ?
What should we do to prevent the corruption ?
What is the solution for the government to minimize the corruption?
In your opinion, what should we do to eradicate the corruption in
Indonesia ?
Do you know what the definition of corruption?. Corruption is one of the most
significant factors which hinders countries. Corruption has been the real enemy
to our country for this moment.

In Indonesia, politic corruption is dominating. Corruption has many impact.

Firstly, corruption can decrease the quality of development country. Development
of country is an important thing to show how the country can manage their
territory. In fact, our country is still sinking. The money which has been corrupted
can use to development in infrastructure, overcome the poor people, scholarship
to student, etc.

Secondly, corruption can breed injustice. In our country where corruption is

prevalent, there are different position between the poor and the rich man. The
rich man can do anything with their money. Also in front of law they can do
anything with their money. In fact, In our country the corruption not only happen
in legislative but also in constitution.

I think corruption cannot destroyed but can prohibition. We must participate to

decrease the corruption. As student we should be honest in our activity. That
thing is one of our participating as student to decrease the corruption in our
generation because if we are honest, all of bad thing impossible happen.
Purpose/social function/objective: to persuade the reader or listener that
something should or should not be the case.

Text organization:

1. thesis,

2. arguments, and

3. recommendations

Language features:

1. Emotive word (alarmed, worried)

2. The use of words that qualify statements (usual, probably)

3. The use of words that link argument (firstly, however, on the otherhand,
therefore)

4. The use of present tense

5. The use of compound and complex sentences

6. Modal and adverbs

7. Using pronouns I and we

example:

Corruption and corruptors

What do you know about corruption? Corruption is irregularity money action in

country or company for individual profit. What is the relation between corruption
and corruptors? Well, corruptors is person that does corruption. In our country,
corruption is commonplace that often we met, many people that does corruption
not complete handling, that coming about corruption round into the habit.
Corruption belong to egoist action, why? Because corruptors just accentuate
thyself that injure many people.

As we know, corruption can make negative impact that having an effect on many
people. What kind of impact?
1. Democracy, corruption can broke of confidence and tolerance many people,
because new broom official position are not because achievement.

2. Economy, corruption bringing on price's rise is material food and BBM, that
impact is the development economic society hard.

3. States common welfare , more corruption happen, more and more also
suppressed people. For example is politician making regulation that protect big
firm, but disadvantages little firms, just back favor to big firm that give
contribution bigging to their general election campaign.

You know? Corruptor one of greedy behaviour, poor, lier, and lazy person. Why?
because corruptor never satisfied by what do be had, one of cause it is
subtracted thank. Ever want to be win by undertaking bribe to judge, etc.

Well, I think the measures taken so far to overcome the problem by punishing the
corruptors is still not far enough. We have to prevent the younger generations
from getting a bad mentality caused by corruption.

As the rising generation, we shall avoid corruption character, because can be

injure thyself and others.