Beruflich Dokumente
Kultur Dokumente
Characters:
Braden: 25, Firefighter, M, Best friend of Lynn.
Lynn: 24, Financial Analyst, F, Best friend of Braden.
Setting: Boston, MA.
Conflict: Braden is having issues explaining that he has feelings for Lynn. Lynn
already knows and is trying to get him to just tell her. (Clich conflict, I know. But
itll be great--hopefully.)
(LYNN and BRADEN just finished making dinner and theyre cleaning up the dishes.)
LYNN: Just say it.
BRADEN: Just saywhat?
LYNN: Get it out.
BRADEN: Make sense, please.
LYNN: You already know! (she crosses her arms and leans against the sink)
BRADEN: No, I dont?
LYNN: (places a hand on BRADENS hand) Just tell me.
BRADEN: Really? (he looks down at their hands) Right now?
LYNN: It wont change
BRADEN: Im not doing
LYNN: Just do it.
BRADEN: You do it. (he stops doing dishes and directs his full attention at her)
LYNN: Youre being childish.
BRADEN: Youre being crazy.
LYNN: Am not.
BRADEN: Delusional. And pushy. (he grins, nudging her arm)
LYNN: (she sighs) Just say it.
BRADEN: Honestly? Why now?
LYNN: Ill stop if
BRADEN: Fine! Youre
LYNN: (silence) Why cant you
BRADEN: Just say it? (sarcastic)
LYNN: Fine. (she grabs her coat and heads towards the door)
BRADEN: Wait! Lynn, just
(The door slams as LYNN exits)
BLACKOUT
I found this picture and at first, I just thought it was plain creepy. But when I looked
at it for the second time, I saw that it can be taken in a few different ways. I think
the most popular interpretation might be a statement about how some people are
two faced? But the more accurate interpretation (in my opinion) would be that
people are expected to put on a face for othersand that there are certain
emotions people show more than others. This one would be hard to make into a
play, but I could see it being made into something with mental illness involved in it,
possibly?
This picture caught my eye because of how interesting it is. I found it yesterday and
Im still trying to wrap my head around it. I think what it means is that were
throwing our time away? Or maybe that we find ourselves drowning because of
the time commitments in our lives? It could even be a statement about how you
should throw time out, because living my time commitments slows you down?
These are all the ideas that have been popping around in my head since Ive seen
this picture and Im still not sure which one it is. I suppose it could be any of them!
Im also biased but this reminds me of A New York Minute in a way. So, thats an
example of how easily it could be turned into a play. And Im sure it could be taken
in many different directions, as well.
This last picture is a little more obscure to me than the other two. I think this picture
illustrates whats inside the mind and how there are all kinds of things going on in
the brain that sometimes arent expressed outwardly, depending on the person. For
instance, you can see that theres quite a bit of darkness in this persons head. But
there are also butterflies flying around as well, hinting at the idea that he might be
suffering, but portraying it in a different way, outwardly.
LYRA: (she helps him pack) So... are you glad we came up here?
SAM: Yeah, I am. It helped me let go of some stuff so I feel like I can actually begin
to move on.
LYRA: Im glad. Its--really beautiful here.
SAM: I wont be coming back for a really long time. (he puts clothes in his suitcase)
LYRA: (she zips her suitcase back up) Whys that?
SAM: (shrugs) Ireland just isnt for me anymore. I dont know
LYRA: I understand But its where youre from, you know? Your roots, basically.
(she grins and puts a hand on his arm) Are you sure youre okay?
SAM: (nods) Yeah, I think Im okay.
LYRA: And youd tell me if you werent?
SAM: Yeah, I would. (he pauses) But Im okay, I promise.
LYRA: (she reaches in her suitcase and pulls out a tiny box, holding it behind her)
Sam--I
SAM: What? (he looks over at her)
LYRA: Um--well IIve been thinking about you and Iand this trip kind of
solidified
SAM: Just spit it out, Lyra. (he chuckles)
LYRA: (she closes her eyes and speaks quickly) IthinkIwannamarryyou.
SAM: (his eyes widen) You--you what? Lyra--
LYRA: (she looks up at him and clears her throat) Uh--I didnt say--anything?
SAM: (he rubs the back of his neck) I meanare you serious?
LYRA: Uh(she brings the box out from behind her and shows him the ring)
SAM: (he grins, taking the ring and setting it on the bed, then kisses her)
LYRA: (she pulls back and laughs) Im taking that as a yes?
SAM: (he nods and picks up the box again)
BLACKOUT
WEEK SIX - Feb. 6-10
Jeffrey has just been admitted to the hospital and put through surgery because he
was in the car with a drunk driver, who ran his car off the road. His girlfriend, Jen
and his best friend, Ivan are in the room, arguing. Ivan was in the car with Jeffrey,
but only sustained minor injuries and didnt need to be kept for further observation.
Jeffrey is in shock, and hasnt spoken since the crash.
(JEFFREY is lying down in the hospital bed, staring at the heart monitor, when Jen
and Ivan enter the room.)
JEN: (she rushes over to him, grabbing his hand) Jeffrey! How are you feeling? Are
you okay? Your doctor said youre going to be okay. But you have to stay here for a
while and--
IVAN: Jesus, Jen, if you were going to smother him, why did he go through the
surgery at all? (he grins)
JEN: (she shoots IVAN a glare and looks back at JEFFREY) Youre going to be out of
here in no time, I promise. And until then, youll be in good hands here. They treat
their patients really well here.
IVAN: Dont lie to him, J. Or at least be honest about the food they serve here. (he
snickers)
JEN: (she drops JEFFREYs hand and whirls to look at IVAN) Im glad you think this is
funny. Lets not forget that youre the reason that hes here in the first place,
asshole.
IVAN: Jen, thats not-- (he stares off and sighs, reaching in his pocket and pulling
out a cigarette, about to light it)
JEN: Are you kidding me? (she snatches the lighter out of his hands) Can you at
least act like you give a shit?
JEN: .What?
IVAN: I didnt do this. I--lied to you because I wanted to (he sighs and runs a hand
through his hair) It doesnt matter. But you need to know that--it was Jeffrey behind
the wheel. Okay? I wanted to keep it from you because--I know how hard its been
for you since he got out of rehab, but it wasnt--
JEN: I get it. (she crosses her arms) You didnt have to lie. But I get it. (she looks
over at JEFFREY again) Im...glad youre both okay. We need to figure out how to tell
his parents.
NARRATOR: There once lived a man who was despised as the royal vizier of
Agrabah. Jafar was a benevolent man, but was disliked by the entire kingdom. He
and the love of his life had traveled the world, in search of a magic lamp that would
release a powerful genie to help him rule the kingdom. He had always tried his best
to make the kingdom a better place, but this would help him do it.
(JAFAR enters, holding the lamp. He puts it on a pedestal in the middle of the stage,
staring at it sadly)
NARRATOR: You see, on the quest to get the lamp, his lover Scheherazade had
perished. Her soul was rumored to be devoured by the lamp. He then vowed never
to use the lamp, unless he was sure he had first earned the title of sultan. The only
issue was that the lamp had gone missing.
(ALADDIN creeps in and takes the lamp in his hand, but JAFAR sees him from the
corner and runs to him.)
JAFAR: Leave that precious silver, thief. You have no idea what youre dealing with!
ALADDIN: And you have no idea how much this could be worth.
JAFAR: It is only worth the happiness of the kingdom. The selfishness of men will
only tarnish the power of it! Please--you dont know what youre doing!
ALADDIN: You are under the impression that I care about this city. (he smirks and
runs toward the exit, but drops the lamp. The genie comes out of the lamp and the
smoke takes over ALADDINs form. With a scream, ALADDIN disappears seemingly
into the lamp)
JAFAR: (he slowly walks over to the lamp and picks it up, examining it) I guess
Scheherazade had one more trick up her sleeve. (he grins and gently places the
lamp back on the pedestal, leaving the room.)
NARRATOR: Jafar kept harsher security after that and ended up becoming sultan
after years of hard work. He finally used the lamp to make Agrabah better. He never
saw Scheherazade or the thief again, but he did end up making the kingdom as
wonderful for the people living there as possible. It became a testament to his love.
BLACKOUT
Scene I
(Rezia and Kalen are working on the bottom floor of the ship.)
KALEN: Watch out! (he throws a pile of rope behind Rezia. It lands on the pile hard,
sending a few buckets toppling to the ground)
REZIA: Woahwhy are you in such a hurry today?
KALEN: (he goes over to fix the mess) You know why.
REZIA: Uh no? (she helps him pick the buckets up)
KALEN: The Commanders second caught word of the old man down the way
practicing flight magic again.
REZIA: What? (she drops the bucket) I hadnt heard.
KALEN: Besleys been spouting about it all morning. Didnt you run into him? I
swear, Ive never seen your kid brother so fired up about a falling before.
REZIA: He must be upset. I should
KALEN: Ohyou both knew him. God, Im an asshole. Rezia, Im sorry. I didnt
REZIA: Its okay, really. He lived in the pod next to us. After our family he made
sure we survived our first year alone. But I was never really close with him after he
got relocated. Besley used to sneak off and play cards with him, though.
KALEN: Say no more. I get it. We should find your brother, then.
REZIA: (she nods and they clean up) So theyreexecuting the falling today, then?
KALEN: In an hour.
REZIA: Lets find Besley.
Scene II
(Rezia and Kalen are searching for Besley in the commons area of the ships dining
hall)
KALEN: This place is completely empty during the day.
REZIA: Sometimes he comes here to think. Or hide.
KALEN: Right (he looks around) Besley? Besley!
REZIA: Besley? (she walks over and opens the kitchen door, shining a light on the
room. She finds him behind one of the cooling mechanisms) Besley..? What are you
doing in here? Its freezing. (she goes over and sits next to him)
BESLEY: (he covers his face) I dont want to talk about it.
REZIA: Bes, practicing magic is illegal. You know that. He wasnt
(KALEN enters, unnoticed)
BESLEY: I know that! But it shouldnt matter. He wasnt trying to hurt anyone. He
told mehe was just trying to get off of this ship.
REZIA: He told you that?
KALEN: Thats suicide, Besley. Not to mention, against the law.
BESLEY: Its better than being here! (he exits, storming off)
REZIA: Besley! (she starts to go after him)
KALEN: Let him cool off.
REZIA: We should go after him.
(Alarms start to go off)
KALEN: Theyre starting the ceremony now. We have to get up there, anyway.
REZIA: Iguess well see him up there. I just wish he didnt have to see this
(they exit)
Scene III
(A crowd of people are on the deck of the ship and the COMMANDER is watching
from afar. REZIA and KALEN rush to see what the people are crowded around. A
woman is lying on the ground.)
REZIA: What happened?
KALEN: I dont
MAN #1: She tried to stop the Falling. The officers gunned her down.
REZIA: (pushes her way through to the front of the crowd with KALEN)
KALEN: Rezia, dont. You know the consequences! Shes gone
REZIA: (she kneels in front of the body)
OFFICER #1: Get back, girl. You know the rules.
REZIA: You had no right to kill her. She was just trying to protect her grandfather
(the officer strikes her in the face and KALEN rushes forward, helping her up)
KALEN: Hey! Dont you
(the crowd starts to talk amongst themselves, creating chaos. The OFFICER goes to
strike KALEN but the COMMANDER comes out and stops them.)
COMMANDER: What is the meaning of this?
REZIA: (she stands up) She was wrongfully killed.
COMMANDER: This woman tried to intervene with preparations for the Falling.
REZIA: Because its her family. You have no right to
COMMANDER: Take the girl to the Founded. She has to answer for this.
KALEN: Noplease. Shes
OFFICER: (pushes KALEN back into the crowd and drags REZIA off)
Scene II
SAM: I cant even believe this.
LEXI: Im sorry, but I thought you needed to know. I cant keep going in our
relationship like this. (she plays with the food on her plate)
SAM: Okay, but did you have to pull the plug on dating for 3+ years in the middle
of a nice restaurant??
I chose the two scenes above because they clearly show character, relationship,
location, etc. Because of the way that I set the scenes up, it wouldnt be hard for the
readers/audience members to figure out whats going on. I think the other scenes I
wrote are a little more difficult to tellsimply because theyre not as obvious.
Theyre shown below.
Scene III
LIBBY: Look, weve been friends for three years. But I cant do it anymore. This
friendship has become toxic.
ANNE: This is because Im with Jack now, isnt it? (she sits on the edge of the pool,
wringing her hair out)
LIBBY: No, II dont care that youre with him now. I just wish things had gone
differently.
Scene IV
MAX: This grade is unacceptable. (he throws the paper on the ground)
LINA: (she looks around, embarrassed, putting another item in the grocery cart)
Dad, I knowbut I just I didnt study as much as I shouldve.
MAX: I know. You justYou can do so much more, honey.
Scene V
TRACY: Weve decided to give you a promotion. I need someone sharp as my
assistant and as you know, our vice principal just left us.
DANIEL: Does this mean what I think it means? Youreoffering me this job? (he
leans over his desk, accidentally spilling coffee on himself)
TRACY: Yep, youre our new vice. If you want it. (she eyes the coffee) And if you can
promise me you wont spill any of that on me. (she smiles)