Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Maeve Enright
AP Language
Friday, December 17, 2016
Acknowledgements
I received assistance from Meghan, my teacher, who gave me suggestions on organization and
research, Eli, my classmate, who gave me suggestions on my argument and evidence, and Rita, a
consultant in the Writing and Rhetoric Studio, who gave me suggestions on organization and my
argument. I used NoodleTools, a citation device, to create my works cited page. I also used the
New Oxford American Dictionary and the Oxford American Writers Thesaurus for assistance
with word choice and definitions. Many of the ideas contained in this essay originated or were
developed in our class discussions.
Recognizing this assistance, I affirm that this piece is my own work, and I am entirely
responsible for its content.
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Maeve Enright
Friday, December 17, 2016
According to Our Bodies Ourselves, at every point in history, women from around the
world have had abortions to control their reproduction. Abortion in the United States has been
widely practiced since before 1880, although most states by that time had banned it. In part,
these laws were due to the threat that midwives who performed abortions became to men in the
medical industry, as well as an attempt to keep women in the traditional childbearing role. These
laws caused many women to resort to dangerous self-abortions, and although most deaths were
not reported to be caused by illegal abortions, thousands of women a year were treated in
hospitals due to dangerous, incorrectly performed, self-induced abortions, and many of them
Roe v. Wade, the famous Supreme Court decision made on January 22, 1973, legalized
abortion and nullified any existing laws criminalizing abortion, but also allowed states to put
restrictions on abortion in the third trimester to preserve the fetus. Since the decision in 1973,
states have enacted over a thousand abortion restrictions, a quarter of which have been between
the years 2010 and 2015. These restrictions include required waiting periods, targeted regulation
laws, and the prohibition of abortion in the third trimester. Restrictions like the TRAP laws,
which hold abortion providers to unfair standards, and the informed consent laws, which
require medical staff to provide sometimes inaccurate information to patients before they
consent, make it much more difficult for women to receive safe abortions. In addition to these
restrictions, the Hyde Amendment and other laws restrict federal funding for abortions through
Medicaid, unless the pregnancy was caused by rape or incest or the mothers health is
endangered by the pregnancy. These laws specifically target low-income women, leaving 1.2
million women without affordable health care through Medicaid or their states health exchange
that covers abortion. Currently, California is the only state that requires insurance companies to
In April of 2015 in Indiana, Purvi Patel became the first woman in America to be
incarcerated for the crime of feticide. The 33-year-old was sentenced to 20 years for feticide
and neglect of a dependent, despite claiming she gave birth to a stillborn baby, according to The
Independent. Patel said she believed the fetus to be stillborn, but prosecutors claimed she had
ordered abortion medication off of the internet, even though no evidence of these drugs were
found in her system. The law that was used to convict Patel was meant to target illegal abortion
providers, and thus an Indiana judge reduced her sentence to 18 months without parole this past
fall. Although Patels sentence was reduced dramatically, her arrest in 2013 threatened to set a
dangerous precedent for pregnant women everywhere, and points to the increasing threat of
The Pro-Choice Action Network (Pro-CAN), an organization that provides funding for
abortion clinics in Canada, debunks many of the misconceptions that surround abortion.
According to Pro-CAN, while different religious communities have different ideas of when life
begins, there is no scientific evidence to support the idea that life begins at conception, as
pro-life advocates often argue, and thus it cannot be considered murder. Pro-lifers often argue for
the rights of the embryo or fetus, arguing the absurd idea that the fetus rights are more important
than the womans. Pro-CAN also states that the idea that being pro-abortion means you are
anti-family is incorrect, and that abortion simply allows mothers to determine when and how
many children they want to have in the instance of an unplanned pregnancy. An idea that Laurie
Abraham spoke about in her piece, Abortion: Not Easy, Not Sorry in ELLE.
Even though Laurie Abraham is the highly educated daughter of a Planned Parenthood
clinic volunteer, she still struggled with unplanned pregnancies at three different times in her
life. When she found out about her last unplanned pregnancy, Laurie was 44, married, and had
two daughters of her own that she loved dearly, but decided to have an abortion to prevent
putting more financial and emotional stress on her marriage and family. Lauries experience is
not abnormal, as one in every three women will get an abortion before the age of 45, and six out
of every ten women who choose to get abortions are already mothers.
Abraham openly tells her readers that she had one unplanned pregnancy in each decade
of [her] reproductive life, which isn't something to be proud of, but [shes] not sure it's anything
to be ashamed of, either. She also tells her readers that she doesnt believe her abortions to be
murder. In the first trimester, when nine out of ten abortions in the US occur, including Lauries,
only an embryo the size of a lima bean has developed. It is not until twelve weeks that a fetus
that is two to three inches long is formed, but even then it is incapable of thinking or living on its
own outside of the womb. Laurie, while she believes abortion should be legal and accessible to
women everywhere, understands that having her abortions hadnt erased the careless act of
having sex without a condom, and believes that the traditional just-the-facts health education -
void of social and emotional context can be ineffective on anyone, whether directed to a high
As Laurie Abraham points out, it is important to start with education. If teens had better,
more comprehensive education on safe sex and access to contraceptives in their formative years,
abortion would automatically decrease on its own. In his article Two Stories That Are Shaping
the Abortion Debate in the Atlantic, Conor Friedersdorf sites a study done in Colorado
regarding free contraceptives. The study examined the and rate of birth and abortions among
teenagers through a new program that offered them free implants and intrauterine devices
(IUDs), a long-term solution to contraception. Remarkably, many women took part in the
program, and in the years 2009 to 2013 the birth rate among teenagers in Colorado decreased by
40%, and the number of abortions decreased by 42%. As this case shows, when given the access
unplanned pregnancies itself is reduced. It is programs like these, coupled with education that
discusses both the physical realities and consequences of sex and its emotional repercussions,
As Bill Clinton so eloquently states, I believe abortion should be safe, legal, and rare.
While I am pro-choice and I believe in a womans right to choose what she does with her body
and life, I recognize that abortion should not be the first plan. Abortion allows women to take
control of their emotional, mental, and physical health, but it should not be considered the
primary way to deal with unplanned pregnancy. As Katha Pollitt, the author of Pro: Reclaiming
Abortion Rights, said in an interview with ELLE, "No one feels guilty when they have sex
without birth control and don't get pregnant." Meaning, that frequently women, even those who
had sex-education in school, consciously dont use birth control, whether they have access to it
or not, and are only forced to deal with the consequences when they inevitably get pregnant. In
this way, both access to affordable and effective contraceptives needs to be increased and
education that better prepares young men and women for the responsibility of having safe sex
needs to be incorporated into high school curriculums if we want the need for abortion to be
reduced.
I, an upper middle class, 16-year-old, white, American, female, living in Los Angeles,
have been fortunate enough to be educated and informed on sex and its emotional and physical
consequences, but that is not an experience that everyone is fortunate enough to have. I have
always been taught by my mother that in a relationship, every woman needs to look out for
herself no matter what, because only she can protect her own body. She has taught me that being
safe and taking care of my body first and foremost is the most important thing I can do, as I am
the only one who can truly control my own safety. She has also taught me that abortion is and
has been incredibly crucial for many women who seek higher education and careers, and that its
okay to put your own well-being and happiness over that of others. This January, my mom and I
will be marching in the Million Women March after Donald Trumps inauguration. We are
taking a stand for all womens rights in the U.S., but a large part of the reason we are marching is
the danger that Mike Pence and the new administration will pose to the progress that needs to be
made regarding abortion in this country. In these next coming years, it is imperative that we
change the way we think about, deal with, and discuss abortion. In addition to an increase in
better education on safe sex and access to abortion, the shame and ridicule that women who
choose to have abortions needs to stop before women begin to resort back to the unsafe measures
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