Topic: Essays Grade: Eighth Grade Summary: This is a three-week unit about how to write meaningful essays that the students care about. Students will choose topics or Itches to Scratch regarding problems they see in the world or concerns they have about current events, etc. The students will engage in group work according to their topics. Each individual student will write an essay, and each group will create an oral presentation with a technology component, a visual component, and an interactive component. This unit is based off of lessons from the book Lessons That Change Writers by Nancie Atwell. EssentialQuestion: I Timothy 4:12 says, Dont let anyone look down on you because you are young, but set an example for the believers in speech, in conduct, in love, in faith and in purity. Just because you are young doesnt mean you cant make a difference. Where can you make a difference in this world and how? What is an issue that bothers you and why? What do you want everyone else to know about it? What can we do about it and how? Time: Fifteen 40-minute class periods Standards: CCSS English Language Arts Grade Eight Language: 8.L.1, 8.L.2, 8.L.3: Students are accountable for these and are graded on this in their essays 8.L.1 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking 8.L.2 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing 8.L.3 Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing, speaking, reading, or listening Speaking and Listening: 8.SL.1: Student are accountable for this since they will be collaborating in groups 8.SL.1 Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher led) with diverse partners on grade 8 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly Speaking and Listening: 8.SL.4, 8.SL.5: Students are accountable for these since they are giving presentations on their topic that integrate multimedia and visual displays 8.SL.4 Present claims and findings, emphasizing salient points in a focused, coherent manner with relevant evidence, sound valid reasoning, and well-chosen details; use appropriate eye contact, adequate volume, and clear pronunciation 8.SL.5 Integrate multimedia and visual displays into presentations to clarify information, strengthen claims and evidence, and add interest Writing: 8.W.1, 8.W.2: Student are accountable for these since they are giving information and persuading their readers to their point of view in their essays 8.W.1 Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence 8.W.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content California ELD Standards Grade 8 and the Corresponding CCSS Part I 1. Exchanging information and ideas with others through oral collaborative discussions on range of social and academic topics. 8.SL.1, 8.L.3 2. Interacting with others in written English in various communicative forms (print, communicative technology, and multimedia). 8.L.3 3. Offering and justifying opinions, negotiating with and persuading others in communicative exchanges. 8.W.1, 8.SL.1, 8.SL.4, 8.L.3 9. Expressing information and ideas in formal oral presentations on academic topics. 8.SL.4-5, 8.L.1, 3 10. Writing literary and informational texts to present, describe, and explain ideas and information, using appropriate technology. 8.W.1-2, 8.L.1-3 11. Justifying own arguments and evaluating others arguments in writing. 8.W.1, 8.L.1-3 Part II 1. Understanding text structure. 8.W.1-2 2. Understanding cohesion. 8.W.1-2, 8.L.1, 3 3. Using verbs and verb phrases. 8.L.1, 3 4. Using nouns and noun phrases. 8.L.1, 3 5. Modifying to add details. 8.L.1, 3 6. Connecting ideas. 8.W.1, 2, 8.L.1, 3 7. Condensing ideas. 8.W.1, 2, 8.L.1, 3 Objectives: The students will be able to Knowledge Define and describe their topic with problems and solutions Comprehension Give examples of and summarize their topic Predict what will happen if the problem persists and/or if a solution is implemented Application Illustrate their topic via a project Analysis Compare and contrast views of their topic with problems and solutions Synthesis Collect and categorize information about their topic Create a presentation about their topic Write an essay about their topic Evaluation Argue for and defend their topic and solution Justify why their topic is important enough to learn about and tell others about LearningStyles/MultipleIntelligencesAddressed: Verbal/Linguistic Essay Group work Oral presentation Logical/Mathematical Organization options Surveys Rubrics Independent study checklists Flow Charts Diagrams Charts Graphs Maps Bodily/Kinesthetic Oral presentation Video option Hands-on visual projects Visual/Spatial Visual project Collage Mural Brochure Poster 3-D Art Mobile Model PowerPoint, Prezi, video options Musical/Rhythmic Video option Oral presentation Naturalist Organization options Problem solving Big picture issues Interpersonal Group work Oral presentation Google Drive/Classrooms Interactive component Debate Game Class Discussion Intrapersonal Problem solving Essay Technology Google Drive/Classrooms PowerPoint Prezi Video Interview Movie News Report Game Show Reality TV Music Video Accommodations: Special Needs Students May be given an outline for the essay May be required to write less for the essay May be required to find fewer sources of information May be required to include fewer sources of information in the essay May be required to do less on the presentation or projects May be graded more easily on mechanics May be allowed to receive help from a peer tutor EL Students May be given an outline for the essay May be required to write less for the essay May be required to find fewer sources of information May be required to include fewer sources of information in the essay May be required to do less on the presentation or projects May be graded more easily on mechanics May be allowed to take notes in native language May be allowed to receive help from a peer tutor GATE Students May be required to write more for the essay May be required to find more sources of information May be required to include more sources of information in the essay May be required to do more on the presentation or projects May be required to be the leader of the group May be required to help peer tutor other students in their group May be required to use literary devices in the essay There are extension A+ options on the essay rubric and the group participation rubric TeacherInquiryProject: Question How does the use of group work rubrics, peer evaluation rubrics, groups based on student-chosen topics, technology, and clear group work expectations impact students' collaboration skills, perception of group work, and achievement in written work, as measured by differences in a pre/post assessment on group work and individual work, peer evaluations, teacher observations, and essay grades? Desired Outcome Teaching this lesson will demonstrate if group work can be more effective More choices, clearer expectations, accountability, and the use of technology will help students get more meaning and more academic benefit out of group work Better group work leads to better grades on essays and greater overall satisfaction in class Measurable Goals As measured by a higher score on the self-satisfaction survey and group work survey, at least 60% of students will express greater satisfaction in group work after learning about and following group-work rules more consistently and because they are working together on a topic that they chose. As measured by a higher score on the self-satisfaction survey and group work survey, at least 60% of students will express greater satisfaction in writing and presentation assignments because they were able to pick their topic and some of the presentations formats and because of the progress checklist they will be completing throughout the lesson series. As measured by an average of previous essay grades, at least 60% of students will earn at least a 10% higher grade on their essays (compared to their previous essay grades) because they have higher satisfaction in writing about a topic of their choice. As measured by a higher score on the teacher observation before and during the unit, at least 60% of the students will demonstrate a better attitude, show more group involvement, and put forth more effort because they know and can implement group-work rules correctly and have higher satisfaction because they got to choose their topic and some of the activities. Entry-Level Assessments Daily grammar worksheets will be assessed for 8.L1-3. The grammar worksheets indicate how well students understand the conventions of standard English grammar and usage; of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling; and of language and its conventions. A pre-assessment on students views of group work, the process and procedure of group work, and the effectiveness of group work will be assessed for 8.SL.1. The assessment will include questions relating to the different components of 8.SL.1a-d. This is part of the main focus of the inquiry project. Students previous oral presentations using technology will be assessed for 8.SL.4-5. A self-assessment on the students previous experiences with oral presentations using technology will also be used to evaluate their mastery of the skill. Students previous writing samples will be assessed for 8.W.1-2. There will be a self-assessment for students to fill out about their satisfaction with their own work, how they like writing assignments and projects in general, and how they think they can improve their satisfaction and/or overall grade. Formative Assessments Student self-evaluations will be given before and after the lesson series. These self-evaluations will be about group work and students own work and satisfaction about that work. Peer-evaluations will be given before, during, and after the lesson series. We have worked in groups before, so students will evaluate their group members from previous groups. They will do check-up evaluations on their group members for the lesson series. They will do final evaluations on their group members at the end of the lesson series. During check-up evaluations, if some students are not doing their share of the work or if some students do not get along well, the teacher can intervene by helping with conflict resolution, by rearranging groups, by giving suggestions for compromise, etc. Student essays will be graded according to a rubric. This will help the teacher evaluate what to do for the next essay. Students will fill in self-evaluations about the progress of the essay and project for the lesson series. The teacher will see how the progress is coming and see where students need more support or if due dates need to be adjusted. Teacher observations will be recorded. This will take place during all of the lesson series. The teacher can see if topics are appropriate and if the students are on track to finish well and on time. Teacher questions will be asked during all lessons of the series. Homework assignments will be given to help students stay on track to finish the essay and project. Students will share findings about general topics with the whole class and about specific topics with their group members. Rubrics will be used to grade the essay and oral presentation. Summative Assessments Students will write an essay about their topic that is both informational and persuasive in nature. It will use proper English mechanics and follow proper essay organization. This essay will be graded using a rubric that the students were given in advance. In groups, students will give an oral presentation that includes a technology portion, a visual portion, and an interactive portion. This presentation will be graded using a rubric that the students were given in advance. The students will fill in self-evaluations about group work and students own work and satisfaction about that work. Peer-evaluations will be given. Teacher observations will be taken into account. InstructionalFormat: Day 1: Lesson 49 Effective Essays: Teasing Out Criteria Objectives Students will be able to Evaluate group work Evaluate individual work Evaluate peer work Identify features of effective essays List features of effective essays Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials... Teacher Computer Document Camera Projector Class Set: Group Work Survey Class Set: Self-Satisfaction Survey Class Set: Peer Evaluation Rubric Class Set: Independent Study Checklist Class Set: Packet of Essays Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Anticipatory Set... Students will fill out the group work and self-satisfaction surveys and the peer evaluation rubric Students will be given the independent study checklist, and the teacher will explain it From Lesson 49: Inform the students that we are going to look at a new way to write essays Instructional Input... From Lesson 49:The teacher will go over the packet of sample essays and inform the students that they will be listing features of effective essays in their black and white journals Modeling The teacher will show how to fill in the independent study checklist The teacher will read an essay and list some features of effective essays Guided Practice... The teacher will go over one essay with the students and help them list some features of an effective essay The teacher will help the students fill in the independent study checklist Independent Practice... The students will begin reading the rest of the essays and writing features of effective essays The students will fill in the independent study checklist Closure The teacher will ask the students for more features of effective essays The teacher will ask the students for their goals for the unit according to the independent study checklist Homework... Due Day 3: A list of features of an effective essay Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 2: Lesson 7 Itches to Scratch in Essays Objectives The students will be able to Evaluate problems in the world and in their own life that they could write about List problems in the world and in their own life that they could write about Categorize problems in the world and in their own life that they could write about Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document camera Projector Sample List of a Students Essay Ideas to show on the projector Class Set: What Itch Needs Scratching? Tape Quote from Lesson 7 Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Independent study checklist Anticipatory Set... From Lesson 7: Problems make good subjects. The teacher will talk about some the problems addressed in the essays that are in the packet Instructional Input The teacher will provide the students with the list What Itch Needs Scratching?, and the students will tape it into their black and white journals and begin answering the questions The teacher will go over the questions Modeling The teacher will answer some of the questions on the What Itch Needs Scratching? paper The teacher will show a Sample List of a Students Essay Ideas Guided Practice... The teacher will ask the questions and elicit student responses from the What Itch Needs Scratching? paper Independent Practice... The students will work on answering the questions on the What Itch Needs Scratching? paper Closure... The teacher will ask for more answers to the questions from the What Itch Needs Scratching? paper Homework... Due Day 3: A list of features of an effective essay Due Day 3: A list of at least six itches that intrigue you numbered in order of your favorite (#1) to least favorite (#6 or more) Due Day 7: Independent study checklist check up Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 3: Lessons 49 and 7 Follow Up Objectives Students will be able to Share features of effective essays Share problems in the world and in their own life that they could write about Create statements or questions from each problems in the world and in their own life that they could write about Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document camera Projector Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set Lesson 7: The students will share in their groups itches they would like to scratch in an essay Lesson 49: The students will make a master list of features of effective essays Instructional Input... Lesson 7: In all-class discussion, the teacher will ask for volunteers for topics and give advice as necessary Lesson 49: The teacher will compile a list from the answers that the students give (the teacher will print out the list and pass it out tomorrow for the students to tape into their black and white journals) Modeling Lesson 7: The teacher will show how to take their topics and turn them into a statement or question Lesson 49: The teacher will give examples of features of effective essays Guided Practice Lesson 7: The teacher will help student form their topics into statements or questions Independent Practice Lesson 7: The students will work to turn their topics into statements or questions Closure The teacher will ask for examples of statements or questions about topics The teacher will explain how she will group students according to topics to work to complete individual essays and group presentations/projects Homework... Due TODAY: A list of features of an effective essay Due TODAY: A list of at least six itches that intrigue you numbered in order of your favorite (#1) to least favorite (#6 or more) (this is how the teacher decides which groups to assign students tocommon interests are grouped together) Due Day 4: Turn your favorite 6 topics into statements or questions Due Day 7: Independent study checklist check up Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 4: Explanation of Essay and Group Presentation and Projects Objectives The students will be able to Choose group activities for the project and presentations List group rules List information about group work, the project, the presentation, the essay, Google Classrooms, Google Docs/Sheets/Slides Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document Camera Projector Google Drive/Classrooms Class Set: Compiled list of Features of Effective Essays Class Set: Itches to Scratch Tic Tac Toe activity chooser Class Set: Itches to Scratch Criteria Cards Class Set: Essay rubric Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set The teacher will go over the group rules, the group work survey, and the peer evaluation rubric so that group expectations are clear The teacher will tell the students what their groups are and have the students sit in their groups The students will share with each other their specific statement or question that will be the focus of their topic Instructional Input The teacher will explain the essay and rubric The essay will explain that there will be a group oral presentation with a technology component, visual component, and interactive component The teacher will explain the tic tac toe and criteria cards The teacher will explain how to use Google Drive/Classrooms to collaborate The teacher will pass out the compiled list of Features of Effective Essays for the students to tape into their black and white journals Modeling The teacher will give examples of presentations and projects for different topics The teacher will show how to use Google Drive/Classrooms Guided Practice The teacher will elicit possible presentations and projects that groups can do for their topic Independent Practice The students will work in their groups to choose their presentation and projects The students will begin dividing up jobs for the presentation and projects Closure The teacher will ask for more examples of presentations and projects from the students Homework... Due TODAY: Turn your favorite 6 topics into statements or questions Due Day 5: Group choices for tic tac toe Due Day 5: Join Google Classrooms and share a Google Doc/Slides and include the teacher Due Day 7: Independent study checklist check up Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 5: Lesson 50 How do I Scratch the Itch?, Lesson 51 Write with Information Objectives Students will be able to Analyze which types of sources they will need to research for their topic Write down questions they have about their topic Anticipate and write down questions a reader might have regarding their topic Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document Camera Projector Class Set: Essays: How Do I Scratch the Itch? Tape Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set... From Lesson 50: The teacher will introduce the idea that essays are meant to be written to scratch an itch Instructional Input... The teacher will go over the page Essays: How Do I Scratch the Itch? and the students will tape it in their black and white journals The teacher will go over the page Write with Information and the students will tape it in their black and white journals Modeling The teacher will give examples of answers to How Do I Scratch the Itch? The teacher gives examples of possible sources of information Guided Practice... The teacher will ask the students to give examples of answers to How Do I Scratch the Itch? The teacher will ask the students to give examples of possible sources of information for their topic Independent Practice The students will answer the questions on How Do I Scratch the Itch? The students will continue to list possible sources of information for their topic Closure The teacher will ask for questions from How Do I Scratch the Itch? Homework... Due TODAY: Group choices for tic tac toe Due TODAY: Join Google Classrooms and share a Google Doc/Slides and include the teacher Due Day 6: Brainstorm answers to Define the Problem: What would I like to know? What do readers need to know? Due Day 6: Make a tick mark next to each kind of information that you think will feed your essay topic Due Day 7: Independent study checklist check up Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Days 6-8: Research Objectives Students will be able to Conduct research about their topic Collect information about their topic Evaluate the credibility of sources Create source cards for sources Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials... Teacher Access to the computer lab Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set The teacher will go over some of the questions and the possible sources of information for the students topics Instructional Input... The teacher will explain what they will do in the computer lab Modeling The teacher will show students how to begin looking up information about their topics Guided Practice The teacher will show how to look up research for their topic The teacher will conference with each group about their topics, their research possibilities, etc. Independent Practice... The students will do research for their topic Closure The teacher will ask for websites that the students found helpful for their topic Homework... Due Day TODAY: Brainstorm answers to Define the Problem: What would I like to know? What do readers need to know? Due Day TODAY: Make a tick mark next to each kind of information that you think will feed your essay topic Due Day 7: Independent study checklist check up Due Day 9: Bring in at least ten pieces of different kinds of research Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 9: Lesson 52 Order the Information Objectives Students will be able to List different ways to organize the information they gathered during research on their topic Analyze different ways to organize their information and choose the best way to organize their information Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Class Set: Five Ways to Organize Your Information and Plan Your Essays Tape Large sheets of white construction paper Sheets of various colored construction paper Colored markers Scissors Glue sticks Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Research Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set... The teacher will ask the students for an interesting piece of information that they learned about their topic The teacher will ask about how students plan to organize their essay Instructional Input... The teacher will go over the paper Five Ways to Organize Your Information and Plan Your Essay, and students will tape it in their black and white journals Modeling The teacher will give examples of how to organize an essay Guided Practice.... The teacher will elicit ways that the students are thinking about to organize their essay Independent Practice... The students will try different ways to organize their essay Closure The teacher will ask about what ways worked or did not work Homework... Due TODAY: Bring in at least ten pieces of different kinds of research Due Day 10: Choose how you will organize your essay Due Day 10: Choose how you will organize your presentation and bring in an outline of the info and who is doing what Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 10: Lesson 53 Leads for an Essay Objectives The students will be able to List different ways to write a lead Write possible leads Analyze which lead is the best and use that on for their essay Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document camera Projector Class Set: Experiment with Essay Leads Class Set: Examples of Essay Leads Class Set: Check Your Essay Lead Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Research Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set... The teacher will ask students for ways to begin an essay Instructional Input... The teacher will provide and go over the paper Experiment with Essay Leads, and the students will tape it in their black and white journal Modeling The teacher will give examples of possible leads Guided Practice... The teacher will elicit possible leads from the students for their topics Independent Practice... The students will begin to try different leads for their essay Closure The teacher will ask what possible leads the students will use for their essay Homework... Due TODAY: Choose how you will organize your essay Due TODAY: Choose how you will organize your presentation and bring in an outline of the info and who is doing what Due Day 11: Write at least two leads for your essay Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 11: Group Work Objectives Students will be able to Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document Camera Projector Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Research Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set The teacher will ask for any questions regarding the assignments Instructional Input The teacher will go over any questions that students have and explain anything that is unclear Modeling The teacher will give examples as necessary Guided Practice The teacher will help students with their specific topics as necessary Independent Practice The students will work on their essays, presentations, and projects Clousre The teacher will ask for any questions regarding the assignments Homework... Due TODAY: Write at least two leads for your essay Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 12: Lesson 54 Experiment with Essay Conclusions Objectives The students will be able to List different ways to write a conclusion Write possible conclusions Analyze which conclusion is the best and use that on for their essay Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document camera Projector Class Set: Experiment with Essay Conclusions Class Set: Examples of Essay Conclusions Class Set: Some Transitional Words and Phrases for Essays Class Set: Essay Checklist based on criteria from Lesson 49 Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Research Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set... The teacher will ask the students for ways to end an essay Instructional Input... The teacher will provide and explain the paper Experiment with Essay Conclusions, and the students will tape it in their black and white journal The teacher will provide and explain Examples of Essay Conclusions Modeling The teacher will give examples of essay conclusions Guided Practice The teacher will elicit possible essay conclusions for students regarding their topics Independent Practice... The students will begin to try different conclusions for their essay Closure The teacher will ask the students about possible conclusions for their essays Homework Due Day 13: Write two conclusions for your essay Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 13-14: Group Work Objectives... Students will be able to Work together in groups to create projects and a presentation Write an essay Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document Camera Projector Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Research Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set The teacher will ask for any questions regarding the assignments Instructional Input The teacher will go over any questions that students have and explain anything that is unclear Modeling The teacher will give examples as necessary Guided Practice The teacher will help students with their specific topics as necessary Independent Practice The students will work on their essays, presentations, and projects Clousre The teacher will ask for any questions regarding the assignments Homework... Due TODAY: Write two conclusions for your essay Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist Day 15: Presentations and Projects Objectives Students will be able to Present their projects and presentations Turn in their essay Evaluate group work Evaluate individual work Evaluate peer work Analyze their study habits and work towards meeting goals Materials Teacher Computer Document camera Projector Access to the students technology components of the presentations Class Set: Group Work Survey Class Set: Self-Satisfaction Survey Class Set: Peer Evaluation Rubric Extras of the essay rubrics for students that lost theirs Extras of the presentation tic tac toes for groups that lost theirs Students Black and white journal Writing utensils Independent study checklist Homework Anticipatory Set The teacher will ask the students what their favorite part of the assignment was Instructional Input The teacher will explain the procedure for presenting Modeling The teacher will give an example of how to present Guided Practice The teacher will answer any specific questions Independent Practice The students will present Closure The teacher will ask for feedback from the audience after each presentation The teacher will ask for interesting things the audience learned during the presentations and during the unit The students will fill in the group work and self-satisfaction survey and the peer evaluation rubric Homework Due Day 15: Essay, oral presentation with technology component, visual component, and interactive component Due Day 15: Independent study checklist